Fluttershy was out enjoying the forest, whilst picking berries and flowers for her little critters one evening. Her friends were all busy, or didn't want to come....well, all except for Pinkie Pie, of course.
They were calmly trotting in search of some berries for Angel, for Fluttershy had found that the red berries, when mixed with some blueberries, made a delicious paste that angel liked, served with carrot chunks.
Fluttershy had heard a rustling in the trees, and looked around, only to see her pink pony friend GONE!
"Pinkie?" Fluttershy called, " Pinkie are you there?"
No response.
Fluttershy headed out in search for her pink pony friend, but had no luck. She was worried, but then she heard a rustle in the thick overgrowth. She peeked around, thinking that maybe some poor lost animal was there, but she found something else.
A white pegasus pony, with a golden mane and tail, styled similarly to Pinkie's, and three balloons as a cutie mark. She was similar to Pinkie Pie in every way, aside from her colours and her being a pegasus pony.
"P-Pinkie Pie?" Fluttershy timidly asked. The white pegasus looked at her, but said nothing. "Pinkie ,if that's you, why are you here?" Fluttershy once again asked. The white pegasus pony responded this time with: "No, I'm not Pinkie Pie, I'm her counterpart." Her voice sounded shrill and high-pitched, just like Pinkie's.
"Oh, Okay then." Fluttershy replied. " Then what's your name?"
"Surprise."
"Surprise? Oh! what a lovely name!"
"Yes, I suppose it is. I was called surprise because I always surprised everypony! And I think You deserve a surprise too!" Surprise concluded.
"Oh!" said Fluttershy,"What kind of a surprise?"
"I can't tell you THAT silly, or else it wouldn't be a surprise! Now then, How about we meet at Pinkie's place tomorrow afternoon?"
"Ok" Fluttershy answered. She wasn't usually this open towards new ponies, but Surprise seemed to be a nice pony.
She headed back home and came to the greeting of Angel, her bunny. Fluttershy was surprised that Angel was so annoyed with her, until she realised that she had left her basket of berries by Surprise.
She went back to go get it, hoping surprise wouldn't be too mad at her if she came back again, however, when she arrived there, she was not greeted by Surprise. No, She was greeted by Pinkie Pie...However, she had a much more...Subtle...Look to her.
Her mane was down flat and silky, and her pelt was a darker shade of pink. Her hooves were covered in what looked like blood, but she couldn't tell.
"AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!" Fluttershy screamed, as she saw the knife which Pinkie was holding, and the dead carcus of a young Philly, of who's coat was orange, with a mane and tail of purple. Scootalloo.
Blood was scattered everywhere, staining the bush a shade of dark crimson. Pinkie looked up in surprise, and saw Fluttershy bolting off, faster than Rainbow Dash! Fluttershy was worried, and wanted to talk to Surprise about it the next day, however something happened...
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Surprise was waiting patiently outside Sugar-cube Corner for Fluttershy, who was still terrified at what she saw. When she arrived, Surprise told her to come down into the basement with her. Fluttershy assumed that it was where the Surprise was, and she was right, but, it was't the kind of surprise she had hoped for.
When she got down there, she was greeted with the same evil face of Pinkie, or rather, Pinkamena, that she had seen the day before. She was petrified.
"SURPRIIIISE!" said Surprise, her face too expressing that silky mane and evil grin. Fluttershy couldn't move, her legs were like stone, her voice was like a mouse's, so quiet that none could hear her. She was a goner, she just knew it.
However, Surprise held up a devise. It was odd, but sent a chill down Fluttershy's spine.
" Wh-Wh-What's t-that?" She asked.
"It's your....SURPRISE! Surprise answered, saying surprise in a terrifying dark-echo-ish voice. Surprise then held up the device to Fluttershy, a red black light pulsing from it.
Fluttershy's heart swung into the same beat, her mind becoming fuzzy. Her trembling lips stopped, and curved upwards into a grin. When Surprise took away the light, Fluttershy had been reborn. Her eyes were red, her mane had black streaks in it and her teeth had changed into large fangs.
Surprise and Pinkie exchanged glances, worried. They had hoped to bring Flutters over to their side, but by the demonic grin on her face, and the way she was posing, not moving a muscle, they knew something was wrong.
Three seconds later, Fluttershy charged. The whole room was filled with screams and echoes, and by the time of two minuets, the room was a massacre of blood, pony pelt, and organs. The limbs scattered everywhere, bleeding uncontrollably, and the organs hanging like streamers, the room was a total massacre.
And the one behind it all was a yellow pegasus pony with a pink mane. She was laughing demonically, and had soon changed her name. She was now known as, when in her crazed killing state, Flutterdie.
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When she got out,it was midnight and no pony was around. She went back to her cottage and went to sleep.
When she woke up she has herself again, thinking it was all just a horrible nightmare. She soon realised it was not, though, as she saw her own bloody hooves. She rushed to her bathroom to wash herself, when a familiar purple unicorn knocked at the door.
"Coming!" Fluttershy called. She buried downstairs, forgetting about the blood still in her fur. When the door opened, a grave faced Twilight entered the room.
"Fluttershy," Twilight said, " there has been a murder last night at Sugar Cube Corner, and I thought you should know that Pinkie Pie was one of the victim-and why is there blood on your fur?"
"Oh...uh....This? This is..Uhh...KETCHUP! yea.....ketchup..only ketchup..." Fluttershy answered nervously.
Twilight sensed there was something wrong, because Fluttershy NEVER had ketchup, she didn't like it.
"Fluttershy, what's going on?" asked Twilight.
Fluttershy gave in, and told her the story. She had just gotten up to the part where the device was held up at her, when she stopped, and twitched. She then gained a black streak in her mane and stared at Twilight with that same demonic grin. There was NO EXCAPE...
Author's Note
This is my first story, so if I did anything wrong please tell me =)
thank you.
