The National Limited

by LionelCorp315

Chapter 3

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Luna's moon was shinging on the National Limited as rushes along the desert. Rolling cactusses and sage brush dotted the landscape. In side mostly everypony is asleep at this time of night. It was a beautiful night. Inside Twilight was having a strange dream...

She was in Downtown Manehattan. She then sees an explosion and a Lunar Gaurd Stalion, but he looked diffrent, he was taller, like Celestia and luna tall, he had batwings and a horn, and his mane and tail was spikey and was like lunas hair when she was...

"Nightmare Moon" Twilight relised.

She then saw her self and her friends on the other end of the street. They were about to power up, like when they Defeated triek. Streak of light shot at dream Twilight. "TWILIGHT!" They called. The others ran to her disabling their powers. The power mad stallion continued to wreak havoc on the city.

"That's it!" Rainbow Dash stated. She dashed forward to punch him only to be blasted back into a store window.

"We need to get out of here!" Applejack commented. "Grab Twilight and Rainbow Dash and go!" With that the four grabbed Dream Twilight and Rainbow Dash and ran. The sceance changed to Manehattan in ruins. She saw a symbal. She clouldn't tell what it said, in fact she couldn't recenize it at all? "What is this?" she asked herself.

Twilight suddenly woke up. She looked at spike who was thankfuly still sleeping. She smiled then turned towards the window.

'What could this mean?' Twilight thought. 'What is going to happen to us? Could my dream be a vision. A message?' Her train of thought was cut short by a sound coming from the roof. She looked down out the window. A shadow of two ponies on the roof ot what she thought were ponies. "Looks like I win" Twilight told her self and went for her saddle bag.


A window opened on the train and two changlings were climbing out trying to hold on to keep them from flying off. They started to walk down the roof of the train.

"Hey you!"

The two changelings turn around and saw Thorax. "Well why it isn't Thorax the king of the Changeling hive." One of them spoke. "How nice of you to join us."

"I won't let you hurt them" Thorax stated. "You better stop now or you will regret it"

"No! It is you who will regret it" the changelings charged at him, their horns pionted at him ready to strike. Thorax quikly dodged the attack the fired a spell at the changlings. They quickly dodge it and fired back it was a fire fight. Then Thorax fired a huge blast. One dodged it the other not so much, he flew right of the train with a giant hole in his chest and tumbled to the ground. "You got lucky with him. But me, I won't be that easy" with that said he formed two blades on his forelegs and began to charge again. Thorax decided to use his horn. It was a sword fight. Slashing at eachother, countering the opponent's attacks.

Thorax was having trouble dodge the changeling's attacks, he missed a step and got cut on his sholder. "AAAH!" He grunted in pain holding his sholder.

"Puh. You were a great opponent. I thought this would last a little longer."

"Who are you?" Thorax asked.

"Where are my manners? I might as well tell you since I am going to kill you. My name is Alastair. And now you know." Alastair held his blade up to Thorax's neck. "Any last words?"

"I hope die!" Thorax said darkly.

Alastair laughed. "You are funny! You should of been a comedian. Say good bye Thorax!"

"Leave him alone!"

He turned around only to be blasted by a short beam of energy. Alastair flew backwards and landed it perfectly on his hoofs. A mare in eye mask and was wearing somthing to cover her cutiemark. "What is this?" He growled angerly.

"A suprize attack!" She answered. And then shot another blast at Alastair sent him flying back again, only this time he didn't landed it. "I'm warning you. Stay away from him." The mare commanded. He then back up on his hoofs.

"THIS ISN'T OVER!" He shouted and galoped to the baggage car. The mare then run towards Thorax. "Are you aright?" She asked him. But he didn't respond. Thorax was blacking out. There was something fimiliar about this mare.

"Thorax! Anwser me!" She was starting to fade. Thorax trying to stay awake, so he can thank her. He knew th at he was loosing consious.

"THORAX! Are you alri....?"

Then everything went black.

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