Countdown

by tailsopony

16, . . . . . 7?

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Frieden thought about the broken mare on the floor and the bleeding mare in front of him. Sternbrand was young, she was used to following orders and wouldn’t need too much enforcement. As Sternbrand began to lick up her thick vomit, she choked loudly. Wald-Eule wasn’t encouraging her anymore, likely sick herself from the display. Frieden wasn’t worried about Wald-Eule or Sternbrand. In fact, the only pony in the room that gave him an ounce of concern was Donnerkopf.

The cold mare was obedient and apparently dutiful, but out of his slaves she seemed to rival Haftling in power. She had also made it clear that she had no love for Frieden. Looking closely, he analyzed the rune on her back that was slowly filling with power. If he left it, it would kill her, infusing her blood with thick black crystals that would painfully shred her from the inside.

He chuckled as he realized the Rune was much more energized than it should be. “Madam Donnerkopf… I can’t help but ask, did you attempt to escape?”

Donnerkopf frowned slightly, then answered slowly. “Master…” She closed her eyes and then cast them down. “I attempted to locate and dispel your rune.”

He frowned. This was a major transgression. But also an opportunity. “Tell me, Donnerkopf. Why didn’t you succeed?”

Wald-Eule stood up and stepped back from them, while Sternbrand paused her licking to watch.

Donnerkopf continued to speak slowly and carefully. “Because you are too powerful, Master.”

Frieden glared at her for a moment, and then slammed her violently into the wall with his telekinesis. Her head bounced off the stone, and she slumped to the floor in a daze as blood leaked from her nose. Slowly he walked towards her in a smoldering rage.

“Do not patronize me, Donnerkopf. You are no mere hedge-mage who memorizes simple spells. You live and breathe magic, I can feel it in your body, the way your skin tingles when I touch you.” He reached down with one hoof, and picked the mare up by her neck, lifting her front feet off the ground.

Blood ran down her body as she loudly wheezed in pain.

Frieden held her face to his and looked her in the eyes. “And I am no mere earth pony. Explain how and why you failed, Donnerkopf. Do not attempt to placate me, only obey.” He dropped her to the ground, allowing her to cough before menacingly adding, “I will not ask twice.”

Donnerkopf spat some blood out, then lowered her head. “I was unable to find it, Master. I can feel it tingling on my back, and when I tried to probe it, it only tingled more. I tried to dispel my back, Master, but my magic simply disappeared. It began to burn, and I realized that I made a mistake.”

He glared at her, deciding if he should kill her or not. The information all but confirmed his guess that Unicorns were incapable of sensing his runes. The widow stared hatefully at the floor, and Frieden decided that he wanted to break her. Once she was broken, maybe then he’d kill her.

“Donnerkopf, I will punish you later. For now, know this. You came very close to painfully killing yourself. My Runes do not work like you think they should. Do not probe them, question them, or attempt to dispel them unless I give you very specific instructions.”

Donnerkopf kept her head down. “Yes, Master.”

Frieden smiled and stroked her cheek in mock affection. Perhaps a demonstration was in order. “I believe you know Madam Elfenbeinturm, Yes?”

Her voice was quiet. “Yes, Master.”

Frieden peeled Elfenbeinturm off the wall, and unceremoniously dumped her next to them. Then he forced her to lay on her stomach, with her arms and legs spread wide. He walked to her as she struggled helplessly in his telekinetic grasp. Carefully, he draped his hoof over her back and began to carve with it. Donnerkopf and Wald-Eule watched him closely.

“This is the same rune that you and Madam Wald-Eule currently wear. Its physical location is exactly where my hoof touched. Can you sense it?”

Donnerkopf squinted, and cast a quick probing spell. She frowned. “No, master.”

“I assure you, it is there. Now, let’s play another game. The rune will eventually activate on its own, but perhaps you can stop it?” Frieden chuckled, walking back to Wald-Eule and Sternbrand. “I will not remove your rune as long as Madam Elfenbeinturm’s rune is active. Since you have so much of a head start, it will quite likely kill you first.” He huffed in mock exasperation. “Then I shall have to train her to be an obedient slave to replace you.”

Donnerkopf looked at Elfenbeinturm with a cold stare.

“However, I’m giving you permission… no… encouragement!” He smiled enthusiastically. “To cast any number of spells at her in an attempt to dispel my rune. Feel free to use any spell you like, although I’m going to ask that you not outright kill her.” He frowned. “That will not deactivate the rune, you see.’

Elfenbeinturm struggled again, and attempted to shout something through her tightly clamped snout. Frieden taunted her. “Do be a good sport, corpse. My slave is going to learn a lesson.”

Sternbrand coughed, and Frieden glared at her meaningfully. In a panic, she lowered her head back to the floor and continued licking up her bile and his cum. He motioned for Wald-Eule to come closer, where he inspected her rune. Hers was exactly as far along as it should be, so he dispelled it and absorbed the energy it had collected.

Donnerkopf stepped meaningfully towards Elfenbeinturm and lowered her horn towards the mare.

Frieden hummed in amusement, sliding over to Sternbrand. He decided that he’d fuck her while she licked up her vomit and he watched Donnerkopf experiment.

Donnerkopf was starting with probing spells, and quite powerful ones. Frieden chuckled at her effort. She was enthusiastic, probably figuring this as her only chance to really explore his magic. He was curious as well, and didn’t look down as he began to fumble with Sternbrand’s tail.

Sternbrand inched forward, away from him as his hooves came into contact with her soft undersides. Frieden absentmindedly slid her towards him with his magic. She wouldn’t be escaping, and he had a show to watch. Once Sternbrand realized the futility in her efforts to get away, she focused on her disgusting task instead.

Frieden had a complacent mare, and he wasn’t going to waste her. Casually he forced himself into her. He didn’t even know how many times he’d had sex today, so he didn’t pay much attention to the act. She was just there to warm his cock and be filled with his seed when he was done with her.

Absent minded, Frieden began to pump into the sobbing mare as Donnerkopf threw heavier spells at Elfenbeinturm. She was attempting to dispel it now, using any number of spells designed to dissipate energy. As Frieden watched, he realized why she would never succeed.

His runes were holes, empty vessels waiting to be filled with magic. All the dispels he saw her cast introduced more magic to them. It was intentionally unstable magic, but the holes would be filled by it nonetheless. That was also why her detection spells weren’t working. Every bit of magic thrown at it was being sucked up, filling the rune faster and faster.

Frieden lowered himself over Sternbrand as he began to kiss the back of her neck. She wasn’t as energetic as Edelstein or as tight as Haftling, but she was firm and satisfying. He groaned, pressing into her and pressing her face into her own milky vomit.

Donnerkopf was standing, watching curiously as the runes on Elfenbeinturm glowed, searing into her flesh. Frieden sighed in satisfaction as the blue council member screamed painfully into her forcefully closed snout. That was a little security feature he’d added—a gentle reminder to run home before the rune activated. It looked much more painful than he’d imagined, but that fact only made his loins tingle warmly.

Frieden was getting close, the mares tight walls were edging him along to orgasm for the umpteenth time today. He chuckled at the thought that this might be Sternbrand’s first sexual experience, but for him he couldn’t even count the amount of times he’d cum in, or on, a mare today. He laughed victoriously as he bit down, causing the defiled little pony to scream in pain.

She would remember this forever, but Frieden would probably forget the act by the end of the day.

Lapping at her blood, he held her tightly as Elfenbeinturm’s skin began to rupture. Little crystal spikes jutted out of her, causing her to bleed from all over her body. He let go of his hold over the dying mare, but she didn’t move. She lay still as black crystals jutted out of her body at odd angles, and her mouth hung open in a quiet, scream. Frieden saw her eyes. She was still alive, clearly in immense pain.

Frieden twitched in Sternbrand’s cunt, lapping at the blood that swelled out of her neck. He erupted inside of her, filling the mare with his cum as he spurt inside of her. Sternbrand shuddered, feeling his hot seed coat her insides and spray into her womb. She didn’t fight him, only spreading herself wider to ease his passage.

Elfenbeinturm’s eyes closed, and then a black crystal jut from her forehead, messily displacing her horn. Frieden doubted the mare would ever open her eyes again.

Slowly, he lifted from Sternbrand’s body as he caught his breath. The little mare kept her tail up when he pulled out, letting his cum leak from her twitching pussy. She kept her head down, sniffling in shame and pain. Frieden ignored her, just happy to have his release.

He walked to Donnerkopf, his semi erect dick swaying messily underneath him and leaving a trail of cum on the floor as he approached her. “Aren’t you glad you gave up on your own when it began to burn?”

She stared coldly at the dead, disfigured mare. “Yes, Master.”

Frieden smirked. “Will you ever play with my runes without my permission again, Donnerkopf?”

“No, Master. They eat magic like some sort of ever hungry monster.” The rune on her back began to glow, warming up as her time started to run out. Donnerkopf waited, staring stoically at Frieden.

“Well, Donnerkopf. It looks like your time is almost up.” Frieden mocked being sad.

“It appears so, Master.” She lowered her head as the rune began to burn her flesh. She began to cry softly. “I…. thought I would be stronger. It hurts.”

Frieden leaned in and softly kissed her tightly pressed lips. “If you want to live, show me passion.”

She glared at him, the anger burning behind her eyes.

He whispered just for her. “Kiss me like you love me.” He licked his lips. “Then be my slut, devoted and attentive. Cry for me, scream for me, beg for me, and moan for me. If you want to live, you’ll show me your passion for life. Treat me like your lover.” He put a hoof to her cheek, and kept whispering. “Or die a cold stoic bitch.”

Donnerkopf stared at him as the rune began to flare brightly on her back. He could smell her fur begin to burn. The fire in her eyes ignited, and she cried, leaning to meet his lips. They kissed, and she melted into him. Her tears dripped to the floor silently as she wrapped her hooves around him, pulling him tightly and exploring his mouth with her tongue.

Frieden pulled her close as well, wrapping his hooves around her back and dispelling the rune. Instead of absorbing it like he had been, he transferred the energy back into Donnerkopf with a small rune he quickly carved above her tail.

Frieden internally chuckled as he drank her in, the rush from the rune would be immediate from the dispelled magic, but the rune itself would stay longer. It would charge from her inherent power, weakening her spells but strengthening her libido. Madam Donnerkopf was going to be very well trained.

She moaned as the rune activated, pressing her hot flesh into him, and pulling out of the kiss. He watched her eyes as they pulled away. She was flushed with arousal and desire, but they still burned with anger. He was going to have a lot of fun with her.

Without stopping, she leaned forward and began to nibble passionately down his neck. “Thank you, Master.”

Frieden tilted her sideways, laying her down on her back as he climbed over her body. He didn’t say anything as he forced her down, easing into another deep kiss and positioning his cock to fuck her.

He could feel the heat from her pussy as he dipped his hips forward and touched her with his tip. Donnerkopf moaned loudly, putting her hooves around his waist. She was passionate, moaning and grunting as he slid slowly into her body. Her once stoic face was twisted in ecstasy as a wild energy overcame her.

The previously stone cold Donnerkopf was writhing, her hot pussy leaking and dripping down her exposed and flexing asshole. Frieden could fit all the way in easily, the large mare was built to take his cock. He felt her squeezing, quivering and flexing around his shaft as he invaded her body.

He thrust hard, letting his balls slap loudly against her asshole and causing her to moan. “Did you fuck your husband like this, Madam Donnerkopf?”

She began to cry, but kept her eager thrusting. “Yes, Master. I made love with Gefrorener like this.”

Frieden lowered into another kiss, gently biting her lips as he buried himself into her again. He felt her shake underneath his assault, and she wrapped her strong hooves around him to squeeze. Frieden felt her cunt shake, and her head whipped back as the magic from his rune overcame her for the first time of many.

Donnerkopf’s face was frozen for a moment, her eyes wide and her mouth hanging open. She squeezed him tightly with her arms as she came, while her legs strained to spread as wide as they could. From her spread, convulsing cunt, a messy splurt of thick slime coated Frieden’s balls, followed by a wet slow flow of cunt juice.

Frieden laughed at the mare, but kept fucking her mercilessly. He wasn’t planning on stopping for a while. The fresh coat of lube on his cock made the fucking slicker and faster, letting him pound her hard while she continued to shudder. He toyed with her, throwing more energy into her rune before she could recover.

Donnerkopf moaned and then sucked in a breath to hold as she shook uncontrollably. He felt her cunt desperately milking his cock as her legs both began to twitch, strained as far as they could go. Her arms fell limply to her side, and she arched her back, causing her to press hard into Frieden.

Frieden reached to the back of her head, and forced it closer. He kissed her again, tasting her hot and slobbering mouth. Donnerkopf hungrily met his kiss, and moaned throatily into his mouth as he used her.

It was amazing. Frieden loved the way she quivered and shuddered, how she held him tight and then lost herself in passion. And through it still, she had that fire, that burning hate for him. He locked eyes with her and roughly grabbed her hair. She was tearful, but subservient. He wanted to watch her submission.

Cruelly and coldly, he commanded her as he forced a torrent of magic into her rune. “Cum for me, slave.”

She nodded, but was unable to finish her reply as a scream overtook her. “Yes Mast...Aaah!”

Donnerkopf came, crying out his name as he held her eyes locked with his. “Master… Master… Master!”

He watched her eyes and saw her flames flicker. Her pupils dilated as she screamed, and her body locked up tight. She sucked in quick breaths, followed by a hiss as she said his name. For a moment, Donnerkopf submitted to him. For a moment, he was her lover, her master, and her life.

Frieden possessively licked her cheek, dragging his fangs across her skin. She quivered, and then spurt over his dick again as her body just gave out. Her eyes rolled up, into her head, and she went limp. Frieden laughed loudly at the sight of the once strong mare.

She lay underneath him, completely unconscious as he pulled out of her with a loud and wet slurp. He soaked in the sight; her head resting on the floor with her mouth open and her tongue lolling out. Frieden trailed his hoof down to her gaping pussy, finding it slowly gulping on a cock that wasn’t there and leaking a constant stream of ooze.

He laughed, and turned to look at the room. Madam Wald-Eule was watching with a flushed face, standing next to an embarrassed Sternbrand. The young mare had finished her task, and looked both sick and ashamed. Haftling and Edelstein were faithfully laying next to the throne, both watching him curiously. Edelstein seemed intrigued. Fernost just watched with a pained look on his face, laying dejectedly in the back of the room. Of course, Morgentau hadn’t moved. Frieden continued to laugh triumphantly, and turned back to his prize.

He still hadn’t cum. Slapping Donnerkopf's face, he woke her up. She lay on her back, watching him as she caught her breath. “How did that compare to making love to your dead husband, Donnerkopf?”

Anger flashed back into her eyes as the fire re-lit. She stared at him hatefully as she answered. “You were better, Master.”

Frieden began to stroke his cock and walked over to her, pointing it down at her face. “That’s right, Donnerkopf. And you won’t ever make love again. From now on, you fuck. And you fuck when I tell you to.” He forced some magic into her rune, causing her to blush and glare at him. “Do you understand, Slave?”

She shook as she answered. “Yes, Master.” Frieden didn’t care if it was in rage, or in pleasure, or despair. It didn’t matter. She was his now.

He forced her face in front of his cock with his magic, aiming it at her left eye. “Keep your eyes open, slave. Don’t blink”

She answered swiftly. “Yes, Master.”

Frieden rubbed his cock, milking it as he pointed it at her. It was taking too long, so he pulled from Fernost, causing the stallion to groan painfully from his corner. The rush of erotic energy coursed through him, and he grunted in satisfaction.

Thick, sticky cum squirted forcefully into Donnerkopf’s eye, causing her to shake in pain as he sighed in pleasure. He aimed another spurt at her other eye, grunting euphorically. His cock twitched, satisfied with the release as he began to relax.

Frieden stepped back to survey the damage, only to have something distract him.

A powerful spell began to rip him apart, and the room suddenly flashed white.

Startled, Frieden jumped to the side as energy began to dissolve his tail. He landed, tumbling quickly to his feet as he quickly created a series of protective runes around him with his horn. Focusing his senses, he felt another in the room through the blinding white light.

Frieden called on Sombra’s power, summoning darkness to the room to fight the light. Time slowed to a crawl. He fought the light back quickly, pressing it down to just behind where he’d stood. He was surprised to find an old, gray stallion almost holding his own. Frieden roared, and used his telekinesis to snap the stallions horn, forgetting that he could carve for a second.

The stallion was flung to the side like a rag doll, his horn leaving a spiraling bloody trail through the air as Frieden watched it happen in slow motion. He quickly scanned the room and found only his slaves, and time returned to normal.

Angrily, he walked to the old stallion, who looked up at him in disgust. “Can’t believe I missed.” The unicorn shook his head in frustration.

“Who are you?” Frieden didn’t have any humor for the crippled stallion, his blood was pumping furiously. “I will kill you.”

The stallion glared back at him, unafraid. “Yes. But not yet.”

Frieden had enough. He crushed the stallion with his telekinesis, using all the force he could muster. There was a loud crack as his magic missed and crushed the air. The stallion was gone.

Frieden ran through what just happened. The stallion had attacked him from behind, blinding the room with light as part of his attack. Frieden had acted reflexively, Sombra’s power allowing him to beat back the magic and slow down time. His tail had been burned, the stallion had almost killed him. It had been old, and gray, with an hourglass for a cutie mark. That didn’t tell Frieden much, hourglasses were common.

He whipped around at his stunned slaves who had seen it all happen in real time. He yelled at them angrily. “Who was that?”

Haftling stood up and frowned. “Master, That was Baron Zeitreisender.” She continued to frown. “He is a time mage.”


Author's Note

Huh. It just keeps going. I like time travel. The world needs more time travelers. Also, yes, I used your request for the wrong thing, cockney thug. But I fucked it up by running out of space in the chapter and having to include an actual threat. Whoops. Probably not a hot chapter, but at least informative. Yay for experiments!

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