Evening Picnic

by sparks117

Rating: mature
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Soarin, Comedy, Romance, Sex, Slice of Life, Thunderlane
Length: 2610

Thunderlane and Soarin have a picnic planed right after work, and the lovers plan to use all the time they can get.

Thunderlane and Soarin loved to be together, but sadly could only do so on the weekends with some exceptions. But this weekend they planned a little picnic date right after work, hoping to find a secluded area to express there love, but little did they realize there spot would be home to a very silent and slippery plant.

First time with M/m and tentacles, Also cover art is a cropped image from, hoverrover. I can not link him due to his NSFW'ness.

Also to thoughs that don't like Tentacles, don't worry, they are Purely in Chapter 2.

Contains:
Chapter One: Swimming, M/M, Horny stallions, Rimming, Frotting, Anal (obviously), half a underwater blowjob, Angry spitfire, Jump-scare (Not really).
Chapter Two: M/M, Anal, (Obviously), Tentacles, Sounding (Nothing big), Deepthroat.

Published 2017-01-21 13:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-01-21 13:50:01 UTC

Chapter One

Thunderlane burst out of the doors of the cloud factory in cloudsdale, and quickly took off into the sky and strait home with speed that could match a wonderbolt. He smiled a little to himself as the wind flew past him, between his mane, his tail and his legs. Loving the feel of the air hitting his wings and his feathers curving the air down to give him lift and glide towards ponyville with the occasional flap of his wings to keep his speed up.

As he few he thought about Soarin and the picnic, it was Thunders idea to do it in the first place but Soarin loved the idea that he declared they do it as soon as they get off of work, or in Soarin’s case, got done training. So Thunderlane was pumped.

“WHAT IS YOUR DEAL SOARIN!?” Spitfire yelled at the top of her lungs, Soarin stood still in front of her desk, staring out the window behind her to nothing in particular. “You’ve been wobbly all day, out of position, out of sync, AND now you’ve spun out into one of my wonderbolts and hurt the both of you!?”

If it wasn't for the constant yelling from his superior officer, as wonderbolt ranks went, he would have drifted back into his day dreaming of Thunderlane. “I… I’ve uh… been distracted..”

Spitfire raised an unimpressed brow.

“Right.. Sorry, i have plans for later today with my coltfriend ma’am.. So i’ve been day dreaming..” He said, still staring stoically out the window. But it made him nervous when Spitfire didn’t say anything.

“...”

“You mean you’ve caused all this trouble because your head has been in LALA land this whole day!?” Spitfire yelled. He gave a meek nod. She sighed. “You're not going to learn anything today aren't you?”

His eyes widened slightly, ‘This was a trick question wasn't it..?’ he mulled over the thoughts for a moment. “S-sorry.. But no..” His heart stopped. Her eyes squinted at him, making him shrink.

She then groaned and leaned back. “Fine, go.” Soarin’s ears perked up.

“Really?”

“Yeah.. you’re not going to learn anything today.” She gave a friendly smile as she leaned forward again. Then stamped her hooves on her desk as she got up. “But im whipping your lazy ass back into shape tomorrow! Your weekend has been cut in half”

“Yes ma'am!” He gave a salute and started out the door before pausing and smiling over his shoulder to her. “Thanks Spits.” He smirked. Spitfire got up quickly and threatening, making her desk shake with the force and was going to run around her desk, but Soarin was long gone by the time she made her way to the side of it.

“Told him not to call me that..” She grumbled to herself as she sat down and shook her head with a small smirk.

Soarin made his way to Thunderlane's house in ponyville quickly, his wing from his mistake hurt a little, but both him and fleetfoot would be just fine.

Thunderlane checked his picnic basket for the 5th time, making nothing changed in it. “Sandwiches, juice, crackers, cheese, lube-”

“I see what’s on your mind~” Soarin Spoke right next to his ear.

“GAHH!” Thunderlane Jumped, almost hitting the ceiling with the flap from it wings. He landed safely and put a hoof to his chest and panted lightly, his fur on his cheeks and chest poofed out from the scare. Soarin sat with a amused smile. Lane tried to glare at Soarin, but he looked more like an upset colt with his puffed fur at the moment which made Soarin smirk and chuckle, walking over and brushed Thunderlane’s cheeks to flatten out his fluff again.

It was then Thunder realized his fur, blushing and patting down his chest. “Sorry about that.” Soarin chuckled at Thunders small huff of a response.

“What did you say anyways?” The dark pegasus asked.

“I said; I see what’s on your mind~, when i saw the lube.” Soar smirked.

Thunderlane chuckled and kissed his coltfriend softly. “Please, if i left you to pack there would only be lube in there.. Besides, how did you get in here without making sound?” Thunder asked and pointed at the closed door next to the kitchen they were in.

“You left the window in your room open.” Soarin smirked. Thunderlane looked down the hall and sighed in remembrance. The wonderbolt then kissed Lane’s cheek. “Thanks for taking care of it~”

Thunder’s smile grew and all his small bit of hatred melted away for the lean stallion before him. “No problem Soar~”

“Ready to go then?” Soarin asked as he picked up the basket. Thunderlane nodded, but first went around his house and sealed up the windows, then they walked out and locked up before taking off and heading towards Whitetail Woods to find a nice area to be that was hopefully secluded.

Along their flight they teased each other, from showing off their flying skills to each other, to having Soarin tease Thunder’s pouch that was not hidden by his tail while flying. Causing the charcoal brown pegasus to get half a hard on during the flight, Thunder would normally complain but they were over a forest with nothing in it besides animals, or a lucky, or unlucky depending, hiker or two. Thunder wasn't a Prude.

Soarin however, was a troublemaker when it came to such things, like the time he gave Lane and himself a boner in a restaurant, Thunder was happy that there was a long covering over the corner table.

It was a short couple minutes later when Thunderlane pointed out a simi large creek. They landed by it and started to walk along it, looking for a grassy area near the water. Once finding one that had a tree hanging above, Soarin placed the basket down. “Perfect~”

Thunderlane started digging through the basket and setting out a large towel to lay on and the few snacks he brought. Soarin meanwhile walked over to the creek and took a taste test since the water was very clear, it was also flowing at a decent rate, making gentle noise along the bank of mostly rocks. The water was nice and cool so Soar dipped his hoof in and brushed it on his forehead, smiling as he ran his hoof back the rest of the way down his mane.

Thunderlane walked up. “How’s the water?”

“Tastes great, and it’s not freezing” He got another drink and thunder followed. Smirking soarin then used his wing to push Thunderlane in, giving a “Ha!” but Thunderlane must have had the same idea cause on his way down he grabbed Soarin in his wing. Turning Soarin’s victory laugh into a scream.

They both submerged in the surprisingly deep water, quickly Surfacing after and chuckling and sitting down. When sitting in the water next to the edge, the water was above their shoulders.

Soarin smiled and scooted over to Thunderlane and moved in front of him, gently taking his coltfriend’s hoof and moving it to his own hard length under the water as he got up close to thunder. Thunderlane blushed as he felt the slightly fatter than average cock, smiling as he moved his other hoof over and started to slowly stroke Soarin off, who moaned gently at the feeling of the hooves and the water rushing past his length and sack.

Thunderlane’s own shaft started to grow in the water, thanks to Soarin’s hooves on his ballsack. Once the dark grey pegasus was at full length Soarin scoot even closer, making their warm members rub in the cool water. Thunderlane’s meat was easily bigger, but only by two inches, Soarin’s throbbing meat being eleven inches. Soarin leaned in and pressed his lips against his coltfriend’s open lips.

Lane blushed and wrapped a hoof around his colts neck, his other hoof helped stroke their members together, the long bulge up the underside of each pressing and rubbing together. They both moaned lustfully as Soarin’s tongue slipped into Thunderlane's mouth, swapping his saliva with his partner. Tho as soon as Soarin started the kiss, he ended it, pulling away a little and smirking as he looked down, then took a deep breath before diving under. Thunder looked down, a small idea in his head of what he was doing but he wasn't sure... Nevermind he was sure what he was doing.

Thunder moaned arched his hips forward a little as he felt his stallion’s mouth wrap around his cock head. Smirking and placing his hooves on Soarin’s head as the stallion sunk more of the long meat into his muzzle, suckling gently on it as his tongue worked circles around the length.

Soarin gave a little moan as he felt his muzzle full of the length, the head of thunder’s shaft waiting at the entrance to Soarin’s throat. But Soarin pulled away slowly, licking and sucking as he moved, making his coltfriend shudder and shift. Then repeating the action again and again tell Thunderlane gave a small whimper and pulled the Soarin’s head down gently.

Soarin got the message and slipped the rod to his throat, then swallowed as he pressed his muzzle down and making the long cock slide into his throat. Soarin could hear his partner give a grateful groan through the water and kept sinking the rod into his neck.

Thunderlane loved the feeling of the pegasus’s throat below him and how talented he was with it. Moving his hooves from the back of Soarin’s head to his neck, feeling up the fur under the water and the small bulge in the stallion’s neck as Soarin slid the shaft farther into his mouth. Thunderlane finally hilted into the stallions throat and laid back against the rocky walls of the creek as he let out a gentle moan. Soarin then started to pull back, sucking along the length as he pulled away. But once the cock head was free of his throat, he instinctively took a break in through it nose making water rush up his nostrils. He panicked a bit and backed away quickly bringing his head above the water with a loud gasp, coughing and rubbing his nose.

“Okay.. underwater blowjob is a bad idea..” Soarin said as he chuckled and looked to Thunderlane. Thunder chuckled after Soarin explained what happened.

“Back onto land then?” Thunder asked, standing up and turning around to climb up the small cliff, shaking his rump at Soarin and making the Wonderbolt blush with a smirk.

Soarin grabbed his hind legs and letting Lane’s chest drop to the dirt, his back legs still over the edge of creek side, lying as if his chest was on a bed with his hind legs still over the edge. The dark grey pegasus turned to complained, but his words died in his mouth as Soarin’s lips pressed up against his taint, making the wheather pony shudder and melt.

Soarin licked down said taint to the black sack in front of him, only giving them some teasing kisses and suckles. He instead moved his nose back up between the two lean plot cheeks tell his tongue dragged along the stallion entrance and gently prodded the little dip beneath the tail, smiling at the taste of creek water.

Thunderlane groaned and smiled as Soarin kept working back there, looking to the trees in front of him as he felt the tongue wander and prod. Soarin playing with is dock, taint and cheeks before Thunderlane gave a needy groan. Soarin got the message and lathered up the back door a little more before pressing and slipping his tongue in, giving a small smile at the grateful moan from in front. Squirming and thrusting the little muscle against the rim of the stallion.

Soon Soarin got needy and stopped, climbing up out of the creek above Thunderlane, grabbing his lover under his pits and flying forward tell they were on the grass again before laying the grey pegasus back down, still on his belly. Soarin still stood above him, leaning his chest down and nibbling the stallion’s neck as his hips lowered and pressed the head of his eager length against the pucker of his lovers. Thunderlane smiled and relaxed as he spread his legs a little. Soarin pressed against him as he relaxed, gently spreading and spearing the willing anus as the tip slipped in, making Thunderlane bite his lip at the mostly non lubed cock being pushed into him. Too late for lube Thunder thought.

Soarin smiled as he pushed more and more into the willing colt, the pushing getting easier as Lane moaned and relaxed more, then gave a little whimper of pleasure as he felt Soarin press his hips against his rump. Thunderlane smiled and shuddered at the full feeling within his backside, his walls gripping and squeezing Soarin’s cock, milking it.

Thunder gave a dissatisfied whimper as his partner pulled his hard length from his tailhole, then moaned lovingly as Soarin pushed it back in smoothly, already feeling like it had been lubed from the start.

“Ooohh Soarin~” Thunder said huskily as he was hilted in again, feeling the balls of his coltfriend rest against his taint slightly above the submissive stallions own sack. Soarin started a gentle thrusting rhythm, loving the feeling of the needy asshole he was plowing and stretching. It didn’t take long for Soarin to ramp it up, starting to rut the stallion under him and making Lane moan more as pre dripped into his system as he thrust faster.

Thunderlane moaned at the grass below him, his cock throbbing against his belly and the grass with each thrust into him. Thunderlane felt the light pegasus bite his ear and pull gently as he felt him give a firm push of his hips. Lane gave a slightly high moan and arched his back, panting heavier.

“You’re so tight Thunderlane~” Soarin said right into his ear, keeping his voice low and husky as he panted.

“Aaahh~ F-fuck me Soarin~” The stallion above complied and started thrusting harder and faster, making Thunder’s body rock a bit and wet slaps come from Soarin’s hips slapping into the stallions rump and Soar’s balls slapping the lower stallion’s taint.

Soarin kept at it for a few minutes longer, showing his stallion who was in charge right now and Thunderlane was loving it. The dark stallion moaning more and more before finally cumming, arching his back as he did and lifting his rump for Soarin. Thunderlane’s shaft flexed, shooting the cum against his belly and traveling down into the grass, pooling just below him. Soarin up top moaned and had a hard time thrusting and holding back his orgasim as his partner came, making his tailhole clench and pull.

Soarin couldn’t hold it back and came into the pegasus’s behind, his cock throbbing and shooting long ropes of warm cum into the stallions tunnel and stuffing the panting stallion’s insides.

A few moments pass as they catch their breath, lying and panting in a puddle of pleasure. But was disturbed when Soarin got up and pulled out of Thunder, making the stallion under groan from slight pleasure and displeasure.

Soarin then smiled and walked around in front of Thunderlane, sitting down with spread legs, laying his wet and white stained cock on Thunder’s muzzle. “Wanna clean it up for more~?”

Thunderlane smirked.

Author's Note

There wasn't as much sex in this Chapter as i was hoping, but i don't like to make chapters lengthy, Sooo.. There will be a bonus chapter with pure Stallion lovin.