Do you remember me?

by Sour_Spot

I'm so sorry

Previous Chapter

   She looked surprised why we had to go to ponyville.  One problem though. Spitfire and Dashie were like sisters. Until Spitfire became a wonderbolt. But they still were the best of friends.

  "Why are we going there?" She asked.

  "Well, it has to do something with Dash" I said.

  "Then spill the beans!"

  "But it's not good news!"

  "Clipper, I knew Crash and you my whole life, we're like brothers and sisters, now can you please tell me what is going on?" As Spitfire looked at me with worried eyes, I told her.

  "Spitfire, Dash got into a accident,  it was my fault, I challenged her" All of a sudden I felt a slap across my face.

  "YOU IDIOT!!" She screamed. Then I was crying. "WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME BEFORE YOU WENT! AND WHERE DID YOU GO!! I AM THE OLDEST ONE YOU KNOW! WHERE IS SHE NOW!!!!!"

  "She's over at the hospital in ponyville" Then she flew out of her office. I did too. I'm so sorry Spitfire. I could tell it's hard on you too.

I herd some whispers when I was flying out.

"What happened there, I don't know, where is our captain going? Huh, what did I miss..." Those were things I herd. i couldn't believe that I hurt my "sister" too. She probably hates me. If I told her then none of this would have happened, but it's too late now. Then only things I could say right now is "I'm so sorry"


This is in Spitfires mind


  I think I have been to hard on him but still, he didn't tell me that they were going to do something stupid. It's just like last time... I could remember that already, when I had to act like a big sister. (Another flashback)

"Hey stop pushing Soarin!" Shouted Dash.

"But it's tag!" He laughed.

"Soarin, if Dash doesn't like that, can you stop?" I asked.

"Wait, I'm hurting Crashie?" He asked. Then I smiled.

"I'm really like a older sister!" I laughed. Then Dash and Soaring looked at me then smiled.

"Yeah!" They both said.

   But that was in the past. I'm a wonderbolt with Soarin. Dash never got a chance to see us again. When she moved to ponyville, I guess that's when she got to become the Element of Loyalty. She did meet some nice ponys over there but I barely see her now. And when her parents died, it was just her... Now this has happened... Dashie has gone through so much pain! I DONT WANT HER TO REMEMBER IT!!! I couldn't help it but to shed some tears. Don't worry little sis. I'll protect you from pain, I promise.


Back to Soarin


   I touched my cheek. I couldn't believe that she slapped me. She was right. She's always right. She is my fake older sis. It's to hard on me. Why is it always her! She goes through so much pain. Her parents FUCKEN DIED LEAVING HER BEHIND!! SHE WAS THE ONLY ONE. SHE HAD TO LIVE WITH ME AND MY PARENTS UNTIL SHE MOVED!! SHE MOVED SO FAR AWAY!! I BEARLY SEE HER NOW!! THIS NOW COULD BE THE LAST CHALLENGE WE HAVE EVER SINCE THAT HAPPENED. SCREW IT ALL!!! DASHIE! JUST FORGET THE PAIN YOU WENT THROUGH, I FEEL SO BAD. I wasn't even thinking about you when your parents died. (MORE FLASH BACKS!!!)

"DASHIE!! DO YOU WANT SOME ICE CREAM" Spitfire yelled. "HELLO???? ARE YOU GOING TO OPEN THE DOOR???" But the door stayed shut.

"Dashie is a heavy sleeper, remember? She's probably sleeping" I told her.

"I guess you're right... Good night Dash..." She said. Then we both left. I got to ponyville just in time an flew to the hospital where everyone met up. Spitfire beat me to it. The way I saw everyone. Twilight was sitting down looking at the ground. Fluttershy was crying. Pinkie Was breathing in and out trying to be happy saying "it's okay" over and over again. Rarity was trying to stay awake. A.J was sitting right by Fluttershy trying to make her stop. Spitfire was shedding tears.

  "I'm sorry everypony..." But no one heard or they didn't want to hear.

  "Good news everypony, Dash will be okay, but... She won't remember you all..." Nurse Redheart said. My heart stopped. Twilight broke down. Pinkie cried. Spitfire just stared at the nurse. A.J was actually shedding some tears. Rarity cried quietly. It was only supposed to be a fun challenge... But now, the person I love won't remember me at all. How would she be the element of loyalty now?? Who knows...