Some Edits to 'To Where and Back Again'

by ISleepNow

Part II

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When she gets back to Ponyville she immediately goes to 'Twilight' and the 'Mane Five' who ask why she is back so early.  She tells them how things went well at first until they began falling back into old patterns of behavior.  She tells 'Twilight' how she will never take control of that village again.

Then 'Twilight' unloads on her.

At this point what should have happened is 'Twilight' then rages over Glimmy Not taking over the town and leading her former followers as she could have:

Fake Twilight:  All you've done since coming here is try to take over leadership of Friendship Castle and when you get the opportunity to lead your old disciples you respond by running away?

Fake Twilight:  You are nothing but a worthless upstart and you might as well go because nobody wants you around.

Glimmy breaks down and runs away crying.

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