A new Comer

by smilymcsmiles

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Human, Anthro, Romance
Length: 1292

This is my first story so don't expect it to be good :)

A story of patten a man with magic, souls and a world of……ponies, you heard me, a land of humanoid ponies:pinkiehappy:

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-11-06 23:35:32 UTC

A new world

"Ow" patten said getting up on his feet, patten was not a normal human, he was what a normal human would call him is a... Soul holder, I know not the best name you could call something, patten didn't like it either he thought it was childish but it was also very fitting, he wasn't normal in that way either you see, he had to many souls, a normal soul holder would have only two souls inside there body including the normal human soul, but patten didn't, he had six, not including his very weak human soul, the reason for why a soul holder has only two souls is because of how much energy the person has in there blood, nectar you could say and patten had a little to much and in his luck his souls weren't the nicest you could ever met them, if you servived meeting them, and because of them he is a little bit, interesting to say the least not that he isn't a nice guy he's just, broken, uncaring, almost consumed

"Don't get up" a man in a long white metal plated and leather jacket said, white feathered wings on his back

"Ehe he hehehe now what's the fun in that" he said huffing and puffing looking to the man and moving his long brown hair from his face "is it because you so called want to help me well ahe hehehaha you can't help there is nothing to help, hunter" he said to him anger in his voice, he then pulled out a black misshapened axe like weapon the only thing that wasn't misshapened was the buzz saw at the top, it was also black with black rapings here and there, his black leather jacket attached to his skin even though it looked like a normal leather jacket, he had what looked like to be a shirt at one point had turned into his skin and blackened it, his long baggy pants covered the tongue of his shoes and some of the back of them, "fine, you want to help? kill me, but that won't stop me from trying to stay alive, if not kill me give me a good fight" he then put his hand out smiling "deal?" The hunter looked at him a confused cautious look plastered on his face when he grabbed patten's hand to shake it Patten pulled him and slammed his head into the hunters hearing a cracking sound from both heads only the hunter fell back not breathing, slowly a puddle of his own blood appeared patten put his body forward and the broken bones got put back together like puzzle pieces and healed

"HEY!!!!!!" Patten turned to see a man with what looked to be.... Patten's gas mask

"No it couldn't be... Huh... HEY WERE DID YOU GET THAT GAS MASK MY FRIEND!!!!" The person didn't answer there was a sense something about the man, he sensed some of his energy but was baffled by the sense of him... Living for somthing, ever since Patten got his powers and his souls started to wake up he..... Did things, and after that he slowly became bloodlusted and insane, he lost everything, he doesn't even know why he is still going on "im only going to ask this one more time who the fuck, ARE YO-" he gagged as the person teleported in front of him a trail of black mist was left behind him

"Listen, we have a world to take care of" the man sighed "Don't make the mistake I did or else I will KILL, YOU" he then pulled out the same buzz axe that Patten had and sliced the air and opened a black with a yellow swirled hole "have fun" the man said throwing patten into the hole after a few seconds of yelling and flailing like a wet noodle with a head, arms and legs he came out of the portal flying in a black mist and headed to a forest but before that he saw what appeared to be a blue, pony/human creature with a rainbow main and tail with horse like facial features, ears and hooves for feet, when he got closer and closer to the forest he felt his memory start to fade and he got smaller and smaller then he hit a tree branch and got knocked out dark mist still coming off of him until he grew so small that he went into his clothes, when six mares came to investigate with necklaces and one of them had a crown all they saw was some clothes on the ground and saw something move in it

"Oh, somepony needs some better fashion, what exactly is that jacket made out of, its horrid" a mare said but this one had white fur and a dark blueish main

"Now is not the time to thi-" right before a lavender mare with a dark purplish main with streaks of lighter purple and pink like streak and a horn on her head with wings in the back could say anything they saw the chest of the clothe move, they all just stared at it, confused then they heard a baby start to cry

"Go check it out aj" the blue Pegasus told a orange mare with a yellow main

"No, yer the one who saw it wiz past" the orange mare replayed to the blue one, they fought for a few seconds before the lavender mare said something

"STOP IT!!" The two mares stoped looking at the the aggravated mare "i'll do it" she said she slowly and cautiously walked towards the clothes, bent over and opened the jacket to see that it was not a trap and a pony like creature she picked it up inspecting it *its face, ears and hooves look different i'll need to do some research* the lavender mare thought to herself, when she brought it back they all had confused faces

"What is it?"

"A BABYYY!!!!" A pink mare with a poofy main said jumping up out of nowhere next to the lavender mare the baby seemed to have slowly stoped crying, she then made a funny face making patten laugh

"He's, um, kind of, um, cute" a butter yellow with a light pink long main said coming out from behind a tree

"Good because you will be taking care of him"

"What?!" The yellow mare said with worry in her eyes

"Your the only one good with animals and you reformed discord"

"What if it turns up to be evil and hurts fluttershy" the blue Pegasus asked worried about her friend

"Then we use the elements until then, we will keep them on just in case" the lavender mare said, the rest noded in agreement and went back fluttershy went back to her tree house but when she did all the animals seemed to be scared of patten running into there homes and some even outside "what's rong little ones oh no, come back" she said in a soft gentle tone, she put Patten down on a couch slowly and tried to gather all the animals after a failed attempt she came back to check on Patten and saw that he was asleep she then grabbed a blanket and carefully put it on him and sat down next to him "i'll take good care of you" she said rubbing his head careful not to wake him, she went to bed taking a white bunny with her going to sleep she wondered how to take care of him, and right before she shut her eyes she saw a crow fly by it had glowing red eyes and that's all she saw before falling asleep