is it a creepypasta or something else?

by Ammozilla

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, Tragedy, Scootaloo, Adventure, Crossover, Human, Doctor Whooves, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash
Length: 1489

I think it is safe to say when I was thrown into a world that I thought was all rainbows and sunshine it would be fun. Oh how wrong I was

Hey im Jay Goodwin I used to be that normal teenager in the back of class that no one cares about But one day i Don't know what happened but I got a chance for something more
(first story so give me criticism just not toxic)

Published 2017-01-07 13:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-01-07 13:50:01 UTC

turning time?

Darkness.

That's all I could see,I couldn't feel anything,much less move.

"Am I dead?" I sead

"you aren't Jay, but that all depends on your answer to a particular question." A voice very familiar to me but I can't put my finger on it.

"Who was that. SHOW YOURSELF"

"Very well"

With that sead a strange horse appeared out of nowhere next to my head so I could only get his facial features. He or she had massive cobalt eyes that had a bored look to them, a grayish amber coat and a messy dark gamboge mane.

"Hello I am Time Turner or as you humans refer to me as Doctor Who I don't have much time so im going to get down to the point. I need your help with correcting the timeline so the world I am currently residing in doesn't cease to exist. I am going to send you back before 'it' happens"

"Wait hold up your world is Equestria correct?" He nods "and need me to go correct your timeline?" he again nods

"What is the 'it' that got the world destroyed in the first place?" i asked

"I am going to have to give you the small version. Basically Rainbow Dash that is in my world is the creepypasta 'rainbow factory'and she went mad with power. She was so powerful even the princesses couldn't stop her."

"What do you expect me to do then!?If the princesses failed what do you expect me to do? I am only 1 human you need a full on armada to stop her." As i was talking Turner looked like he was pressing something, I know this because every time he puts his hoof down a beep like noise would sound off. Finally when he was done with that he started backing up.

"Well that may be true, But sometimes to sooth a nightmare you must be a nightmare."

"What do you mean by-" I couldn't say anything else because I fell into unconsciousness.

nightmare in wonderland

I woke up with pain everywhere.I try moving but can't for the life of me I feel stiff, as if you squeeze between two metal walls.I hear nature,turning gears, and a low humming sound? what the hell? am I at grandma's? I try my eyes next, but immediately shut them. Too bright for grandmas, I try again and all I see is blue.

"Ok when i see the doctor he is dead"I sead in a rather dark voice

What the fuck did the doctor do to me? I try moving again and finally make progress but what scared me was that I can't feel my right hand, but I can feel the everything else. I started making sure I can move everything, but every time I move something it makes a strange sound a robot would make (like those Chucky cheese robots) which made me confused as to what it would be. Seems like everything worked except for my right hand.

I go to sit up it's hard without my right hand responding but I did it, but I wish I hadn't as soon as I got up I see red all over my body and some lighter red on my stomach or whats left of it. I have what looks like pure medal legs and arms just with red coverings. I look to where my limbs connect I see wires TONS of wires like my veins where replaces with them. Thanks to the hole in my stomach I see metal and wires everywhere. when I look at my right hand I found out why I couldn't feel my hand. I see a hook instead of a hand,but when i look at my left hand and see 4 fingers including thumb it is a metal hand with large ass claws. Same goes for my feet.

By this point I was hyperventilating, but what happened next was worse. I looked directly down and see what looks like a muzzle but half of it looks like it was ripped off underneath that looks like a metal frame with a black nose at the end. Alright lets think,metal and wires everywhere, red and bright red coverings that are ripped to shreds and a torn red muzzle." Either I am a robot or I'm insane I think in between I looked around to see tree's, but looks familiar to the everfree from my little pony friendship is magic,'i guess the doctor wasn't lying about bringing me to equestria.

I see a puddle nearby and try to stand, but my legs won't budge, so I crawled to the puddle and what I saw made me want to scream (yes like a little girl), celebrate and faint at the same time. I was nightmare foxy from five nights at freddy's 4!'is this what the Doctor meant by a nightmare?' I had golden yellow eyes, sharp ass teeth and two fox ears that are standing on end, what surprised me was that when I was looking at myself I see a big battery icon saying WARNING LOW BATTERY AT 20 % Entering nature charge. When all of a sudden I black out.The last thing I see is a cerulean blue and some kind of rainbow.

Author's Note

If you are looking for 1k word chapters regularly then think again I shall put up short and sweet chapter every so often, I might even do a long (1k-2k word) chapters. well now i am up for suggestions of ideas of chapters i may feature you OC's if given. Also the reason i am asking this of you guys is to keep the story going and also i am going to be offline for a long while, so please give me some ideas of where you want this story to go thank you :pinkiehappy:

how about some back story?

POV: Jay

Here I'm sitting in my room listening to my mother and father fighting for the 3rd time today. first it was money, second was about me, i don't know about this time and honestly i don't care. You know that saying 'you argue like a married couple' I know where it came from, my parents.

Oh uh forgot to introduce myself i'm Jay Goodwin, i'm 15 years old , 5'9", dark brown hair, blue eyes, yellow tank top, black pant, black slide on shoes, and glasses. I am not much to look at other than that guy that sits in the back of the class where everyone doesn't give a flying fuck what happens to you. from when i was born to 7 me and my parents were happy i would go outside to play with the dog or play with friends, but when it was my seventh birthday i was out side when out of nowhere my mother comes running out saying

"FOLLOW ME"while grabbing me in the process of running, not 5 seconds later my dad comes running out and jumps in the truck and gives chase, soon we were at the door of the neighbor. when we were let in, my mom goes for the phone when dad rolls up with a metal baseball bat. We were lucky there was a police car down the street and when dad came in he swung and hit my mother. I was paralyzed i couldn't move he kept beating her and beating her in front of my eyes. The police finally came and dragged him to jail. I was scarred that day, my mother went to the hospital with 4 broken ribs, a cracked skull, and a fractured leg.

Now let's continue, I was sitting down on my bed waiting for my parents to stop arguing. That was until I heard the screeching of tires coming from the front yard.Usually he only leaves if he is pissed or he is going to work and i have a feeling i know which option that is. So I ran to my window to see my fathers car driving down the road hitting a stray dog along the way(bastard). So I went to check on my mother and i see her on the couch, but i heard nothing coming from her, usually i would hear crying.

"Mom?..."

silence....

"you ok mom?"slightly frightened

I ran over to her and all I see is a butter knife in the side of her neck.

"That Son of a Bitch!"I was in between rage and breaking down crying

I went to the home phone and called 911

"911 what is your emergency?"

"Get an ambulance quick my mother just got killed"

"Alright calm down tell me your address and the ambulence will be there." i tell her my address "alright we shall be there in 10 minutes

"thank you" as I put the phone down I heard a gun shot go off right before I met with the laminate flooring.