The Thunder Twist Chronicle

guys this chapter is short but important all the same. warning: this chapter may contain mature content. i dont know if i should change the rating to mature because of it though. i someone could comment on it that would be great. also if you would like to comment on the story, please do. i cant make it any better if i dont know what is wrong with it. thank you
Chapter 11

I wake up to the most beautiful sight in the world. Sil is sleeping next to me. The gentle rise and fall of her chest is enough to make my heart melt. Seeing her there takes me back to last night. Her flowing mane, her warm body clutched against mine, the soft moans escaping from her mouth. The marriage proposal. Oh, shit that’s right. I proposed to her last night. And she said yes! I have to ask Rarity’s permission, of course, but I’m sure she’ll say yes. She just has to. I take my mask off briefly to give Sil a kiss on the cheek. Then I head downstairs to await Rarity.

I sit and wait for about twenty minutes before Rarity comes in. She seems surprised to see me.

“Oh, good morning, Thunder Twist. You’re up quite early. You usually aren’t awake for another hour.”

“Well, I actually had to ask your permission for something.”

“Oh? And what might that be?” she gives me a knowing look.

“Well, um, I would like to marry your daughter.”

“Well, of course you may.”

“Well you see,” I look up at her. “What?”

“Of course you may marry Shining Silver. I always expected you would.”

“Thank you so much, Rarity. You don’t know what this means to me.” I grab a piece of bread from the counter. “I need to go see the Princess. I’ll be back as soon as possible.” I walk out the door and decide to just walk to the castle.

It is a pleasant day outside. It’s hard to believe that yesterday the whole town was wondering where Princess Luna was. Then I killed Discord…

I stop by a nearby bush and vomit into it. I can’t think about that. I continue walking to the castle. All the shops are just beginning to open up. I walk by them without so much as a second glance. I finally reach the great golden doors of the castle. The two Unicorn guards are there, as usual. They look at me as I approach.

“I have come to see the Princess. Is she available?”

The one on the left speaks up. “She will be shortly. If you would, please go inside and wait she will be down momentarily.”

“Thank you.” They open the doors for me, and I walk in.

I walk up to the dais and sit there waiting for the Princess.

I have been waiting for ten minutes when Princess Celestia walks into the room. Behind her are Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle. All three smile when they see me.

Princess Celestia speaks to me. “Greetings, Thunder Twist. I am glad you have come. Luna has told me what happened in the Everfree Forest, and, though your actions were harsh, I do not blame you for what you did. That being said, I will not condone wanton killing. I expect you to keep your composure next time when facing an enemy.”

“Princess, you misunderstand. If I had my way, I would never kill again. It makes me nauseous just to think about it.”

“Good. Well, that is all I wanted to say. You are dismissed, Thunder Twist.”

“Actually, Princess, there was another matter I wished to discuss.”

“Oh, and what might that be.”

“Well, I wanted to direct this at Princess Luna.”

My Princess turns to me with a caring smile. “I’m listening, Thunder Twist.”

I look to the ground nervously. “Well I was wondering if you would preside over my wedding with Shining Silver.”

All three ponies share a collective gasp. Twilight speaks first. “Did I hear correctly? You and Shining Silver are going to get married.”

“Yes, ma’am. I asked her last night, and Rarity gave her blessing this morning.” I conveniently leave out the whole sex ordeal. Sweet Celestia, that was nice.

“I would love to preside over your wedding, Thunder Twist.” Luna smile happily at me. “How does a month from tomorrow sound?”

“That sounds great,” I exclaim. I bow low. “Thank you so much, Princess. I’ll go tell Sil.” I fly out of the hall.

I land outside Rarity’s house and walk in. I smell blueberry muffins baking in the kitchen. I force myself to not go in there and walk up to my room, where Sil is still sleeping. I crawl in beside her. She stirs slightly. I brush her mane out of her face and cuddle up close. I then drift into a sound sleep.