Once More, with Feeling

by Pascoite

Rating: everyone
Tags: Sweetie Belle, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike, Rarity, Romance, Slice of Life
Length: 1008

Spike is finally going to ask out his crush. He just needs a little preparation time first.

Spike is finally going to ask out his crush. He just needs a little preparation time first.

Slightly lengthened minific entry from the /fic/ write-off "Best Laid Plans."

Published 2016-10-24 00:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-10-24 00:50:01 UTC

Once More, with Feeling

“What are you doing up here?”

The hinges squeaked as Rarity stepped into the Cutie Mark Crusaders’ clubhouse. She cocked her head and raised an eyebrow, but she wore a soft smile. Good thing, too—the way she asked that, Spike might have taken her as angry or… worse. Worse than angry? Well, if she’d turned her nose up at him or looked at him like last year’s fashion fad, he might have just told her never mind.

“I-I just…” Spike swept a claw toward one of the cushions on the floor. “Please sit down. I wanted to talk to you.”

Rarity frowned at the discolored upholstery and scraped a hoof at the darkest stain on it, then settled for swiping away some of the dust from the bare floor. She crouched over it more so than actually lying down, but she did finally settle into place and turn her attention on him. “What about, dear?”

“First off,” Spike said, pointing his nose toward the note clutched in her hoof, “I’m sorry I misled you, but I couldn’t come up with a better way of getting you here.”

“Oh…” Rarity craned her neck to see out the window and shrugged, probably about the apparent lack of party guests. And decorations. And food. And, well, anything. “So… no Pinkie party?”

Spike shook his head. “Sorry. I wanted to talk about… us.”

At last, Rarity did choose the cushion over the floor, but she did check the other side first, where there was an even bigger stain, before flipping it back, gritting her teeth, and plopping down. “I see…” Her tail swished a bit, and a smirk played at the corners of her mouth. “It’s not like I couldn’t tell, you know.”

“Yeah,” Spike said, scratching at the back of his neck, “I figured.” Then he caught himself slouching and jerked upright. “But look—we’ve spent a lot of time together, and I thought we’d gotten closer over the years… maybe…”

“That we have,” Rarity replied with a nod. “I’m not sure that means we should change anything, though. You have all your duties with Twilight, and I have my business, of course. Plus all that stupid homework, and—” She held a hoof to her mouth, and her eyes shot wide open.

Spike took a deep breath. He needed to concentrate. Business? That sounded way too much like Rarity. “Do you remember how much fun we had at Princess Cadence’s wedding reception?” A chuckle wormed its way out of Spike’s throat, but Rarity only continued to watch him. “I thought the accent gems were part of the buffet, and then it turned out they were just glass imitations, but by then, I’d eaten so many already that I got sick, and… at least I made it outside, but the gardener is never gonna forgive me for burning up all those rosebushes. I don’t think any of the castle staff would welcome me back.”

Rarity stared with a horrified gape, but a snicker trickled through, which soon grew to a full laugh as her shoulders bounced. “But you felt much better afterward. And we spent the whole time dancing after that,” she said, her voice cracking in that adorable way. In her beautiful, lilting alto, she even hummed a little of the tune that’d swirled around the dance floor, and he closed his eyes for a moment to rekindle the vision of her in her elegant gown.

“Heh. Yeah.” That same nauseous feeling bubbled up, but he quickly willed it down and steadied his mind. “And when we went to the Crystal Empire together for the Equestria Games? I had a lot of fun.”

“Mr. The Dragon,” Rarity said with a steely gaze, in a perfect impression of Ms. Harshwhinny, then snorted and burst into laughter.

Not one of Spike’s finer moments. but at least he’d gotten to spend all that time with friends. And… her.

“I’ll teach you to sing Cloudsdale’s anthem someday,” she said with a twinkle in her eye. “You do need to get used to crowds, if you want to be my friend, ’cause I’m gonna be a star!”

Yeah, she would. He’d bet on it. But Cloudsdale’s anthem? He’d never touch that thing again. “I know,” he said, his voice growing quiet. “A beautiful star.”

He studied the floor in front of him, in case she’d heard that. When he looked up, she had a warm smile. “Friends,” she said, reaching out a hoof.

“Yeah, friends.” He took the hoof in his claws. But she didn’t stop.

“It starts out that way, doesn’t it? Then it gets complicated.” Rarity sighed, but she never lost her smile.

So Spike seized his opening. “No. No it doesn’t, because it never changes from that. Friends first, and then maybe more, but we never stop being friends, no matter what. That’s why it works: because we’re friends first.”

He must have said something right, because she grinned even bigger. “So… are you saying what I think you’re saying?”

Spike shuffled his feet and glanced at the floor for a second, but then he looked back up. This deserved eye contact, those wonderful eyes that he could lose himself… that he could…

“Spike?”

His body jerked, and he shook his head. “Do you think we could, y’know, hang out sometime? Like go get a hayburger or see a movie?”

Her beautiful eyes lit up, and she clapped her hooves together. “Wait until my sister hears I got a date!”

Spike chuckled, but—hoofsteps on the walkway outside! He jumped over to his Rarity plushie on its cushion and tucked it under the edge right as Sweetie Belle stepped through the door, a note clutched in her hoof. She did a double take when she saw him.

“What are you doing up here?” She glanced around, no doubt looking for streamers and cake and guests and Pinkie Pie, but she did smile. “All alone…” she added.

Spike’s stomach lurched. Time for the real deal. “I-I wanted to talk to you.”