Deathcloak

by thecanadianwraith

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Romance, Mystery, Adventure
Length: 1340

this is my first story ever...of all time. this is a story about my OC deathcloak he was human, but celestia turned him into a pony on earth he was a meta human with wings

this story take's place after season 5, this story is about a man turned pony, the mass murderer deathcloake, he was finally caught after killing 100,000 people, but it was not his fault and now he will repent for his sins and be banished to an unknown world in an unknown universe randomly, and his new jail is ……………….. Equestria. dun dun duuun!!!!!!!!!. I hope you like my story it is the first of probably not many.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2017-01-01 05:03:55 UTC

Chapter 1

A portal opened up above canterlot castle swirling with energy drawing the attention of many ponys even the princess's and mane six plus spike and discord, the portal suddenly spiked with energy and closed its self after droping a screaming object through the roof of the castle, the object landed in the throne room infront of everypony they all gasped in surprise as it got up with a groan of pain. All of the guards surrounded the creature with a whole armory of weapons, said creature looked up from under its black hood its red eyes scaning the area it sat down with caution shaking in fear of the unknown fluttershy of the mane six walked up to it and hugged  it slightly trying to calm it down saying everything will be ok, princess celestia called off her guards and aproched the strange creature and said who and what are you?, I'm deathcloak a meta human from earth , who are you?, everypony was surprised that this thing could talk, so they all backed up exept for fluttershy whom only hugged it tighter .                                                                                                                                               when princess celestia saw this she smiled and thought up a plan but first had to know something, how did you get here, she asked, I don't know, replied death cloak, now was time for her plan, would you like to stay here until we find a way to send you back ?, deathcloak  stood up, he was an inch taller than celestia and had big white wings of an angel hidden under his cloak, he also had short white hair and slightly pale skin, what's the catch? said deathcloak, I am going to tern you into a pony, said the princess of the sun, deathcloak's eyes went wide, and he said, no no no no no no, as he steped back into a piller behind him, why not?, or would you like to be treated as a pet, said celestia, ok when you say it like that being a pony doesn't sound so bad, deathcloak said, so is that a yes? asked celestia, fine replied deathcloak with a groan.

chapter 2

an hour ago the sun princess turned me into a pony, it was not fun... at all, it hurt like a bitch, but now I'm an inch and a half shorter than I was before sun ass turned me into a god damned Pegasus for god sakes, but guess I can still fly, so that's good to know maybe ill make some friends along the way, I need to find a bar though, a bar with karaoke and jack Daniel's whiskey were I can sing all the tom jones and blue swede music I know and love, but these mane six pony's don't like me very much except for that one fluttershy pony that hugged me, the monster that fell out of the sky crashed through the solid gold roof and cracked the solid granite floor and got up without a scratch, the very same monster that killed millions of people without single sign of god damned mercy before being shoved through the banishment portal and landed here, a tear roled down my silver furred cheek before I was snapped out of my trance by a yellow hoof placed on my shoulder. I looked down to see fluttershy sitting beside me in the train car on the way to ponyville the town I will be staying in until they fined a way to send me back to my god forsaken hell hole of a home. Are you ok?, asked fluttershy, no...no I'm not, I said in low sad voice, what's wrong?, she asked, I...don't want to talk about it, I replied in a gruff voice, ok then, fluttershy said sadly, I could see the small frown on her face, and it almost broke my hart to se her as sad as she was key word being almost ive seen the tear stained faces of many people in my time as a killer for hire, there blood ran cold on my hands, I started to cry again but this time it was twilight who broke me out of my trance, were almost there girls, she announced, my red eyes scaned outside the window, ponyville looked peacefull enough, there were a lot of ponys in this little town, soon the train stoped at the station and everypony got there stuff and got off the train, ok lets head to the castle so we can do something about him, twilight said directing attention to me as she said that last part, its gonna be one of those days isn't it ?, I thought.

chapter 3

We walked through town and everywhere I looked ponys of all different shapes and sizes smiled and waved at me, and for a moment It filled my heart with some sort of new emotion I've never felt before, it makes me feel warm, and want to smile,.......... it's disgusting. After 10 minutes of walking we found princess twilights castle, I was the last to enter the building, and everypony (plus dragon and spirit of chaos) were looking at me, the silence was cold and quiet, I had to say something, so I did, so... what do we do now?, I said in my deep cold voice that reminded me of sweet tooth from twisted metal, well first we need to figure out a name for you, answered twilight, why, I questioned, well its a little... how do I put this... its kind of scary, replied apple jack, thank you kindly, I said with a smile, well in any case we need to find you a new name, said rainbow dash, I've had many names before maybe one of those could work, I said, ok well what have ponys called you in the past?, asked twilight, well if you must know then I shale tell you lets start from the top, first off is wrath Voorhees the name my parents gave me, the angel of death, road rage, the hunter of legend, speed demon, the spirit of vengeance, and last but not least,........deathcloak, I said, how about speed demon, suggested rarity, yeah that sounds awesome, yelled rainbow, I guess your new name is speed demon, but we still need to figure out who you will be staying with, okay speed demon?, said twilight, do you have a personality test I could take to decide who I will live with?, I said, THATS A GREAT IDEA SPEEDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, said an energetic pinkie pie. And so twilight wrote out test to decide who I relate to the most, said test was pretty simple. Q1 do you prefer tea or coffee, (tea.) Q2 name your three favorite kinds of music, (classical, blues, rock & roll.) Q3 what are your main hobbies, (singing, reading, flying.) Q4 what's your favorite animal, (cat.)

Q5 what is your favorite song, (careless whisper.) Q6 what's your favorite book (splinter cell.) And that was the easiest test I've ever taken in my whole life, so who will I be staying with?, I asked twilight, well it looks like you will be staying with fluttershy, answered twilight, okay if you say so princess twilight, I said with a bow, you do not have to be so formal with me, twilight said in a small chuckle. And after everypony else was informed, me and fluttershy walked to her house by the everfree, on the way I stretched out my wings and some birds landed on my feather's, that same weird emotion I felt when we were walking through town, it still disgusted me, but it overwhelmed me and for the first time since the day I was born I smiled my first genuine smile, within ten minutes we got to fluttershy's home, well this is where you'll be staying, fluttershy said just above a whisper, okay, I said, we walked inside, the place was nice, it looked quiet and warm, I took in the sent of fresh pine, tomorrow was another day.