Author's Note
I originally made this story 5 years ago but it involved humans, so when i was thinking about making a story for Fimfiction I found this in some old folders I had on my computer and I decided to ponify it for here and I think this has come out pretty nicely. Also once again I gotta thank k9groomer for all her help.
I'm Your Biggest Fan
"Thank You! “ I said to the crowd as our and band finished our performance. Manehatten was a great town and the ponies really liked us here - makes me glad we were all transported to Equestria when the portals opened. We bowed, and went backstage happy with our set. As soon as we hit the curtain the usual crowd was there, a bunch of mares, some stallions, a few humans, and I even saw a griffin or two wanting autographs. We signed every one that was in front of us until we got back to our dressing room where the guys were talking about their plans for after the show.
"Hey you gonna go out and party later?" one of my band-mates asked. "Nah I'm just gonna head back to the hotel and rest for the night, you know I'm not much of a party animal." I replied, and I grabbed my stuff and headed out the back , looking forward to some sleep. As I headed out the door, I saw a flash of pink. I ignored it but saw it again, it came from the shadows. At first I couldn’t get a good look at her, but when I finally did see her she was stunning. She was a pretty light pink pony with a purple mane and tail with three buttons on her flank. I think she may have been there waiting for me. She saw me and she blushed, and took a few cautious steps toward me.
“ What’s your name?” I asked, looking confused. She looked at me seductively and answered, “My name is Suri Polomare and I’m your biggest fan. I’ve been to all your shows and I have all your albums, even the ones before you came to Equestria. You are just so amazingly talented and also very sexy." She looked down and blushed. "Oh, well thanks,” I chuckled, “I do my best to make my fans happy. So I assume you want an autograph?" She blushed again.
“ Well I…” she looked down again and stamped her front hoof gently on the ground. She whispered, “I was hoping for something….more than that.” She reached up with her hoof and started rubbing my crotch. My face heated up, and I could feel my dick getting hard. Though I was tired as hell, I was hoping that sleep wouldn't come as fast as I had wished for. “I am staying at a hotel a few blocks from here.” I informed her.
"No, let's go to my place ..that is.. if you're ok with that." She whispered in my ear. I thought for a moment as to whether or not I should go to some random pony’s house. While I have had my share of mares since I came to Equestria, they have either been in hotel rooms or on the tour bus - never in one of their homes- but on the other hand, I wouldn't have to deal with the press slinking around the hotels and following me just to get a shot of me Pegasi photographers were especially annoying, as they could fly up to the windows in attempt to get a glimpse. I have had to deal with nosy photographers camping around the hotels I stay in, just to get a shot of me! I decided to make the safe choice and go to her place. "Sure, better than being hounded by the paparazzi at the hotel. “ I said, and we snuck around to avoid attention on the way to her place.
We finally get to her place. She offered me a cider and together we sat on the couch. She started moving in closer and closer to me, and we instantly started making out. She wasn't messing around! I start kissing her neck and gently caress her body. I gently caress her luscious pink coat reaching down to her crotchtits, and softly squeezed them. “Ooooooooohhhhhhhh”, she moaned, I squeezed them harder and pinched her nipples. Her lovely, sweet, soft, supple, squishy, glorious mare nipples.
My hands moved further down and I reached her pussy. She was wet..very wet. I rubbed her labia, her lips and found her clit. She started to go insane. “Oh yes!” She begged, “Please, please put it in!”
I obeyed and inserted my finger inside her. She squirmed like a fish out of water. ”Fuck yes that feels so good!” she screamed. I drove my finger in deeper and faster and enjoyed her screams of pleasure. “MORE, I WANT MORE!” she screamed. “As you wish!” I said, inserting two more fingers and moving them madly inside her.
“Oh Celestia this is the best feeling ever!” she panted as I kept up the pace. I grinned, looked her in the eyes and told her, “Oh you haven’t felt anything yet!” I knelt down and smashed my face in her pussy. I sensually lick her exposed clit. “AHHHHHHHH!” she gasped as I kept licking her and fingering her at the same time.
“Yeah all the mares love it when i do that.” I chuckled and went back to licking her clit. After tasting on her clit for a few minutes I gently nibbled on it and her eyes shot up. "Oh sweet Celestia!” She shouted, “ Yes! Bite me harder! I love the pain! It gets me so fucking hot!”
I continued, biting her harder and finger banging her as Suri moans louder and gets even more wet. She was dripping like a waterfall, winking and twitching and begging for more. After more biting and finger banging she screamed, “Oh dear sweet Celestia I’m gonna cum!” and she finally starts spraying her marecum all over my face. I welcomed her sweet Suri sauce in my mouth. Mmm, did she taste amazing.
She laid there on the couch, her pink coat looked red, she had been sweating so hard. Her mane was a complete mess. She looked worn out, worn out and exhausted. A tired pony is a good pony, isn't that what they say? I looked at her as I licked my lips, tasting her juicy marecum. “Delicious, but I hope you aren't too worn out, because I’m just getting started.”
I removed my pants and was ready to insert my dick inside her but she pushed me back. “What, did I do something wrong?” I asked. She replied, “No, I just wanna make this special. “ She got up from the couch. I asked her how and she replied, "I got something I wanna show you.” She winked at me and motioned for me to follow her.
She led me to the basement. As soon as we entered I froze, with pure surprise and shock as I saw chains, whips, ball gags, strap ons, dildos, paddles, and a table in the middle of the room. "This here is my very own "Sex Dungeon" just like the name of your second album. Do you like it?"
"Wow, I never knew anypony that actually had a ‘Sex Dungeon’. I thought it was banned from Equestria for being too sexually..explicit. “
”I have my ways... do you like it?" she asked, with dreamy eyes.” “Like it, I fucking love it. You know exactly how to get into this man’s heart”. "Oh, I knew you'd love it!” She squeed excitedly, "now, where do you wanna start first, Master?" She seductively licked her lips. "Hmmmm... well, why don't you put those lips to use and suck my dick." I tell her.
"Mmmmm.. yes sir." She says obediently with her mouth watering. "I always dreamed of sucking this dick." she declared and she started licking the head with her tongue, then finally took it in her mouth. I loved those pony mouths, they were always so warm and so soft. Their little tongues were perfect, they wrapped around my dick like that’s what they were made for. “Oh fuck!” I moaned, and felt her go down further as she looked at me with her gorgeous eyes. I noticed a spiked collar nearby, and grabbed it, putting it on her spike side down. I yanked up her head. "That's right you fucking slut, suck my dick like I tell you to!” I pulled the collar down and forced her back to where we left off. I grabbed her mane and pushed her head down, holding it firmly while she sucked me. She must have liked it, because she sucked me faster.
I couldn't have asked for anything better. She was doing a damn good job. "Oh yea deepthroat my dick you dirty slut, I want you to fucking choke on it." I ordered her. I swatted her ass with the whip. She does as she's told and deepthroats my dick, gagging herself but never stopping. I grabbed her head and forced her down further, her windpipe must have been blocked because she began to tear up. I slapped her ass again and laughed face as she gagged on my dick.
"That's right, gag you fucking bitch. Take this dick down your throat like a good whore." This time I pushed her further and held her there. She again obeys me and keeps deepthroating my dick, it was turning me on watching her gag and gasp for breath. gagging and choking on it more. I pulled her off and rubbed my balls in her face, "Suck them bitch, get those balls good and wet." She licked and sucked on them, moving them around from cheek to cheek like a good little pony whore. "That's right put them both in your mouth gobble those balls, cunt." I demanded. She sucked on them, and I could feel her drool soaking them down. I decided it was time to put this dungeon to the test and just like in the song, sol I pulled her up by her mane, dragged her to the wall where she had attached hooks, and chained her face first the wall. She was smiling a wicked smile. I grabbed a paddle and pulled her mane, her by the hair.
“I own your ass now bitch!” I told her. “Yes, own me master. I am your filthy whore to use as you want.” she squeaked, and I started smacking her ass with the paddle. She screamed in pain and excitement. "YES, OH CELESTIA. PLEASE DON'T STOP!" she screamed, as I keep smacking her ass. "Who owns your filthy ass?" I whispered in her ear and licked it.
"YOU DO MASTER!" she bayed. Again, I whispered in her ear. "Who's the only dick you will ever serve?" "YOURS. ALWAYS YOURS MASTER." she says assured me, and I smacked her ass harder. I stopped paddling her and see a huge red mark on her little pink ass. I smiled, admiring my work and noticed a puddle on the floor under her. "So I see getting a paddling gets you off." "Only when it's you master." she says blissfully. “You ready for me?” I asked, I unchained her and threw her on the table. I put metal cuffs on each ankle and secured her down to each leg of the table.
I get on top of her and teased her by putting my dick just inside her and pulling it out. "Master please stop teasing, want it." "What is it that you want?" I asked.
"You dick inside me sir." she pleads, "I want you to beg for it. Beg to be fucked you dirty whore." I demand. "Please sir fuck my filthy cunt. I want your hard dick inside I want it so bad. Please fuck me, fuck me like the dirty whore I am sir." She begs. I ram my dick inside her pussy and giver a hard fucking while I choke her and slap her face. "That’s right, take it you dirty bitch. You love being abused like the whore you are don't you?" "Yes, sir." she says breathlessly as i keep fucking her harder and slapping her face. "Master, I'm gonna cum." she says " Not yet don't cum until I tell you bitch." I order her. "Yes sir." she says as tries her best to hold it in. I take my dick out and turn her over. I smack her ass a few times before I start fucking her again and pull her hair. She doesn't stop moaning and screaming and tries to hold it in but she cums hard all over the table. I pull out and I grab her by her hair and slap her, "I said not to cum you fucking bitch!" I yell. "I'm sorry sir" she pleads " I wasn't trying to." "Clean your mess up cunt." I order her. she obeys and licks up her cum off the table.
"You know you need to be punished right?" I tell her. "Yes, I know master." she says as she lowers her head down dejectedly. "Bend over on the table." I demand and she obeys. I take my dick and stick in her tight ass. "NOOOOO, I never done anal before." she says. "Well there’s a first time for everything bitch, and you deserve this." I tell her. I grab the paddle again as I start smacking her ass with it again. She cries out in pain and tears up as she feels my dick go deeper inside her ass. I paddle her ass more as it turns more red. "Oh master, you're the only man that can take me in the ass." she says as I fuck her harder. "That's right, I fucking own your ass no other man can have it." I tell her. "Yes master, no man shall ever take my ass other than you." she says as I keep going deeper and pulling her mane. "Oh yea, are you ready for your master's cum slut." I say "Yes please master shower me in your cum. It's my dream come true." I pull out her ass and turn her around with my dick towards her face and I shoot my load all over her getting on her face, mane, tongue, and a little in her eye. Without me saying so, she sucks my dick clean tasting my cum and her ass. " Yea that's a good slut clean it good." She uses her hoof to wipe the cum off her face and licking her hoof clean.
“Mmmm, wow I never had my ass fucked before, it was painful but i started loving the pain it caused." she says. "Yeah I was hoping I didn’t hurt you too bad” I say trying to catch my breath. “No you were amazing, everything you did was what I always dreamed of.” she says happily but then looks down sadly, “I just wish this didn't have to end." "Yea me too, but we have to leave tomorrow. We have a show in Las Pegasus to do." I tell her as I get up to get my clothes. “I don't think so." she whispers and bucks her legs at me from behind and I go flying against the wall and it knocks me out. I awaken a few minutes later and I realize I’m chained up against the wall" “What the? What’s going on here? Let me out of here dammit." "No! Everything I ever wanted came true tonight and I don’t plan on it ending anytime soon.” "But You know people will come looking for me. I'm a famous rock star." "Yea well who is gonna search here. Nobody saw me with you I made sure we met somewhere where we couldn't be seen." "Let me out of here you crazy bitch!" I yell, "Somebody get me out of here!" "Don't waste your breath this basement is sound proof no sound ever leaves here." I struggle with the chains but no use. "You can't do this. You won’t get aways with this" "I can and I will. You are now my rock star sex slave forever." she says as she heads upstairs leaving me alone in the dark dungeon that is now my home.
