The dissaperance of the Polish-Lithuanen Commonwealth

by FanRanKilro

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 1020

Note:The story is not OK.

It was 1619 when the Polish Lithuanen Commonwealth at its glorious tine.But that's the year when it disappeared. Where did it go?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2017-03-07 12:36:54 UTC

Chapter 1

King Sigismund of the Polish-Lithuanen Commonwealth was having a normal day.(That time were no russian,austrian,prussian forces have invaded poland)rakow had been busy lately,People going to the market,buying foods,workers working,soldiers patrolling the streets,robbers robbing,and many more.Krakow was the capital of Poland.Well there mostly two capitals.BUT WHY ON EARTH WILL THEY HAVE TWO CAPITALS?!But,lets get back to the story anyway.

Korniakt Palace

King Sigismund was at his room at the balcony looking at the night,watching the Krakow houses and also the market too! "It is very bright tonight.Brighter than any night in this commonwealth." King Sigismund said to himself.Suddenly,the bright went brighter,more brighter until it became so white that the king almost lost his vision. "Oh my!ITS SO BRIGHT FOR GOD'S SA-" The white bright disapeared without a trace making the king so weirded out.  "Ok what just happened?The white bright disapeared" The king said to himself.The door opened by his servant and went and soked up the to the king saying "Sir,are you alright? We have noitce some very bright white!" The king replied saying "Yes Im fine.Thank you for worrying about me.Anyway,is it already tea time?" "Yes majesty!Today's tea comes from Britain!Its cheap so don't worry my majesty!" The king once again replied saying "Oh ok." "I will see you later my majesty." The servant replied while going out door.

Korniakt Palace,Dining room

The king sitting at the front of the table spoked saying "This tea is quite tasty but I still prefer Chinese green tea" An diplomat named Angelo Josef an Immigrant from the Philippines spoked up saying "Sir?What would we should do to end Russia' invasions at our eastern borders?" The king replied saying "Well what about,having a treaty?Its for the best for our troops and also for the people." Angelo replied saying "Well,thats a great idea!Don't worry.I will handle it.I prom-" The door opened with a smash making the king looked surprised. "What's the problem!?" The king shouted liked someone who had Diarrhea. 'Sir!The our eastern borders with Russia have disappeared! Its just only water!One of our town's market sunk in the   water!" The messenger replied. "Wait what!?Disappeared!? Are you crazy!?Water instead of land!? The king shouted. "Yes sir its true!I'm not lying like a silly kid!" The messenger replied. "Well then were doomed.This will make our tradings with other countries lose out.Well at least we have a huge grasslands for farming and we have a great production of food,weapons,furniture, and many more." The king said standing up from the chair walking away.

A Town Near The Russian Borders

The people are panicking that the borders are now just a sea shore.A started to jump of a building but the guards caught him jumping and was safely catches by the guards.The panicking stopped after an news sender alarmed the people not to panic.They have to calm down until there is a assumed order to evacuate the entire town due to high tide or any calamities.(We all know that the country may be in a typhoon belt right?Right?)

Somewhere in the Equestrian Sea.......

Admiral Arend Dickmann of the Commonwealth navy was in-charge of the sea patrol of any Swedish activity in the sea but it change as patrolling for ships and boats at the the sea turned Prussian borders.After 10 hours of patrolling,an ship was noticed many meters from the ship.But the ship was a pirate ship!The Admiral look to his scope and shouted "Men!Open the cannon ports!Load the cannons!Hoist the sails!Prepare to fire!" Sir!Yes sir!" The crew replied. "Except for me,I have some *vomits* seasick!" An man replied The huge 1st rate ship H.M.S Duma turned near the small yet powerful-like pirate ship."Men.OPEN FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" *BOOM* The cannons fired at once.The ship was almost destroyed but the Admiral spared the pirate ship as it raise a white flag.One of the crew of the pirate ship yelled "We surrender! We surrender spare us mercy!" An sailor spoke to the Admiral spoke up saying "Admiral.Should we spare them?" "Okay then we should spare them.But still,I'm not sparing any Swedes!" The Admiral replied. "Ok sir.Hoist the white flag!" The crew of the pirate ship was rescued by a few sailors but the sailors were gasped of what they see.The crew were ponies.An sailor jump of the boat and said "NOPE IM JUST HALLUCINATINATING FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!" The Admiral gasped at what he see,a bunch of ponies. "My word,its a bunch of ponies,I cannot believe that they can speak.They are too nice to be a pirate." The Admiral said too himself.The pirate crew aboard the ship with a warm welcome from the Admiral "Welcome aboard to the H.M.S Duma.".

                                                                   To be continued

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