I'm gonna leave a little authors note here, this isn't my first fanfic but it is my first MLP fanfic.. So if it seems a little off, I was EXTREMELY inspired and was all like, "Write write write!" I have tons of ideas, but if I run out i'll leave a note at the end of the chapter. Also, I need all the tips I can get -.- I'm horible and I need to practice literature becuase I suck.. So yeah, Enjoy the story. (I'm anti-social so I don't know how to tell people information.. -_-)
(Gabriella's POV)
"Bella~!"
I sing-songed to my cat as she came over to the couch I sat on,
"Mreow." She replied,
I knew exactly what she wanted so I got up to grab her some milk,
"One precent or Low Fat?" She gave me the 'Are you kidding me right now' look like I was a dumb, probably because I was acting like one,
"O-Okay, one precent it is!" I got her favorite milk bowl and poured her a nice amount, then the most peculiar thing happened.
*THUD*
I nearly flipped over the bowl I just put on the floor,
"What the crap was that!!"
Bella looked at the living room and gave me her best scardey-cat look,
"I'm gonna investigate Bella.." I cautiously looked through the kitchen archway into the living room, where the sound came from.
"Oh my glob."
Then I saw her I started to freak,
"F-Fluttershy?"
She had pale pink hair, extremely tangled and torn, in a simple curl around her battle damaged face. She was wearing a pale yellow dress, flowy and angelic with vines growing along the hem of her skirt and her collar.
She was sprawled over my carpet, her head propped slighty on the couch. I quickly moved her over onto the couch, out of pegasister instincts of course. I didn't want to leave her here so I simply sat next to her on the couch, Bella investigating her..
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(Fluttershy's POV)
"My hooves feel funny... W-wait.. these aren't hooves! W-w-what??"
I nearly reached Rainbow Dash cheering volume as I paniced over my new form.
"Oh, your awake!"
I whipped around to see a red-haired alien sitting next to me. She had blue furs on her flank and red furs on her chest.
"A-alien.."
I whispered and cowered in fear. She had a look of suprise on her face when she realised I don't understand what she is.
"Umm, is your name Fluttershy?" She cautiously asked
"Y-yes, I'm the animal caretaker of Equestria." I whispered and burried my head in my chest.
"Well, I don't understand how you got here but you are a 'Human' now, I'll try to help you with, like, a house to live in until we can figure this out.. I imagine you have questions?"
Why is she so straight-forward? How does she know me? Why am I a 'Huemen' thing!
"C-can I just think for a second.." I murmured..
"Sure! I imagine this is alot to happen in a few hours."
*Flashback Begin*
"Ha-ha puny ponies, you'll never stop me from ruling equestria!"
"N-no, your not alowed.."
"Discord! We won't be 'jerks' if you stop destroying our homes!"
"Y-yeah."
We all kept running, we didn't have a fighting chance. Then I messed it up for everyone. Big time fail.
"Ugh! H-help.."
I wasn't flying fast enough and Discord had caught me by the tail. They all glanced back and winced.. But kept running.
"So, little shy pony.. What element are you?"
"I-i'm not telling you." I whimpered at the scarriness of a big monster face close-up.
"Oh yes you are, or i'll ask your friends after I put your candle out."
I couldn't comprehend anymore.. I simply gave up and cried for my little angel back home.
"Who's the sweetie your crying for? I'll make sure they get 'special treatment'"
It took me a moment but I brought up the courage for a last stand. A lame one at that.
"Your just gonna kill her! You monster!"
*SLICE*
*Flashback End*
"I-I want to know everything you know about these humans..."
"Sure thing! Well- um- we have two legs, used for walking and such......"
To Be Continued, :3
Ending note : I kinda think I should edit it a little more.. Its pretty much my raw idea on paper (Or should I say screen X3) but, I have proof-read it 3 times now and its acceptable..but short because I have NO clue how to extend it without being repetitive or taking a whole week for a chapter, I wanna be consistent :D. Please comment on any mistakes or ideas, I need them.. Please? *Fluttershy Gooby Plz Face*
