Sunset Shimmer's perspective - Friday

I feel good about today, I get to know who raided my room last night, and I also get to find out who hacked my laptop, and what they got from it. I hope. I'm still just lying here, same sofa, same condition, but at about seven in the morning this time. Might as well check my phone and see if Flash messaged me since last night.

Grabbing my phone, I see the screen light up at the same time, it's another message from Info, well, at least, that's the most recent one. Quickly unlocking my phone I jump into the text conversation between me and Flash, 'I got their IP, we can trace them, also, I managed to stop the file transfer, so they didn't get any images, and I have the files they tried to take.'

Brilliant, right, next, Info's message, 'what's this about someone's IP, did someone attempt to hack you?' right, so, this guy is going through my phone too, alright, well, that's annoying, but sure, maybe he can help.

'Info, you're going through my phone messages I assume, and yeah, someone hacked me. I'm guessing that it was you?' I replied, putting my phone back down and getting up, quickly pulling my shirt on from yesterday, which had mostly dried out after the crazy weather.

I reached for my phone again, and the message on it simply read 'no,' alright, so, it wasn't Info, well, I'll figure this out later, for now, I've got to get dressed.

"Sunset, it's almost time to leave for school," Luna called, knocking on the door, "quickly."

"I'm almost ready, hang on, I'll be out in a minute," I replied, quickly throwing on my leggings and skirt, pulling my shirt over my head and my leather jacket that I wore most everywhere, I was ready in seconds, or at least, as ready as I could be. "Right, I'm ready," I called out, leaving the room I had slept in, phone in hand.

I quickly walked through to the front door of the building and saw Luna standing by the front door. "Good morning Sunset, come on, let's go, we'll get breakfast on the way," the principal said, quickly spinning around and opening the door, her hair blowing against her, looking out on the frozen-over driveway. "Alright, well, minor delay, quickly put your shoes on, I'll go get the car started," she said, pulling the door shut behind her, this is confusing, it was quite warm just yesterday, although it did start raining very heavily later, it wasn't actually that cold, even the hailstones were fairly warm, so snow today is a bit surprising, and this is from someone who can read minds. I pulled my shoes on quickly, a fairly cheap pair, the ones I wore to school on a daily basis, simple white and orange trainers. "Right, Sunset, whenever you're ready," Luna said, poking her head around the door.

I thought for a short while, before deciding I was going to go get my bag, for fear that someone might risk coming and stealing it from the principal's house. "Alright, give me a few seconds, just getting my bag," I replied, quickly running through the giant house, back to the room where I slept, and grabbing my bag, before leaving. "Right, let's go," I said jumping into the car.

"Do you actually have anything you need to study?" the older principal asked, looking at my bag and realising it looked suspiciously light, which she was right to assume, as I only really had a few pictures and my book to communicate with Princess Twilight in it.

"I leave all of my study materials in my room at school, besides, I'm working on the analysis stage of a program just now, so there's not really much I need more than the documents on my pen drive, which I leave in my locker."

"Alright then, if you say so," she said, before putting her foot down as hard as she could, even though she was a school principal and should probably be more careful, she was so reckless and always went at top speed everywhere it seemed. In fact, it felt even faster than yesterday as we arrived at out breakfast stop in no time, "right, what do you want?" she asked me.

"Just get me a sausage roll and coffee please."

"Right, 2 minutes," she said, getting out the car and running into the boring old food place, it did make some nice food, but it looked abandoned from he outside.

Having quickly eaten breakfast and started driving again, we arrived at the school. "Right, come on then, let's go," she said, parking the car at the side of the car park before tossing the door open and jumping out, "Oh, right, Celestia's back today, so I'll explain the situation to her, and she'll probably visit you in the morning, so be ready for that."

"Alright, thanks for the heads up, I'll probably be working when she comes around, oh, and if you see Flash Sentry today, mind sending him my way please?" I asked, remembering what he had said, and starting to wonder what sorts of files he had recovered. Well, anyway, time to get moving, I don't have any classes to be in today, but I also have quite a lot of work to do, and not too long left to do it, considering I've put it off a couple of weeks.

I've been here for an hour now, I've not got much done, and I've sort of just started working on this program, which I really should have been much further through planning by this point, but I've got a text, from Info, so maybe he's got something interesting to tell me. 'Hey, just thought I should mention that I wasn't the one who entered your room, so I have no idea what happened to it, however, I did recently sell a bump key to my other client, so I assume that was their use for it. So, what happened?' it read.

'It got trashed, so now I need to pay to have it repaired, top to bottom, only a few things survived. Surprisingly, my more important things did.' I replied, before putting my phone down and hearing a knock at the door. I quickly got up and hopped over to it, it was most likely either Flash or Celestia, so I might as well answer them quickly, as they're both going to be really helpful to me right now.

"Hey Sunset," I heard, it was Flash's voice, "I have the files here, and some good news."

"Come on in," I said, opening the door, "What's the good news Flash?" I asked, in quite a rush to find out what good could possibly come from this.

"Well, basically I managed to get the other persons IP address, and I told that to Mr Greg this morning so that household shouldn't be able to connect to your building at all anymore," he said smiling, "also, here are the files they were trying to receive, however, they did get one, I don't know which one, considering what you told me what they had taken images of, so I decided best not to open any of them. Also, I wouldn't even plug that in while you're connected to the internet."

"Course, and thanks a lot, Flash, you're the best," I said, hugging him tightly.

He lightly rubbed my hair, "no problem Sunset, just remember I'm here for you, and I always will be," he replied, as I released him he handed me the USB stick with the files on it, "right, here are the files, as I said I haven't been through them, but I did label the one they managed to get, hopefully, it's nothing major," he continued. The bell for class went and Flash turned towards the door, "well, I better be on my way to class, I'll talk to you later, bye."

"Alright, bye Flash," I said, unplugging the internet cable from my PC, quickly plugging the USB in, and rushing through my files to get it open, I only really care about the one file that they got. "Right, let's see," I said to myself, quickly scrolling through the folder of files, which were presumably to be sorted on the other end I quickly opened a random file, and seeing myself with little more than a towel around me, I slammed my face into the table, both pissed they took this and very relieved they never got it. Next, let's figure out which one they got, opening the file labelled 'stolen', it's a simple image file, it doesn't look like it was taken from my webcam at all, as it isn't even of my apartment, and across the top it has written, in white text, 'Hey, I don't know who you are, but you shouldn't be accessing this computer, and trust me, I will trace you back, if you take any files. - Info'. Huh, so apparently, he actually cares to protect me, well, I wonder if he's a man of his word, if he is, he won't be tracing them back.

I quickly pull my phone out to message him, when it buzzes with a text from him, 'So, you're off of the school internet, and Flash's USB was plugged in, I guess that means you saw the file I left them?' I smirked, so he knows, that means he's got a bug in my PC, better find and remove that, he'll probably find a sneakier way to get another one in, but who knows. Right, let's see, behind the PC, nothing plugged in, at the wall, nope, nothing, alright, how does he get into my PC?

I reply to his text quickly asking him exactly that, 'Right, thank you, for protecting me, but how do you know I plugged his USB in?'

'Well, that's simple, he stores it in his locker, and leaves it there over the weekend, it's easy to install some hardware into it without it being noticeable. Heck, I have one on half the students in your schools USBs.'

Right, that makes no sense, how does he even manage to change one of these, but I should remember this, maybe, just maybe, I can use this to help me later. 'Alright then, does that mean you have one on mine?'

'Now what use would it be to me if I just went about telling you these things, I might have one on yours, but maybe I don't. Oh, and by the way, you should really work on that program, just the basic premise taken from the basic plan looks interesting, and maybe I could use it when you finish it.' Oh yeah, I still have Flash's USB plugged in. Hopefully, this guy is still on my side, and not already taking the photos off of it, although, maybe if he modded it he already took them, and could take them while they're unplugged. 'Thanks for the file transfer, I needed a processor. ;)'.

Shit. I quickly pull the USB out of my PC and toss it onto my desk, as far away from my PC as possible. Did he take anything, or was he just messing with me? Right as I begin to have a little freak out about this, I hear a knock on my door, "Sunset, are you in there?" It's Celestia, with her fairly calming voice.

"Yeah hey Celestia," I reply jumping up to open the door. "Luna said you'd be around so I've been expecting you for a while."

"Hey Sunset, I heard you had to stay at our house last night, and might need to stay around again tonight."

"Yep, if that's alright that is, I don't think my room will be fixed by tonight," I said sitting down at my PC again and plugging the internet back in.

"Sure, anything you need, as long as you're not destroying things feel free to stay as long as you need, as long as Luna's alright with it, that is."

"Thanks a lot, but my plan for tomorrow is to refurbish my room as much as I can, assuming I'm able to get into it."

"Alright then, anyway, what's actually happened, I only heard from Luna that you were having problems and had to stay at our house."

I looked around, trying to think of the easiest way to explain this, "basically, there have been rumours about me spreading around, about how I'm a horrible person, and about how I've been destroying other people's projects, and I swear I haven't done any of the things they say, and then just yesterday I went home to my room having been raided, so I came to yours to ask Luna if I could stay over," I replied, starting to tear a tiny bit while I was explaining it to her.

"Alright, do you know anything about, maybe, who spread these rumours? Or any leads we could take to get back to them?" she asked, "maybe anyone you know who could help us find leads?"

"Well, Flash Sentry would be helpful, most likely, and I can probably ask Equestria Twilight to come through on Sunday, and see if she can help me at all, as she would have a non-biased view on the matter, most likely," I said reaching for my bag to get the book that can contact Equestria out.

"Alright, thank you, anything I can do to help?" she asked, presumably realising she hadn't done anything to actually help me yet, not that I minded, her listening and saying she would do something was quite a lot.

"Not really, I mean, there is one thing you should certainly look into, this," I said, quickly grabbing the USB stick off my desk and tossing it to her, she caught it and read the name 'Flash' written on it, and looked at me questioningly, as I had just said he was on my side.

"I thought he was with you on this?" she asked. "Is he someone I should be pulling up or what?"

"Oh, no, it's just someone else came in and broke into his locker and bugged it, so now when it's plugged in the person gets to see all activity and might have stolen some files from it, it also contains images, which I don't know the contents of, so please, don't plug it into a PC," I replied, hoping that Info didn't have them already, "Also I have a name, no idea if it'll mean anything to you or not, but it's one I've been getting messages from, someone called 'Info Broken', who's been constantly supplying me with information about what other people have been trying to do, and he might, or might not be on my side."

"Oh, him..." she said, rolling her eyes. "I don't know anything about him in real life, except that he can, as far as we know, go invisible and some other, magical, things, which is never good, and we know he sells and buys things from some of our students. Your old friend Pinkie buys fireworks from him we believe, but we don't have the evidence nor the patience to do something about it. Just, be careful of him."

"Ok, thank you. I didn't know if he was even slightly trustworthy, but thanks, well, magic is mine and Equestrian Twilight's speciality so maybe, we can stop him," I said realising what use he would have for a program that allowed me to further study magic, his plan was to play around it. "Now that makes sense, he wanted access to my program once I had made it, I didn't realise he had magic."

"It's rare to see it, but it is quite strong magic, in the end, we have seen him use powers similar to those nearby people used, back when there was some strange item, I believe the Alicorn Amulet, it was called, and he managed to draw upon its power without needing it, so I would be careful if you ever meet him," she said turning around, "alright, well, if there is nothing else you want my help with I'm going to go let Flash know his USB was hacked and I'll have someone look into the hardware of it."

"Alright, thank you, I think that's all for now, so I should probably get back to work on my program if that's alright."

"Of course, if you need anything later, just ask," she replied, turning to face the door, "good luck with the program."

"Right, thanks."

Finally, done with the day, I'm much further through the planning for the program, it's almost done actually, so I can soon begin with the code, anyway, schools over, it's time I start doing something else. I grab my phone and get ready to leave, quickly checking my messages, 'Hey Sunset, your room is cleaned enough that it should be habitable, and we've updated the security of the building and your room a lot, including a new, key card operated lock in addition to the current system. We're also willing to repay up to $5000 in expenses to fix the room and its contents. - Mr Greg' Great, my room is cleaned enough, now maybe I should go see Twilight about these things, maybe Equestrian Twilight will still be on my side, assuming she hasn't heard about the happenings.

'Alright, thank you, Mr Greg, I'll come around tomorrow to rebuild my room, I will be out tonight, I've got someone I need to visit.'

'Certainly, I will tell the people who are to work on fixing your room to move some of the larger replacements in, and then we will leave the rest until tomorrow.'

Right, next things next, time to get that book to talk to Twilight out, I wonder, is that portal still in The Crystal Empire, or would it be in Twilight's castle or Canterlot. Alright, well, I'm going to go get some food first anyway, I wonder if any of my friends would allow me to explain what I think has happened to me. A quick message would solve the problem, but I presume I can just find them in the obvious places. Let's see, oh yeah, Pinkie has a party tonight, damn it, I wanted to go to that, aww well, she'll understand. I quickly log out and lock my PC, before leaving my dark study room and locking the door behind me, right, to the cafeteria, I start walking and immediately, moments in, I hear the voices of other school members, making stupid comments like, "Look it's the liar," and "Careful, she'll become a she-demon again," yeah, because that's something I would do, right, clearly... Walking through these corridors is so annoying, hearing all these rude comments, everyone standing as far from me as possible. Eventually, though, I manage to get to the doors of the Cafeteria, and I push them open, only to find Pinkie Pie inside, doing her usual, setting up her prized party cannon, loading it with her new more colourful, denser bottle of confetti.

"Pinkie Pie, hey," I said, hopefully, she wouldn't ignore me or worse, get mad at me.

"What do you want?" she asked, making it obvious she didn't want to talk to me, she'd only been here for 5 minutes and already there were banners hanging from the roof, and a disco ball hanging from the ceiling.

"Well, I came here, because I wanted to talk to you about something," I replied, trying to sound as though I had something really important thing to tell her, "also, the party is looking really nice already," I continued, looking around at all of the work she must have put into planning this.

"I don't really want to hear anything you have to say, not after what you did to Fluttershy's birthday, and Rainbow Dash's strategies, which, apparently, she makes. Although, thanks, I've planned this party for a long, long time now, so you better not mess this up," she said, looking at me with sinister eyes.

"Trust me, I'm going back to Equestria for the night, so I can't attend this party, but if anything does happen, know that I wasn't here for it to happen."

"Fine, I'll believe you, for now, but I will know if you do anything, so you better actually be going to Equestria."

"Of course I am. Well, anyway, I should be leaving now then, I just wanted to say that I'm sorry about that last party, but you've got to know that wasn't me who trashed it," I said, waving to the pink party planner, "Bye."

"I don't believe you, but goodbye," she replied waving back, "maybe you can prove it later."

"Sure," I replied leaving the room and quickly reaching into my bag, pulling the book out of it. Wow, it's been a few weeks since I wrote in this book.

Dear Princess Twilight,

Things through here haven't been going all too well, I have someone out to get me and all of those friends I made hate me again because of the lies this person has spread, I know this is kind of sudden, but would you mind if I was to return to Equestria for a night, I kind of would like to see you and your friends for advice, plus we are desperately overdue for a catch-up.

Anyway, I will understand if you are too busy, or if there is nowhere for me to sleep, but if possible, I would really like to come through to Equestria, thanks in advance, and goodbye.

• Sunset Shimmer

Right, hopefully, she gets that soon. And maybe I'll get a reply soon, for now, I don't know, I'm gonna go find Applejack or something I guess. Where would she be, I guess she'd be home by now, so to Sweet Apple Acres I guess.

"Hey, Applejack, you here?" I called out, as I approached the farm, she hadn't answered her phone while I was walking here, so maybe she was just ignoring, but I'll be damned if I'm not going to try. I saw the curtains in her bedroom close, "Right, Applejack, I know you're here."

"AJ doesn't feel like talking to you, to be honest, she doesn't want to talk to anyone, so if you could go, I'll try to get her to give you a call later," a familiar voice yelled. I tried to trace it back looking down, and I saw her little sister standing there. "Sorry, I wish she wasn't unhappy too, but somethings just didn't go her way, you know. I mean, she'd probably quite like to see you, but, just, not now, maybe tomorrow, okay?"

"Oh, ok, just let her know to message me tomorrow if she's up for it, thanks," I said, feeling the book in my bag vibrating, a new message from Twilight I guess.

"Of course, alright, see you then Sunset."

"Bye," I said, turning away, "I'll not be able to see her messages until tomorrow, by the way, so if she messages me tonight, I won't be able to reply," I continued, walking away from the farm and finding a park bench to sit on.

Quickly tossing my bag beside me, I begin to look through it to find the book message, not that that was particularly difficult. I quickly found it and pulled it out, flipping it open to the new message from Twilight.

Sunset Shimmer,

Twilight isn't here as of current, however, I'm sure she'd be perfectly fine with you staying here for the night, she should be back shortly, so feel free to come round anytime you'd like.

Also, I don't recognise your name and don't remember her mentioning you before, so I assume you're not from around here?

• Starlight Glimmer

Not from around here, I suppose, maybe I once was, but Starlight Glimmer, I don't remember hearing that name before, well if she's a friend of Twilight I'd guess she's a nice pony. Quickly I put the book back in my bag and start walking towards Canterlot High, straight to that portal, luckily it's only a few minutes away so I don't have to walk for too long, still, I wonder where that portal is, hopefully, it's with Twilight, I don't really wish to have to see Celestia again.

A few minutes more of walking and I'm at the base of the portal, at the base of the destroyed statue, which we should probably repair soon... Well, final thoughts, remember what being a pony is like, 4 feet, no, hooves, no hands, magic, well, I suppose more magic, now, alright, big breath... And step into the portal.

The air around me changes, and I feel my body stretched and changed, I feel Equestrian magic flowing into my body and my tail forming, clothes becoming nothing, becoming a pony once again. Then, out the other side, into a giant... Crystal palace?

Well, I suppose Spike did say Twilight had a castle, so maybe this is it. Taking a look around the walls are all lined top to bottom with books, yep, this is Twilight's castle alright, well, maybe I should go find someone, maybe that Starlight Glimmer pony, maybe she can help me find Twilight. Step by step I've really gotta get used to having hooves again. After a few moments of nearly falling after every step, I quickly regain my balance, alright, let's go, "Hello? Anyone here?" I call out almost redundantly, considering the size of this room alone. No answer, well, I guess I should start roaming, I think there are pony versions of my friends here, so let's go and see if we can find any of them. Walking out of the giant room, my search immediately feels pointless, looking down the massive corridor spreading at least the length of Canterlot High, no way will I ever learn my way around this place.

"Hello?" I call out again, hoping for a response with the echo of the walls to aid me, although, apparently, there isn't any, so crystal absorbs sound well, good to know... I begin to ponder just returning to the portal and waiting for Twilight to arrive until I see a flash of light to my right.

"Hello there little pony, you're not from around here, are you?" He asked as I looked over there to see a part pony, part dragon, part, you get the idea, thing, looking at me funny. "Considering you just appeared and brought with you powerful magic I assume you're either looking for the Princess of Friendship or a fight, and today is your lucky day because I can help you to get either," he said.

"Well, I was looking for Twilight Sparkle, and I've not really gotten used to being a pony again yet, so I'd rather not fight," I said confused by his strange method of deduction, it felt like I knew it from somewhere.

"Oh, shame, I would've loved to show you some of my powerful magic. Capturing a villain would've been just the thing I needed to get my own throne."

"I'm sorry, but who are you?" I asked, very much confused.

"Oh, I forgot how new you are, you wouldn't have heard of me. I'm Discord, Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony, the most powerful draconequus in all of Equestria," Oh, and I'm willing to bet he's the only one. He was stopped in his tracks by an unfamiliar voice from just around a corner.

"Discord, stop bragging," the voice said, as she walked around the corner, at first glance, I mistook her for Twilight, but upon a second look, she was actually a completely different unicorn. "Stop being annoying and go get Twilight would you," she said, he sighed before clicking his fingers and disappearing, "sorry about him, he's just being his chaotic self, anyway, I'm Starlight Glimmer, you must be Sunset, correct? Twilight has told us all so much about you."

So Twilight mentions me, that's nice, I never knew that, well, maybe this will be a less awkward visit than I thought. "Yeah, that's me, I don't think I've heard of you before, so I assume you're a new friend of Twilight?"

"Well, I guess yeah, but I was originally a bit evil," Starlight replied, getting quieter at that last bit.

"Wait, really, you too, that pony must have a really impressive thing for finding us out, huh, I wouldn't have guessed it," I said, looking at her, trying to guess what she'd done.

"Right, here, I brought you your twilight," Discord said sarcastically, as he reappeared beside us, the outside light turning to a load of blues and purples.

"Discord. The Princess," Starlight said.

"Oh, yeah, I brought her too," he said, holding Twilight out in front of himself, she had a disapproving look on her face, she quickly teleported out of his hands, just in front of me, and promptly smiled.

"Sunset, how's it going, it's been so long," she said excitedly upon noticing it was me. "I was wondering why Discord grabbed me and teleported off, this is a good enough reason."

"Hey Twilight, things aren't going so well in Canterlot High, there have been rumours and all spreading everywhere."

"Oh my, that's horrible," she said, "come, we'll go discuss this in the main hall, there are seats there." She walked away, and Starlight and Discord followed, for a few steps, before Discord turned off into his own room, Starlight stayed with us the whole way to the room and followed us inside.

"Sunset, do you mind if I join the discussion? I want to see if I can help at all and if not you might be a good friend to have in the future if you move back here."

"Sure, come with if you want, I don't mind," I said, pushing the giant doors to the main hall open, and looking inside, it was absolutely massive. I can see why it's called the main hall, "so, is there somewhere specific I should sit?" I asked, to no-one in specific, noticing that all of the thrones had the symbols my friends were most known for.

"Nah, just pick any seat, I don't really mind," Twilight replied, and I took to the chair opposite hers, Pinkie's I believe, while Starlight sat next to her, in Applejack's seat.

A couple of hours of conversation later, I feel a bit better, Twilight and Starlight both helped me to feel better, and I think I know Starlight enough now to call her a friend. About halfway through our conversation Fluttershy and Discord came into the room, so I ended up talking to them as well, apparently, they get along really well.

"Well, it's getting rather late, don't you think," Twilight said, she saw Discord about to click his fingers, presumably to change the time of day to spite her, "Discord, don't even bother."

"Fine. But I was just trying to help, it would be nice to talk to Sunset some more, she's from a different world, and I want to know more about it," he said, trying to convince her to let him mess with the time, I guess.

"No. Anyway, as I was saying, it's pretty dark outside, so if we're about done here I guess we should go sleep, besides, we can talk again in the morning, right."

"Yeah we can, if you guys want, I'm in no real rush to head back to the human world, I mean, my school has ended for the weekend," I said, looking around at the confused faces of the ponies around me, "what? What'd I say?"

"Well, it's just that, we all finished school years ago, and I thought we were about the same age," the former evil purple pony said.

"Oh right, of course, our schooling system works very differently, I'll explain in the morning, for now, though, I kind of think we should get some sleep as like Twilight said it's getting dark out there." Discord again went to click his fingers, "and as Twilight also said, don't even bother..."

"Fine," Discord said, clearly a little annoyed that even I wouldn't let him do it.

"Alright, Starlight, you think you could show Sunset to her room?" Twilight said, "I gotta go find Rainbow Dash, she disappeared earlier without any explanation."

"Happily," she replied, walking to the door, "follow me," she said to me, leading me out of the room into the complex corridors of the castle, I'm gonna get a headache navigating this place in the morning, aren't I... "And then it's just up here, and then down here, and this is it," she said, having already led me halfway across the castle at this point.

"Thank you, I'll see you in the morning I guess," I said walking across the room and falling face first into the bed, it's tiring being a pony when you're so used to being a human. Having to balance and walk using 4 limbs, as well as having to use magic to eat food, so many times I was tempted just to dive face first into my food, but I decided that was extremely rude, especially in a castle.

"Alright, I guess I'll be off then, want me to come get you in the morning, so you don't get lost?" She asked, oh good, I really don't wanna have to learn the layout of this castle.

"Please do, I would get absolutely lost if you didn't."

"Alright, I'll come get you after someone else gets up and we can go to the throne room and talk some more."

"Brilliant, thanks," I said, "and if you see her again, tell her that I'm really thankful that she's letting me stay here."

"Will do, bye Sunset," she said walking away.

It just occured to me, I completely forgot to check who raided my room, maybe Mr Greg knows, I'll just ask him when I return tomorrow I guess. Normally this would be the time when I would sit on my phone messaging people or reading through recent news. But since I'm a pony right now, that's not really an option, so I just close my eyes and drift off to sleep.

Author's Note

Alright, there we go, Chapter 2, finished, took a lot longer than it should have, mainly because it's homework season, luckily, I've almost got the next chapter all ready to go, and it will be focusing on a different character, should be out in a day or so, however, I don't think it'll be quite as long, I'm gonna focus on making all the chapters about as long as the first, but I won't write because there is a word count.

Please, feel free to drop a comment down below, pick me up on any stupid errors, and let me know what you thought.