Twisting Yer Innerds

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Rating: mature
Tags: Applejack, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Horror, Slice of Life
Length: 2074

It is like Cupcakes fic but it's Applekacks and my Oc Blood Glitz

Blood Glitz is in the mood for a suimocide. SHe is hot on Apple's trail after she stole from her room. Apple trots until she thinks she is safe but she is not really. Blood Glitz gets her and is ready for some fun/ What will happen? Read to learn more

This is my second Creepa Paste story my other is called Creepy Pasta

Edited by my bpyfriend Marcado Pebe, please subscript to my fimfic channel
Artwork is me I tried three different art styles in it, i know it isn't good but I have no artst to help me. Think of it as mordern art ;D

Published 2017-01-22 21:40:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-01-22 21:40:01 UTC

Blood Bath

Blood Glitz wasn't always a bad guy. She used to be like pastel goth like Melanie Martin. She has pale white furs with a sky blue and black mane, but when she kills someone, she bathes in their blood and it dies her furs red, like a fire of Hell. Blood Glitz old name was Gem Glitz but she isn't like gems she is looks like blood. So she calls herself blood glitz. Her mom mother calls her Goodie Glitz because she was a girl filly in her golden days. Her nickname as a kid was Glitzy because it was cute at the time but now she is Blood Glitz and it is more fitting now. She said her name outloud to herself for reinsurance.... "Blood Glitz"

Apple was a popular girl as a kid, but when she got older she moved away to Ponyville and lived the farm life. She said "yeehaws" a lot and became a rebel. Since they lived the farm life because they were poor, Apple had to steal things to live. Her mom used to do the steals but she got shot in the hood one night and Apple had to take over. Apple was a great stealer but one night, she messed with the wrong womanly pony.

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Apple Hack walke down the Pony streets and it was cold and foggy out. She took a breathe and let it out. The fog that came from her breathe was visible. She looked at it. Apple squished her hoofs in the mud on acident and it made a squish sound. She double-taked and no one heard the squish. She kept walking.

She found her victim's house. The house stood out from the rest becaus it had goth symbols on it. Apple jack dated a goth once, it was hot. She thought maybe if Apple could be a sneak, she could steal some goth merch and food and maybe make a move with the goth pony inside the home. Apple tip-toed over to the big chunky black door. She knocked three times but no one woke up. She knew it was safe to go in.

Apple Jack opened the door slowly and stealthily. She licked its lips thinking about the food she would get. She toed to the kitchen which waas black grey aesthethit. It was rather clean cut corpse for a pony of the goth type. Apple felt the counters. Not a single crum on them. Apple's counters always had some old sandwich crums or cracker cums or even fruit peels left behind. Her family was pumpkin bunkin country so they didn't care where the garbages go. Apple paid a few hundred yen to have counters installed six years ago. The company was Chinese ponies. It was Huángsè Láodòng company. Apple Jack ordered a birch paneling counter top and it had a clean polish finish. She got the Premium Pack whichmade the counter smooth and like glass. Her family got stains on it though and so she gave up on revaping the house.

Apple opened the fridgerator and took out a pine apple slice. She took a bite and the juices drizzles down her horse neck. The taste was good. She put the pineapple in her sack and also put in a few Dr Peepper's and Cokes. Apple grabbed a aluminumim pan with foil over it. The pan was cold so she would have to heat it on up when she got back to the house which is the farm. she peeped inside and saw that it was meats. She thought it was a beef brisket but it was actually just chicken brest with dark grain breading. she would later find that out later.

Apple went up the stairs like a Stairwell in Saratoga (yee-haw, my doggies) and she saw three rooms. One had a red door. She went in there and it was the bathroom. There were a toilet and a tub, which was stained pink. There were girl goods on the floor because Blood Glitz was messy in the bathroom but not the kitchen like in Apple Jack's home. There was also a panty on the floor. Apple piveted passed it to avoid it. Apple jack opened he cabinet for some Advil because she suffered from diabetes disease and the side affects could be pain. Instead she found hair. There was only hairs. They fell out when she opened the cabinet door. She picked up the hair clumps and put them in the toilet and flushed it quietly. She couldn't leave behind evidence of the crime. Apple ate the Advil and put the Adverb container in her sack.

As Apple went to the next room over with a purple door, she held in a burp. It burned her esophagug but she knew it was dire. She got in the purple door and gulped it back in her stomach. She looked around the room which was empty. It was just empty boxes and a broken armoire with garment bags. This goth was a fancy one, for sure. Apple Jach wished she could keep her close in garnet bags. She unzipped it and threw the pastel goth clothes on the dusty wood floor and stole the bags for her own agenda. She walk out of the room and went to the last door which was black. She thought, "If nobody is in this room, they must not be home....."

She open the door and saw a fancy goth room with Pierce the Mare band posters and also Twenty 1 Ponies band. This must be a girl who is edgy. There was a bear rug on the floor. There was a huge bed where snoring could be herd. Applelacks went to the bed and stared at the girl who was the goth girl pony. She was beautiful and Apple wanted to date her. Applejack stole her other clothes in the room and makeup. Apple jack was obsessed with makeup when she was poplar and wanted to get into it again. The pony asleep stirred and rolled over. Apple froze like Apple ice. But - oh no - she had to burp and sneeze and she couldn't hold back. Apple said like "ASH OOOOOH" and the pony in the bed sat up and screeched. She looked at Apple man and attacked it. Apple scream for her mom but her mom got shot in the hood. The pony bit her flesh and Apple fainted.

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Applewack woke up strapped to metal table. Apple knew what was happening.... She remembered what Pinkie did to Rainbow Dasj.... The screams, the blood, the flesh..... Rainb=ow told Apple all about it... Apple shibbered down her spine. She heard a cold clunk of metal that was a door closing, then heard steps.

"Hello, Appel. My name is Glitz. It was once Gem Glitz and sometimes Glitzy as a kid, but I am a killer..... So I am Blood Glitz."

"Hi, Blood Glitz, I am Applejaxk. Why did you tie me down, sugarball? I like your blue hair by the way."

"Thanks. I tied you down because you broke into my house and took my food. Apple couldn't see Glitz until she stepped into the light above Apple. Apple saw her wearing a blue longeray. It matched her hair. Glitz was only wearing it because she sleep with it on, not for Apple though (gross, this is not a sex story you perb). Glitz pulled out Apple's sack and began going through each item she stole. She grab the pineapple.

"Oh, so you like a pineappple, do you?"

"Yes"

Little did Apple know that the torture would begin. Glitz grabbed the moist pineapple and rubbed it on Apple's bod. It burned like acidic. Glitz rubbed it on her face and Appple couldn't breathe. The pineapple juice dripped in her nose canal. Apples sneexed it out good. Then Glitz throw the pinapple at her arm and it left a bruise. Apple cried. Glitz got out the cans of soda and poured them over Apple and she was cold and wet and was slowly getting a cold now. Glitz cackled like witches. She got out the beef brisket and revealed that it was chicken. She force fed the brest to Apple and Apple had to crew it but it was too dry. Apple's tears dripped into it and it was easier to eat plus gave it a salt taste like pretzel bites.

"That will teach you not to eat my foods, you thief."

Glitz pulled out the sack a small clump of hair.

Thought you could steal my hairs? Nice try, Apple jack..."

She fed Apple the hair and she choke. it was dryer than the checken brest.

She kept chewing and chewing. Glitz hair dangled in ZApple's face and Apple accidentully ate some of Glitz's head hair and Glitz scream.

"That is the last straw, Apple. I gave you a chance and you let me down. You will pay the price of life...."

Glitzy's eyes turned red and evil. He picked up a knive and approached Apple. Apple's life flash before her... She thought about her birthing and Applebloo's birth and Big Nac's birth. She remembered getting Winowna from the shelter on Hangarter Drive, how she and Winowna licked each other to express love. How her mother complained about how they smelled like a anos. Apple would laugh. And so would Winowma. She remembered the war and her poverty because of taxes... all the friends she left behind, like her friend François and his sister Paula. She also remembered Crystal Missile and how she cried when Apple drove away for the last time. She renembered her mother's soothing touch and her angelic voice when she said "Apple... my baby boy, I will protect you with my life." Apple remembered when her mother got shot in the hood and screamed and Apple watched as she cried and then yelled for help and then died while she watched her. Apple remembered her vow to her momther's spirit when she said she would take her place. She thought about what would happen if she didn't break into Blood Glitz's house... Would she have a chance with Blood Glitz? She maybe could date her, but it's too late now... Too late for romance, and too late for life itself.

"By the creed of the Cud I hereby draw this ol' dagger onto thee, that your blood will drippeth and your organs donated to science, all in the name of Wasagama. Hail Wasagama. Appleback I hereby grant you your sacrificial name. You will be known by Wasagama as Karmina Dante. Be glad and humble thyself."

Karmina cried more. She was nothing more than a flesh fish.

Glitz brought the knife to Apple's orange belly and cut it open. She kind of dug around in there and found the liver. She dragged the blade down to the lower stomache area and peeled the skins open. Apple felt immense pain. Her diabetes headache returned and she needed pain killers bad. Glitz pulled out a flesh organ she couldn't identify but she put it in the bucket. Glitz pulled out ablood gloB and put it in the bath bucket for later. She harvested all the oregons in Apple's cavity. Apple was like a hollow tree trunk, rotting in the woods with moss and molds and is wet.

Glitz took the bucket of blood to the bathroom and filled the tub. She was already red stain from yesterday's victim, but she couldn't resist another bath of bloods. She poured the organs in the tub and they floated. Sitting in them gave the bath a texture. She went back to Apple Jap's body and saw she was still alive.

"Glitz... Tell my mother I love her..."

"No, you filthy carcasses."

Apple jack's teared flowed into the void as she closed her eyes and thought about her mom kissing her shoulder blades. It felt so good it was almost like she wasn't tortured... Apple smiled one last smile before her sole escaped into the wild once more.

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Author's Note

Heyeyeyeyeyeeyeyyyyy it's lindsey, the auhtor. I havem't been aorund but be sure to read my other storys I will be going back to editt them. Also i am taking inline englaise classes again so if you habent noticed my english is better but i still neeed a edit er but no biigie ya dig lobe yoooouu