Fluttershy Confesses

by Haycray

Rating: everyone
Tags: Twilight Sparkle, Slice of Life, Applejack, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Spike, Romance, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie
Length: 1974

Applejack and Fluttershy planned a picnic at 3:00 at the park, and Fluttershy thinks it is a great time to tell Aj how she really feels about her.

Fluttershy loves Applejack. But, she can't say it to AJ. So when she remembers the picnic she and Applejack are having at the park, she thinks it is the best place to tell AJ how she feels about her. But Fluttershy fails to say it. The next day she goes to Sweet Apple Acres and finally confesses her feelings.

*NOT my cover art*

Published 2017-02-21 00:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-02-21 00:10:01 UTC

The Picnic

Author's Note

Before you read this story, I just want you to know that this is my very first fic iv'e ever done! It was fun to write this but it took a long time to do it you know, with school and all. But it was all worth it! I know it won't be good but i'll keep practicing on my fics. Hope you all like it (clearly you won't like it at all)

ENJOY IT HOPEFULLY!

The Picnic

One bright beautiful morning, lies a yellow body and pinked maned pegasus in bed. Her name was Fluttershy. And her special talent was taking care of animals and woodland creatures. She woke up in her room ready to feed all the hungry animals waiting for her. She lived on top of a mountain in a small cottage, She was comfortable with her cottage even though it was a little small to be taking care of tons of critters.

She got up and flew down stairs to feed all of her hungry little friends. Though she all loved her animals equally, but her favorite one was Angel bunny. He was mean at times but was then nice to his owner. "You all look so very hungry today. I better get started feeding you all." Fluttershy said. It usually takes her an hour to get every animal fed, but today it only took her a half an hour. She thought it was because she was so excited to go on that picnic Applejack and Fluttershy planned for today. Fluttershy was deeply in love with her friend Applejack. She fell in love with her the moment she saw her.

Fluttershy is planning to confess her feelings to AJ at the picnic. She doesn't know if she should wait, or do it today. She thinks for a bit and decides to confess today. Applejack and Fluttershy decided to meet at the park at 3:00 PM.

When 2:30 came, Fluttershy started to gather some plates, silverware, and a blanket to lay on. Applejack was the one bringing the food. She headed out of the cottage and left for the park. Once she got there, she saw AJ sitting on a bench waiting for Fluttershy. Once they both looked at each other, they ran towards each other and went into a hug.

"I'm so glad you could make it Fluttershy!"

"I'm so glad you could make it AJ!" Both of them said at the exact same time. They both had a light blush on their faces, but it went away as they both realized they were blushing.

"So... were should we sit?" Fluttershy asked as she pulled the blanket out of her basket.

"I was think'in over there?" Applejack pointed to a spot under a tree with flowers on it.

"Oh... that looks PERFECT!" Fluttershy said loud enough that ponies near by could hear it, they looked at her as she calmed down with a blush on her face. "Sorry." She said to the other ponies as they carried on with their day.

"Alrighty then... over there it is!" Applejack said signaling Fluttershy to come with her.

After setting up their spot, Fluttershy couldn't stop looking at AJ every so often. Before they even set up their picnic, Fluttershy told AJ that she had something special to tell her, but she would have to wait till the end of the picnic to hear it. "There is no turning back now." Fluttershy thought to herself as she set up the rest of the silverware.

Once they finished setting up, Applejack pulled out the lunch she had brought for her and Fluttershy. She brought some vegetarian soup for Fluttershy and she brought some tomato soup for herself. A few months ago, Fluttershy made AJ try a vegetable. She thought AJ would like a tomato... and she did like it! So that's why Applejack brought tomato soup for herself.

Applejack said that she had brought desert for both of them. She brought Fluttershy's favorite, Granny Smiths famous apple pie! When Fluttershy saw how delicious it looked she started to drool.

They ate their apple pie and talked for a while until AJ said, "So... what was the thing you were wanting to talk to me about?" "Oh um, I actually... um... got a new baby bunny! She is really cute and her name is Flossie!"

"Oh that's GREAT news Fluttershy! I bet she is really cute! I'll have to meet her sometime!" AJ said happily. Applejack loves it when Fluttershy gets new pets.

"She is really cute." Fluttershy said in a soft (kind of happy) voice.

Fluttershy was supposed to tell AJ her feelings, but instead she told her about her new baby bunny "Flossie!" She was very angry at herself for not telling AJ the truth. She just wanted to hurt herself. Fluttershy still had too keep her angriness on the inside of her and keep her happiness on the outside.

Once the picnic was over, Fluttershy told Applejack that she would walk with her to her home, Sweet Apple Acres. Flutters dropped Applejack off and started for her house. When she got home to her animals, she fed all of them and went strait to bed.
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To Be Continued

Fluttershy's New Marefriend

The next day, Fluttershy woke up to Celestia's bright sun. She got up to feed all of her animals. As always, it took her an hour to feed all of them. She took a little slower than usual. It's because she had been crying while she slept. She was sad of what happened at the picnic. She really wanted to tell AJ how she truly felt about her, but, that never happened so, she cried in her sleep.

Once she was done feeding all of her animals, she took a shower to get all the animal smell off of her. She finished her shower and grabbed her saddlebags and left for Twilight's castle.

Fluttershy was going to Twilight for a book. The book of, What To Tell A Pony You Love. As she trotted through Ponyville. She saw Applejack and Rarity heading to the spa. "Oh that's right, It's Applejack and Rarity's spa day. But I can't let them see me." Fluttershy thought as she carried on towards Twilight's castle. Luckily Applejack and Rarity didn't see her.

Once Fluttershy was at Twilight's front steps, she took a deep breath and knocked. Standing in the door way was Spike.

"Oh, hey Spike! Is Twilight here?"

"Hey Fluttershy, yeah she's here. What do you need?"

"I need to borrow a book."

"Oh Okay! Come on in!"

"Thank you Spike!"

"Your welcome!" Spike said as Fluttershy ran off to the library.

Fluttershy was eager to borrow that book from Twilight, She was running through the halls REALLY fast! Fluttershy was running so fast that she passed the library doors. She managed to stop herself and walk to the doors that was holding that book she REALLY needed! She opened the doors to see Twilight reading a book. (As usual) Twilight stopped reading to see who had interupted her.

"Oh hey Fluttershy! What brings you here?"

"Hey Twilight, um... I need to borrow a book if that's Okay with you?"

"Of course you can borrow a book Fluttershy! Tell me what book you need and i'll get it."

"I need "What To Tell A Pony You Love." Fluttershy said SUPER happy! "Don't ask why."

"Um..... Okay." Twilight said using her magic to take the book. "Here you go Flutters."

"Thank you Twilight!" Fluttershy then ran out of the library.

"I wonder who Fluttershy loves? mmmm..... Oh well. I'll just get back too work." Twilight said as she grabbed the book she was reading before Fluttershy interupted her.

Once Fluttershy got back to her cottage, she sat down and started to read the beginning.

Several hours have passed, and Fluttershy has been practicing the words she is suppose to say to AJ. She decided she will finally go to Sweet Apple Acres and FINALLY tell her her feelings. Fluttershy looked at the time and it was 9:30. It was passed her bedtime so she went up to bed to prepare her energy to tell AJ her feelings.

The next morning, Fluttershy got out of bed, took a shower, fed all of her animals, and left for Sweet Apple Acres. As she was trotting through ponyville, she heard the one voice she did NOT want to hear. . . Pinkie Pie.

"Hey Fluttershy! What are you up to!
"Hi Pinkie. I'm on my too Sweet Apple Acres, too. . . Uh" Fluttershy paused, then spoke again "Buy some . . . APPLES! Yes buy some apples from Applejack!"
Pinkie stared at Fluttershy confused. But then smiled "Okie dokie then!"Pinkie said then bounced back to Sugercube Corner.
Fluttershy took a deep sigh then started heading back to Sweet Apple Acres.

Fluttershy walked up to the sign that said Sweet Apple Acres. It took a couple more steps to get to the home of the apple family. Once she did get to the home she knocked on the door. . . waited. . . then the barn door opened to reveal Applejack.

"Howdy there Fluttershy!"
"H...hi Ap... Applejack."
"Are you OK?"
"I am sorry I just... I need to tell you something important."
"Um. . . OK, come inside and tell me
"OK. Thanks.

Fluttershy came in and sat down in the living room with Applejack. She took a deep breath and spoke.

"Applejack, you have been such a great friend to me and to the rest of our friends, but every time you help me with my animals or help me with whatever I need help with, I can't stop thinking of how beautiful you are. I dream about you, and I think about you every day. I want to be with you, I want to be apart of your life! I. . . I love you Applejack. I love you so darn much!" Fluttershy finished and looked over to Applejack who was blushing lightly.

"I. . . I can't believe this right now. Do you really think i'm beautiful?"
"Yes AJ. I really do think you're beautiful."
"Well. . . thank you for the compliment. And actually, I have something to tell you as well."
"Oh . . . what is it AJ.
"I. . . I love you as well. I have loved you for awhile now but I haven't had the nerve to tell you. And I also think you're REALLY beautiful." This time, it was Fluttershy's turn to blush.

"T. . . thank you Applejack. But wait. . . YOU LOVE ME TOO!"
"Um. . . yes. Didn't I just say that."
"Omygoshomygoshomygoshomygosh." Fluttershy said like Rainbow Dash. "YOU LOVE ME TOO! THIS IS SO AMAZING!"

Applejack started to laugh a little bit at this, but all of a sudden, a pair of lips was touching hers. Fluttershy was giving AJ a kiss, a very nice kiss, a very gentle kiss. AJ was wide eyed looking at her friend, but she closed her eyes, and kissed Fluttershy back.

Once they separated, Fluttershy was the first one to speak up.

"Wow AJ. . . I can't believe you love me too! It's like a dream come true!"
"And I can't believe you love me! It's also a dream come true for me!"

They both locked into another kiss, a very nice kiss, a very gentle kiss, a very deep kiss. They were both very excited to start their new life together.

The End

Author's Note

I hope you guys liked this story. If you think It was bad, tell me what I did wrong and I'll fix it. Pinkie Promise.

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