The new creature that turned equistrias world upside down

by smilymcsmiles

Rating: teen
Tags: Human, Anthro, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1295

Let me know what to work on

John comes to a new world but he isn't the same other than his personality and you will figure out more in the future

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-10-03 00:06:55 UTC

New world

*crack* "woow ahe...that was close" john said trying not to fall from the mountain john is at this mountain for a special reason it is said to have a relic of power and immortality and john wants to figure out if this is true

"You alright?" His guide asked.

"Yeah I'm fine just keep on moving I don't want to be here any longer than I have to" john said a little bit of adrenaline flowing through, after a few hours they came to a stopping point and set. up camp

"So why do you want to find this relic?" The guide asked taking a bit of his chicken

"I don't know, maybe I just want to prove that magic and curses don't work and there is no such thing" taking a bit of his granola bar he continued "I guess help people not to believe in such stupid people who are looking for fame"

"Oh... Well how long have you been doing this?" The guide asked taking a bite of his chicken

"I would say what... Two...three years" John said taking another bite of his granola bar

"Really? How many relics have you debunked so far?" The guide asked curious

"My guess would be, hmm... Fifty? I think, yeah" he said. as his eyes were looking up in wounder, then there was a few minutes of silence before john broke the silence by saying

"WellI think I'll be off to bed I'd recommend you do the. same" he got up went to his. tent and wished him a good sleep before entering his tent, the next day they reached the cave that had the relic

"I'll be here" the guide said leaning against the caves opening "right before you go I need to tell. you something" he said looking into the cave hatred in his eyes "the relic...I know that it DOES have. power me and my brother came here on accident and when saw that... Thing my brother touched it trying to pick it up  then he just yelled bloody murder and ran away.... It took me five months to find him but he was... Not himself I had to put him in a insane asylum.... So all I have to say is, be careful"

"That's conserning... I'll be careful don't you worry" john said. turning around and whispering to. himself "I

hope this relic is a fake" he went deep into the cave and the deeper he went he more frequently. and loudly heard what only could be described as hoof steps and. voices but there was nothing not even an ant was in

there, when he got to the relic he had the most confused look but. yet he was happy in a way he. needed one

for a while, what he saw was an old chainsaw with a two. and half foot chain the whole thing was black with an interesting looking chain that looked like it could really do some damage, it was on an alter that had a bunch of spikes and some skulls and skeletons around it

"Woe, that looks sooooo cool" John said walking up to the alter remembering what the guide said he slowly moved his arms towards it then quickly snatched it cleanching it tightly and closing his eyes tightly expecting something to happen but nothing did

"Oh, it is a fake" John looked around impressed "they did a good. job on the look of things" when he started walking back the chainsaw in hand he started to get dizzy and started to wobble then he fell and then, black

                            *in cellestias castle*

"My queen!!!!" A royal guard called in a hurry running to cellestia

"What is it my little pony?" Cellestia answered curious on what the guard had to say

"There is a ponynoid creature at the edge of the everfree it looks. to powerful" he said still panting from the run "what should our actions be?" he asked

"Me and my sister will take care of it, go and rest, need it"

                                              *back to john*

When John got up he saw something that made him freeze he. saw pony like people they had colorful hair and skin with hooves as feet and pony ears and pony like facial. features they also had spears and bows with gold armer they looked...afraid of him, he then saw one of them that he thought maybe was a recruit drop his weapon and ran

"Crap" John thought to himself "he's gonna get back up" then one of them ran at him screaming and when he swung John dodged which surprised him, he didn't think he was up to it then he threw the guard to the rest of the group

"That's new" he thought to himself then he looked at one of his hands and he saw something that froze him his hand changed color instead of white it was a blackish grey and his skin. Seemed to have holish. dents he just stared at it for a while his breathing exhilarated, every breathe sounded rough and wheezy then he felt something on his right arm and when he looked his hand and saw the chainsaw, it was part of his hand, it was his hand and part of his arm he lifted it up and saw a horrific, sight almost half his face looked like it one time turned into clay and stretched out and attached to his shoulder and turned back to skin his mouth untouched but.  he could move his head normally, his eyes oh, god his eyes, one of them were cloudy and looked dead but he could see threw it easily, it had some skin attached to the sides he could move that easily to, the other eye was black with a yellow iris that kind of glowed, his hair, short and black skin seemed to have stretched over that to, the a bald spot a big one to, his back had a lump and some hair also showing some bones he just noticed he was slouching he also had new clothes, he had a blue farmer like shirt a white one under that it also had some holes with brown boots he looked at both his arms hyperventilating and taking steps back in till he hit a tree he jumped and turned to it backing away from it a few steps the guards watched in confusion they loured there weapons then John knelt down looking up and screamed a terrible inhuman scream the guards had to cover there ears he put his head down and black thick fluid came out of his eyes then Cellestia and luna came they looked around

"What is going on we heard a loud noise when flying ove" they then saw John what they assumed crying they slowly started to walk towards him they succeeded until a twig broke then John quickly looked up and got up and rite before he could run he levitated when this happened he started flailing

"Sister calm him!!!!!!!" Cellestia called to her sister luna came over to john, Cellestia trying to stop him from flailing and possibly hurt luna, luna touched john on the head a dark blue glow emitted from her hand slowly John started from growling to asleep

"What should we do with it sister?" Luna asked

"It seems to be intelligent so we should show it how things work" Cellestia answered

"If that doesn't work your hines then what?" A guard asked

"Then we wait and treat it like our own and if that doesn't work we will use the elements" Cellestia said "for now we will take it to the castle" cellestias said putting john on the ground "let's just hope"Cellestia thought to herself