Love Kills!

by AppleScoots

Rating: mature
Tags: Horror, Alternate Universe, Human, Dark, Romance, Thriller
Length: 1040

A creature born from a lack of love and care has now started inhabiting the land of Equestria. Will it destroy the people? Or will it help them in return for a sacrifice?

A creature born from a lack of love and care has now started inhabiting the land of Equestria. This creature is far worse than any beast found anywhere else. Will this new place be eaten by him? Or will it eat HIM?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-10-18 19:30:01 UTC

Not Your Average Discovery!

*In a pyramid deep in the desert of Saddle Arabia.*

“What’s wrong? Scaaaaaaared?” A female voice asks in a sing song tone.

“No! Just a bit nervous is all. This place doesn’t feel quite right.” A male voice answers.

The pair walk down a dark sandy hallway being lit only by the torch held by the mare as she takes the lead.

“Here I thought you said you weren’t scared of anything.” The mare smirks.

*HIIIIIIISSSSSSSS*

The stallion yelps as he darts to hide behind the mare.

“Oh come on! It’s just a snake.” The mare groans.

“S-sorry.” The stallion says as he smiles nervously at the mare.

The mare sighs as she uses her magic to point the torch towards the end of the hallway.

“It’s too dark to see, we’ll just have to keep pushing onwards.” The mare sighs.

“Daring? I think we h-have a problem.” The stallion says as quietly as possible hoping that the mare heard him and not what was in front of him.

“Oh what.... now....” The mare stops as she drops the torch to the ground.

A tall bipedal creature with a long rattlesnake like tail easily 4 foot long, surrounded by snakes which crawl seemingly trying to be the closet snake to the creature. The creature turned it’s body towards the pair and at this they see its face. A sheet of pure blood red metal covers the top half of its face stopping just above the nose of the creature, the creatures wearing a pair of black and white sneakers, a pair of denim jeans with a rip going from the top of his right thigh to just below his right kneecap, the top body of the humanoid creature is covered in a black hoodie with a big green snakes head with a red pair of eyes, long strands of blood red hair flow past its shoulders. The creature gives them a smirk before disappearing into the pool of snakes around its feet.

“Discovery?” The mare asks.

“Y-yeah?” The stallion asks.

“RUN!” The mare shouts as they both turn to run only to see something that not even their nightmares would have held.

A huge wall of slithering snakes blocking the exit and in front of the wall stands the tall creature holding the body of the pairs guide, dripping blood and a strange green liquid dripping from his mouth.

The creature smiles, then drops the body. The creature then lowers his head and the metal plate falls from his face revealing peach skin matching the rest of its body. A pair of brown eyes stair back at the stallion then looks towards the mare with a grin on his face. The tail of the creature falls off and lands in the pile of constantly squirming snakes then disappears.

“Why hello miss?” The creature asks in a remarkably deep voice which causes the insides of the stallion to vibrate with the creatures’ speech.

“D-Daring Doo.” The mare says as she takes a light step back.

The creatures eyes glow a barely visible green.

“Why are you walking away from me? I only want to meet the gorgeous mare in front of me.”The creature says as it glances towards the stallion with a smirk on its face.

Daring starts to walk towards the creature.

“D-Daring? What are you doing?” The stallion asks.

“I-I’m going towards the man of my dreams.” The mare mumbles in a monotone voice.

The creature’s eyes light up in excitement then look towards the stallion with a grin revealing a vile pair of fangs the size of a quill.

The creature walks up to Daring Doo and gently cups her cheek in its hand and leads his mouth to hers. A whimper can be heard from the stallion as a tear leaves his eye. The stallion tries to move only to discover he can’t. All he can do is blink as he is forced to watch this creature kiss the mare he loves. The creature smiles as if it knows what it’s doing.

The creature then lowers one of its long fingers towards the mare’s marehood. Then drags his finger over the mare’s slit causing her to moan into the kiss. The stallion tries his hardest to move only to still fail miserably. The creature senses the stallions despair and begins to slide the finger past the mares lips and into her marehood. The mare gasps at the alien sensation of having a finger slide into her marehood.

The stallions eyes blurring with tears tries one last attempt at escaping only to fail once more and is once again forced to watch as the mare he loves get rutted by some creature he’d never seen before. The creature continues to stare at the stallion with an evil grin the entire time he pleasured the mare.

After about 5 minutes of fingering the mare, the mare came, spraying her fluids onto the beneath her.

The creature heard a sound of glass breaking causing it to turn towards the stallion that had been made to watch the mare he loved be pleasured. The look in the stallions eyes was all that the creature needed to see. The stallions eyes looked like they were made from glass and had cracks exiting from the middle. The creature had done what he had set out to do. Now all that was left to do was feed.

The creature disappeared into the pile of snakes at his feet and then arose where the stallion stood still unmoving. The creature grabbed the stallion and merged back into the snakes followed closely by the stallion who put up no struggle as he was dragged into the pile of snakes and towards his death.

“Love is dangerous my friend. In fact, you could say love is the most dangerous tool of death. All it takes to win a battle is make the one your opponent loves yours, then either let them rage and lose all thought or break their spirit and mind.” The creature said in its deep voice.

The creature had fed and was now ready to see this new place filled with these strange creatures which he could pray on