A Cry for Help

Chapters

A Cry for Help
Alternate Ending 1
First Person
Alternate Ending 2

A Cry for Help

Author's Note

Still a horrible person. I fully expect this to be down-voted to oblivion. Probably loose a lot of followers too.

A Cry for Help

Applejack whistled as she walked. She was walking to the vampire fruit bats' section of the apple orchard. Why she walked along the edge of the Everfree Forest she didn't really know. She didn't have to worry about anything, though. It wasn't Timberwolf season; they wouldn't venture this close to the edge of the forest.

"Help."

Applejack froze, ears twitching. She thought she heard something. She stood still before shrugging and continued walking.

"Help me."

Applejack stopped. Now she knew she heard something. The voice came from the forest, "Hello? Anypony there?"

"Please help," It was a filly's voice. Applejack immediately thought of Applebloom. She couldn't make out what they were saying, though.

She walked a few feet into the forest, "Whut did ya say?"

"Help me, please."

Applejack's blood ran cold. She heard the words this time. Again she thought of Applebloom, "Hang on! Ah'ma commin'!"

She ran into the forest, following the filly's voice. She ran far enough into the forest to loose sight of the edge. The filly's voice increased in volume with every foot. Applejack could see something up ahead: a clearing. She burst into it, looking around. In the center she saw what would be her doom.

A single pale red tentacle sprouted out of the ground. The end was ball shaped. It pointed at Applejack to reveal it had a mouth, with sharp teeth, "Help me, please!"

Applejack stared in disbelief. This was what made the filly's voice? She got an uneasy feeling. She took a step back. The ground opened and more tentacles sprouted out. Four large ones curved back down and hit the ground with a thud. Applejack stumbled as the ground shook and opened up. Up came a monster. There were mouths everywhere on its spherical body, gnashing their pointy teeth. Tentacles sprouted from the top and bottom. A single giant eye stared at her. The mouths stopped their gnashing and spoke in a multi-toned cacophony of unholy voices, "hElP mE."

Applejack had one thing to say to that, "Nope!"

She turned on her heels and ran away. Or at least she tried to. She suddenly tripped and looked back. A tentacle had wrapped around her leg, causing her to fall. Applejack kicked at it, "G-get off of meh!"

Another tentacle grabbed her arm. Applejack used her other to hit it. It didn't do a thing. Tentacles wrapped around her remaining limbs and pulled her apart spread-eagle. She struggled against her binds. A tentacle slithered in the air before her. While the ones holding her were blunt, this one was pointed. It was edged like a blade. Applejack saw this and trembled.

The tentacle suddenly jabbed forward and Applejack closed her eyes, expecting the pain of death. It never came. Instead she heard a ripping noise. She opened her eyes to see it cut down her shirt. Two more tentacles arrived and spread the shirt apart, exposing her bra-covered breasts. The pointed tentacle dipped down and cut that in two. The two tentacles pulled the bra-halves away, exposing her nipples to the cold air. Next was her pants. The pointed tentacle went behind her and cut a slit in her pants and underwear. It did the same to her belt. One of the two tentacles slithered down her pants. Applejack shivered at how cold it was. The tentacle ripped off her pants, underwear, and belt.

Applejack was now mostly naked, only the tattered remains of her bra and shirt was on her. She shivered in the cold and in fear. The three tentacles retreated, leaving Applejack wondering what was going to happen next. A single tentacle approached her. This one was pointed too, but was also different. The point was longer and thinner. Applejack could see it was hollow too, like a needle. She gulped and started to sweat as it drew closer and closer. It drew to her upper body. Applejack squirmed before the tentacles holding her limbs pulled her taut. The needle hovered in front of her face. Tears started to appear in Applejack's eyes before it went lower. Now it hovered above her right breast. It suddenly jabbed down and Applejack screamed in pain as the needle sank into her breast.

Applejack felt it pump something into her before retreating. Unbeknownst to Applejack, it injected a special kind of aphrodisiac. It reversed the pain center in her brain. Now she would feel only pleasure, no matter what happened. It would also increase that pleasure tenfold. It was slow acting though, and wouldn't begin to kick in for a few minutes. The effects were permanent, forever changing her nerves.

The creature decided it was done preparing its victim and began. A blunt tentacle slithered forward, and Applejack's eyes grew large. It was big. Twice as big as the biggest stallion or toy she ever took. Applejack renewed her struggles, "Th-that ain't gonna fit!"

It didn't care as it brushed up against her pussy lips. It then got to work. Applejack let out a silent scream as she felt it try to enter her. She felt something tear and she found her voice. She screamed bloody murder as it forced itself further by another inch. That scream turned into sobs as she felt it withdraw. Her vagina bled, blood dripping down towards the ground. The creature decided to try again. Applejack's eyes grew huge as she felt it press up against her cunt again, "NO! NO NO NO NO!!"

It ignored her cries of pain as it pushed back into her. Applejack screamed as loudly as possible, "SOMEPONY! HELP!"

"SoMePoNy HeLp," the creature mocked her and drove itself another inch into the doomed mare. Her vagina was bleeding freely now from having three inches of that huge tentacle inside of it. The monster suddenly stopped its advance. Applejack fought through the red fog as she wondered why it stopped.

She got her answer as Applejack felt something poke at her ass. Applejack froze and paled, "N-nooo..." she whimpered.

She felt her ass cheeks begin to spread apart and she felt another huge tentacle poke at her anus. It shoved forward, a new type of agony running through Applejack. She felt her ring split, blood now starting to leak out of that hole too. It drilled in another inch before retreating like before. Applejack gave heaving breaths. She eventually recovered just in time to feel them prod her entrances again, "WHY?!" she screamed at the beast, "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!"

"bReEd."

Applejack's stomach grew cold and her heart leapt up in her throat. She barely felt them enter her again as she tried to comprehend what she had been told. This wasn't happening. This wasn't happening. This all had to be a nightmare. A horrible nightmare. Any moment Princess Luna would swoop down and save her.

That train of thought was interrupted as the tentacles inside her suddenly twisted. Applejack screamed in agony. The tentacles pushed another inch in before retreating yet again. Applejack bowed her head, crying, "P-please. S-stop. Let meh go, Ah'm beggin' ya! Ah-Ah wanta go home..."

The tentacles shoved back in, and her vision turned red. This time they were here to stay. They started to pump back and forth. Applejack screamed her throat raw as utter pain coursed through her. The tentacles shoved themselves a little bit further each time into her ruined holes. Applejack struggled as much as she could. She tried to pull her arms out of the tentacles' grip, but they held on too strong. A particularly vicious thrust sent her screaming again, "NO MORE! PLEASE! YER KILLIN' MEH!"

The tentacle monster ignored Applejack. It kept thrusting itself into the screaming, begging mare. The tentacles slid freely in and out of her, lubricated with her own blood. Blood formed a pool under her. Squelches accented the air that was filled with painful yells and begs for mercy. They suddenly stopped after a few minutes. Applejack lay limply in the tentacles grasp, gasping and heaving. She lazily looked down to her abused nethers. Her eyes widened in horror. She could see them. She could see the outline of the tentacle in her pussy. Applejack started to hyperventilate. The tentacle twitched and curled upward, making a pointed peak in her skin. That hurt. A lot.

The tentacles started to move again, and Applejack found herself too tired to scream or even cry. She hung there limply as the tentacles continued to violate her in the most painful of ways. They reached even deeper, though the one in her ass stopped at her intestinal bend. It was content to simply batter that wall. The one in her cunt continued to press ever deeper, making sure to make more painful peaks in her skin. It inevitably hit something that stopped its advance after one deep thrust. It hit her cervix.

Strangely it didn't hurt as much as she thought it would. Her lower body started to grow hot, tingles of pleasure mixed with the pain. Applejack shook her head. No. She shouldn't be getting aroused from this. She shouldn't be. The tentacles pulled back and suddenly slammed back into her, only causing Applejack to grunt in discomfort now. She had to get out of here. She had to...she let out a moan as the tentacles squirmed inside of her.

Vaginal secretions dripped down along with the blood now. The tentacles continued to move in and out of her and Applejack instinctively bucked her hips, trying to get more of them in her. She shook her head again. No! This was wrong. She was being raped! It shouldn't feel good. She thought of Applebloom, her little sister the only anchor as her body turned against her.

She panted as the tentacles suddenly withdrew. Her body cried out for more, but Applejack managed to quell those feelings by thinking of Applebloom. She struggled again, "L-let meh go!"

The tentacles pushed against her again, "N-no...s-stop. D-don't..." The tentacles continued to thrust violently into her, pussy juice now aiding the blood with lubrication, "D-don't...D-don't... Don't stop..."

Applejack's eyes rolled upwards and she gave a loud moan as they complied, "M-more! Oh Celestia, m-more!" she begged, so close to an orgasm. It pulled its tentacles out, leaving Applejack with a terrible empty feeling before they thrust back in. Applejack came as they repeated the process a few times, screaming out in pleasure rather than in pain. The tentacles continued to fuck her for a few minutes, pistoning in and out of her in an alternating fashion. Why had she been afraid? This was wonderful. She came again.

And again. And again as the tentacles continued to fuck her roughly, "MORE! FUCK MEH MORE!" She was writhing in pleasure instead of pain now. She panted and gasped as the tentacle in her pussy continued to batter her cervix. Suddenly it gave and the tentacle slammed forward, hitting the back of Applejack's womb with enough force to stretch it. Applejack saw stars as she came harder than she ever before. She drooled as it continued to hit the back of her womb. She looked down and grinned at the huge bulge in her. She stared at it, mesmerized at how it moved inside of her visibly. She threw her head back, "OH CELESTIA! IT FEELS SO GOOD!"

It continued to fuck her nice and hard, making Applejack scream as orgasm after wonderful orgasm rocked through her. The creature decided to have some more fun. It wanted to see if it broke her. The tentacles withdrew and Applejack let out a whimper. Said whimper was cut short as she was suddenly dropped to the ground. She laid there before sitting up. She looked at her ruined, gaping holes and started to finger her gaping cunt. Why wasn't the nice monster playing with her anymore?

She got on her hands and knees and crawled over to the monster, panting like a bitch, "Ah want more! Why won't ya give meh more?!"

The monster said nothing. Applejack turned around and waved her ass at it, "Put 'em in meh, please! Ah need more! Fuck me! Fuck me fuck me fuck me!!! Ah want 'em so bad!"

Still nothing. Something broke in Applejack's mind, "Ya said ya wanted ta breed meh, then do it! Breed meh! Put yer babies in meh! Make meh pregnant! Ah want ta give birth ta yer young so bad! Make me a mommy! Ah wanna be a mommy!"

The monster was apparently satisfied and sent a tentacle slithering along the ground. Applejack saw this and sat on her butt. She spread her legs, eager for more pleasure. To her surprise and disappointment, it didn't shove it in her cunt. Instead it wrapped around one of her legs and started to drag her on the ground. Pleasure rose up from her back as she was dragged along.The tentacle slithered up to wrap around her torso. The monster went back into the hole it came out of and Applejack followed it.

The hole was actually a cavern under ground. Applejack's eyes widened at what she saw. Skeletons dotted the cavern floor. Maybe this wasn't such a good idea. She took that back as she felt a tentacle line up with her pussy. So what if this was her last few moments? She couldn't escape, so she might as well enjoy herself, "Fuuuck meh! Fill meh up 'till Ah burst! Fuck meh raw!"

Another two tentacles arrived, one going to her ass, another going up to her mouth. Applejack opened her mouth, eager to please the tentacle. As one they thrusted in. Applejack heard and felt her jaw pop and snap, the tentacle cracking her jaw. The corners of her mouth split apart. Her front teeth were knocked down her throat. She moaned in bliss and clenched down on the other two.

The tentacles started to pump in her. Applejack was in heaven. She writhed in pleasure, ignoring that the tentacles had blood on them now. Applejack felt another orgasm approach her. She felt the tentacle within her pussy bump up against something deep within her. Applejack came, eyes rolling back in her head. The tentacle moved back and forth, roughly hitting her cervix. She moaned in bliss as she was fucked in all holes. Fucking her faster and faster, Applejack came yet again. She couldn't wait to be bred. To be a mommy.

The one in her broken mouth suddenly left. Applejack weakly grasped at the retreating tentacle, still wanting it to be in her mouth. The tentacle in her pussy left too. The tentacle wrapped around her torso left, only to be replaced by four more that each grabbed her limbs. The tentacle in her ass never left, going even further. She mewled in ecstasy as it pushed forward. She looked down.

Applejack could see it. It was so deep inside of her. She panted like a bitch in heat as she watched it move its way through her intestines, showing their outline. She moaned as it kept going. She felt it push through into her stomach. She jerked, cumming. The tentacle still yet continued. It exited her stomach, making its way up her esophagus. She felt it slither up her throat, reaching the back of her mouth. It still pushed forward. She felt it prod the back of her lips before slithering out.

Applejack squirmed as she was impaled all the way through. She looked down at the tentacle sprouting from her mouth. It was covered in blood. Applejack didn't care, only wishing she could finger herself. The monster seemed to read her mind and one of her arms were released. Her hand shot down and furiously rubbed her clitoris. The sole tentacle started to slide back and forth, lubricated by her blood and other fluids. Her ass, no her whole body, felt amazing. The way the tentacle rubbed against her stretched walls was utterly blissful. The tentacle curled backwards and booped Applejack's nose. She fell in love.

The tentacle thought this was enough, not wanting to kill her yet. It decided to do what they both wanted: breed her. It agonizingly slowly withdrew the tentacle back into her. She felt her walls tugging at it, desperately trying to keep the pleasure device inside of her. Applejack came yet again by the time it pulled away from her anus. Applejack was left shuddering and moaning. She withdrew her hand from her cunt, looking to see it was covered in blood. She didn't mind.

Two tentacles came forward. These were much thinner, much to Applejack's disappointment. She saw they were hollow before they lined themselves up to her two gaping bottom holes. The one in her ass slithered almost two feet into her before stopping. The one in her pussy brushed against her cervix, making Applejack moan. It pushed through into her womb. It explored that cavern, poking at her walls and giving Applejack pleasure she never felt before.

They stopped and Applejack wondered why. Then she saw them. Bumps, each the size of a chicken egg, traveled up the tentacles. She knew what they were and what was happening, "Y-yesh! Breed meh! Fill meh up! Make meh pregnant! Ah want yer babies in meh! Ah wanna be a mommy so bad!" she struggled to say from her missing teeth and cracked jaw.

Applejack moaned as she felt the first one enter her. It was easily accomplished because of her stretched holes.The eggs stopped traveling up the tentacle up her ass, the monster wanting to breed her vagina first. Applejack writhed in pleasure as she felt them go into her womb, stretching her cervix wide each time they passed through it, "Oh Sheleshtia yesh! Fill meh up more! MORE!"

Her womb was crowded after the fifth one entered her. Applejack moaned, not caring at the volume. It felt so good to have her womb stretch. She looked down to see her belly start to bulge outwards. She stared, hypnotized, as she grew and grew. She put her free hand over her belly, feeling the shifting bumps inside of her. Applejack loved it. Why would she ever want to have a foal when she could have this happen to her?

"M-more! Breed meh more!" It complied, filling her with more eggs. She stared lustfully as her belly grew more and more, her hand being pushed away from the core of her body. She looked pregnant. She was pregnant. She came again from that thought. Her ecstasy only increased as her clenching caused the eggs inside of her to shift.

The tentacle in her cunt finally stop laying eggs in Applejack after a minute of more impregnation and withdrew. Now it was her ass's turn. Applejack's eyes winded as she felt the eggs start to enter her, a bloody grin spreading across her face, "Yesh! Yesh! Fill meh more!"

The monster complied yet again and pushed its eggs deep up into her ass. Applejack bucked her hips, loving the feel of the eggs in her womb moving. This time she tried to count the eggs going in her. She lost count around the higher twenties when she came again. There were just so many eggs inside of her. The tentacle slowly moved back, laying eggs all the while. Two feet's worth was laid inside of Applejack. By the time it pulled out, her ass was absolutely stuffed. One even escaped her ass, plopping out of her and onto the floor. It broke and Applejack let out a wail. One of her babies died.

The creature didn't seem to care at this minor loss. Instead, it decided that Applejack still wasn't full enough. There was still one more hole...

Applejack blinked as something pressed against her mouth. She discovered that another thin tentacle was in front of her face. She eagerly opened her mouth and the tentacle wasted no time in slithering inside of her. It went to the back of her throat and stopped. Applejack looked up and saw more eggs coming. The last, rational part of her brain told her that if she let it lay its eggs in her stomach, she would die. It was ignored at the thought of receiving more eggs inside of her. She wanted to be a mommy. She stated to finger herself again. Or at least tried to. She couldn't reach her pussy because of her giant belly. Instead she lovingly stroked her bulging belly, loving the feel of the bumps. Another tentacle shoved itself into her cunt, fixing the pleasure problem.

Applejack watched as the eggs slowly trailed down to her mouth. The first one reached her. It pressed against her lips and Applejack opened her mouth wider. She felt it slowly slide into her mouth using her tongue. The tentacle withdrew a bit, the creature wanting to see if she would willingly swallow her final batch of eggs. She did. Her tongue rolled the egg to the back of her throat and dutifully swallowed it. She felt it plop into her stomach, bobbing in her blood-tinted stomach acid. The egg was evolved to resist the acid. Another arrived and Applejack swallowed that one too.

Applejack moaned after the second one dropped into her stomach and quickly felt the third one go into her mouth. The tentacle in her pussy continued to thrust back and forth as Applejack swallowed the third egg. It was careful not to hit her cervix as the fourth one arrived. She swallowed that one, then the fifth one, the sixth, the seventh. Bulge after bulge traveled into Applejack's waiting maw, and she swallowed each and every one like the good brood mare she was.

Her stomach was half full now, and Applejack wanted it to be completely filled. She wanted to be a mommy so bad. More eggs came down for her to swallow. A minute of gulping down her future babies. Then two. Then three. Her stomach was filled now, but there were still more eggs to put inside of her. The tentacle slithered forward, reaching the entrance of her packed stomach.

It shoved more eggs down into her stomach, stretching the walls. Applejack moaned in bliss as her stomach started to swell. The tentacle in her pussy never stopped its thrusting while this was going on. Applejack came again, clenching down on the eggs inside her. Her belly grew a few more inches before the flow of eggs stopped. Her stomach was now chock-full of eggs, some even being forced into the beginning of her intestines.

The tentacles inside of her withdrew and she was gently laid on the ground. Applejack laid there for a few moments, panting and moaning. She eventually managed to get on her feet. She waddled to a wall and sat against it. She rubbed her large belly, smiling. She was going to be a mommy now.

The eggs were quick to hatch, needing only a few hours to gestate inside of her. During that time the eggs grew, making Applejack swell even more. She caressed her huge belly, cooing. It was going to feel so good when she gave birth. The ones in her womb were the first to hatch. Applejack cried tears of joy as she felt the eggs start to move inside her. She shivered as she felt them break out of their eggs. She rubbed her belly and cooing again as she felt them squirm inside of her. They began to bite at her walls, tearing off little chunks. The aphrodisiac did its job, and Applejack moaned in pleasure. One of her babies found her cervix and took a bite out of it. Applejack shuddered in delight at the feel of her baby trying to escape. It ate through her cervix and squirmed out of the bleeding hole. The others started to follow it. All the while Applejack stroked and caressed her squirming belly. She could feel her babies move inside of her with her hand. She loved it.

The first baby stopped a few times in her walls to take bites out of it before continuing onward. Applejack groaned in bliss as it reached her lips and slithered out. She was officially a mommy now. She craned her head to the side, wanting to see what her babies looked like. The baby slithered to the side and into view. It was shaped like the first tentacle she saw, only much smaller and pale grey in color.

Applejack reached over and picked it up. It was so cute. She smiled as she stroked the writhing tentacle. She raised it to her face, cuddling it. It bit a piece of her cheek off, but she didn't mind. She put it back down on the ground as she felt the others start to leave her, "Go-mmm- go on now. Ahn~. Go ta daddy, mmf."

The tentacle slithered away, its siblings that had gotten out following it. Applejack started to pant heavily. She put her hand back on her still squirming tummy. She stroked it, "Come on out, little guys. Mommy wants ta see ya'll. Mmph~."

They squirmed out, biting more of her sex organ. Applejack suddenly let out a moan of pleasure as she came. Her clenching walls impeded their progress, causing them to eat more bits of her. Her pulsing belly started to deflate as more and more of her children came out. It was then the ones in her ass started to hatch. Applejack moaned again as she felt more of her babies begin their life.

While the majority of them went out the correct way, biting her all the way, one had other ideas. It started eat its way out. Located at the curve of her colon, it tore chunks of flesh away. Applejack giggled, "That ain't the right way out, little guy. Mmmph, ya can do whut ya want. Ah don't mind."

The last one out her vagina coincided with the first one out her asshole. Applejack panted as one after another of her children came out of her ass. A couple took bites out of the insides of her cheeks. She didn't mind because she found out her belly deflated enough for her to finger herself.

The one eating its way out was fast. Within no time it chewed its way out of her, emerging from her lower side. Applejack quickly grabbed it by its head and pulled it out. She cradled it in her arms, "Yer a brave one, aintcha?" She brought it to her right nipple. It bit that off. Applejack chuckled, "Yer shupposed ta drink from it. OH BUCK!"

She came as three of the newborns tried to slither out of her at the same time. She dropped the tentacle in her hand, forgetting about it as she jerked and convulsed. Pussy juice squirted out of her gaping vagina. Her clenching helped push them out. Those were the last ones. Now she had to wait for the next hatching. She didn't have to wait long as her stomach churned.

Applejack was constantly fingering herself as the eggs hatched. She moaned in absolute bliss, loving the feel of them moving in her belly. Only one attempted to slither out by her esophagus. It failed, the walls too steep. She moaned again as she felt them eat away at her walls, "C-c'mon out fellas. Ohhh~."

They breached her stomach walls and poured out into the surrounding cavity. Her torso rippled and Applejack used her other hand to feel them squirming. They explored that cavity for a few more moments, making Applejack cum again. Then they started to bite their way out. One of them chewed its way into her lung. Applejack coughed, finding it hard to breathe. She didn't mind though. As long as her babies were happy. Her belly bulged in places before some of her babies burst out of her. Applejack moaned in delight, "G-good boysh. Come out of mamma. Ohhh~."

She grabbed one and stroked it. It squirmed in her grasp, biting bits of her arm off. She brought it up her face and stared lovingly at it. Her babies. They were all hers. She was so happy to give birth to these beautiful children, "Ya'll are shoo adorable. Mamma loves ya'll. Mamma loves ya sho much," she said before planting a kiss on her baby's head. She put it on her lap, stroking it while fingering herself.

She enjoyed her last few seconds, enjoying the feeling of them slithering inside of her. One of them finally found her heart just as Applejack was about to cum. Her eyes rolled back into her head as she felt it bite her heart. Applejack died while cumming.

Her body slid over to the side. Some of the tentacle offspring went back into her stomach and now found themselves able to travel through the esophagus. Two of them moved up. One reached her throat and started to eat a way out while the other one continued onward. It passed out of her gaping mouth and bit a piece of her nose off. Applejack's throat bulged before suddenly bursting open. The other one slithered through the gaping hole.

The others bit their way out and escaped. They gathered around the monster. Said monster still wanted to have some fun with her body. It grabbed the mare's limp body and pulled her close. It then prepared its final tentacle. It was massive. It was a foot in width. Applejack wouldn't have survived if the monster used it first.

It lined up the tentacle with Applejack's dead pussy. It thrusted forward, ripping apart the flesh between Applejack's anus and pussy. It continued forward, reaching her blood filled womb. It tore through it, shattering her pelvis bone. It continued upwards into her torso cavity. It powered through her intestines, disconnecting them from their walls. If Applejack was still alive, she would've seen a huge bulge in her. It pushed her intestines against her respiratory system. It shoved her dead heart to the side and still continued. It reached her neck.

It roughly pushed upwards. It tore through her neck, stretching it to the breaking point. The tentacle essentially popped Applejack's head off, which hit the ground with a thud. The creature panted with many individual breaths. This tentacle was the only one that had pleasure nerves. The rest didn't, and got no pleasure from fucking the late Applejack.

It moaned with its many voices as it started to move the tentacle. Applejack's body, despite its battered and abused state, was still tight. It moved faster and faster, turning her organs to mush. Her ribs, pelvis and spine were turned to powder. Applejack had only one gaping hole now. Two if you counted her neck, which was stretched tightly around the tentacle because of its girth.

The thrust became faster. Squelches filled the air as Applejack's organs were liquified, some leaking through the holes in her.It angled the tentacle upwards and let go with the other ones. Applejack's body slowly slid down to almost the base. It wrapped another tentacle around her torso and moved her body up and down, using her like a fleshlight. It felt wonderful. It thrusted harder, the neck stump tearing.

It thrusted its tentacle into the ruined mare. Hard. Her bottom body began to split as the greatly thicker base tried to enter her. It ignored this and continued to fuck the dead body. Minutes passed by as it pleased itself with the corpse of its brood. It suddenly pulled her arms off, dropping them to the ground. It did the same with her legs. It continued to fuck her now limbless torso, eager to spew its cum into the corpse of Applejack. It was oh so close. A few more thrusts before it pulled back into her mostly hollow body and started to cum.

Despite the holes in the body, it started to inflate. It grew rounder as the stumps of her limbs and neck became cum fountains. The white, viscous cum was tinted red. Applejack's body grew more and more. Suddenly there was a wet rip and cum gushed out of the slit on Applejack's body. It continued to pump its slimy cum in the torso. It finally withdrew the huge tentacle and let go of the mutilated body. It hit the ground with a wet thud, cum spilling out. The tentacle painted the thoroughly devastated body with its cum. It was slightly acidic.

Applejack's body slowly turned to mush. A minute later all that was left of the mare was a pile of steaming meat. It gave off a strong smell, which made the late Applejack's children hungry. The slithered to what remained of her and dug in.

The creature was satisfied. It's been so long since it last bred. It closed up the ground, careful to leave the speaking tentacle up above ground. It sealed the ground up with an adhesive that squirted from a tentacle. It then waited. Hopefully it wouldn't be too long before another mare showed up...

Alternate Ending 1

Author's Note

But wait! It gets worse. This is what would've happened if the creature used the big tentacle first. I'll write more happy stuff now.

Alternate Ending 1

"Help."

Applejack froze, ears twitching. She thought she heard something. She stood still before shrugging and continued walking.

"Help me."

Applejack stopped. Now she knew she heard something. The voice came from the forest, "Hello? Anypony there?"

"Please help," It was a filly's voice. Applejack immediately thought of Applebloom. She couldn't make out what they were saying, though.

She walked a few feet into the forest, "Whut did ya say?"

"Help me, please."

Applejack's blood ran cold. She heard the words this time. Again she thought of Applebloom, "Hang on! Ah'ma commin'!"

A single pale red tentacle sprouted out of the ground. The end was ball shaped. It pointed at Applejack to reveal it had a mouth, with sharp teeth, "Help me, please!"

Applejack had one thing to say to that, "Nope!"

The creature decided it was done preparing its victim and began. It had just bred a few days ago, but didn't pleasure itself for a while. It aimed to change that. Applejack's eyes widened it absolute horror at the monstrosity coming towards her. She shook her head, "Ya'll kill meh!"

The beast decide that was an acceptable sacrifice. Applejack struggled desperately in vain as it reached her lower body, "P-p-please, d-don't do th-this!"

It pressed up against its pussy lips. Applejack grit her teeth as she felt herself stretch, "Ah'm beggin' ya! Stop!"

Applejack screamed as her vagina tore. The pain intensified even further as the flesh between her cunt and asshole split in order for her to take its girth. Applejack writhed in agony, "STOOOP!! NOOO! IT HURTS! AHHHH!!!"

It forced itself further inwards, the flesh wall that divided her vaginal and anal walls tore to form one big bloody hole, "AAAAHHHH! P-PLEASE! AAAAHHHHHRRRGGHH! OH CELESTIA, IT HURTS! STOP!! MERCY!!!"

It didn't stop. Applejack felt too good to stop. Too tight. And her screams and begs of mercy was music to it. Applejack screamed as the lower part of her pelvis bone shattered. It pushed forward again, disconnecting the vaginal and anal walls from the surrounding muscles, "MAMMA! MAMMA MAKE IT STOP! IT HURTS MOMMY! AHHHH!!!"

The tentacle stopped its advance, enjoying the warmth and tightness. Applejack started to sob, "N-no more. Oh Celestia, m-make the pain stop... Ah wanna go hAAAAAAH!"

It continued its advance while she was speaking. The tentacle destroyed her womb, all that was left was squished flesh. It began to push against her colon and small intestine. It pushed up, which caused the said organs to push against the stomach and liver. Applejack suddenly vomited up the contents of her stomach as it was squished. Bile and the remains of apple products, her last meal, washed over her breasts. She lazily looked down, slowly loosing it because of the pain. What she saw woke her back up.

She had a giant bulge. She could see the front of her vagina and crotch being split in two from how thick the tentacle was. She could see the tentacle pressing tightly against her skin. She watched as it slowly advanced, slowly killing her. It moved on, pushing through the intestines. She felt some parts of her intestines tear, white hot agony pulsing through her. Applejack started to loose consciousness.

The monster would have none of that. It still wanted to hear her screech. It poked her in the chest with another hollow needle tentacle and injected epinephrine into her. Applejack's world came back in focus, reminding her she was still in hell. Applejack wanted to die now, "P-please...k-kill meh...jus' end it..."

The tentacle refused her request. It started to move back and forth, pumping in and out of that giant hole her vagina and anus became. Applejack's eyes widened at the sudden increase of pain, "K-KILL MEH, PLEASE! KILLL MEEEEE!"

The monster moaned, her begs of death increasing its pleasure. Each time it thrusted in, Applejack felt the wind get knocked out of her. Her whole world was pain. She felt the lucky parts of her intestines being shoved to the sides, now visibly bulging against her skin. The unlucky parts were painfully turned to mush from the tentacle's constant thrusting. Her pelvis and sex organ was obliterated.

She vomited again, this time blood came out of her mouth as her stomach was crushed and squished to oblivion. It stopped its thrusting, leaving Applejack gurgling. Her eyes had rolled back, tears streaming out of them. They refocused downwards as she felt the tentacle continuing upwards. The flesh at her lower body split further.

It pushed against her diaphragm. Applejack found she couldn't breathe properly and struggled in her binds in panic, the utter pain taking second priority. She changed her mind. She didn't want to die, "DON'T... KILL MEH!!! AH DON'T...WANNA...DIE!!!" she struggled to scream out with how difficult breathing had become.

It tore through Applejack's diaphragm, tearing it in two. It felt something thumping against the tip of its tentacle and the monster knew it had found her heart. It decided it was time to end the mare's pitiful existence. It angled its tentacle behind the beating heart.

Applejack couldn't breathe. Tears poured down her cheeks as she felt it push against her rapidly beating heart. Suddenly she felt pain that dwarfed the previous pain as it suddenly shoved forward. Applejack's eyes rolled back into her head as the tentacle burst through her chest. The arteries and veins that were attached to the heart was snapped as said organ was shoved outward. Her sternum burst apart, a huge hole appearing in her chest. The heart and part of the rib cage flew out of her and landed on the ground. Parts of her lungs and ribs poked through the gaping hole. Applejack convulsed as blood poured out of the wound, running down her stomach. The orange fur was stained forever red. Applejack's convulsions died down, reducing them to twitching. The twitching died down and Applejack hung limply, still.

The monster wasn't done yet. It moved its tentacle in and out of the hole it made. It grunted in pleasure as it moved faster and faster, not having to worry about killing the mare too soon anymore. The bloody tentacle moved faster and faster, further opening the hole. It stopped and let the body slid down as far as it would go before resuming thrusting. It moaned, loving the feel of Applejack's ruined organs around its tentacle. It let go of her arms, loving how they limply flopped about. Using a tentacle, it pushed Applejack's limp head to the front. It wiped its bloody tentacle all over her face, covering her with her own blood. It thrust again, causing the body to jerk. Her head rolled limply around as it continued to please itself. Her hat fell on the blood-stained ground.

It grabbed her by the neck, letting go with the other tentacles.It continued to thrust in and out of the hole, taking perverse joy in watching Applejack's limbs flop about. Her breasts were pushed apart as it shoved more of its girth into the corpse. It continued to fuck Applejack's dead body a few minutes more. It eventually got another idea.

It withdrew the tentacle back inside of the dead mare. It pushed upwards, reaching her neck. Carefully and slowly it pushed upwards, careful not to pop off the head. The skin that made up her throat bulged obscenely outwards, but held. It drilled a hole to her mouth, reaching what it wanted. It tilted Applejack's head back and continued to move upwards. It pushed the spine outwards, snapping it. With a pop, her jaw dislocated. It moved into her mouth, roughly going forward. Her jaw spread open was wide as it could as the tentacle knocked Applejack's teeth onto the ground. The corner of her mouth and the lips themselves tore as it pushed through. Applejack was officially impaled all the way through.

It got to work pleasing itself. It moved Applejack's body down on the tentacle, tearing her lower body even more. It moved the corpse up until the tip of the tentacle was in the body's mouth. It shoved back down and groaned as it watched Applejack's corpse's mouth tear open even more. It repeated the process, going further through Applejack's dead body with each thrust. The tear in her lower regions was almost a half a foot long now, and was no longer restricted to her front.

It groaned and moaned as it quickly approached its climax. Applejack's mouth was stretched so much it didn't look like a mouth any more. Again it slid Applejack's corpse up and down its length. The tentacle was a darker shade of red now from the blood. Suddenly it pushed the tentacle further out from the corpses mouth and leveled horizontally. It came, spewing out at the clearing. It was careful not to get any of its acidic cum on its new toy. It still wanted to have fun. It almost rarely got to have fun.

It withdrew its tentacle from the body and moved back into the hole. It dragged Applejack's corpse with another tentacle. It was grabbed by more and was held spread-eagle before the monster. It marveled at its prize. It poked at Applejack's tits, sliding a tentacle over what remained of her thick ass. With most of the organs turned to mush, the skin sagged inwards. It finally lined up its pleasure tentacle with the hole in the mare's chest. It teased the edges before drawing back.

It punched through her back, creating a new hole to fuck. And fuck that new hole it did. It let go of her limbs and instead grabbed her belly. It pushed and pulled the corpse horizontally. It groaned in pleasure. This hole was tight. It wasn't as soft though. Her arms and legs trailed after their body.

It fucked her nice and hard. Rougher than last time. For a long time it pleased itself. Half a hour later it came, painting the walls white. And it was still horny.

It lined up its tentacle to her bottom hole. It took its time pushing up into Applejack's corpse, enjoying the feel of stretched muscles around it. Pushing up into the mushy cavity, it slowed down again when it hit her neck. With agonizing slowness it reentered her neck. This time, instead of going out through the gaping hole that was once Applejack's mouth it continued upwards. Applejack's eyes rolled back down as it broke through the ocular cavities. One popped out of its sockets, dangling limply. The tentacle broke through into the skull, pressing the brain upwards. It drilled through the king organ and reached the top of her skull. It shoved through. The skin split apart as the tentacle pushed through the top of her head, pushing some of the brains out. Then it started to move.

It used her body for its pleasure. It moved her up and down faster and faster, groaning and moaning as it opened her up more and more. It fucked her roughly, rougher than ever before. What leftover blood was still in the dead mare squirted out as her lower body was torn even more.

It wanted her to the base. Said base was two feet wide. It stopped its thrusting and slowly pulled her back. Her skin stretched but held. It was still a few feet from the base. Half of her head was gone as it pushed even further towards the base. The skin on her back split apart, leaving the spine open to the air. More and more of the ever widening tentacle was pushed into Applejack's corpse. With a wet rip the skin up to her belly button split apart. It forced the devastated body down even more, finally reaching the base. It sighed with its many voices as it started to move the mare's broken body. It continued to fuck her corpse for a few minutes. Applejack was the definition of loose down there now, so the creature sought to solve this. It pushed Applejack's thick thighs against the tentacle fucked her corpse more and more before cumming again.

It still wasn't done. It hadn't used this tentacle in decades, and it was going to use Applejack for all her worth. Over the course of the next few hours, it used her body, further deteriorating it. Rigor mortis set in, making the creature disappointed that it couldn't see the body's limbs flopping around. The hours turned into a day and it still continued to use her now bloating body to its joy. Day after day it fucked Applejack's body nonstop until it physically couldn't any more. At that stage, it dropped her remains in the corner to rot. It then waited for the next mare to come by.

First Person

Author's Note

First Person

I whistled a tune as I traveled beside the Everfree Forest. I didn't really have to worry about any Timberwolves or anything like that; they didn't venture out from their dens. Maybe they need to recharge or something? You know, 'cuz they're magic. I don't know and I didn't really care. I pushed those thoughts out of my head. I needed to check on the vampire fruit bats and-

I stopped. I coulda sworn I heard something. I strained my ears...nothing. Probably my brain playing tricks on me. Shrugging, I continued on.

"Help me."

I froze. I definitely heard something this time. I slowly turned to the forest. Whatever it was, it came from the forest. Now, I may not be as smart as my friend Twilight, but even I knew better than to enter the forest. The only way I'd enter is if I heard-

"Please help," Dear Celestia, it was a filly. It couldn't be Applebloom. She was nowhere near this part of the orchard. Right?

I gulped but took a few steps into the forest, "What did you say?" I called out.

"Help me, please."

Sweet Celestia, I understood the words this time. It almost sounded like Applebloom. That couldn't be true. Still, I couldn't leave some filly in the forest. Even if it wasn't a filly, and some weird monster, I'm sure I can handle myself in there, "Hang on!" I called out, "I'm coming!"

I began to run into the forest. The filly continued to call out, leading me deeper into the forest. What was a filly doing here? I ran for about a minute before spying a clearing up ahead. I burst through the underbrush. What I saw was not a filly.

I didn't know what it was. It was some sort of sprout thing. It moved. To my surprise, it pointed at me to show a mouth, "Help me, please!"

Shoot, this was a trap. Buckin' hay, I shoulda just ignored it. I took a step back and almost fell down as the ground opened up. This isn't good. Tentacles sprouted out of the ground like weeds. They pulled...something...out of the ground. It was a monster, plain and simple. It had way too many teeth, "hElP mE."

Oh buck no. I ain't dealing with this, "Nope!"

I turned around and started to dash away. Suddenly I felt something grab my ankle. I fell on my stomach. I looked back. A tentacle wrapped itself around me! I kicked at it as hard as I could. Nothing. I gave it a few more kicks, "G-get off of me!"

Another tentacle grabbed me, wrapping itself around one of my arms. I ain't going down without a fight. I used my free hand to hit it. More tentacles slithered through the air. They wrapped around my other arm and leg. They pulled the limbs away from my body. I couldn't move! That don't mean I didn't try.

Movement caught my eye. Another tentacle moved towards me. This one was different, though. It looked like a sword. Celestia, no...I don't wanna die. I increased my struggles as it moved closer, to no effect. Fast as lightning, it jabbed at me. I flinched, closing my eyes. I didn't want to see it stab me.

I didn't feel any pain. Instead, I felt something tug at my shirt. I opened my eyes when I heard a ripping sound. I looked down to see it cut a line in my favorite shirt. I blinked. Why in Equestria did it do that? It wasn't going to...no, it couldn't. That was just wrong. I'd rather have it kill me than do the alternative.

My fear came true as it pulled my shirt apart and cut my bra in two. No, please, no! I didn't want to be raped by this thing! The bladed tentacle went around behind me. I felt it cut through my clothes down there. Please, stop! One of the tentacles that pulled apart my shirt and bra went to my crotch.

It was going to rape me! Celestia, no! I shivered as it slid down my pants. It was so cold. It ripped my clothes off. No!

A new tentacle appeared. This one was needle-like. Wh-what was it going to do? I started to cry as it hovered above my face. It went down to my right breast. Before I could prepare myself, it stung my breast. I let out a cry of pain. That had hurt! I barely felt it inject something in me from the pain.

It withdrew and another tentacle appeared. It was twice the size of the biggest toy I had. It started to move to my crotch. There was now way that thing was going to fit! "Th-that ain't gonna fit!"

I felt it prod at my vagina. Maker, no! It pushed against me. Please, no! The worst pain I've ever felt started as it forced itself inside me. I couldn't even scream because of the pain. It suddenly shoved forward. I felt something in my vagina tear. This brought out a scream from me. Oh Maker, it hurt so much. It suddenly withdrew and I started to cry. Why? Why was this happening?

I felt it at my burning lips again. NO! "NO! NO NO NO NO!"

It shoved back in me. I screamed. "SOMEPONY! HELP!" Anypony, please...

"SoMePoNy HeLp," the monster said as it forced itself deeper into me than before. Oh Maker, please make it stop. It stopped. Wh-why?

I got my answer as I felt something prod at my plot. Please...anywhere but there! "N-nooo..."

I gave a sob as it slowly spread my cheeks from its girth. I tried to move away, but lancing pain run through me. I forgot the other tentacle was still in my vagina. I never had anal before so I was wholesomely unprepared for the tentacle to rip into my back door.

Why? Why was it doing this? The tentacles retreated, leaving me gasping for air. I felt them touch my ruined holes again, and a spark of rage passed through me, "WHY!?" I screamed at it, "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!?"

"bReEd."

Breed. No. Oh Celestia no. No no no nonononono!!! I didn't want to be the thing's mother for its children. I didn't want to be pregnant! I had a farm to run! This wasn't happening. This can't be happening. Th-this had to be a dream. Any minute and I'll wake up.

Utter pain suddenly ran through me. Th-this wasn't a dream. I-it was actually happening. Oh Maker, have mercy on me! The tentacles withdrew again. I lay limply in the monster's grasp. Tears ran down my cheeks, "P-please. S-stop. Let me go, I'm begging you! I-I want to go home..."

The tentacles returned again, and this time they stayed. They pumped back and forth in my bloody holes. If I had thought that the previous events were painful, they were nothing compared to this. The pain increased tenfold as they thrusted in and out of me.

They were so deep. And it hurt so much. The one in my vagina thrusted hard into me. These things were going to kill me! "NO MORE! PLEASE! YOU'RE KILLING ME!"

It ignored me and continued to thrust into me. Please, no more. I'll do anything, just make the pain stop. Minute after agony-filled minute passed before they suddenly stopped. I heaved for air. Wh-why did they stop? What other torture had it in store for me? I looked down.

My eyes bugged out. I could see them! I could see the bucking tentacles inside me! I could see them stretch out my skin. The one in my vagina curled itself upward, stretching my skin even further. That was worse than the thrusting. It curled back down and they started to move again.

My throat was raw. I was out of tears. I just hung there as the one in my plot hammered away at it. The one in my vagina simply slithered deeper in me, curling up some more. It suddenly stopped its advance as it hit something. It hit my cervix. It didn't hurt as much as it should have...

My lower body started to grow hot, not from pain. No. I couldn't be. I-I couldn't be getting aroused by this! But the pain started to go away, being slowly replaced with tingles of pleasure. NO! I had to get out of here. I had to go home! I had toooohhhh, that feels good. STOP IT! This was rape- ah! Oh Maker, why does it feel so good? It didn't before, right?

I...I had to get back home....I needed to see my family again. Applebloom. I-I needed to see her again. The tentacles left me. Come back- no! Applebloom. Gotta think about Applebloom, "L-let me go!"

They returned, my pussy throbbing. They touched me, sending shivers through me, "N-no...s-stop. D-don't..." They resumed their thrusting, "D-don't...D-don't..." I needed to think of my friends. I needed to think of my family. I needed to think of Applebloom. I needed....I needed...

...

I needed more~ "Don't stop."

They complied. My eyes rolled back into my head at the sheer amount of pleasure I was feeling, "M-more! Oh Celestia, more!" I was so close to cumming. They suddenly left. My pussy clenched down on nothing. No! Don't go! I need more!

They thrusted back in. Hard. They went the fastest pace yet. Oh Celestia...I'm gonna...cum~. I jerked, cumming hard. Harder than I did in a while. And they still continued to fuck me. Y-yes! This feels great! Why on Equestria was I ever afraid? All my friends should be here and be pleasured by this master. Even Applebloom.

I screamed to the heavens as I came again, "MORE! FUCK ME MORE!" The nice monster complied. I came again when it hit my cervix. It rammed the tentacle against it again and again. I was getting close again. The one in my ass went slow but hard. I loved that. The one in my sopping pussy went to light speed. Something had to give.

And give it did. After a very hard thrust it pushed past my cervix. It hit the back of my womb, stretching it. I howled as I came. Sooo goood. I looked down I could still see it. I could see the tentacle thrust into me. It kept pounding the back of my womb, giving me the most pleasurable experience I ever had.

They suddenly stopped fucking my needy holes. I blinked as they withdrew. Why did they stop? I was getting close again. The tentacles suddenly let go and I fell to the ground. I'm sooo horny. I fingered my pussy. It wasn't as good as the tentacles.

I went on my hands and knees and crawled over to the pleasure monster like a toddler. I was panting hard, my loins burning. I needed release so bad, "I want more! Why won't you give me more?!"

No response. I turned around, presenting my needy pussy, "Put them in me, please! I need more! Fuck me! Fuck me fuck me fuck me!!! I want them so bad!"

Still nothing. I wracked my head for something, anything, to make it come after me again. It said it wanted to breed, right? I decided then and there that I wanted to be bred. To be a mom, "You said you wanted to breed me, then do it! Breed me! Put your babies in me! Make me pregnant! I want to giver birth to your young so bad! Make me a mommy! I want to be a mommy!"

To my utter delight, it sent forward a tentacle. Yes! More pleasure! Afterwards, I get to be a mommy. I bet they'll be so beautiful. My own young. Yes please! I sat down and spread my legs. My pussy throbbed in anticipation as it drew closer. It didn't put it in my vagina, though. Instead it wrapped around one of my legs and started to drag me across the ground. I moaned. The dirt felt good across my back.

The tentacle slithered up to wrap around my torso. The kind monster went back down the hole it came out of, bringing me with it. Inside were skeletons. They littered the floor. I grew scared, my arousal temporarily forgotten. W-was I going to die? I didn't want to die.

Those thoughts vanished as I felt a tentacle brush against my vulva. I...I wouldn't mind dying if this thing made me a mom. I really wanted to be a mommy. Please make me cum again, "Fuuuck me! Fill me up until I burst! Fuck me raw!"

Two more tentacles approached. One went to my ass. Good. It felt horribly empty. I wanted it to be filled again. The other, to my surprise, went to my head. It poked at my lips. I knew what it wanted. I just didn't know if I could do it. It was so big. I don't think it could fit in my mouth very well. That didn't mean I wouldn't try. I opened my mouth as wide as I could as it lined itself up.

As one, they thrusted into me. My pussy and ass stretched as they pushed themselves in. The one at my mouth knocked out my front teeth. Pleasure spiked up from the top of my jaw. I didn't mind that I just swallowed my teeth. I felt too good to care about eating. Except for it's cum. Ooo, I would love to taste this thing's cum. I felt the corners of my mouth tear. It didn't hurt. In fact, it felt good. I heard my jaw break. That felt good too.

And then they started to pump. Oh Celestia have mercy, it felt so good! I moaned around the tentacle in my mouth, my eyes rolling up. It hit the back of my throat repeatedly, giving me more pleasure. I was quickly reaching another orgasm. The trigger for it was when the tentacle in my pussy hit my cervix again. I jerked and shuddered, arms and legs twitching. More. It went even faster. Oh Maker, I'm gonna cum again. I didn't think I could cum this much. I didn't mind.

All of my holes were filled. All of my holes were being pleased. All of my holes were ready to be bred. I screamed around the tentacle pounding my throat as I came again. It tried to force itself even deeper, but failed. I guess my throat was too tight. Such a shame.

As if reading my thoughts, the one in my wet pussy and slobbering mouth left. It left me feeling so empty. I wondered what they were doing as they grabbed all four of my limbs. The one around my torso left. The one in my butt, though, pushed even further. I looked down as I felt it snake its way up my intestines, stretching them which in turn felt great.

My eyes widened. I could see them. I could see my guts! The tentacle pushed them up against my skin. This was so hot. I saw it snake its way through my colon and into my small intestine, stretching them to the limit. It felt great. I saw it push even further. Oh Maker, don't let this end. I'm so close. I felt it prod the back entrance of my stomach. It pushed forward, entering that organ. I came, jerking in my binds.

And it still moved forward. It was going to go all the way through me, wasn't it? That would be amazing! I felt it travel up my neck, cutting off my air supply. I knew the nice monster wouldn't let me die before giving birth to its children, so I wasn't afraid. It entered the back of my mouth and pushed past my lips. I could see it. I could see it had blood on it. My blood. I didn't care. All I wanted was my cunt to be pleased again. It granted my wish and released one of my arms. I immediately put it down between my legs, rubbing my clitoris.

Then it started to move back and forth. Oh. Celestia. YES! My whole body was being pleased! I loved the way it rubbed my walls. It stretched me so much and it felt so good. The tip of the tentacle curled down. It booped my nose! I wanted to marry this thing. I tried to imagined the wedding but I was slowly loosing consciousness from lack of air.

The monster realized this and pulled back enough to let me breathe again. See? I knew it wouldn't let me die. Slowly, ever so slowly, it retreated from my ass. Oh Maker, it felt so good. I'm gonna...OH~! I came just as it left my ass. I was left gasping for air by the time my orgasm ended. Movement caught my eye and I looked to see two new tentacles. They weren't as big as the previous ones. Darn. It wasn't going to feel as nice. They wasted no time entering me, the one in my cunt quickly going past my cervix. That still felt good. It tickled the inside of my womb. The one in my ass went so deep inside me! I writhed in pleasure, awaiting for more pumping.

It never came. Why? I looked around, confused. Why didn't it fuck me? That's when I saw them. Bumps were traveling down the tentacles. Were those...? Yes, they were! It was time! I was going to be a mommy! "Yes! Breed me! Fill me up! Make me pregnant! I want your babies in me! I want to be a mommy so bad!"

The eggs traveling down to my ass stopped. The ones going in my vagina didn't. I moaned in bliss as I felt my first child enter me. Then the second and third. They traveled up my vagina, reaching my cervix. The stretched it wide open, making me moan.

My first baby dropped into my womb. I felt it roll around before settling. The second came in, rubbing against the first one. I couldn't wait to feel them hatch as the third one arrived, "Oh Celestia, yes! Fill me up more! MORE!"

The fourth and fifth one was pushed into my womb. My womb walls started to stretch. It felt so good. I looked down to see my belly start to grow. Oh yes! I ran my free hand over my tummy. I could feel them. I could feel the shifting bumps. I felt how they shifted as the seventh and eighth eggs arrived. This was way better than having a foal! I don't even know why ponies even have foals when they could have this done to them.

Number eleven arrived, "More! Breed me more!" The stream of eggs sped up. I lost count after somewhere around twenty. My Belly grew and grew. This was so hot. And it felt amazing to be filled with eggs. My belly grew so large that I looked pregnant. I was pregnant. I came after realizing that. My walls clenched down on the tentacles and eggs. This caused the eggs inside me to shift, giving me so much pleasure. A minute passed before the final egg was shoved into my crowded womb. The tentacle withdrew. I felt something press against my plot hole.

It was my ass's turn now. I grinned widely, "Yes! Yes! Fill me more!"

I felt a steady stream of my children enter my ass. I clenched down. I wanted to feel them power through. They did. Ohhh~. They traveled so deep inside me. Eventually, after what felt like hours, I felt the first egg being pushed out of the tentacle. My walls hugged it tightly. I had to keep it warm and comfortable. I tried to count them again. They just kept coming. And I came with it. I think I almost reached thirty before I spasmed. My belly wobbled as I shook.

It slowly moved back as the monster continued to lay its children in me. Our children. I rubbed my belly, moaning. So. Full. I prayed it would never end. Unfortunately, it eventually did. My entire ass was absolutely stuffed. It withdrew from my ring. I felt something plop out of my ass and hit the ground with a splat. No! Nonononono!!! One of my babies just died. I let out a wail and started to cry. One of them would never see the light of day.

Feeling something press against my lips ended my misery. Another tentacle. I eagerly opened my mouth. It slid to the back of my throat. Then I saw the eggs. I knew that I probably wouldn't survive them hatching in my stomach. But I would gladly have that happen if it meant birthing the nice monster's young. I wanted to be it's brood mare. Even though I wouldn't be a mommy for long, I was still happy. I had a good life. I didn't mind if I died. Really.

The tentacle slid back until just the tip remained. What was it doing? I felt the first egg plop in my mouth. It was slimy, and had a rubbery taste that I kinda liked. What was I supposed to do with it? Why wasn't it shoving them down into my stomach. Did it...did it want me to swallow it? I think it did.

I rolled the egg to the back of my throat with my tongue. It slid down my gullet with ease, the slime helping it. I desperately wanted to finger myself, but I was too big. I had too many babies inside to do it. I settled with stroking my bulging tummy. It's just so full. And I loved every bit of it. Another tentacle shoved itself in my pussy, solving my problem.

The eggs started to enter my mouth. I eagerly swallowed the second and third ones, loving how they bobbed up and down in my stomach acid. I hope it wasn't too strong for my children. Number four, five, and six arrived. I really should name them. I wanted to, I really did. But I didn't know how many were inside me, just that there were a lot of them. A lot of babies. A lot of my children. I cooed at that thought, swallowing the seventh, eighth, and ninth.

I gulped them down as fast as I could, stroking my bumpy belly all the while. What seemed like hours passed. My stomach was full now, but I still saw eggs coming down. Shove them in me! I don't care if my stomach bursts, I want them all inside!

The tentacle slithered down my throat, reaching the packed entrance of my stomach. It continued to lay eggs in mmy stomach. It started to stretch. I moaned as it pushed more and more eggs into my stomach. I felt something give and felt a couple eggs go out of my stomach and into my intestines. The last one entered my mouth. I shivered as I felt it slowly go down my throat.

Both tentacles withdrew from me. I came as the one in my pussy left me. It laid me on the ground on my back. I gasped for air. I looked down. I couldn't see my legs, I was so big. My breasts were pushed upwards. I gave my stomach a stroke before attempting to stand up. It took me a few tries, but I eventually did it.

I waddled over to one of the cavern wall. My belly shook from side to side. I moaned as I felt the eggs inside me shift. I laid down against the wall. I was going to be a mommy now.

Mommy. That one word brought me so much joy. I sighed dreamily as I stroked my belly. I hope I was warm enough. What if...What if I wasn't? What if they didn't hatch?! That would be awful! I prayed to the Maker and Celestia that they would hatch alright.

An hour later, and I felt something. Were they...were they growing? They were! Oh Celestia, it felt so good! I stretched even more, growing in size. I panted as they doubled in size. I don't think I needed to worry about them not hatching anymore. I think two hours passed, with me being alone with my thoughts. The father stayed perfectly still. I think it was sleeping. It probably was exhausted from making me its brood mare. Suddenly, I felt the eggs shift.

Yes yes yes YES! My babies are waking up! Oh Celestia, I'm so happy. I'm crying, in fact. I put a hand to my shifting belly. I felt them break out of their eggs. I bet they'e adorable looking. I kept my hand on my tummy. I could feel them squirming around in me.

A spike of pleasure originated from my womb. Then another. And another. What were they doing? What ever it was, it felt good. I groaned as I felt them all hatch, writhing inside me. My stomach visibly moved and pulsated. I stroked my stomach. I wonder how they'll get out of me?

I got my answer as one of my babies found my cervix. It didn't squirm through like I thought it would. Instead there was a spike of pleasure, then nothing. I couldn't feel my cervix anymore. I didn't really care as the baby wiggled into my canal. It felt so good. I loved the feeling of something wiggling in my pussy.

It slowly squirmed downward, rubbing my walls all the while. Mmmph~, it feels so good. I felt more spikes of pleasure, both in my womb and my vagina. I didn't know what they were doing, but it felt great! Another one of my child went out of my womb, followed by another. The rest were content to squirm and wiggle in that packed cavity.

The first one was almost to my vulva. I wanted to see it. I wanted to see my baby! Come on out so mommy can see you! I moaned as it exited me with a plop. That was it. I really was a mommy now. I moved my head to the side. I wanted to see it so bad.

And see it I did. There are no words to describe how adorable it was. I need to hold it so bad. I picked up, feeling it squirm in my grasp. More of my babies came out of my womb. More spikes of pleasure. I stroked the baby's writhing form. So cute. I lifted it to my face as the second one plopped out of me. I stared at it lovingly. I planted a kiss on its head before cuddling it with my cheek.

The third one escaped out of my pussy as the first one did some thing that I didn't expect. Pleasure washed across my cheek. It bit me! So that's what they were doing to me. They were biting me! That was so nice of them, giving mommy more pleasure.

I gently sent it down as the fourth entered the world. I felt myself close to an orgasm from all the biting, "Go-mmm-go on now. Go to daddy, mmf."

My babies slithered away to my mate. It was awake now, watching me. I started to pant as more of my children came out. I stroked my belly. There were still a lot in my womb, enough to feel them move about, "Come on out, little guys. Mommy wants to see you all. Mmph~."

More and more came out of my womb and into my vagina. Oh! I'm gonna-ohhhh!!! I clenched down on the ones in my cavern. I was giving my babies a massage. They rewarded my with more bites. Mmmm~. A minute or two passed of me giving birth when the ones in my plot hatched. Yes! More of my babies are waking up! More and more came out of my pussy. It was wonderful. I loved giving birth.

One of them in my plot was different though. It started to eat its way out of me. I knew this because a trail of pleasure went away from my colon and into my muscles and flesh. I gave a giggle. It felt funny. Good, but funny, "That ain't the right way out, little guy. Mmmph, you can do what you want. I don't mind."

The rest went the right way. I panted at the squirming feelings. More of the babies in my womb came out. Uhhn, the first one went out of my plot. I loved it. It bit the insides of my cheeks. I didn't mind because I was too busy rubbing my clitoris; my belly had deflated by a lot. The last of my babies exited my womb. I'll miss that lovely full feeling.

I put my finger at the top of my vaginal entrance. The last one slithered out, my finger rubbing the top of it. I hoped it liked that. The one eating its way out was a speedy thing. In no time it emerged from my lower side, just above my hip. I gently grabbed its head and pulled it out.

I cradled it. They were so beautiful. I bit back my tears of joy, "You're a brave one, aintcha?" I wondered if I could breastfeed it. I brought it to my right breast to find out. It bit my nipple off! It felt good, even though in the back of my mind I knew it shouldn't. Whatever. It thrashed around in my grip. I chuckled at the antics of my child, "You're supposed to drink from it- OH BUCK!"

Three of my babies decided they wanted out at the same time. This was too much, I was already close. I came, dropping the tentacle. It slithered away. It felt so good that I squirted. I only did that once before. Thank you, little guys, for giving me the best orgasm ever. My clenching walls pushed them out. I think those were the last ones. I laid there, gasping for air. I wonder how long it'll take for the ones in my stomach to hatch?

Now, as it turned out. I started to finger myself as my stomach shifted with movement. I gave a moan, loving that feeling so much. I felt one try to go up my esophagus, but the little guy failed. They moved to plan B. They started to eat their way out. I liked plan B. It felt good.

That voice in the back of my mind came back. It said I was going to die any minute now, and I should be scared. I wasn't. My only regret was that I wasn't going to be able to give birth again. Oh well. At least I'll die a mommy.

They squirmed their way out of my chewed up stomach and into the surrounding cavity, "Come on out, fellas. Ohhh~."

My torso moved visibly. I put a hand on my chest. I could feel them moving under my skin. They explored my cavity for a few more heavenly moments before they all decided they wanted out now. I felt one bite my lung. I coughed. It was getting harder to breathe as it went inside my lung. It stayed put. I didn't mind this development since my baby was happy there. I stared down at my belly. It bulged in a few places before my children came bursting out of me. I moaned. It felt so good, "Good boys. Come out of mamma. Ohhh~."

I grabbed one and began to lovingly stroke it. I cradled it in my arms, happy. It bit at my arms as I held it for a few moments. Then I brought it to my face. It was mine. They were all mine. They were all my babies. And I loved each and every one of them, more than anything else, "You are all so adorable. Mamma loves you all. Mamma loves you so much," I kissed it and put it in my lap, stroking it. I was so close again. I felt one wrap around my heart. It probably loved the sound

Alternate Ending 2

Author's Note

There, a happy ending.

Alternate Ending 2

"Help."

Applejack froze, ears twitching. She thought she heard something. She stood still before shrugging and continued walking.

"Help me."

Applejack stopped. Now she knew she heard something. The voice came from the forest, "Hello? Anypony there?"

"Please help," It was a filly's voice. Applejack immediately thought of Applebloom. She couldn't make out what they were saying, though.

She walked a few feet into the forest, "Whut did ya say?"

"Help me, please."

Applejack's blood ran cold. She heard the words this time. Again she thought of Applebloom, "Hang on! Ah'ma commin'!"

A single pale red tentacle sprouted out of the ground. The end was ball shaped. It pointed at Applejack to reveal it had a mouth, with sharp teeth, "Help me, please!"

Applejack had one thing to say to that, "Nope!"

Suddenly a beam of golden light passed through the monster. Applejack looked up and saw Celestia flying overhead. She was wearing a spandex uniform with a big 'C' on the front. Applejack smiled as she stood up, "Gee willikers, Celestia! Thank's fer savin' meh! Ah'm sure Ah wouldda died horrifically without ya!"

"It was no problem, citizen," boomed Celestia, her fists on her hips, "I am glad to be able to save you. Alicorn powers, activate!"

And with that Celestia flew off, leaving Applejack alone with the dead monster.