LOCATION: 28937.489902 MILES ABOVE SEA LEVEL
DATE: JANUARY SEVENTH 12508AD
STATUS: CRITICAL ERROR: MAIN THRUSTER DAMAGE
DEFROSTING TECHNICIAN: ERROR: COMMAND CANNOT BE EXECUTED
DEFROSTING TERRESTRIAL LIFE SUPPORT EVALUATION TEAM: COMPLETED
INITIATE EMERGENCY START-UP SEQUENCE: COMPLETED
BEGIN LANDING PREPARATIONS...

You have awakened...

Your name is peter, a human in a colony of five thousand. You had struggled to survive for millennia, frozen in place, waiting for your damaged computer to wake you. now is your time to reclaim the land you lost. There is only one problem, the natives fear you.

I require a skilled writer to rewrite this story, I will give a link to your profile. Comment/PM to apply.