The Apple Of My Eye

You were nervous this was your first day after all.Working at Sweet Apple Acers, as you are on your way to work the path was quite,peacful this relaxed you a bit."Wow" you say to your self you were exsited about your new job after all because you would get a chance to work with the mare you have had a crush on for so long of a time.As you are near the apple farm you smell the sweet smell of apples the closer you get the better they smell, as you are at the farm you notice a tan mare with her blonde hair and her cowboy hat she was amazing kicking the apple tree's.You soon walk over to her you simply say "Hi" she looks at you for a moment and simply says "You the new pony" you reply with a simply "Yes". At this point you were nervouis "what if she does not like you" what if you blew it" you think in your head you are suprised to see she smiles at you and says "Why dont we get to know each other?" she exsplains she is applejack and you are "remember at this point you are your own person so just tell her your name" so you tell her you name but she calls you "lucky" because she noticed the clover on your flank you think to your self "i am really lucky thats kinda how i got this cutie mark" so just as you are ready to say something a low deep voice says "You the newpony around here?" You nearly jumped when you heard that voice it was low but loud you quicky turn around to see a big red pony, he looked very strong and smiled at you.You replyed to his question and said "Yes i am" he says "eeyup", time to get you to work,applejack agreed.But applejack spoke up and said "This is Big Mac" you noded they laughed Big Mac didnt mean to scare you said applejack smiling,you were getting relaxed a voice spook up and said "You ready to work" you replyed "Yes" to the voice.Applejack said to follow her you did but it was hard not to stare at her flank "after all you were in love with her" she notices and you blush but suprisingly she smiles and contiues walking along the path you follow, you finally make it to apart of the place where there are many freash apples Applejack said "We start here" there was a jug of water and some a large spoon to drink out of diped in it she said "you ready to buck Lucky?" you reply "Yes" Ok she says but we need a plan.She exsplains to you aka "Lucky" to take the left and she take's the right but the ways she exsplained it made it where you both would meet in the middle of the place soon you were half way done bucking and you notice that but it was tme for a break you yell Applejack! no reply "so you run around looking for her and you soon find her she looked hot and tired you said to your self "She looks amazing!" You say "should we take a break"she replys "That would be mighty fine"

As you take a break and eat some lunch you notice its late and applejack said "We worked a bit to late today" you reply "I better get going" but we can fix a spot for in the guest room since its so late she says nervously you think to your self "Why is she nervous now?" You reply with an Ok and follow her in,you notice its very nice here and she shows you to your room and you say in your head as you walk up with to the guest room "Thats the end for today",as soon as you make it up to the guest room it was basic with a bed and some other basic stuff nothing much but you were happy to have "her" of all people your "Big crush" to let you stay the night so you were happy and wen in the room and apple jack wished you a good night and you fell asleep after a while.

P.s This is my first story and its not over yet so i would like if you gave me some tips please! i hope you enjoyed and point out all errors and please give me a break this is my first story but its not finished yet :D.