Blooming Moon

by Lotus Moon

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Original Character, Sex, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2360

A romantic night between two OC

It's been a year since Lotus Moon met and started dating her colt friend, Saphirus. She wanted to have a special night. And thanks to a sudden storm, it became really a special night for the couple.

Sequel story is A New Start
(Art was done by a close friend)

Audio Reading done by me and JPegasus19
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Published 2016-12-10 02:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2016-12-10 02:00:01 UTC

Blooming Moon

Author's Note

I know it's a bit rough around the edges (no pun intended). But it's my first clop, so be gentle but honest please.

Blooming Moon

“I hope he likes it. I worked really hard on it.” Lotus paced around her kitchen getting the finishing touches done on a cake she had made. It was a cinnamon apple cake covered with a sapphire blue frosting and decorated with edible flowers. On top, there was green frosting spelling out the words “Happy 1 Year Anniversary.” Her horn glowed with a violet aura as she levitated the cake, taking it to the table and placing it at the end of the table. On the table was a small dinner comprised of a creamy carrot stew with mashed potatoes and deep fried apples. She may have been an accomplished unicorn when it came to magic but was lacking when it came to cooking.

Only moments after she set the cake down and finished lighting the candles, there was a knock on the door. “Just a moment.” She called and dashed to finish a few more preparations. She ran up to her room and brushed her red and black mane and tail till they were straight. She checked over her medium blue coat to make sure she didn’t have any stains from cooking before heading back to the front door. Before another knock came, she had opened the door. “Hello, Saphy.” She beamed sheepishly.

“It’s Saphirus. You know that nickname makes me embarrassed.” Saphirus blushed, the cyan stallion walking inside, his amber eyes looking around. He undid the latch from his saddlebag, using his sea green and near midnight blue tail to set it on the ground, before reaching inside and pulling out a bouquet of assorted flowers in his muzzle. He gently flipped his matching grey mane out of his face and smiled. “Happy Anniversary” he muffled.

“Oh Saphy, they’re beautiful.” She levitated the flowers with her magic and sniffed them. “I have just the place for them.” She set the flowers in a vase next to the picture of them on their first date. Lotus turned him and trotted back to her colt friend. “Come on, I made dinner.”

“Oh, is that what I smell? It smells absolutely delicious.” He smiled. The couple trotted to the dining room table and sat down. “You’ve really outdone yourself. This all looks mouthwatering. And the cake looks beautiful too. Did you make it?”

“Of course. I was tempted to get it from Sugar Cube Corner, but I wanted to impress you. S-So I asked Mrs. Cake to give me some baking lessons and she happily obliged. She gave me a lot of advice and told me if I really wanted to make it special, I had to give it my own spin.” Lotus timidly poked her hooves together.

“You did…all this for me?”

“Well, it is our anniversary. I really wanted it to be a special night.”

“I’m so happy you did.” He smiled and the two started to enjoy dinner. They chatted about their day and reminisced about how they first met one Hearthswarming Eve. It was the first Hearthswarming after Twilight Sparkle had become a princess and opened her castle to every pony. Lotus had accidentally spilled cider on him after getting spooked by Fluttershy’s bunny, Angel, popping out of nowhere. After profusely apologizing, they spent the rest of the night together then began dating about a month later.

After having a satisfying dinner and dessert, they laid in front of her fireplace and looked through photo albums and talked about each memory the pictures held for them. The only thing that interrupted this moment was a sudden flash of lightning and rain pounding the ground outside. “That was scary. The weather ponies said nothing about a storm tonight.” Lotus looked out the window.

“Well, maybe it was last minute. But it is quite much. I don’t think I’d be able to get home in this.” Saphirus walked over to the window. Hearing that, Lotus perked up and was almost gleeful but she hid her enthusiasm since he would see it in her reflection.

“Y-You can stay here tonight.” She suggested. “I wouldn’t be able to sleep if I knew my colt friend was out in this storm.”

Saphirus didn’t even argue the offer and nodded. Lotus put away the album they were looking at and walked with him up the stairs to her room.

Being in Lotus’ room was a nerve-wracking experience for Saphirus. It wasn’t as girly as he imagined. In fact, it was simple. A picture on the wall, a vanity across the room from her bed, her closet door was closed but he assumed it had a few of Rarity’s creations inside. Her bed was large enough for three ponies to sleep in, but it was for her since she was a rough sleeper at times. The couple glanced at each other then looked away embarrassed, hints of red caressing their cheeks. ‘This is going to be difficult…’ They both thought together. Wanting to be brave, Lotus cleared her throat lightly.

“Um…Saphy. S-Since it’s our anniversary, and we will be sleeping together for the first time…c-could you cuddle me?” Lotus asked to which she received a soft “mhmm” from her colt friend.

With that, they climbed into bed and moved close to each other. Facing him, Lotus wrapped her right hind leg over Saphirus’ to get more warmth. As Saphirus held his mare friend, he could feel her slit gently resting against his leg. Though faint, he could smell a feminine scent coming from it. It filled his nostrils and slowly he started to feel aroused. His thick member started to slowly rise from its sheath until it was close to poking her stomach.

‘No no no no no! Not now! I’ve gotta think about something to calm me down! Uh…butterflies! Flowers! Timberwolves!!’ Saphirus’ mind raced with any thoughts he could muster to calm himself down. But when Lotus moved slightly, rubbing her soft cunt against his leg, all of those thoughts suddenly disappeared and his erection touched her stomach. Lotus opened her eyes a bit and glanced down at their bodies, already knowing what was poking her.

“Um…Saphy…” She started.

‘Oh no! It’s all over…she knows!’ He panicked a bit and shut his eyes tightly as he tried thinking of an explanation only to be caught off guard by her hoof rubbing his shaft. His eyes open a bit to look at her. “Uh...y-yes Lotus?”

“You don’t have to hold back. I-If you want to take me…you can.” She offered, her eyes sparkling with love and hints of lust. Seeing her like that, Saphirus didn’t dare resist. He kissed her, their tongues intertwining and dancing around each other. When they parted their kiss, a thin string of drool still connected to their muzzles. The sound of the storm outside barely drowning out their hot, soft pants. “I’ve always dreamed of you kissing me like that.” She whispered.

“I’ll kiss you like that more often then.” He whispered back and smiled. By now, his cock was completely unsheathed and her pussy was starting to leak love nectar. Lotus rubbed her mare hood against his length, the action slowly revealing her sensitive clitoris. “Lotus?”

“Y-Yes my love?”

“May I…um…can we…i-if you want to…” Saphirus stumbled over his words, trying to find a polite way to ask if they would continue.

Lotus placed a hoof on his lips and smiled. “Of course we can keep going. What did you have in mind?

20 minutes later

“Oh, Saphy~ that feels amazing~” Lotus moaned softly. “You really know how to pleasure a mare.” She and Saphirus lay in a 69 position with her body on top of his. He wrapped one forearm around her hind leg while the other separated her now dripping wet mare hood. Her teats resting on his chest while copious amounts of love nectar leaked like a broken faucet from her pussy as he licked every drop, his tongue trailing teasingly over her now exposed clitoris, sucking on it like a small cherry. He also occasionally rubbed her cutie mark, giving it and her rump a light spank. Despite their previous shyness, they had grown quite bold in their actions.

“And you, my dear, know more than simple unicorn magic.” Saphirus grinned, his breath making her cunt tingle with delight. Lotus’ hooves rubbed his dick where her mouth could not reach. She licked his shaft over and over till it was slick enough to take into her small muzzle. Making small sounds of delight, she sucked his long shaft with delicate intensity so much that the vibrations from her throat made her partner’s hind leg twitch. Her horn was lit up to massage his balls, churning the virile jizz gathering in them. “Sweet Celestia, that feels divine. I don’t know how much more I can take. I think…I’m gonna…ahhh!” Before he could finish warning her, Lotus’ cheeks puffed as it was filled with shot after shot of his thick semen. Mouthful after mouthful slipped down her throat. Loud gulps filled the room, echoing from her throat. Once his fountain of cum had calmed down, Lotus slowly craned her head back and took a deep gasp for air.

“Wow, you really surprised me with that.” She smiled.

Saphirus’ breath was rough as he looked at her. “I’m sorry, I tried to warn you. But it was too late.”

“I hope you still have the energy for another round.” She said and in response to that, his cock stiffed as long as her forearm. Lotus scooted her body forward till her hot; dripping love pocket was rubbing against his shaft. “Care to give this a try?”

Saphirus sat up and started to position his cock to the entrance of her pussy. And with gentle probing, the head was inside her, causing Lotus to let out a loud shriek. “Lotus?! Are you ok? Should we stop?”

“N-No. Please continue.” She looked back at him, her eyes lightly filled with tears.

“Are you sure?” Saphirus looked concern. He honestly didn’t want to cause any harm to his mare friend. He loved her too much to do so. “I don’t wanna continue this unless you’re really sure you’re ok.”

“I’m positive. Please.”

“Well…if you’re sure…” And with her approval, Saphirus thrust his full length deep into her wet slit, making her shriek in delight. After a few moments to let her adjust, he started thrusting. The sounds of wet slaps resonated from their joined private areas and moans of ecstasy purred from Lotus’ throat. With his hooves on her flank, keeping him supported and pinning her gently to the bed, Saphirus plunged his thick stallion meat into his mate’s wet love canal. “Sweet Celestia! Lotus, your pussy feels amazing!”

"Ahhh Saphy your dick is so wonderful. It’s better than I’ve dreamed!” Lotus rested her chin on her forearms, her hind legs trembling from every thrust as if made of jelly. Her ears flicked back as her body shivered in unrivaled pleasure. “Every cycle of heat I’ve gone through doesn’t compare to this.”

Saphirus thrust deeper into her as he leaned his body onto hers. “Holy Mother of Luna, I’d fight an army of Changelings to feel this pleasure again.” He nuzzled his face into the back of her shoulder while a pop could be heard as the head of his sheath nestled itself into her now open cervix. Lotus let out loud cries at the sudden intrusion, achieving her first orgasm, while Saphirus looked down at her curiously, his hot member pulsating deep inside her. “Wh-What was that feeling?”

“I-I believe…you just opened my womb.” She mumbled her tight love hole clenching and twitching around him. “And it…feels so good. Let’s keep going. I want you to rut me to your heart’s content.” She glanced back at him, the pupils of her lavender eyes dilating and almost resembling the shape of hearts.

“If you insist.” Saphirus slammed his hot cock in and out of his mate with lustful intensity. As one hoof keeps her close, the other rubs her teats and nipples, earning more whines of pleasures from his mare friend. “Lotus, you’re insides are squeezing me so hard. I-I don’t think I’ll be able to hold out much longer!” He started to unsheathe his penis from her vagina only for her walls to clamp down on him and her magic pushing his hips back against her rump. “L-Lotus?!”

“No, I don’t – ahhh - want you to remove yourself. I-I’m so close. I want this!”

“Lotus…I ca-ahh!” Her magic caused his hips started bucking more intensely than before, the squelching sounds of their genitalia getting louder and more erotic. His hind legs twitched and shook weakly as he drew close to his second climax. “I can’t take it anymore. I’m going to explode.”

“So am I. Ahhh Saphy, I love you so much! I’m going to cum!”

“I love you too, Lotus. I’m cumming. I-I’m cumming! Ah-Ahhhh!!!

Within seconds, Lotus had achieved a second orgasm came with a loud cry of ecstasy. Her fur lightly stood as she rode the almost endless waves of pleasure as her lover moaned, releasing thick ribbons of seed into her uterus. After several minutes of drowning in pleasure, Lotus’ backside collapsed onto the bed after Saphirus removed himself and laid beside her. His sperm spilling out and mixing with her love honey on the bed sheets despite her weak attempts to keep it inside her love hole. “That was…the most amazing…most passionate night ever.” She sighed.

“Yeah…it was. Lotus. We’ve been dating for a while now…a-and I’ve wanted to ask you a question for a while now, but I was really afraid. But after tonight, I know I’m doing the right thing.” Saphirus placed is hoof on her cheek. “Lotus Moon. Will you marry me?”

Lotus’ eyes sparkled with tears as she cuddled him. “I thought you’d never ask. I will.” She smiled. Saphirus wrapped his forearms around her as they both fell into exhausted sleep.

“Happy Anniversary, my lovely flower.” He whispered.