Meltdown

by BaronofCrimson

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Original Character
Length: 2779

Brimstone now in control of his dark magic decides to enjoy a bit of fresh meat and steel, a certain cyborg stallion.

A story written on the edge of delirium, this is about two friends and their Oc's. Brimstone the son of the fallen and defeat Sombra heads an army that is the first line of defense against the an unknown horde of vile technology and creatures to the north past the mountains. He decides that he needs to relax and invites one of his captains Maple to join him. After a quick introduction Brimstone gets his fill and is satisfied for now.

Published 2017-02-17 22:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2017-02-17 22:20:02 UTC

Meltdown

It was a frigid winter night in the northern expanse despite the resurrection of the Crystal Empire after its one thousand years of being frozen in time. The land around the Empire was still harsh and hostile: echoes of the windingos permeated all the creatures, the cold was supernatural going down to the bone if anything was exposed, and the vast plains of snow warded off but the most stalwart or well supplied expeditions. The Twin Princess both thought the land to be void of any pony life, but after relations with the yak of Yakyakastan began they learned of a brutal race of ponies that have begun to climb over the mountains and they bring with them legions of icy horrors and bloodthirsty warriors. The Twin Princess raised an army of mercenaries, conscripted ponies, and royal guards from the princesses; although for Twilight Sparkle it was just the one guard. Appointed to lead this army against this millennium’s old barbarism was one who was considered a bit of a black sheep, Brimstone.

Brimstone was one of the few illegitimate offspring of King Sombra the Iron Tyrant and Crusher of Crystal. Unlike his fellow siblings, Sombra took a special interest in Brimstone and instilled some of his evil inside him; however with the sudden loss of Sombra essence and large application of purifying crystal energy, this aspect of Brimstone rarely assumes control and when it does it is usually self-focused. He does however have a sharp military mind although he rarely admits to it and only uses it for his own musings or under command from the Princesses. It was on this frigid winter night a mile or two from the front lines did Brimstone wait in his lavish tent for the guard he had requested so whimsically.

A shift in the tent flaps announced his presence and as he entered the humming and dim cyan glowing of his power core, a scar of science gone wrong. The stallion stammered as he stood at attention “Y-yes s-sir Commander Brim-m-mstone sir. W-what do you r-require?”
The stammering was not lost on Brimstone. It was obvious that this stammering was not a product of the cold, as his core kept his whole body in a combat ready state. It seems that serving under the Princess of the Night for so long had made him nervous around stallion commanding officers, or maybe he was just a little intimidated by his own past, Brimstone mused looking over the military grade augments. The stallion squirmed under his gaze making Brimstone break into a sly smile that to any onlooker it looked like the smile of a predator.

“Oh don’t be so formal, Force Commander Maple, call me Brimmy and I just wish to talk to you about…battle strategies.” Brimstone expression got more playful as he continued and he began to approach Maple. “Do please make yourself comfortable Force Commander, I intend for this to be a very lengthy and complete briefing.” He motioned to a low stilted couch opposite his bed “Don’t be afraid I don’t bite…usually.” Brimstone snapped as he finished showing off his unusual row of sharp incisors.
Maple almost jumped at the snap, truth be told he was a little bit unnerved by the stories of this stallion, a carnivorous and cruel being, or so the stories said. The whimsical façade of Brimstone ended up being more unnerving but not wanting to incite his wrath Maple did as he was told and sat on the couch. He was as tense as the front lines at daybreak and a part of him wished he could be there right now. “T-thank you Commander Brim- I mean Brimmy.” The name tasted weird in Maple’s mouth but he knew better.

“I need to know Force Commander Maple…Do you trust me? I really need to know.” Brimstone started moving closer to Maple ending the sentence with his hoof on Maple’s neck.

Maple’s sensors picked up a miniscule exchange of magic but his nervousness blocked it out. “I-I-I don’t know what you mean sir, but I trust you to lead us to victory and I would follow your command.” Maple almost saluted as he said this.

Brimstone looked even more intently into the eyes of Maple “Force Commander, I didn’t ask that…I need to know if you trust me.” His hoof moved up to Maple’s face and small sparks of green energy traced the path he took.
Maple was on the edge of panic and strangely he was starting to feel warmer than usual “Uh-uh-uh…oh Celestia I guess.”
Brimstone showed his teeth again and moved his hooved to Maple’s hooves, a green mist was starting to form between them. “Do you want to change that answer, Force Commander?”

Maple almost screamed his answer “Oh Commander Brimstone! Spare me! Please!” His mind was getting a little hazy and he was close to hysterics. His usually cold and stoic demeanor had been broken.

Brimstone put one of his hooves on Maple’s muzzle “Force Commander…I need you to calm down.” Maple’s body relaxed a little. “I need you to sit up Force Commander.” Brimstone’s words had become sweet like honey and as he spoke more of the green smoke emanated from his mouth, enticing Maple and bringing him in.

Maple did as he was instructed “Brimmy I don’t understand” he was a little surprised how easy the words were coming now. “What did you need with me?”

Brimstone began wrapping around Maple like shade, his hooves running over Maple’s coat rarely treading on his metal augments “It’s just that I’ve never tasted one such as you and so you are here to satisfy my…curiosity. I want you.” Brimstone’s hooves began ruffling Maple’s coat, all the while green sparks followed like electric parasprites.

“T-taste me…okay” Maple was very slightly phased by Brimetone’s statement but he quickly forgot about it as he began to feel quite hot, like he was being overcharged and he began to speak like in a dream. “Then can I have…you? Brimmy”

Brimstone’s grin grew wide as he heard this. “Yes…Yes you can my Force Commander…Maple.” And with that cue word Maple began to return Brimstone’s petting, going down his supple neck, across his solid torso, and finally to his toned ass. “My-oh-my Maple you are quite forward aren’t you?” Brimstone teased. Maple draped his head over Brimstone’s shoulders and exhaled in response. Brimstone was felt Maple’s core heat rising and heart was beating faster with excitement, he wanted to see Maple meltdown.

Maple began to search for Brimstone’s muzzle with his own, his eyes closed in ecstasy of Brimstone’s masterful hooves “Come here Brimmy I want to taste you.” Brimstone almost chuckled at the words but he quickly obliged feeling Maple’s warm tongue search around his mouth showing his inexperience but Brimstone was happy to teach him. Except for their grunts and moans of passion they sat silently exploring each other with their tongues and hooves. Brimstone traced around Maple’s augments and found his body was solid, toned for war and strong as a bull. Brimstone began to give himself to Maple’s strength as he began to take control of the situation. Maple began kneading Brimstone’s flanks and running up and down his sides all the while pushing aggressively with his tongue into Brimstone’s mouth. Maple’s warmth began to fill the room leaving them hot and bothered not to mention breathless. When they finally broke away they were a mess with both of them gasping for breath, but Brimstone noticed a fire in Maple’s eyes.

Maple broke the silence first and his awkwardness returned for a second. “Brimmy I need you to help me…d-down there.” Maple’s face turned as red as an apple and he started to bury his face in Brimstone’s chest. Brimstone gave another laugh and broke from Maple’s grip.
“Don’t you worry you silly Maple” Brimstone raised Maple’s muzzle and gave a small peck on his nose. “Let me take care of it.” He wormed his way underneath Maple and staring him back in the face was a magnificent cock. “Oh my…” Brimstone was a little shocked at its size, he was known among royal circles to be very well endowed and this one might be rivaling his. “Maple why would you hide such a magnificent piece.” This caused Maple to get even redder and he tried to hide his face. He breathed in the Maple’s musk and he fell in love, it was so clean but it smelled of power. Brimstone took a long big lick of the cock just to test the waters and Maple shuddered violently. “A little pent up are we? Well I can work with that.” Brimstone teased.

Brimstone started with his hooves, rubbing his forelegs up against Maple’s cock, the soft fur sending Maple in a groaning fit. He then incorporated his tongue following up each stroke with the heat of his tongue. The familiar green sparks returned once again giving an extra shock to the system with each pass. Maple could barely contain himself; he was like pudding as Brimstone went up and down. His spine was tingling with each breath that cooled the saliva and with each peck that Brimstone gave to his head causing his cock to quiver. Brimstone took a short break making eye contact with Maple “So you like this huh?” Maple could barely give a nod as overcome with pleasure as he was. Brimstone smiled and returned to the magnificent specimen before him. He took the head into his mouth swirling his tongue around the head as he continued to rub its length, after a minute he started to go deeper and deeper taking Maple’s cock as far as he could. Brimstone’s own cock was just begging for attention and so he rubbed it on Maple’s soft foreleg bringing it to its full size by the time Brimstone felt Maple’s hooves approach his head and he prepared himself for Maple’s thrust. While Brimstone was prepared he was not entirely prepared for the strength and speed as Maple brought Brimstone’s head and held it as he shot into Brimstone wave after wave. Brimstone had had rough lovers but the strength surprised him and aroused him more and he was being filled with cum so hot and sweet that he couldn’t help but try to drink it all down but Maple kept pumping and pumping and pumping. Brimstone couldn’t handle it and tapped for Maple to release him and as Brimstone reared up to gasp for air Maple’s dick was still pumping covering Brimstone in thick strings of stallion seed getting in his hair, his muzzle and most definitely all over his broad chest and dick.

Brimstone caught his breath and licked off the cum on his muzzle. “I’m so glad I skipped desert, you are sweeter and richer than any chocolate and pastry confection.” Brimstone looked up to give a smile to Maple but he saw him approaching. “Uhhh Maple what are you planning?” Maple said nothing as he got underneath Brimstone and leaning against one of the well pillowed poles of the tent. The heat of his core was radiating through Brimstone warming his cold blood and relaxing all his muscles on his back. Maple’s cum was warming him from the inside his stomach was feeling full and his throat felt so smooth.

Maple nibbled on his ear and whispered into them in a slow rhythmic voice “I need to help you now.” Maple reached for Brimstone’s cock and began to stroke it in the same fashion, drinking up Brimstone’s moans of pleasure as he was already on the edge causing Maple’s strokes to rack Brimstone’s body with shivers and shakes. Maple brought a hoof up to Brimestone’s face as he whispered in his ear “Kiss me” Brimstone only groaned as he turned his head to tie tongues together. The long passionate kiss was interrupted by Brimstone’s cry as he finally reached climax and his cum shot up to his face covering both Maple and Brimestone’s face and the later waves only covered Brimstone more and more. Maple and Brimstone began licking each other’s face tasting Brimestone’s seed. “Oh and yours is so salty.”
Brimstone was about to respond when he felt Maple’s burning erect cock touch his own half-mast, he knew what this meant all too well. “Shall we take this to the bed?” No sooner had he finished then Maple picked him up and walked him over to the bed putting Brimstone on the edge. Brimstone stared between Maple’s face and his erect cock still dripping with saliva and cum, Maple laid it on Brimstone’s belly coating it in Brimstone’s seed. Brimstone was being hypnotized by the smell and its heat they were both so addictive. “So what are you gon...ah!”

Maple interrupted Brimstone with a kiss, long and passionate like the others, Brimstone could not get enough. “You know what I’m going to do…I want to watch me do it, Brimmy” Maple didn’t waste any time as his rigid member pushed into Brimstone’s ass, putting the head in with an audible pop. Brimstone grimaced at Maple’s girth but he motioned for Maple to continue. Moving slowly with an unseen gentleness Maple got Brimstone used to his size eventually getting to the hilt, which already made Brimstone feel stuffed beyond comparison.

Brimstone wrapped his hooves around Maple “Now be rough.” And like the flick of a switch Maple began thrusting his entire length in and out of Brimstone, shaking the bed and upsetting the tent with his ferocity. Brimstone was caught off-guard again and his breathing was ragged and short as Maple’s dick kept pushing the air from his lungs. Brimstone hung on for all his worth as maple’s powerful thighs slapped against his own. As Brimstone was getting pounded his own dick was getting erect and quickly was dripping with precum, the glistening drops falling on Brimstone as he was manhandled by the cyborg strength. Much to Brimstone surprise Maple began sucking his dick as he was thrusting, his mouth made the cock’s head flare with ecstasy as Brimstone shot a load into Maple. Maple looked up as Brimstone finished and darted in for a kiss, swapping cum and leaving with a thin trail of cum and saliva between their muzzles. Maple continue to pound for minutes on end, his stamina having grown exponentially, so long that Brimstone’s cock came back with its third wind. Brimstone was absolutely drowning in pleasure unable to think or communicate with anything other than kisses. Finally like a dawn after the longest night Brimstone felt Maple flare and pressure build. Maple’s core was glowing hot, it looked about ready to burst as well. “Finally, give me all you got, Maple!” Brimstone sank his teeth into Maple’s shoulder to brace himself for the surges of cum as Maple kept thrusting and thrusting each time unloading more and more into Brimstone the heat was so intense that Brimstone almost cried out in pain and pleasure. Meanwhile Brimstone was shooting his load between his own chest and Maple’s until they were finally exhausted and they collapsed in a cumcoated pile. Brimstone was sure Maple had filled up every inch of his insides with cum. Brimstone had never felt so warm.

Brimstone prodded at Maple’s ear “So do you trust me now Force Commander Maple?”

Without moving his head Maple answered “Yes.”

Brimstone moved them more into bed and spent the rest of the night drawing pictures with his hooves in Maple’s back. Until a cough at the tent opening caught his ears and before him was a big stallion covered hoof to neck with a long flowing coat, underneath glistening armor was shown. Brimstone’s eyes brightened and the green fog started to return “Oh yes, Twilight’s guard. Would you like to join us?”
The stallion was not amused, “You know you can’t use your hypnotic suggestion on me Brim. I do hope you did not permanently damage his core, I can tell by the whirring that he is still alive, but that was dangerous Brimstone.”

Brimstone raised an eyebrow “I know you didn’t come here to reprimand me like this. What is it?” The stallion rattled offer army stats, enemy movements, and plans of attack before glaring back at Brimstone. “It doesn’t sound like you need me at all; I did make you second in command for a reason.” The stallion sighed and walked out obvious frustrated. “One day I’ll get him…One day I’ll get to bed him in mutual love.” Both Maple and Brimstone fell asleep, the radiant core fighting off the cold and keeping them embraced with Maple’s dick firmly in Brimstone.