The Speed evolved

by StarCloud

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Princess Celestia, Crossover, Human, Anthro, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Romance, Original Character
Length: 4761

I am a displaced and I am a mix of a game and a series so read .I will be living here on the planet Equis and have my adventures.

Hello my name is Zanitar and I am the god of speed and adaption. I am a normal displaced and I am just trying to live my life while fighting monsters and if anyone of you displaced want to do a crossover with me then I would gladly do one with you.

Caracter is inspired by Prototype and the series The Flash.
This is a displaced story so read if you like those.
I might change things here later on but for now I will have it like this.
And if you know of a good cover pick then send me it and I will show it here.

Published 2016-12-19 18:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-02-13 10:47:34 UTC

Chapter 1 Bye Bye earth

Author's Note

Hello i am not dead, i just went thru my first writhers block so i have been reading much.
Mostly HIE.:pinkiecrazy:
Well this is something new i am making so read and tell what needes to be fixed and on friday i will send out another one.
Bye and may the speedforce be with you.:moustache:

Chapter 1 Bye Bye earth

Chapter 1 Bye bye earth

POV Love Meler

I was walking through the doors to the comic con here in Sweden and I was hoping that people would see me.

Why? Because I was in a costume that was so OP.

I had made a costume for a character i called Zenitar, the god of speed and adaption.

He is a person that became stuck between two universes and his body mutated into a mix between an Evolved from Prototype and the villain Savitar, the god of speed.

Well you should know that it is not easy finding parts to this costume. I fixed a green bodysuit and glued on metal pieces and even cut a green water pipe and glued on the ends to look like they are pipes that send poison to one part of the shoulder to the elbow. I had bought online a gauntlet but I misread and only got one so my other arm had no cool claw hand on it. But that would not make me sad because this was going to be an awesome day.

I first went and looked at the shops hoping to find something good until I heard a voice calling me.

“Well I have never seen anyone like you before, stranger” the voice said.

I looked at my side and saw a man who looked like something from a game.

“Well it is nice that somepony saw me” I said as I was giving him a clue that I am a brony (I am one and you can’t sue me for liking that series).

“Well, a good sales pony has a good eye and it is telling me that you might not have a complete cosplay there” he said letting me know that he is a brony too with a smile on his face.

“My fellow brony, if you know where I could find something and tell me your name I would be very happy” I said hoping to find a new friend.

“Well, you can call me The Merchant and I have this, if you want, for only, I think fifty kronor as you would call it” The Merchant said as he took from under the table a gauntlet that looked perfect.

“Where did you get something like this” I asked looking at the perfect gauntlet.

“Well, it was a defective thing i bought for future deals” he said knowing I would by it.

“That is a wonderful low price so I can’t ignore something like this” i thought.

“That is perfect and you can call me Zanitar if you want” I said as I pulled out a fifty kronor bill out of my bag at the belt under the metal and gave it to him.

“Well, we might not meet again but I will help you in the future” he said as I took the gauntlet and put it on.

“Goodbye and good sales for your future” I said before I felt a little dizzy.

Then all of a sudden I fell down a hole that was all black inside and I could feel tremendous pain in my body as I was falling.
If I would explain the pain the best way possible I would say that my body was being destroyed piece by piece and grown back out of nothing. The worst part was that I could not lose conscience and sleep away the pain. Finally I could feel my body on a cold marble floor before I passed out.

POV Luna minutes earlier

“Boring” I said as I was laying back in my chair looking exhausted and letting my wings fall to the floor.

It was night and I was sitting in my room in a dark blue dress with stars on it reading through old boring papers that I had to sign.

Ever since I was free from Nightmare Moon's control I had been sitting in my room and been signing papers and reading history all the time and it had been so boring I had forced my sister in letting me go to the Grand Galloping Gala next month.

Luckily for me I still had my puppy eyes and it worked like a charm but it was still another month until the Gala and I still needed to sign these papers until I could take a break and rest until morning so I can sleep.

All of a sudden I heard a “donk” behind me and I looked and saw a strange bipedal metal creature lying on the floor unconscious.

I jumped out of my chair and ran to the creature to see if it was still alive.

I put two fingers on its´ neck and felt a pulse but the disturbing thing was I could feel twenty beats a second.

I looked at the creature and saw that its´ body was full of metal pieces grown out of him like armor and under his armor was green flesh and out of his armes was like pipes connecting one part of his body to another.

I cast a spell on him to see if he was injured. His body started to change making him look like his body was made out of green and black tendrils. I stopped and his body changed back to what I think is his normal form.

“GUARDS” I shouted to the door and a unicorn guard wearing dark blue armour came in.

“What is the ma.., what is that, princess?” the guard said looking with wide eyes at the knocked out creature on the floor.

“I don’t know but he needs help. Can you take him to the medic wing for scanes and rest” I said as I levitated him to the guard.

“Yes, princess” he said as he took the creature over his right shoulder and started to run to the medic wing.

“I wonder what has happened to him” I asked no one and started to try to continue to sign papers but I could not stop thinking about him.

It wasn´t until five minutes later that I gave up on trying to focus on work and started to walk to the medic wing.

“I need to know all about him, even if I need to be awake all day” I said as I walked through the halls.

Chapter 2

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Chapter 3

Chapter 3 My powers

POV Love Meler

As we were walking thru the halls I saw the staff whispering about me.

“What do you think he is?” asked one.

“He might be a monster from the everfree forest” one said looking at me.

When I heard that I stopped and turned towards them.

“You do know that just because I am different doesn't mean I am from that forest. And please tell your colleagues that I am not from there and I can hear everything they say” I said with crossed arms to look intimidating.

And it worked, I could see their knees shake and their pupils as small as bugs before they started to run away.

“Well, that worked better than i thought” I said looking at the way the maidens went before turning to Celestia and Luna to see that one was angry with me and the other was looking like she was going to burst out laughing.

“What, they were talking about false things and I wanted to make sure that they got the right information and because it was fun” I said walking to them.

“Well if you don’t hurt my ponies then I will allow you to do those things but don’t make them pee themselves in the future” Celestia said as we were walkin thru the maze of halls.

“What did that mechant do to me?” I thought as i was looking at me arm.

“I can’t promise anything but I will keep that in mind” I said as we were in front of a door that I assumed was the entrance to the training grounds.

“Well, i assume this is it” i said looking at the mares at my sides.

As the doors started to open i could see the guards going thru military training.

Some at the sides doing push ups and in the middles was a training course and some dummies that were being slashed by soldiers.

“We will start with the dummies if you please” Celestia said as we were walking amongst the guards and I was surprised that they did not see me.

As we went to a small dummie I was thinking about what to start with.

“Well thou shall start with this and show us what thou are made out of” Luna said with a smile and crossed arms looking at me next to a dummy.

“Okay I think I know what to start with, but can you move to a safe distance from us” I said looking at the dummy.

She went a few steps away next to Celestia.

I focused on my arms thinking about the design I wanted and I could see my arms transform into a green and black mass and then they formed into green finger claws as big at two daggers.

As I was moving my claws like fingers I saw the faces of Celestia and Luna and it was the same faces as earlier.

“You should close your mouths before you catch a fly Tia and Lulu” I said with a smirk on my face as I could see them start to look intrigued and annoyed at the nicknames.

Then I slashed the dummy and after a few seconds of my slash it fell down and split into multiple pieces.

I looked around and saw that the world had slowed down and I looked at my hands and saw that they were normal.

“Okaaaay so I can only use one of my powers at the time, good to know” I said to myself as I started to move all the dummies and put them down at different points at the course and then stopped behind to Luna.

“Things are looking good for me” I said and made Luna scream and turn around to see me standing there.

All the guards that were fighting the dummies looked around confused and finally saw me.

“Well, sorry for just taking your dummies but I need them for my demonstration for the princesses so you won't mind, right?” I said as the guards were walking to me in a circle.

“What is going on here, you are so…” a strong commanding voice said as he entered the ring and saw me.

“Hello Captain Shining Armor, it is good to meet you” I said looking at the purple armored stallion unicorn with white coat and blue hair (or mane) and tail.

“Who and what are you, creature?” Shining asked while pointing a sword at me.

“I am Zenitar and I am the god of speed and adaption and I am just showing your princesses my powers” I said pointing a thumb at Luna and Tia (I am calling her that now).

“He is speaking the truth, Captain, and we would like to continue” Tia said looking a bit annoyed with crossed arms.

“Well then can I see what you can do too” Shinning asked as he put back his sword in its scabbard.

“Of course I will but be ready to clean your jaw because it’s gonna fall to the ground” I said with a smirk as I was walking to the beginning of the course.

It was surrounded by guards that were curious about me.

“Hey you, can you keep track of how fast this goes?” I asked a guard with a timer on him.

I shifted my arms back into claws and started to run at small speed for me.

First I had to jump over big logs and between each one there was a dummy that was sliced easily enough with my claws.

Then there were poles that were sticking up from the ground. I had to jump on one and then jump to the next but when I landed on them they sank down a few centimeters.

Then I came to a rope swing with dummies in the way of the swing but I ignored the rope and dashed forwards to the other side and slashed the dummies like they weren't even there.

Then there was a climbing wall.I let tendrils come out of my feet and jogged up the wall.I made a few guards start feeling bad about their own good looking but less efficient bodies.

Then there were ten dummies placed like bowling pins. I started to vision my claws like a pair of big balls. Then I felt that my arms became heavier and I heard the wood under my feet break a little.I looked at my hands and saw that they were hammer fists.I jumped into the air and air dashed into the dummies and when I hit the ground a crater got created and all of the dummies were just rubble.

Then I looked around to see all of their faces were so shocked that another shock would make them faint.

“Well that was easy, how was I?” I asked flippantly as I brushed off all of my dust.

“Thirty seconds, but no one have ever gone thru that course that fast” the guard said and after that a big number of guards fainted.

“We have not ever seen anything do that with such ease” Luna said looking at me like I was the most amazing thing in the world.

“Well this is not the limit of my powers but I might hurt somepony if I go further” I said looking around at the guards that were carrying the uncountsent ones.

“You're a powerful being, Love” Tia said walking to me.

“Well I try and I think you owe me something, Tia” I said turning my hand into a claw.

“You’re right” Tia said as she took a lock of hair and cut it off with my claw and handed it to me.

“And I guess I need to hold my end as well” Luna said as she did the same thing.

After I got Luna’s hair I let my hands shift around them and dematerialise into me.

“Now stay back a little bit as my body is mutating” I said as I could feel my body start to change.

They stepped back and my body turned into a mass of green tendrils and then they reformed back to me.

“Good it is fiG AAAAHHHH” I screamed and stumbled to the ground as I could hear a roar in my head.

Author's Note

Hello I am not dead or displaced, yet.
You should know I work best on thease stories while on my break during school and when I know dates I can put these stories out I will. So good cliffhanger here and the next chapter is a battle one.
Comment if I should make any gory chapters and may the speed force be with you.

Chapter 4

Chapter 4 Fight my beast
POV Luna
“What is wrong, Love?” I asked as I was running to Zenitar that was on the ground holding his head.
“I can hear him, Lulu” he said as his body was glowing green.
“What can you hear?” I asked as I was trying to think of a spell that would help him.
“Lulu I need you to put me to sleep and put my body in the strongest cell there is” he said as he was fighting something in his head.
“Why? what is happening to thou?” I said looking at his pained face.
“Don’t have time, meet me in my dreams” he said looking at me with pure red eyes.
“Yes, we will meet you in your dreams” I said as a lowered my horn and put him to sleep.
His eyes closed and he started to snore, LOUDLY.
“Sister, take him to the dungeon as he wished” I said as I crossed my legs.
“And what are you going to do, sister?” Tia asked as she levitated Zenitar.
“Help him” I said as I closed my eyes and started to go to the dreamscape.

POV Love’s mind
After Luna put me to sleep I opened my eyes and saw something familiar, my old school.
I looked around and it looked just like the real deal.
To my left was the football field that I never entered because I never liked football. To my right was a long rectangular building I studied in.
But I did not care about the place but about the abomination in front of me.
I saw a green big beast that looked like a brawler. It was standing on all four like a diamond dog, claws black as ink but sharp as knifes, it’s body covered with only big round muscles and it had a mouth so big that you could put your head in it and he would eat it.
“So you exist too I see, Beast” I said looking at my body with crossed arms.
I had the same look as my new body. Sad, but oh well.
“ROOOAAARRR” it roared looking at me with his black eyes that were so dark you would think they were not there.
“Same intelligence as I hoped for The Beast, so now we fight to see who should be the one in the driver's seat?” I asked looking at my hand and trying to reform it into a claw.
“GRRRRRR” it growled taking a stand.
“Would you mind if we had some music while we fought?” I asked when my hand never changed.
“GRRRRR” it continued looking at me with pure anger.
“I guess you don’t mind, so Pinkie go for it” I said pointing at a pony Pinkie Pie with big speakers and her rapper clothes.
“You got it ,boss, here comes my demons” she said as she pressed a play button on the speakers.
As the music started I made lightning go around my body.
“So i have speed, good” I thought as the lyrics started.
This is a song and be ready to stop in the middle of the song becouse of a few talking parts.

~Mayday! Mayday! the ship is slowly sinking~
We started to slowly go and circle each other waiting for the first move.
~They think I’m crazy but they don’t know the feeling~
We looked into each others eyes in hope too see fear but no one found any.
~They’re all around me, Circling like vultures~
I could see Luna at a distance and I made a letter appear in the air in front of her.
“I hope she can make sure everything will go as planned?” I thought now giving all focus to my enemy.
~They wanna break me and wash away my colors~
I could feel the speed force go through me as I started to make my attack.
~Wash away my colors~
I ran and punched The Beast where I thought his elbow was.
~Take me high and I'll sing, Oh you make everything okay okay okay~
I started to run around and around The Beast and punched him here and there.
And behind me was an awesome green lightning blur.
~Okay okay okay~
But then all of a sudden he slammed me with a hammerfist and made me fly away, hard.
~We are one and the same, Oh you take all of the pain away away away~
“The irony” I thought before I saw The Beast jump and fly towards me with blades instead of claws.
~away away away~
I had only a moment before I managed to run to the side and avoid the blades.
~Save me if I become~
He looked to the left and then the right and saw Love move away and started to follow me.
~my demons~
I had a bad game of rat and mouse and I was the rat.
~I cannot stop this sickness taking over~
I started to run very far away to prepare a sonic punch.
~It takes control and drags me into nowhere~
I made a stop and started to run back to The Beast.
~I need your help, I can’t fight this forever~
When I saw The Beast he had something blue in his claws, Then I made myself go even faster and then I made my sonic punch in his head. This made me realise the blue thing was Luna.
“Now we need to change the plan” I thought to myself.
~I know you’re watching, I can feel you out there~
I took Luna's body and ran three miles away but I could still hear the music.
~I can feel you out there~
I paused the music to talk to Luna.
“How bad do you feel, Lulu?” I asked Luna letting her lay down on the ground.
“I am a little bruised but okay” Luna said with a smile.
“Good, can you still fight him?” I asked looking around to see if he was there.
“Yes but what is he, Love?” Luna asked sitting up.
“He is my shapeshifting powers. They want to be the one in control of the body” I said as I sat down next to Luna.
“Where are we?” Luna asked as her bruises healed at a fast rate.
“We are in my mind but you could also say we are in my home dimension” I said looking back at my past.
“How are we going to beat that beast?” Luna asked as her clothes started to change.
Her clothes turned into a dark blue armor that looked like a knight's armor but with a crescent moon on the chest piece and tightened around her stomach.
“Can you prepare some kind of super laser spell that can hurt him faster than he can regenerate?” I asked looking at my hand.
“Yes, but we need some time to generate the energy I require and he needs to stay still for it to work, but even then we would need to be two to hurt him that much” Luna said thinking about other spells that might work.
“I can make two of us so that is not a problem and I can keep him occupied during that time” I said with a smirk.
“How?” Luna said looking at me with her questioning eyes.
“Just something I can but I can’t explain now” I said as I prepared for the upcoming fight.
“We will need to talk about this after this but I trust you so let’s go” Luna said before I took a hold on her and ran.
I ran so fast that I could run past time just a second away. And then next to me was myself and Luna.I could hardly believe I used that trick from the series.
When we arrived both of us put down our Luna and said “Huzza! The Luna has been doubled”.
Then we started the music and then The Beast appeared in front of us.
~Take me high and I’ll sing. Oh you make everything okay okay okay~
Both of us started to punch The Beast and run all over the place making sure his focus would be on us.
~Okay okay okay~
~We are one and the same. Oh you take all of the pain away away away~
He tried to use whipfist but every time I managed to jump over or under the wip.
~away away away~
Then one of us ran away from the battle to prepare a sonic punch while the other me stayed to distract The Beast.
~Save me if I become~
Then one was running back to us during the sonic punch, but when he was supposed to hit The Beast's claw caught the fist and the other claw took the head of one me and ripped the head off the body.
~my demon~
When The Beast let go of the body it vaporized out of thin air and The Beast started to go to me.
~Take me over the walls below~
I tried to run but a tendril came out of his body and stabbed me in the leg.
~Fly forever. Don’t let me go~
I fell from the pain in my leg and I couldn't even crawl away because of the pain.
~I need a savior to heal my pain~
I started to give up and think of all the happy moments in my life.
~When I become my worst enemy~
I am sorry Mom and dad and big sister that I could not say goodbye for a final time.
The beast was standing over me ready to make the final blow. But then i heard two identical voices.
“You do not kill equestria's new god, monster” the voices said and then a dark blue beam shot at The Beast vaporizing it.
~The enemy~
I looked at where the beam came from and saw the two Lunas stand there with smoke coming from their horns.
I then could feel all the happiness inside of me when I looked at the two Lunas walking to me.
I started to stand up but I still could feel the pain in my leg so I fell instead.
When the two Lunas were next to me they took each an arm and helped me stand up.
“Are thou okay Love?” The Luna to my right said.
“I am okay Lulu’s, but I am going to need to rest when I wake up” I said with a small smile.
Then when the singer started again a spirit looking like The Beast was in front of us.
~Take me high and I’ll sing~
Then from the ground bars of white light came up and positioned them selves around the spirit Beast.
~You make everything okay~
Then a on top of the bars came a roof of white light.
~We are one and the same. You take all of the pain go away~
“He won't bother us again, Lulu’s” I said while looking into the now white eyes of The Beast.
~Take me high and I’ll sing. Oh you make everything okay okay okay~
~Okay okay okay~
Then I started to sing along with the song.
~We are one and the same. Oh you take all of the pain away away away~
Them one of the Lunas started to fade away but it didn't seem like either of us cared.
~away away away~
I could feel myself become stronger from this. Behind me came spirit images of my Mom, Dad and my big sister were standing looking proud of me while I hugged Luna with one arm.
~Save me if I become~
And then I did something I never thought I would do, I kissed Luna.
~my demons~
~Take me high and I’ll sing~
At first Luna looked surprised but then she started to kiss me back with closed eyes.
It felt like all of the world disappeared.
~Oh you make everything okay okay okay~
My mind became blank and all I could feel and think of is her.
~okay okay okay~
We just continued with the kiss like we would die if we stopped.
~We are one and the same. oh you take all of the pain away away away~
We did not think or do anything else. We just kissed.
~away away away~
~Save me if i become~
~my demons~

Author's Note

Hello this is a new chapter and now it might take longer time to publish more but I am doing my best.
Tell me what you think about this chapter and ask away if there is something you don't understand.
Next is a crossover with somepony so keep watch for the next chapter.
May the speed force be with you.

Sorry.

Hello everypony, it's me Star Cloud and I am ending this now.:fluttershysad:
Why am I ending it now, well I can never find the muse I have lost and I will stop writhing.
You might see me return in the future but stop folowing this fic now and live on.
I am sorry.
May the speed force be with you.