Flat Out Chaos

by _LootsAHollow_

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Comedy, Tragedy, Adventure, Human, Drama
Length: 2053

Brim and Twilight go save the human and pony world! EDEN!

Brim! Oh Brim our main character of this story! Though he is not a pony, he will still do magical things as he and twilight sparkle head on a journey to make harmony with the human and pony world! Beyond both of them will be a world that matches the description of hell! They will have to fight against many monsters,murderers, and even their own kind. They can or can they save the new world they have founded as Eden?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-11-05 06:40:01 UTC

Prologue: Stable

Brim?

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Brim?

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BRIMMMM! (shriek)

My eyes flutter open from the sudden noise.

Daylight was seeping in through the windows while my eyes slowly adjusted to the scenery.

The shriek was still echoing in my head with additional more noise. But soon enough it stopped.

"You can't go all out on sleeping after break is over dim-wit", said anonymous.

That was my sister, Carla.

"Why would you scream like that?!", I muffled while burying my head into my pillow.

She didn't understand what I said.

Carla, my sister, was a annoying dip shit. She was a short girl with curly blonde hair and wore a wrist watch where ever she went. Carla was a popular 7th grader though the only reason would be because she's apparently "pretty" and I'll admit has a lot natural talents. Cooking,fishing,studying,baking,sports, and god damn even gaming. Last year, every single week I would see at least one kid come to our house and leave little gifts for HER. None for me I guess. About 50% of her grade is hitting puberty so testosterone levels are higher than mount everest. Now it's calming down and I've only seen one kid come to give gifts for her.  And though people think she's sweet, she's just a sadist who likes punishing me.

Oh you're wondering about me? I'm not better than she is. I've got curvy brown hair with golden eyes. I used to be the same as her when I was her age. Always receiving gifts and what not that I thought was nothing. I can basically do almost everything Carla can do but just knitting.

"It's the second week of school and you haven't even gotten to the point where you've got a routine. Pathetic.", says the one who just got up 20 minutes late than she planned.

"Gimme a break already and get out.", I said.

I grab my clean pair of clothes and leaded my sister out of my room.

As I get dressed and prepared I scurry over to the bathroom to brush my teeth. As I brush my teeth, I see a figure in the mirror. It wasn't in color but just a big outline and it had a figure of a horse but smaller. I looked behind me to find that there was no horse figure behind me and I looked back to the mirror but it was gone.

"That's pretty weird. It was like there was a ghost there. Creepy like that shriek I heard this morning", I thought as I shiver.

I soon forget what I saw when my sister told me to hurry up when she was preparing breakfeast.

My parents were on a honey moon and wouldn't be back in a month or two so it was just me and my sister who took care of ourselves and each other.

My friend were always perverts and when I answered their question where my parents were, they got all creepy. They kept saying things like, "Bro, if her age is on the clock she can't get that cock you know" and "I should come here often to make sure their isn't anything scandalous going on in this incest smelling house".

Obviously they were joking and teasing me but when thinking about the situation, it was pretty scandalous.

I was left alone with a 12 year old for a month and horomones can come blasting in any moment from her now.

But I really doubt it since I'm her brother. Though there is that anime shit she's been watching recently so I'm 50/50 about it. (Do not send weeaboo army after me plz)

I head downstairs to eat a quick breakfeast and head out. Walking down the street in the city was surprisngly pleasing. Being able to see all those cars zoom by and the people walk is oddly satisfying. And also looking at the tall and erect buildings (heh) was fascinating. Though it was noisy a lot of the times and there was always commotion going on, you get used to it in a couple days.

I headed down to the bus stop and patiently waited.

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Time passed very quickly when I soon realized in just a moment that my bus had come.

"Hm? How did it come so fast?", I thought while I was confused.

Getting on the bus I saw many people of many different skin tones, variety, and ethnicity. There were more men then women and I saw that few children and people my age were on the bus too. I sat down next to and old person. She looked very weary and was mending her ankle. I finally ignored her when she looked at me. I slipped out my book and began reading it.

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"What the hell?" I said when the bus driver called out my stop.

"Hmmm. I have all recollection of what I had just done but I don't think I noticed the time. It was like I was flying through pages but at the same time I already knew what was read before I flipped to the next one." I murmed to myself as I began walking to school.

"Whatever, It's probaly just me being sleep deprived." I convinced myself of.

Though later on I would know that it wasn't me. And it wasn't anyone else. But what was changing was the world itself. A world that me and other's would come to know as an alien planet. A world where humanity and pony kind were on a knife's edge.

Sirens would sound, many explosions would befall Earth, and war would then start throughout Earth's history.

Time would start ticking at the first bang.

Chapter 1: Fazed

Lemme summarize what's happening right now.

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Screams

Walking to the door of my school I hear a bang.

Reaching for the door I heard a boom.

Then touching the door I heard a pop.

I suddenly then realized that everyone was screaming and running towards the opposite direction of the mass explosions and flying...horses?

I squinted my eyes in disbelief and came to the conclusion these were not horses, they did not look like horses but had the figure of one, they were smaller and were many different colors.

Then I saw a strange one of these horses flying right towards my direction!

The strange looking horse was also in disbelief as soon as it hit me with its two front hooves. Then looked back and slammed right into the school building.

"What the fu-UOOGH", I said in immense pain.

I tried to run but one the horses pinned me down and...talked?

"WHO ARE YOU!!! WHERE AM I?!"

"WHY ARE YOU KILLING US?!"

Which were the questions that struck me the most. I looked towards the empire state building and had seen then a helicopter gunning down the flying horses.

I was too confused, too terrified, and way way way too hurt.

With these immense emotions,feelings, and questions.

I passed out.

When I later woke up I saw two of my friends faces above me. "What happened?", feeling sore and confused I looked around to find no people, all three of us in an alley,  and and a few burning buildings in the distance.

"Are you okay? We saw you here and couldn't find out what to do so we brought you into a alley", Seb said.

Seb was my best friend. Though he was a very confusing person. He's full name was Sebasten Zaito. One day he could be isolated and another he could be talking to many people. Some days he was reading manga and others he was doing something else. We had been friends since the beggining of last year and had talked a lot. He has black hair,dark skin, and though I don't wanna poke fun he was a little short. Though he was very confusing, most of the time he's reliable and humerous.

"Did...Did you see flying ponies?"

"Ponies? No but I heard people seeing flying figures so it could be ponies, though that's pretty crazy that there were flying ponies."

I had questioned whether or not this was a dream but seeing the smoke in the distance made it harder and harder to believe it was.

"God dammit what did the government do this time? Always getting the citizens in danger and doing ridiculous things!", Victor said.

Victor was smart. Very, very smart. Smart enough to consult professors from mistakes and get solutions to things we hadn't even thought of. One time he had made a professor get so angry at him that he almost threw a chair at Victor. He was soon fired. Victor is the very being of a stereotypical smart ass. He loved correcting people and making fun of their "incompetent" minds. He had dark brown hair and freckles. Though he was a stereotype, he didn't look like a smart ass.

"It might not be their fault Victor. Something could have gone wrong like an experiment or something.", Seb implied.

"But all they do is do things wrong! Like lie about christopher columbus of how he was a hero! And making war with Iraq! ", Victor replied angrily.

"Shoot, guys! Look over there! See those ponies?"

I saw two...no at least five of them against police men. They were all diving towards them with their wings but the police gunned two of them down. The other three were in terror and looked surprised.

"Guess these ponies know what a gun is", I muttered under my breath.

"It doesn't matter if they know what guns are or not. What matters is that THREE OF THEM ARE RUNNING TOWARDS US!!", Victor said tensly.

These ponies didn't have wings, they looked like normal ponies besides the weird colors. But they were amazingly fast because when I had looked over at them it almost looked like a car driving towards us.

"SHIT SHIT SHIT!", all three of us said out of order.

"What are we gonna do?!" Seb screamed.

"Just run! If they haven't been here for a long time then we can lose them in the alleys!" Victor had replied.

We ran for our lives that day.

We ran towards our homes but no one was there.

We ran away from the freaky ponies but we outsmarted them.

We ran away from the few thugs that were still here and sprinted away from them.

Most of the time Victor devised plans and ideas for both of us.

Before I had passed out I hear sirens and the evacuation call.

That must mean that almost all the people in the city were out of here.

It also means that our parents left us to die.

We had almost bawled our eyes out that day.

We had no idea what to do and no idea where to go.

The city was huge and getting from one burrow to another would take days with all these ponies around.

The next day I hoped things would be better.

The next day I hoped we would see our parents and loved ones.

The next day...

Started with a plan.

The first night of the day we had camped out at my place since Seb had lost his keys and Victors place was small. Plus my place was on the top floor and had many escape routes. One of those routes was escaping through the stair window.

"What are we gonna do if they catch us?" I had asked Victor.

"If they catch us then game over. The police force had already anchored down their opinions on us. They probaly think were savages or murderers, so we'll probaly be dead." Victor said.

"Do we have any defense against them?" Seb asked.

"Again what Victor said, They probaly don't know about the area of the city and don't know about guns. So the advantages are guns and losing them. Though I don't think any of us want to kill, so running away will probaly be the most sensible way." I replied.

"Let's think about this tomorrow, guys. I'm too tired to think right now." Victor said.

"Your right, let's get some rest and then in the morning we'll have a plan." I said.

"Good night." We said in unison.