Confusing. Just confusing.

by Horacy

Rating: teen
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person, Rainbow Dash, Other, Romance, Comedy, Rarity, Random, Pinkie Pie, Human
Length: 0

Story about two ponies confessing theirs love to each others.

Two ponies named Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle have feelings for each others for quite a time now but are scared to confess them to each others. Author and pink pony helped in it of course.

This is my first story here so I'm open fore some criticism in the comments. Also my English isn't the best so watch out for bad grammar. I'm sorry if this story isn't appealing for you in any way. My bad then :fluttercry:

Warning! 4th wall-breaking involved! You have been warned!

Cover art by BJLouisiana2014 from Deviant Art

Published 2016-10-21 22:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-10-21 22:50:01 UTC

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