Immortal Blood and Tears

In order to save her friends from death, Twilight sought out a means to give them immortality. However, Twilight didn't know the fate she would bestow upon them would be worse then death.

Author's Note: This story contains Vamponies and therefore there will be some blood. Just a little warning for the squeamish.

Love is a difficult thing, something that Wondering Wind knows all to well. He is in love with a beautiful mare named Crystal Clover, who is one of his fellow college students. So what is the problem you might ask? Well for one thing Wind is a pegasus from Manehattan and Clover is a crystal unicorn from the Crystal Empire, who is currently only living in Manehattan to pursue her career.

After suffering from a terrible heartbreak, Wondering Wind finds himself in the Manehattan subway system to discover an injured mare on the floor in a pool of her own blood. Wondering Wind attempts to help the mare and as a result his life is changed forever.

A long time ago Twilight Sparkle become an Alicorn princess, but the realization of her immortality was bittersweet. Not wanting to lose her friends, Twilight attempts to find a way to save them. However, actions of this kind always have dire consequences.

As our characters attempt to live, how do they deal with the aspects of immortality and undeath?

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