Tale of A Dark Water Pony

by ghoul-of-the-background

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Sweetie Belle, Twilight Sparkle, Main 6
Length: 1047

After working on a reformation formula, Twilight first test subject ends up being Sweetie Belle.

By order of Celestia Twilight Sparkle princess of friendship attempts to create a reformation formula that can change the nature of a pony, imagine a world where evil doesn't exist.

You might say that's a great idea you be right if you were one of those ends justify the means type. Fortunately or unfortunately the princess has chosen one ingredient to the added to this formula.

The dark water and Sweetie Belle was unlucky enough to be exposed to a messed batch of Twilight's formula. Her thoughts, Ideas, Sweetie Belles Id now center stage.
The question isn't can she be saved but, does she want to be.

Published 2017-04-11 01:30:02 UTC
Last updated 2017-04-11 01:30:02 UTC

Prologue To Awakening

Prologue To Awakening

(Thursday 9:24 Am Sweet Apple Acres)

Inside of a club house three girl each with a different skin and hair. One had tan yellow Coat and red Mane with a pink bow her hair itself was fairly normal just straight and droopy, the other one was a unicorn with pale white coat and a pale purple coat with pink highlights that had curls on her. Lastly an orange coated filly with an out of control purple mane. One thing that the three girls had in common was their cutie marks a orange pale purple and purple shields each one had a distinct item inside them on the apple for the one with red maned filly , a music note on the one with the Purple maned filly and lastly the orange filly a had lightning bolt that looked similar to a wing.

“Okay crusaders how are we gonna start this day?” the tan one shouted with high enthusiasm.

“Well...I don’t know. Maybe help someone get their cutie mark.” the pale girl suggested

“Well yeah but that's what we've been doin Sweetie Belle i’m talkin about somethin else.” the yellow filly said to the white one. Sweetie Belle turned her head to the orange girl before asking

“What do you think Scootaloo.”

“We could hang out with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.” Scootaloo answered recommended. Remembering that the group were now on good terms with the pair. However this was dismissed.

“I mean where cool,but it seems a bit too….soon you know?” the yellow girl responded uncomfortably The other two nodded in agreement.

“Maybe we should go see Twist,Zecora, Rainbow Dash, or Pinkie Pie, maybe spend some time with twilight” each filly recommended .Scootaloo, and the Yellow filly looked at Sweetie Belle. “What?” Sweetie asked her friends

“Why didn’t you mention Rarity?” The yel- (Ghoul: Okay screw this, you guys already know her name is apple bloom I can’t continue this)AppleBloom mention.

“She’s busy, Why didn’t you mention AppleJack” Sweetie Belle asked after answering AppleBloom question.

“Also busy, farm work” She answered.They all sat and thought about who to visit. Finally deciding on Twilight Sparkle. Leaving their clubhouse the three fillies went out to straight to twilight’ s house

“So when we get to Twilight's what are gonna do.” Sweetie Belle question. AppleBloom took a while to answer “Well I guess we could do what w……..
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(Thursday 9:08 Am Twilight's castle)

“Ummmm...Twilight are you sure about this about this I mean doesn’t this seem kinda wrong.” A short purple dragon with green scales questioned. The small dragon looked to his side where an purple alicorn with a violet mane and tail with pink highlights sat measuring test tubes. The princess of friendship looked at the baby dragon

“What do you mean?” she questioned. The dragon took darted his away from her nervously

“ WEEEell...not say saying there aren’t bad ponies and monster out there but a reforming drug seems kinda.” The dragon than made a spinning motion with his claws. “Twisted...I mean didn’t you get on Starlight"s case for mind controlling our friends.” He finished.

“Oh Spike I know it looks bad but, I’m sure princess Celestia has a good reason for giving us this assignment.” Twilight told the dragon calmly “After all..”

“Don’t” Twilight was then interrupted The dragon. The alicorn looked at him in confusion.

“Uh don’t what Spike"

"Don’t say what’s the the worse that could happen.” Spike realizing what he just said face palmed. “Crap.”

Twilight simply shrugged and went back to her work. Spike seeing his friend/boss continue working on her dark water experiment and simply sighed.

As twilight examined the water she began adding chemicals into it as well some of her own magic

“Okay just on tiny drip” Twilight said as slowly added a blue liquid into a cup of water

“HEY TWILIGHT IT’S US APPLEBLOOM SCOOTALOO AND SWEETIE BELLE” Sweetie Belle shouted at the top of their lungs.Twilight spilled all the liquid into the water which for some reason caused it to evaporate into a gas which covered the whole castle

“Crap.” Spike said

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(Outside twilight’s castle.)

The Crusader stood outside the door Scootaloo knocks at the door “Twilight it’s us Scootaloo, AppleBloom, Sweetie Belle.” “Hello!” they waited about for about 5 minutes before just opening the castle doors. The crusaders were hit by blue smoke the moment the doors fully opened. The fillies began coughing as the smoke entered the lungs. “Twilight!” Sweetie Belle yelled rushing into the castle the other crusaders followed suit. As they ran through the castle looking for the purple alicorn princess they heard a faint voice call out.

“In here!” it said in a panicked tone. The voice belonged to Spike who was coughing blue smoke while holding Twilight over his shoulder.

“Spike” The Crusaders shouted in unison.

They rushed to aid their dragon friend, together they were able to get themselves out of the castle. All the Crusaders and the dragon passed out.

(Friday 2:56 ponyville)

Sweetie Belle woke up her in bed in between her friends as she began to sit up. A headache came over her, unknown to her eyes turned red for a brief moment. She took a deep breath getting out of her hospital “W...What happened?” Sweetie Belle questioned as she began to walk out she was soon tackled into a bone crushing hug by her sister .

“Sweetie what are you doing you should be in bed!”

“Hi Rarity glad to see you sis.” she was able to muster through the hug.
Using her hooves Sweetie Belle pulled rarity to her own bone crushing hug. Rarity’s hug slowly began to loosen but Sweetie’s grew tighter. The younger sister's eyes turned red again.

“Sweetie darling you hugging me a little too tight.” Rarity told her trying to break

“Oh sorry just glad too see you.” Sweetie Belle’s eyes lost their red as she smiled.
Her smile became a frown as she remembered to ask something “Where's Twilight?”

Author's Note

Welp my first story.....that I'm posting here. gonna say this right now I was orignally going to make ponified, DC The Creeper story so you might see that in later chapters. I might make this a superhero story then again maybe not.