True Loyalty

by roxy_roll641

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Romance
Length: 2222

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When Dash and her new Wonderbolts friends go to a summer vacation she must make a choice that will change everyones life.

Ok so this is my first story so please be kind.Also you must know in this story the characters are anthro.In this way you will not make any mistakes.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-11 22:47:29 UTC

Ch1.How all started

Once upon a time there were six elements that kept the world from shattering. The Elements of Harmony. Honesy, Kindness, Generosity, Laughter, Loyalty and Magic. Those six elements were weilded by six brave girls. Togheter they're friendship solved any dificulty this world could met. But after a time one of the six friends had to chose from living her dream or staying with her friends. She was ready to give up her dream but the other elements convinced her it was nothing wrong if she left. They all wanted her to live her dream .And so she did. She left on living her dream on much far-away place than her hometown.

The sound of a book closing was heard in the small camp six friends made.

"What happened next? C'mon tell us R.D!" one of them said

"Sorry Echo..." she said as she put the book in her backpack. "but you allready know what happened next." she finished her sentence.

"Wait a minute..." an icy-blue colored coat colt said. "is this story about how you got in the Wonderbolts? Because I only know one element of harmony in Canterlot and that is you!" he said pointing a finger towards her.

"Yup,you're right Bolt! All our adventures are right here. How is the sleepin' beauty Spitfire?"

"I think you ment sleepin' beauties. Plural. Both Tico and Soarin went asleep!"

"I didn't went asleep. I just wanted to hear Dash's great voice more better!" said a certainly awake Soarin.

"With you're eyes closed?" asked Spitfire

"Her voice is that beautiful you just have to close you're eyes."

"WOW! That didn't make any sense.Plus do you know Dash is stil here?"

"So..."

"You're an idiot Soarin! You don't talk about a girl when she is standing right besides you! Plus you're compliment didn't made any sense." Bolt said running a hand through his silver colored mane.

All the 'awake' friends started laughing. Except Dash who kissed him on the cheek. At that move all started laughing even more harder.

"OHHHHHHHHHHH!Soarin you sneaky devil!" said Echo.

"All right everypony we should go to sleep. Like that lazy ass I call brother."

"You know Spits. You and Tico look the same except he is taller and doesn't have that orange streak in his hair. Are you sure one of you isn't genderswapped?"

"OH NO! Not that stupid crap again! Please stop him Echo! Please stop you're brother!Please!"

"You know Dash...right now I am pretty glad I don't have any brothers and sisters."

"Me too Bolt...me too!" Dash said looking at Echo and Spitfire in a desperate atempt to stop Soarin from talking.

What the five friends didn't knew it was that from far far away someone was watching them.A black entity was looking through a red chrystal ball

"HE HE HE! BETWEEN ME AND THE WORLD IS ONLY YOU MY LITTLE PONIES! ONCE I FINISH YOU SIX I WILL BE THE RULER OF ALL EQUESTRIA. BUT FIRST I SHOULD GATHER SOME ENERGY.

The black entity started looking through a book.His gaze was on the red chrystal ball again.

"AND WHAT BETTER WAY IS BY TAKING SOME FROM AN ELEMENT OF HARMONY! TOO BAD!SHE WAS A NICE GIRL!" In the chrystal was the image of a laughing Rainbow Dash. The creature began preparing a weird jar in form of a heart. Besides that jar were other five pots in the same form. The creature began laughing at the thought of his plan.

Dash awoke with a big headache. For some reasons she couldn't remember anything that hapened after they got in they're tents. She was sharing a tent with Soarin because they were good friends since school and the fact that the boys made a bet . Who ever got the courage to sleep in a tent with a girl for the whole vacation didn't had to do chores the entire year. She actually liked to help, especially when it's about freetime. Soarin needed more freetime. The lack of sleep sure had a drastic efect for his esmerald eyes. The same eyes Dash could stare at forever. She started thinking: 'I need to tell him one day.I totally need to tell him one day.'

Her thoughts were interupted by a groan.

"What the hell? This is the last time I drink cider!" he groaned again

"That's why I don't remember anything. Well at least we didn't...ahem...you know"

"Yeah I know what ahem means....but I can't tell you we didn't."

"Wait! What?" Soarin started laughing.Dash trowed a pillow at him.

"Stop that Soarin! I'm the only one who still loves you're goofy atitude! Plus you wouldn't want a baby out of nowhere now would you? That would change your image in bad!"

"And?"

"You're not thinking with your head now don't you?"

"C'mon. What did I said? Dashie?" in that moment Soarin made his famos puppy face meaning he wanted to know something.

"Ugh...fine. A: you allways act like you have to be the goofy and idiot guy.

B: you can't concentrate, be quiet, patient, responbsable and you are acting like the way you acted at school.AKA a crazy. You never think abot the consequences of your actions. And..."she stopped. Soarin had his head down. She shouldn't have gone so far. "But as I said many times before you era my favorite asshole out of all assholes from the base." when she finished she kissed him on his forehead. "Now let's get something to eat asshole"

He looked up at her, smiled and said:

"After you bitch!" They started laughing until real hunger gave into them.

"Let's go!"

Outside they're tent they found a plate with a nice wraped box and a note that said: For the rainbow of my eye.

"What the hell is this Dash? And from where did it came?"

"Um...it's a gift and I have no idea!" sudenly from a bush came a weird bird with long neck and legs.It was black and had a white and red hat.They exchanged glares at each other and said in the same time: "Grab him!"

"OH NO! OH NO! OH NO! OH NO! OH NO! STOP! STOP! STOP! STOP! STOP! STOP! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT!..."

"This sucker is is fast! Waaaaaaaaay fast!" said a tired Dash.

"Don't worry I'll catch him!"Soarin chased that bird and finally caught it.

"I"ll eat your guts with eggs!"said Soarin in the same time angry and annoyed

"OH NO! OH NO! OH NO! OH NO! OH NO!"

"STOP IT!" they both said at the same time. Soarin and Dash weren't the best at keeping their calm. Especially when that annoying bird was around.

"Why are you here?

"Mw has come to tell news. Someone try to rue wonderland ruler!

"What? Who would want that?"

"The dark darkness!"

"WHAT?"

"Bye bye!" and it disappeared. They excenged glares again. This time because of the fact that the bird wasn't even suppose to be there. It's presence was already alarming. But the message was even more alarming. If that birdbrain comed into the real world that means something was wrong.

Ch2.Preparations

In the a dark cage the shadowy figure was looking through the same book he looked earlier, impressed and delighted in the same time. Suddenly a little writing on the page made him curious.

"GILDA SWEATY COULD YOU COME HERE PLEASE!"

"Yes Master Drako? What do you want me to do?"

"COULD YOU PLEASE READ THAT LITTLE PART IN THE CORNER FOR ME? I'M AFRAID IS TOO LITTLE FOR MY EYES!

"No problem sir! It says: If her or his heart was taken by force she or he will die. However if she or he gave his/her heart willingly they will live bowever they will be unable to feel any emotions! Unless..." before Gilda could finish the creature cut her off.

"IT'S ENOUGH! I KNOW WHAT I NEED TO KNOW! YOU SHOULD GO! YOUR FAMILY IS PROBABLY WAITING YOU!"

"Yes sir!" Gilda agreed and left. The creature now started thinking.If she gives her hear willingly she might have a chance. But will also make her sad because she will stop being able to feel any feeling anymore. This may lead to many problems.Perfect!

In the camp Soarin and Dash sat on a log and ate an apple pie. They were still trying to remember what the hell happened last night. They both forgot their little 'discussion' they had earlier so they were back at their usual behavior. Laughing and occasionally friendly kissing. They weren't a couple but they never said they didn't liked each other. For many people they were only lying and for few they were telling the truth.It was true they were friends since school meaning they were very close. Because of that many people thought it was only a cover for Rainbow Dash. So many thought that only because she has rainbow colored hair she must be a lesbian. That annoyed her, but not in that measure she has to have a relationship with a colt only to prove herself. She never cared what people were thinking about her looks. She liked who she was and she was proud. Soarin on the other hand was glad Dash was his best friend. He always appeared as the most crazy Wonderbolt in the whole base. It didn't bothered him. Nothing ever bothered him. But somethings made him worried. Mostly things about Dash. He did liked her more than a friend but never said anything. He wash just happy with their state. It was annoying because whatever they wanted to be alone someone named Spitfire always came and disturbed them. Speaking of the devil.

"Good morning loverbirds! How could you sleep?" asked a rather tired version of the captain Spitfire who seemed more awake.

Soarin and Dash looked at each other then looked back at her and both said:

"What do you mean by could?"

"What?Don't you remember? Ugh...of course you don't! You were too drunk! Well we drank a bit too much cider and you two started kissing. You went back to you're tent like all of us and you... well you know...did it!

Both of them couldn't believe their ears. After they were sure they didn't committed anything now they were shown wrong! Soarin wasn't surprised with being wrong. He was surprised that Spitfire knew what happened. She wasn't the best at drinking. Or telling the truth. Before he could say something Dash rose up and started walking away.

"Where are you going?" asked Soarin.Das kept walking and said:

"I'm taking a walk!"

"Should I come with you?"

"Neah...it's fine!

As soon as Soarin turned away he looked at Spitfire with the I know you are lying gaze. This was the way he knew she was telling him the real truth.

Dash was taking her walk in the forest. It was nice to slow down a bit. Since she joined the Wonderbolts she never got time to be alone. She never got time to enjoy her life. It was good. And it also kept her sane. One thought made her shiver. She... and Soarin? They...? She smiled and thought: Well I'm sure of one thing now.I'm not confident enough to tell him in face. God drink is a miracle of life when it comes to some things. Suddenly she heard a noise.She turned to see who or what is behind her back. Suddenly she became dizzy and feel on the ground.

When Dash woke up she was sitting on a chair in a cave. Her hands and legs were tied and she couldn't move them.Suddenly she heard a voice:

"AHHHHHHHH! YOU ARE AWAKE! HOW GOOD! OH MY...PARDON MY RUDENESS!YOU MUST HAD A PRETTY ROUGH NIGHT! LET ME GET THOSE AWAY!" In just a second the ropes that kept her tied on the chair disappeared. She rose up from the chair and looked at the huge creature. Finally she spoke.

"What do you want from me?"

"OH! DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO MEAN? WELL THEN...I WANT TO MAKE AN EXCHANGE!" he answered to her question

"An exchange? What exchange?

"WELL FOR START ...I WANT YOUR HEART!"

"My heart? Literary my heart?"

"WELL YES. YOU SEE I NEED ENERGY FOR A CERTAIN THING AND THE ONLY WAY IS BY TAKING SOMEONES HEART. BUT THAT SOMEONE HAS TO BE SPECIAL LIKE YOU. AND SINCE YOU'RE ONE OF THE SIX WARRIORS AND I NEED TO GET RID OF YOU...."

"Then why don't you kill me and take it?" she asked

"IF I DO THAT IT WON'T BE FUN. PLUS IT WILL KILL THAT LITTLE FILLY YOU SEEM TO TAKE CARE (Scootaloo) AND YOUR FRIENDS BUT I NEED TO KILL THEM MYSELF. THAT'S WHY I NEED YOU'RE PERMISSION. YOU SE IF YOU WILLINGLY GIVE YOUR HEART YOU WILL STILL LIVE BUT YOU ARE NOT GOING TO HAVE ANY FEELING ANYMORE. PLUS YOUR FRIEND IS GONNA SEE YOU UNTIL YOU DIE. THIS OR I JUST SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY  KILL EVERY LITTLE LIVING THING ON THE PLANET.YOU CHOOSE."

"Every one?" she asked. The creature simply nodded in agreement. "-sight- All right. But don't hurt anyone."

"EXCELENT!" the creature said this in an excited mood. He was happy he got her to willingly give her heart. Now all he needed was the blood of the other five warriors and his plan will be completed.