Culture Shock

MorsTactica Here

I am no longer a Brony. I attempted to get back into but it simply isn't my thing. It is likely to blame that I mostly enjoyed MLP during, well, summer, and therefore it was mostly filling in my boredom. In the update I will include a plotline I had laid out. I will allow anyone who wishes to finish it, and credit would be appreciated. I apologize for not finishing it myself, but as I said, MLP isn't within my interests. Look for me on FanFiction, or more likely, Fiction Press. I should be uploading more stories within those portals. I always go by either "MorsTactica" or "Mors Tactica" so that's how you'll know it's me. That's all I have. Here's that plot:

Dev Notes:

|UGMC| Mors Tactica: His mom is pretty cool too, average house wife. Had to pick up a job after her husband died. The stress of it caused her already shaky pregnancy to end early, and the baby didn't make it. She spoils Leon because she feels like a horrible mother and it's the only thing that keeps her from drinking or something
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: It's plot device to allow RD to live with Leon-until the house her “House” burned in Norway, then permanent.
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: But a sad one
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: :'(
DrReinmann: "Hey mom, can this former pony then only recently clothed lady with rainbow hair live with me? "
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: These things are only being stated so directly because we're character building, I'm a much better writer than for him to say "I'm Leonidas Miller, aka Leon Miller. I'm a moderately HC gamer, I play a lot but never do any competitions. I'm moderately patriotic, and I may enlist. I'm is not really any one caste as far as a grouping, I just have friends. Most are not very popular. My hobby is shooting, I'm a born deadeye. I am also very familiar with weapons, and I'm thinking of being a weapon designer professionally after college. I am interested in flying.”
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: His dad was... Cool
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: He was in the Marines, flew Ospreys. Was shot down in Helmand in 08.
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: Didn't make it back home.
|UGMC| Mors Tactica: His dad took him flying when he was home, and Leon loved it. His dad loved to fly, and was very patriotic so -dream job-
12:25 AM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: Ok so, Leon is a average bro, good for our situation, Ms. Morris is a widow and kind of crazy but had good intentions, daddy Morris is a dead hero of war, and RD is a necked confused lady with new genitals
9:01 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: I have it!
9:01 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: Ian, it's so simple
9:01 PM - DrReinmann: Oh, hi
9:01 PM - DrReinmann: What?
9:02 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: I have a conflict!
9:02 PM - DrReinmann: With?
9:02 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: Leon's mother will start dating a changling!
9:02 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: It will lead to the discovery of the way Rd got through
9:03 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: And RD will have the chance to go back, or if I want it to be a tragedy, she'll have to
9:03 PM - DrReinmann: Fancy.
9:03 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: Too cliche?
9:03 PM - DrReinmann: Nope.
9:03 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: Happiness
9:03 PM - DrReinmann: Well played.
9:04 PM - |UGMC| Mors Tactica: I need a villian name. Something Italian.
-Much debate-
9:08 PM - DrReinmann: Aloysius Molinelli

The plot from the Mall onward:
Saturday: Date/romantic non-sexual ending

Sunday: Character building, general day. RD learns more of human society. Less implied misanthropy.

Monday: mostly skipped school, come home late to meet changeling. All seems fine, RD picks up on something odd. It is dismissed. Sicily.

Tuesday-Friday: General romantic crap, along with serious character building and displays of how strong or not strong RD and Leon's relationship is. Possible seconds thoughts or breakup, doubtful though. Too much Drama.

Long term:

1 month
Aloysius and Ms. Miller get closer, but the young couple's doubts grow.

2 Months
Real conflict introduced, Leon doubts Aloysius but does nothing

3-4 months
Confrontation, conclusion. Could be sequel.