The Timid Alicorn

by Poppy8

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, Mystery, Science Fiction, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Sad, Main 6, Princess Luna, Drama, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Cutie Mark Crusaders
Length: 5661

When Celestia tries a magic spell made by Star Swirl-a-Bearded himself Celstia along with all of Equestria faces a timid surprise.

As Celestia keeps the timid surprise longer and longer the more ponys that begin to worry, despite the colts shy and unsociable behaviour ponys, meanwhile against Celestia's wishes of course, decide that something has to be done, but soon Celestia realizes that she'll have to risk everything.

Published 2017-01-27 15:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2017-01-28 23:27:27 UTC

The Timid Surprise

As Celestia had read over the spell for what was the tenth time she looked around the room the maids, guards are her sister were ready to see what the spell would do, as Celestia horn glowed, sparks ignited in front of her and a blinding flash went off, everypony looked disappointed as they all thought: I guess it didn't work.

5 hour's later

As Celestia woke up to the noise of small hooves walking down the hallways, as Celestiaturned around the corner she saw a yellow glow as Celestia got closer she noticed 5 books levitating on their own, yellow magic surrounded them, finally Celestia pulled the books away revealing a small baby colt no older than a newborn he had yellow eyes, mane,and tail, he also had a green coat, Celestia was shocked beyond thinking her eye's we're as big as saucers, the baby colt eye's we're staring back almost twice as big, then he ran, or at least tried to, as Celestia came to her senses and grave the young colt, the colt shook all over, and he tried to hide himself, his eye's glossed over in tears, Celestia smiled calmly and said,

"It's ok, my timid surprise."

Luna walked sleepily down the hallway as she walked towards her sister's room, for some reason her sister had forgotten to raise the sun so Luna had to do it for her. She was not only tired, but annoyed it was her sister's job and royal duty so Luna was going to see what or who had stopped her from doing so. As Luna reached her sister's room door she walked in without a second thought

"Sister," Luna began "why didn't you raise the sun this morning I don't see-"

Luna cut her sentence short as she saw her sister holding a small, swaddled, shaking object. Celestia only smiled

"I'm sorry for that sister, I guess my mind was focused on this colt." said Celestia calmly as she hinted at the colt in her grasp, Luna walked closer to Celestia and the colt, she noticed that it started shaking even more as she looked at the small colt, it tried to hide its self, Luna merely smiled,

"So what are you goin name it?" said Luna,

"I was thinking Timidthy." said Celestia, life around the castle was a bit more exciting with Timidthy, he would constantly grab any book that interested him and read it, weather he was actually able to understand the books nopony but Celestia knew, Timidthy sometimes would walk around the castle, only to be brought back to Celestia with his tail tucked underneath him and an ashamed look on his face. The castle servants, and guard's, and even Luna loved Timidthy, but the only question that remained was how would Equestria take that a little colt was born into life not by its loving mother, but by a magic spell. So Celestia and Luna both decided, much to Timidthy's discomfort, to call a meeting with Twilight and her friends, along with a few other's to calm Timidthy's nerves. Celestia sat in her room with Timidthy sitting on her desk looking at the letter almost pleading for Celestia not to bring anymore ponys, but unfortunately for Timidthy it had to be done. As Celestia levitated Timidthy onto her head she wrote the letter

Dear Twilight and company,

I have urgent news regarding the new spell I found in the Canterlot archives, when preformed the spell did something.......unexpected, I need you and your friends, and their younger siblings to come to the castle by tomorrow as soon as you can.

Your Princess,

Celestia

As Twilight, AppleJack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Apple Bloom, Scootallo, Sweetie Bell, and Spike rode the train to Canterlot they we're debating about what Celestia was talking about when she said the spell had done something "unexpected",

"It has to be something pretty serious for Princess Celestia to call all of us to the castle." said Twilight her voice serious.

"Or it could be that the spell created life and its SUPER DUPER cute and shy!" said Pinkie in her usual exuberant voice, the others just rolled their eye's thinking that Pinkie was just blabbering.

"I don't know, she sounded pretty serious." said Rarity,

"I know! The spell could've created some sort of huge scary monster, and Celestia is using her magic to fend it off!" said Rainbow.

"Oh I hope not, maybe it did nothing but make Celestia younger or something?" said Fluttershy uncertainty in her voice,

"I don't know but whatever it is we're either become friends with it or we're gonna finally see an awesome battle with Rainbow Dash in it!" said Scootallo, as the train came to a stop the group of ponys ran to the castle as the continued their conversation,

"I don't know but if the spell created another dragon, like me, I'm gonna make sure the new dragon feels welcome." said Spike confidently,

"Will you all stop with that." said Twilight in a stern voice "It is NOT possible for life to be made from magic! I've studied it, it's never been recorded and not ever Star Swirl-a- Bearded was able to make life from magic, and even if somepony did theirs the creäture that came from it would be anything but evil!" as Twilight finished her rant the group ran through the castle doors and ran towards Celestia's throne room, Twilight stopped everypony,

"Sorry about my outburst earlier girl's it just bugs me that I don't know what the spell did." said Twilight apologetically,

"It's alright Twilight! Whatever the spell made or whatever the spell did we can handle it!" squeaked Sweetie Bell as they all walked through the door into the throne room.

Author's Note

This is my first story the Oc is mine,
comments are welcome along
with the story is mine! :heart:

The Meeting

Celestia and Luna sat in the throne room covering something with thier wings, Twilight and the other's looked confused.

"Um.....what's that your hidin' princesses?" said AppleJack her voice both filled with curiosity and nervousness.

Both Princess Luna and Celestia shared a knowing smirk,

"Well as you all know I was working on performing a spell made by Star Swirl-a-Bearded, I managed to perform the spell and like I said something "unexpected" came from it." said Celestia with a bit of excitement in her voice

The group of ponies noticed the excitement in Celestia's voice there ever growing excitement and nervousness growing as well.

"Yes and we all need you to promise to keep him a secret, until my sister is ready to tell every inch of Equestria. said Luna as she glared at Celestia hinting that this secret couldn't last forever.

"Him?" Scootallo, Apple Bloom, and Sweetie Bell said at once,

"What do ya-" said Rainbow Dash before she was cut off in shock as Princess Luna and Celestia lifted their wings Timidthy was reveled, Timidthy shrank from the shocked glares of the mares and looked at Celestia with pleading eye's, begging for that he didn't have to be apart of this.

The cmc squealed in absolute delight and immediately ran over to Timidthy, "He's SO cute!" squeaked Sweetie

Timidthy shrank away from the fillies and blushed madly, never had he ever been called "cute"!

"What's his name?" asked Apple Bloom clearly interested with Timidthy

Celestia was going to open her mouth to respond but she was interrupted,

"Forget that, look at his wing's!" said Scootallo

"But he has a horn too....." said Apple Bloom as she trailed off

"That means....." said Sweetie Bell before the mane 6 beat her to it and cried at once

"HE'S AN ALICORN!!"

Timidthy blushed even redder, this was too much attention for him to take, Timidthy cowered as the Mane 6 and the cmc stared at him in disbelief he tried hiding behind Celestia again but Celestia looked at him calmly making sure he knew everything would be okay.

"Any way as me and my sister called you here, we need to discuss Timidthy and more importantly how we're going to tell all of Equestria about him." said Luna again hinting towards Celestia again, Celestia cleared her throat

"His name is Timidity, I've had him for three day's now, and I feel as if I've become attached to him, and him to me." said Celestia calmly as Timidthy rubbed up against her mane for comfort.

"Well he's seems pretty harmless, for now." said Rainbow cautiously

"Yes, in fact I know the PERFECT sailor costume that could fit him!" said Rarity staring at Timidthy with a malicious look in her eye's.

Timidthy gulped, he got the strangest feeling that he was going to see that look more often,

"I assure you he's the nicest most well-behaved little colt I've ever had the pleasure to look after." said Celestia in a stern tone trying to make Timidthy look as good as possible to her star-student and her friends.

"Celestia has been having trouble deciding weather to tell or not to tell." said Luna,

"I'm sure you could tell the ponies of Canterlot about Timidthy." said Fluttershy

Timidthy shook his head vigorously in a desperate attempt to persuade his mother and the other's not to tell anypony else about him,

"Or you could throw a HUGE party! And invite everypony and make Timidthy the center of attention so everypony will know how awesome he is!" said Pinkie her voice almost an octave higher because of her excitement,

Timidthy grew pale, the cmc surrounded him and tried to comfort him, Timidthy was slightly warming up to them but still keeping his distance.

Celestia sighed, she was hoping one of them could come up with an idea but they seemed to have idea's almost as bad as her's at the moment.

"Maybe it's best that I just keep Timidthy a secret for a few more-" started Celestia and Luna looked like she was going to say something, but as a surprise to everyone, especially Celestia's surprise, Twilight spoke out her voice stern and strong

"No, I'm sorry Celestia, but no, you can't keep Timidthy a secret any longer, ponies would get suspicious not only would you be stalled by Timidthy's needs as he got older, but you wouldn't be able to get to your meetings on time. Plus once ponies found out they'd think Timidthy is some sort of monster that took over you or something, it's not worth the risk,"

Timidthy started intently at Twilight his shyness almost melting away from the explanation Twilight was spinning from her web of vocabulary.

"Celestia I see what you did here you couldn't make the decision, so you wanted to get our help on the matter, and Celestia believe me we're all humbled that you trust us with this big decision but you have to make it, not us." as Twilight finished her statement, Timidthy levitated himself into Twilight's back giving a small warm, but slightly terrified, smile. Twilight smiled back she levitated Timidthy into Celestia's lap and didn't even wait for Celestia and Luna to respond, who we're dumbfounded and shocked. "Come on girl's, Princess Celestia needs time to think." said Twilight in a somber tone as she escorted her friends and the cmc out and shut the throne room door.

Celestia sat in her room with a concerned frown on her face, she couldn't decide, but she had to decide, she knew Twilight was right. One day ponies will find out, the speech Twilight had told her rang through Celestia's head, she looked over to Timidthy who was laying on her bed fast asleep, Celestia knew she had to do it she had to tell everypony about Timidthy.

Author's Note

Hi Everypony! I'm SO happy my story got accepted but I'm having trouble trying to keep the characters well in character and for anypony who dislikes the story I would love to hear advice to see what ya disliked and for everypony else comment anyway!

The Big Day

Everypony in Celestia's castle was running around, getting ready for the moment this would either make or break Celestia's respect for all of Equestria. Celestia had woken up at midnight, much to Luna's surprise, and ordered the guard's to send out scrolls and letters to every resident in Equestria, telling them to show up at the castle if they wernt busy with any kind of family emergency. She had told the maids to dress Timidthy in the most formal tux at thier disposal, she told the cooks to make something light for Timidthy's breakfast, just in case, she had told the guard's to make sure if anything we're to happen, to protect Timidthy at all cost. Timidthy who had been in the middle of the choaus almost shrieked when the maids lifted him and tried to put the tux on him, the tux in question was a lime green and a white bow tie decorated the neck of it, the maids not only had grabbed Timidity but after realizing all of Equestria would see him they gave Timidly a bath, combed his coat,mane, and tail, and THEN put the tux on him!

Then the chef's came in put a bib on Timidthy and gave him only 1/4 out of the milk in his milk bottle, Timidthy looked a bit disappointed at this he didn't understand why everyone was swaddling him, checking him, making sure he looked nice, this was different from every other day he'd lived with his mother. By the time all of that was done not only had two hour's passed but a small crowd of ponies had gathered outside the balcony of the castle, Celestia and Luna we're wearing thier best dresses, while Luna had a calm expression on her face, Celestia looked nervous,

"It's going to be okay sister." said Luna

"I hope your right." said Celestia dread and concern drowning out any perfesonalism she had in her voice.

Celestia levitated Timidthy and walked towards the balcony, which now the crowd had almost tripled in size everypony who was anypony was going to be here for this momentous occasion.

Timidthy still looked confused as Celestia's grip on him seemed tighter then usual, Timidthy flickered his ears for a moment, he could swear he heard voices, voices he did not recognize.

As Timidthy let the voices seep in his eye's widened in shock and horror, he looked at Celestia his eye's filled with terror, Celestia only looked back

"I'm sorry Timidthy, but they have to know." said Luna

Timidthy gulped he felt tears well up in his eye's, he tried to break free from his mother's grap so he could hide away forever but it didn't work.

Celestia had just let her front hooves touch the balcony as Luna used her magic to lower the moon and as Celestia raised the sun, the crowd was blinded from seeing Timidthy for a moment but as the blinding effect fadded the crowd went silent. Nopony spoke as Timidthy was there for everypony to see, Timidthy started shaking uncontrollably and felt an even stronger urge to cry, this was like living his worst nightmare, Celestia's wings tensed up, Luna felt short of breathe, while the cooks, maids, and guards looked pale. Finally after an eternity one of the member's of the crowd spoke, in fact the one who spoke was Miss.Cheerilie

"An alicorn prince, that's amazing!"

The crowd cheered Luna, the maids, guard's, chef's, and especially Celestia let out a sigh of relief, Timidthy still looked a bit nervous but other then that he was happy.

"Wait," said another mares voice whitch silenced the crowd, the stepped out from the crowd and the mare was none other then Spoiled Rich "Not that it's anypony's business princesses but where did you find this colt especially since he's an alicorn." she spoke her voice having a suspicious tone.

The maids, guard's, chef's, Luna, Timidthy and Celestia all held thier breathes again, panic daring to cloud at thier mind's, Luna nudged Celestia, Celestia looked at Timidthy, then the crowd and took at breathe in and out "Timidthy was not born," she said her voice was shaking a little,

The crowd gasped and stared at Timidthy like he was an alien of sorts

"I made him with a magic spell."

The crowd's eye's widened,

"And he's my son and to him I'm his mother,"

The crowd's mouths just gaped open at this moment,

"I wanted and had to tell all of you about him, and if you all don't like him just because he's different, then you have no place in my kingdom." Celestia finished and the crowd remained silent all except for a different voice of a mare as she stepped through the crowd the mare was Miss. Cherry Jubbalie,

"You would really risk everything just for that colt?" she said

"Yes." said Celestia making sure to sound as intimidating as possible

"Well then I say that by magic or not, Timidthy is your son and I welcome him and his offspring to my home, business, and to all of Equestria!" said Cherry Jubbalie excitedly, and the rest of the crowd joined in cheering and chanting "Welcome, Prince Timidthy!"

The maids, chef's, guard's, Luna, and Celestia smiled, even Timidthy gave a sheepish smile as red blush tinted his face.

'Everything turned out fine.' thought Celestia, but little did they know a certain spoiled mare would not
leave Timidthy alone, not until he was good and dead.

Timidthy was elated, the crowd had loved him, no angry mobs had chased after him, nopony burned his mother to the stake and beat him until he was limp and lifeless, nothing bad had happened! Timidthy was in HIS bedroom this time, he hadn't even know that the maids, guard's, and chef's worked on it as he stayed with Celestia, his room was huge and the walls we're painted a very pale green, the floor was made of marble and if the sun shone just right on the floor then it could make the intrie room look like the crystal empire.

He had a big bed too but just around the rim of the bed we're these thin gold bar's, just a safety procation to make sure Timidthy didn't fall out of the bed in his sleep, thier was an chestnut coloured table by his bed ,and right next to it layed a big bookshelf filed with ,Celestia knows, how many book's! Timidthy smiled as he levitated himself into the bed Celestia came in and they both hugged each other lovingly for now everything was perfect.

Author's Note

I hope ya like this chapter and enless you didn't notice my not so subtil hint then your gonna have to wait to see who the villain in the story is going to be!

The Party Crashers

As Celestia, her royal staff, and Luna quietly walked into Timidthy's room and looked at the bed, they smiled Timidthy was curled up in a thin but long lime green and fluffy blanket and most importantly he was fast asleep.

The royal staff carefully lifted Timidthy up, making sure not to wake up the sleeping prince, and walked him to outside the castle where many other ponies had gathered to see the prince and to travel to Ponyville,exactly like the princesses we're, a royal carriage gleamed just meer feet away from the royal staff as they put Timidthy into the royal carriage, by then Timidthy hadn't even twitched his ears and was sucking on his hoof in his sleep, a few of the ponies and royal staff aww'ed and coo'ed quietly.

"I have to admit I'm pretty excited to see Timidthy's reaction." said Celestia with slight amusement in her voice

"About what, being up so high in the air, having a party held in his honour, or the fact that his present is going to be him signing the adoption papers so you and him are officially mother and son?" asked Luna having the same amount of amusement in her voice as her sister did,

"All three!" said Celestia excitedly as her and Luna got seated in the royal carriage, two pegasi stallion royal guards got hooked uo to the carriage and took off, the remaining royal staff waved goodbye knowing that this day was going to be one to remember, and they we're right for most of it at least.

They had gotten to Ponyville just as the ponyville click tower stroke 8'o clock by then Timidthy had just started stirring awake, he was mumbling something in his sleep, Celestia looked like she was going to explode, if Timidthy said his first word this would make her day!

Unfortunately for Celestia Timidthy didn't do that, he woke up, got scared, hugged Celestia tightly on her leg and Celestia rolled her eye's in amusement, while Luna chuckled lightly. As the carriage landed into Ponyville Timidthy jumped

"Don't worry, everything is okay." said Celestia as she levitated Timidthy, Timidthy blushed slightly and smiled. Celestia, and Luna walked out of the carriage as Celestia and Luna we're about to walk away,

Timidthy noticed the guard's looked a bit down for some reason, Timidthy used his magic to unlatch the guard's from the carriage and motioned them to come with them with his hooves, the guard's, not second guessing this, followed Timidthy and the princesses. The princesses, Timidthy and the royal guard's kept walking till they got to SugerCube Corner, Timidthy promptly smelled the surgery treats right away and stuck his tongue out Timidthy could tell they'd give him a suger rush if he we're to bite into one.

Celestia, Luna, and the guard's smiled, knowing that what Timidthy was gonna experience was going to be both exciting and terrifying for him. As the princesses,Timidthy,and the guard's walked through the door the lights flickered on, all of Ponyville jumped up and much to Timidthy's shock yelled,

"SURPRISE!!!" Timidthy yelped and started shaking a little, while Celestia removed her grip on Timidthy and placed him on one of the table's, while Luna and the guard's smiled, again amused

"Awww, no reason to be scared." said Fluttershy even her voice was filled with excitement

"Yeah right now we're gonna throw you the best Supertastic "Welcome to Ponyville and Canterlot PARTY ever!!" said Pinkie as she put a kiwi green crown on Timidthy's head that was bejelwed and slightly bigger then his head. Timidthy smiled slightly as blush spread across his face,

"Ready for the best day ever Prince Timidthy?" said Rainbow teasingly as party music filled the room.

Meanwhile at the Rich a state Spoiled Rich was concocting a plan to take down the green demon, or at least that's what she called him,

"Chef's, you use your knife to subdue the green demon, maids you hold Celestia and anypony else who tries to stop us and butler's you hold that demon down just in case he tries to run off!" said Spoiled Rich as she barked orders, she opened the entrance to the mansion with her army behind her "Let's do this!" she said as Spoiled and her army headed straight towards SugerCube Corner.

The party was in full swing everypony was dancing, smiling, and most importantly making sure Timidthy got the most attention any little colt got in thier life! Timidthy was still wearing the green crown and his face stayed a beet red blush at least for that moment, Timidthy looked around the room his eye's landed onto two things in the room his mother who was chatting with Twilight but was also holding a rolled up white sheet of paper, and of course the huge heep of presents that layed on a big table by the front door of SugerCube Corner. Suddenly the intire room was silenced, Celestia walked over to Timidthy unraveling the paper making sure to only have the signature line visible,

"Timidthy, you are the best thing that's ever happened to me, and I need you to do one thing for me." said Celestia as she was trying, and failing, to keep herself calm, Timidthy looked confused, he looked around the room everypony's eye's we're on him, Timidthy picked up a quill using his magic and brought the quill carefully towards the paper, and just as the quill was about to hit the paper the door suddenly swung open, Spoiled Rich and her small army were at the entrance,

"Celestia I kindly demand that you get away from that demon!" said Spoiled Rich, everyone in the room gasped and Timidthy shank away from the glare he was getting from Spoiled Rich. Celestia looked as if she was getting ready to attack but the royal guard's held thier staffs out to tell Spoiled Rich to stay away,

"I was hoping it wouldn't come to this.....MAIDS ATTACK!!!" said Spoiled Rich with newfound determination in her voice, many of the unicorn maids shot out petrifing spells stopping the guard's, Luna, and the party go'ers from attacking, and the remaining maids held Celestia down and tied her up, the butler's on instinct surrounded Timidthy while the chef's held their knives out, Timidthy was shaking and crying he was terrified, suddenly the sound of ropes snapping sounded in the air as Celestia knocked the maids and escaped from the ropes,

"Leave my son alone!" said Celestia with complete malice in her voice, the maids and chef's charged towards Celestia and Celestia charged towards them "No chef's you need to stay put or-" Spoiled Roch didn't get to finish her sentence as Timidthy scurried off to escape the mad mare. Spoiled Rich growled as she and the butler's followed after Timidthy.

When it all hits the fan

Timidthy ran, or was trying to Timidthy's hooves and legs burned and he kept tripping and stumbling, what made it even worse was Timidthy was not used to running around.

HECK he wasn't used to walking around. Timidthy was always carried around and even when he walked around the castle he always had one of the maids or guard's help him when his hooves got tired.

The buildings looked all the same to Timidthy especially since he had no idea where he was going, Timidthy heard big hoof steps behind him and Spoiled Rich's voice was screaming from behind "Get him!!" Timidthy whined as tears started running down his face, but Timidthy kept running he had to keep running.

Celestia had cut marks all over her body, blood was oozing from them, and staining her pristine white coat the chef's kept cutting her in places where they guessed we're weak spots, while the maids shot magic from thier horns to stun Celestia for a moment.

Now normally this would be no big deal for Celestia but her mind was occupied thinking about Timidthy, she knew Timidthy was a smart colt for his age but he was the most timid pony on the face of the earth, one of the maids had resorted to bucking Celestia and knocked Celestia down as she hit the serving counter of the SugerCube Corner, as the chef's aimed knifes at her, and the ponies around her stared at her with extreme concern she thought

'I'm so sorry Timidthy, I failed.'

Timidthy's chest felt like it was going to explode, just then Timidthy tripped onto and feel onto the hardwood floor of SugerCube Corner. Timidthy looked around to see the atmosphere of the bakery had worsened, the ponies who we're still frozen in place had thier eye's filled with terror and extreme concern and then Timidthy saw his mother.

She was covered in cuts and her face was stained with newly wept tears as she had her back to the service counter, Timidthy felt a burning sensation in his chest almost as if someone had lit up a bonfire, his wing's extended and his horn lit up and sputtered with sparks and spells he had yet to learn nor master. Just then Spoiled Rich walked into SugerCube Corner, her butler's tired but still in pursuit

"It's the end of the line demon" said Spoiled Rich but Timidthy wasn't paying any attention to Spoiled Rich, he was staring at his mother, Spoiled Rich took notice of this and said

"Timidthy, let's make a deal."

Timidthy raised an eyebrow slowly and turned around to meet the malicious gaze of Spoiled Rich,

"I'll spare your mother's life if YOU give YOURS." said Spoiled Rich as a sick smile of happiness spread onto her face, Celestia gasped she shook her head

"Timidthy DON'T!" said Celestia with complete anguish and horror in her voice as more tears went down her face, but Timidthy didn't listen he used his magic to levitate a knife out one of the chef's hooves and held the knife to his neck, he looked between Celestia and Spoiled Rich and hoped Spoiled Rich kept her side of the deal, as Timidthy put a little pressure on the knife it just barley grazed his skin when Celestia screamed,

"NO!"

And lunched towards Timidthy, Spoiled Rich pulled out a knife and stabbed Celestia as she let out a scream of pain and landed on the ground, Timidthy dropped the knife and ran to his mother's side, the frozen ponies eye's feel in grief while Timidthy started sobbing his heart out, his mother was gone, Spoiled Rich slowly walked towards Timidthy holding a knife ready to end Timidthy's life but she was unprepared for the next thing that was about to happen Timidthy wailed,

"MOMMY!!!" as his horn let out a huge and powerful magical blast, it blasted all of Spoiled Rich's army into the walls of SugerCube Corner some of them got nailed to the wall by knives witch dug into thier flesh and tugged and pulled and teared the more they moved and the more they bleed, while some of those that were lucky got pinned to the walls by thier manes or tails, and the magic blast had undid the spell that froze Luna, the guard's and the party go'ers in place.

Timidthy was still sobbing unaware of his first words and what had his magic just done, Luna and the guard's looked at Celestia, Luna noticed the knife had hit her just bellow the chest and some blood was seeping from the large gash the knife had made, Luna put her ear to her sister's chest, Luna smiled slightly

"Get Celestia and Spoiled Rich's army to the hospital now." said Luna in a relieved and stern voice,

"I know none of us should really care about her, but what about Spoiled Rich?" said Spike that's when everypony, except Timidthy, looked around the room to see that Spoiled Rich had been hit with ten knives her body was completely deformed, large gouaches and cuts we're all over her and knives pinned her to the wall and finally a butcher knife had cut her square in the chest, resulting in her demise.

The ponys turned away from the intense gore and just as ordered, Nurse Red Heart and lots of other doctor's and nurse's levitated or lifted the injured army and Celestia, Timidthy gripped onto Celestia still in extreme shock, Luna had to pull Timidthy off of Celestia,

"MOMMY!!!" Timidthy cried, Luna and the guard's and the party go'ers winced at this,

"It's ok Timidthy, Celestia will be okay." said Luna as she held Timidthy onto her neck and let him sob into it,

"He's gonna be okay.....right.....?" said Sweetie Bell, she wanted to ask about Celestia as well but knew it would not help Timidthy's mental and emotional state,
"He'll be fine.....eventually." said Luna, as she, the guard's and the party go'ers followed the doctors and nurseries to the hospital.

Author's Note

I made this chapter super intense so I would LOVE to know what ya think about it!

Epilogue: Celestia and Timidthy

Timidthy sat at the end of Celestia's hospital bed. His eyes had bags under them from lack of sleep, it had been two days since the accident. Over half of Spoiled Rich's army had been pronounced dead and no surprise here but Spoiled Rich as well. Timidthy's mane and tail we're also messy and mattered along with his coat. His ears twitched at each beep the heart montier made. Finally Celestia woke up.

Timidthy smiled and jumped for joy. Celestia was banged and her coat had been cleaned back to it's normal colour. She looked at Timidthy with concern in her eye's. Celestia was about to speak until Timidthy hugged her neck. And levitated a white piece of paper for Celestia to read. The paper red 'Adoption Document'. And as Celestia went down the paper she saw the signature line was sighed. With small, neat cursive writing that read 'Timidthy'.

"Did you?" asked Celestia as Timidthy nodded his head,

"And you turned it in?" asked Celestia as Timidthy nodded his head again,

Celestia turned the document around and saw the back had a big green stamp that said 'Approved'

"But that means I'm your....." said Celestia before Timidthy said exhaustively

"....Mommy."

Celestia looked shocked as Timidthy rubbed himself onto her neck. And feel fast asleep.

Just then the Mane 6, Cmc, and Luna walked in

"Did he?"said Luna

"Yes." said Celestia as she looked at the little surprise on her neck. And knew that all thier lives would be way more exciting with Timidthy in it.

Author's Note

And that's it! The end! But I have to say this was alot more work then I orrignatly thought anyway I'm gonna be showing 3 more Oc's that are gonna be Timidthy's friends and if you haven't picked up on it I'm gonna let them be the stars of my page. You guys should expect more perfection from my story's thanks to wkblack go check him out!

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