Chrysalis last Chance

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Twenty-one Changelings are slowly going through Ponyville. If anypony cared for them or their Actions in the past, nopony show it. Everyone they met was either greeting or smiling happily at them. How could they forgive something like she had done to them so fast? And why did she cared about it? Twilight led them to an clearing next to the Library. But in a flash of eyes an circlic Tent was build by Magic. Chrysalis turned around to look to the Unicorn which was happily smiling at her, bursting with excitement. “This will be so awesome! I want to know everything about you! How do you eat? How do you get Foals and ...” “Ah think it´s enough Sugarcube, calm down” “ Alright” Twilight said “I think I have to show you the researchers which are my best friends also. My Friend Applejack tries to get everything to eat for you.” “Alright, thats Me!” “Then this is Rainbow Dash, fastest Flier in everywhere, so you can send Messages to everyone or if you want something from far away, just leave it to her.” “This is going to be SO AWESOME!” “Then this is Rarity, she has designed the Laboratory and will make everything that belongs to clothes or such things.” “Hello, Darling” “Fluttershy is the most talented Pony if it comes to animals, so she will help me with my studies.” “Uhm Twilight #squeak# I uhm you make me blush ..” “and I am Twilight, I think you already know me. I will do the Main research together with the most wise Elders Celestia has send me. And the last one is ..” Twilight stopped for a second, allowing Chrysalis to process all the Information she has been given. “Dash where is Pinkie?” “i don´t know Twi” “Anyway, Pinkie observes if you go along with the rules of the pinkie promise and you know, if you break them you will be sorry ..” “FOREVEEEEEEEEEEEEER!!!” Pinkie suddenly shouted, out of nowhere. “Hi Twi, I have made some Cupcakes for our Special Guests! Do you want one Chrysalis?” Chrysalis does´nt know what she should think about this Pony. “Soo, do you have any questions or can we start?” Twilight asked.
“Start what?” “The research of course, you silly!” Pinkie bounced out. “Uh, of Course“ Chrysalis and the others go into the tent, now shielded to the looks from anypony else. “ Rest now, we start when you all are ready” Twilight said. The six friends go outside, leaving Chrysalis alone with her thoughts.

-The next Day-

The Sun shined through the open Doors of the Tent, slowly waking Chrysalis up. With a yawn, she slowly opened her eyes just in Time to see a very big Pair of Eyes in Front of her. She shrieked, waking her Guards. “You should´nt be so rude Pinkie, let her wake up by herself!” Twilight said. “But now that you´re awake, I want to show you around I here!” 'What is to show me in this small tent' Chrysalis thought, only to open her Mouth in Shock seconds later. The Tent was somehow magically widened, Now supporting a surface as big as 2 soccer-fields. The Top now was real Sky-like, leaving Chrysalis watch in awe “How did you do that?” she asked. “Simple Transformation Magic, It´s really nothing special.” responded Twilight. 'How did i even defeated them for a short time?' Chrysalis asked herself. Twilight guided Chrysalis to the first Tent, opening the doorway. “These are the Shower rooms, divided into Men and Women.” Chrysalis interrupted: “We don´t need an Division between both, we can change into every possible Form, we can be Men, Women, both or nothing if we want.” “If you say so I fix this. I guess I fix the WC too. Besides, the WC is located in the next tent. The Tent behind is the largest one and the Place where you will spend most of the Time. It is the Research Tent. Please make two of your guards ready, I want to start in 30 minutes. The Rest of this Landscape can be made into whatever you need, if I should add something, tell me or the Guards. “ “I will consider it.”

While Twilight experimented with the Changelings, Chrysalis walked through the Town. Two of Celestias Guards followed her, and, in a bit of Distance, Pinkie in a bunch of hay. Wherever she looked, everypony was happy. And there was so much Love between them... NO. She shook her Head, clearing it from any longing which would break the rules. But... slowly her hunger was growing.

Back in the Tent she realized it took only a very short time for Twilight to turn the Changelings into a fleshy mass of pain. Most of them had vomited whatever they had been fed with. “Any Progress so far?” she asked. “ Sadly no, they can´t eat any fruits or something like this. They even surrendered to the Meat. Only the one with the Passion Fruit has no Problems so far...” With this Words spoken, the mentioned Changeling fall into Twilight Arms, vomiting all over her and then started to shiver in Pain. Long, spastic Shocks rapidly gripping him. “I think I should take a shower, but besides he lasted much longer than the others. Maybe... “

Twilight showered in the same Shower Rooms where the Changelings did. She was´nt too fine to do this. The Hot Water released her from the Tension she has built up in the last Days, giving her a wonderful Recover for her Muscles and her Brain. She heard another Changeling coming in. She would´nt have paid it any mind, but the buzzing sound constantly moves to her. It was the Moment she realize she had forgot to lock the Door. A Second later the changeling stand in Front of her, totally not prepared to see a beautiful Mare exposed under the Shower. Twilights wet Hair added another Highlight to the Sight. She could clearly tell the Changeling enjoyed it by the way his eyes get glassy eyes. Luckily he had no Genitalia at the Moment, else they would be rock hard or dripping from the sight alone. He licked his lips, but as she started to cry, the Changeling slammed the Door shut, leaving the Shower Room very fast with bright red cheeks. Twilight locked the Door, before resume showering. Nothing could prevent her from cleaning herself, not even a perverted Changeling. “But he looked so unprepared, maybe he did´nt planned this?” Twilight asked herself. As curious she was, she definitely had to ask the Changeling some Questions when she finished.