The New Flame
Submission
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Sorry this chapter was so late, I haven't been to keen on progression ideas, so PLEASE forgive me if things seem a bit...everywhere!
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Submission
~Somewhere in Equestria~
I just started to wake up, and my head hurt like hell! As I got up from the cold..stone...floor? "Wh-where am I? Wait, where's mom and dad?!" I said scared and confused. "Mom?! Dad?! Anypony?!" I cried out, hoping for answer back...nothing, not a damn sound, the only sound is of my voice echoing off the large stone walls. As I looked around all I see is a dark, dank, and murky cave, no opening just an enclosed cave-like structure. Then I saw four tunnel openings. "Hello?! Anypony in there?" I yelled down them, yet no response.
"Hello, my child, you're finally awake! Your parents aren't here, they are locked away in this cave." said a mysterious voice out of nowhere, yet everywhere.
I looked up, and backed up into the wall. "Who are you? Where are you?" I said frantically, if I can talk to this pony I can probably get out of here. If they can hear me, maybe there are others.
The voice laughed. "You ask to many questions, young princess." The voice said sternly. "You can't see me because my body was destroyed in a terrible accident, you don't mind if I use yours, do you?!" He laughed as he took over my body, all I could do is watch in horror as my spirit was pulled out of my body.
"NO! Get out of my body!" I screamed as I watched the shadow-like spirit take over my body. "Just who do you think you are?! That is MY body!" I cried as I bolted towards my body, but all I saw was a white flash and an empty room. "NO! COME BACK!" I yelled at the top of my lungs....nothing.
~Ponyville~
We ran to the train station and into the train, telling the conductor our destination as we rushed to a seat. "Listen Twilight...I thought that you didn't kill ponies!" I said terrified.
She looked at me with sorrowful eyes. "We do this only in DIRE situations..." She said with a somber, low-tone. She looked down, and closed her eyes. "Why her?!" She screamed with anger and sadness, slamming her hoof down on the hard wood floor of the train, putting a slight dent in it. "Why out of all the ponies in Equestria, why Flurry Heart?! And why Shinning and Cadence?!" she screamed tears pouring down her cheeks.
I have never seen her like this before. In my time of being here, I have NEVER seen her like this! "Twilight, baby, it's okay! We'll get them back, I promise!" I say as I kiss her and look her in the eyes. "I swear on my life that we will get them back...do you trust me?" I ask softly, holding her soft, light hooves.
She looks at me with a twinkle in her eyes, as I wipe her tears away. "Of course I do!" She said with a sniffle, and broken voice. "I will ALWAYS trust you because I love you!" She said as she flung her arms and wings around me in a loving embrace.
I hugged her back, and said "I love you, too!" with a warm smile.
"ATTENTION ALL PASSENGERS, WE WILL BE ARRIVING AT THE CRYSTAL EMPIRE IN 10 MINUTES, THANK YOU." Said a voice on the trains PA system.
"He does know there is only like five ponies on this huge train, right?" I say as she giggles a little.
"Of course, silly! It's just his job to inform anypony that is on the train, even if there's like NOPONY on here!" She said with a giggle.
10 Minutes Later
As we got to the train station, Twilight closes her eyes and activates her magic, and walks in a few directions. "Found her!" She says as she bolts towards the other end of town. I have never seen Twilight run so fast! "Hey! Wait up, Twi!" I said, rushing over to her.
"Sorry, I got...kind of....excited!" She said between breaths. I just smiled and shook my head.
She blushed and said "Okay! Let's keep going thi-" She was cut off.
We heard "Aunt Twilight?!" As we hear this we turn around.
We then see a light pink alicorn with semi-massive wings. "Flurry Heart?!" Twilight gasped as the the light pink alicorn ran towards us.
"Thank goodness I found you! I was stuck in a cave, and my parents are still in there, and I heard this voice...it was so scary!" She cried, shaking in fear.
"It's okay now honey! I'm here, you don't need to be afraid anymore...we'll get Shinning and Cadence out of there, I promise!" Twilight said in a motherly, warm tone. I watched as the light pink pony was crying into Twilight...something seemed...off, WAY off! What is this pony up to, and why does this seem off? I mean it's just Flurry Heart...right?
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