Strange war

(In this chapter it will be told through spitfires POV on how she and Sorian got there all the way up to when Jerry found her in the basement.)

Chapter 3

Me and Sorian were flying over our home called "Equestria" until we saw something in the distance. I didnt want to go there but sorian being sorian he went after it anyways. I had no choice but to follow him so i did. We were probely about 20 feet from it until i saw what it was. Some sort of black hole in the middle of nowhere.

"Cooooool. Hey spitfire want to go and check it out?"

"No i think its dangerous sorian."

But he ignored me like he always does. He got closer to the black hole then all of a sudden he turned and grabed me. I was gonna throw him off until i saw something pulling him into the black hole. I then tried to help pull him out but instead i was pulled in along with him.

Everything went black and when i awoke i heard loud screaming and yelling. I looked around the room and realized i wasnt in my flight suit. I tried to move but couldnt since i was tied up against something. Then the screaming became easier to hear and when i looked towards the screams i saw sorian tied up like i was but he was getting whiped by something. The creatures like you jerry were...what looked like tourtureing him and they were speaking some kind of different language.

I yelled out "SORIAN!!!!"

The creatures turned around and then i saw the true state sorian was in. He was brutely beaten and was in what looked like terrible pain. His breathing was low and wheezy. If i didnt know he was sorian i wouldnt be able to recongize him at all. Then the un thinkable happened...one of the creatures said something in a foreighn language and pointed to sorian. One of the creatures nodded and took out a knife.....and slit his t-t-throat.

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(Now back to first person with Jerry)

I was shocked when i heard that last part and it seemed it was to much for her to handle as i saw a single tear run down her face. Now i really felt like an asshole for asking her how she got here. Just when i thought it wouldnt get worst for her more tears flowed down her one good eye. She then began to openly sob and i didnt know what to do. One part of me was yelling 'HUG HER LET HER KNOW ITS OK!!!!' Where another part was telling me to 'just get up and leave'.

The good part of me got the best of me. I put my hand on her shoulder and i thought she would shy away, but instead she leaned foward and rested her head on my chest while she continued to openly sob. I then slowly put my arms around her and try to comfort her. She then put her arms (forehooves?) around me and huged back. I ran my fingers through her mane i guess it was. Then i heard my name get called by none other than Sarge.

"PFC.Jerry get your ass out here NOW!!!!!!!!" By the sound of his voice he was pissed off preaty badly. I looked back down at Spitfire and pated her back. "Listen spitfire i have to go for a little bit ok?....... Just stay here and try to get better and im sorry for your lost."

I then broke the embrace and sat spitfire onto the bed. I got up without makeing eye contact with her and turned and went towards the exit of the tent. The welcome out there was not good.

(Authors notes: Ok well looks like i managed to get ANOTHER chapter out, but by the looks of things i dont know if i should continue this story. But i will if i find a couple of readers that are still interested in this story. Also im truely sorry if i didnt write all that well. Like i said before first fic means alot of mistakes will be made. I promise in the future if i continue makeing stories they will not be as bad as this one. Anyways thanks for reading and crticim is wanted.