Karmic Retribution

by Crimson Blade79

Rating: mature
Tags: Big Macintosh, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Human, Romance, Original Character, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Prince Blueblood, Crossover, Sex, Tragedy
Length: 2228

Maria goes to Equestria and fights Travis for Equestria's freedom.

After Travis has taken over Equestria with an iron fist, there seems to be no hope until another displaced comes to Equestria. Her name is Maria Dreemur and she isn't very happy about these turn of events. She then joins in the fight for Equestria's freedom. Find out more by reading this story. Move forward into the Garden of Madness.

Published 2017-04-11 02:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2017-08-06 23:20:43 UTC

Prologue

Comic Con

One day at a certain comic con that you may all be familiar with if you read the previous story, Maria Dreemur decided to go to the comic con for old times sake. She parked her car near the entrance of the comic con and got out of the car along with her friend Jax. Maria is Japanese, 18 years old but is younger than Connor, has black wavy hair, hazel eyes, black jacket with fur linings, white scarf, blue jeans, white shoes, and red shirt. She pretty much looks like my cover art except she is not wearing the same outfit or at least not for now. Jax is an African who was born in Japan, 18 years old but is older than Connor, has dark brown spiky hair, dark brown eyes, red headband, black jacket, black pants, red shirt, and black shoes. Wait a minute, isn't Maria dead you say, well she isn't in this universe. You see this is yet another alternate universe where instead of Maria dying to the thug in the street that fateful night in The Price To Pay For Power, it was Connor who died that night. Now you pretty much know Maria's background story but if you want to learn more, I may reveal more information further in the story if you comment below. Now it's time to see what Maria and Jax are up to.

"Hey Jax, what was it like when you and Connor used to go here?", asked Maria.

"It was great, I miss those days. Basically we would look for cool stuff or we would check out new stuff for the stuff we like.", answered Jax.

"That sounds like fun. Why don't we check out that shop over there?", said Maria while pointing at the iconic shop that Connor and Travis used.

"I don't know Maria, that place looks a little creepy and we're not even in the horror section of this place.", said Jax.

"Oh come on, don't tell me your scared. Let's take a peek, it'll only take a few seconds.", said Maria.

"Fine but if something creepy jumps out at me, I'm getting outta here.", said Jax.

When Maria and Jax walked into the shop, they saw many novelty items that look old and valuable. Then they saw a relatively creepy old lady sitting at the cash register and the old lady said, "Come in, come in, don't be shy. What would you like to purchase today?"

"Maybe that cool looking book over there.", said Maria while pointing at a book that looks suspiciously like the book Travis stole.

"Out of all the things in this place you pick a book. Why don't you just pick up that feather duster over there?", said Jax sarcastically.

"Well I'm getting it anyway. How much does this book cost?", asked Maria.

"That'll be 5 dollars young lady.", answered the old lady.

"Okay, um, here's 5 dollars.", said Maria as she handed the 5 dollars to the old lady and after that the old lady put the 5 dollars in the cash register.

The old lady then said, "I have a question that I would like to ask before you go."

"Sure, what is it?", asked Maria.

"I don't know about this Maria, this just getting all kinds of creepy right now.", said Jax.

"Don't be such a baby Jaxxie.", said Maria.

"Don't call me that, you know I hate it when you call me that.", said Jax.

"To answer your question young lady, my question is: if you could wish for one thing, what would it be?", said the old lady.

Maria then mumbled something in the first sentence but spoke up in the second sentence, "I wish I had the power to protect Connor. Wait a minute, why would you ask this question in the first place, sounds kinda personal?"

"The reason why I asked you this question is because I can grant your wish but at a price.", said the old lady.

"What price are we talking about?", asked Maria.

"Oh come on, you can't be taking this seriously are you?", asked Jax.

"Whatever gets us out of here faster works for me.", said Maria in a hushed voice to make sure the old lady didn't hear her.

"Oh, I get it.", said Jax in a hushed voice.

"The price is simple, all you have to do is go to the dimension where a monster lies and slay that beast. This monster was responsible for killing my husband and I want you to kill this monster to avenge my poor husband.", said the old lady.

"Sure, I know how it feels to lose someone you love.", said Maria.

"You can't be serious about this Maria. Are going to just go to who knows where and just kill a monster for an old widow?", said Jax.

"Yes I am Jax.", said Maria.

Jax then thought to himself, "How does Connor put up with this crap?" Then Jax said, "Fine, I'll come with you. How are we going anyway?"

"I will open up a portal to send you two to the realm in which the monster lies. Be careful though because he has supernatural abilities even beyond my own and I'm am a former void god.", said the old lady.

"Wait a minute, a void god, you mean those people who watch over different dimensions and stuff?", asked Jax.

"Yes, or at least I used to be. I retired a few years ago, so did my husband before that monster killed him. Now go through the portal or it may be too late for me to send you through.", said the old lady while opening a portal.

"Bye lady. I'll be sure to avenge your husband.", said Maria before Jax and Maria jumped through the portal.

The old lady then sat back down on her chair. She then picked up a picture of herself and her husband. Her husband was the old man that Travis killed. She put the picture back where it was and waited.

Ponyville

Maria and Jax landed at the gates of Ponyville without a scratch on them. Jax then went all brony mode and started pointing out all of the landmarks that were in Ponyville. Maria wasn't really paying attention, she was just looking at all of these buildings in disbelief. Then ponies saw Maria and Jax.

One pony asked, "Who are you two? Aren't you 2 humans or something?"

"Yes we are, why do you ask?", answered Maria.

"Because we knew a human named Connor.", said the pony.

"Connor?", asked Maria.

Author's Note

Well, hope you liked the story so far. Sorry it took so long to make this because I really didn't have the time on my hands until now. I also had a few internet problems but it didn't stop me from making this for you all. Comment below if you want to vote on what happens next. I'll be making an update to this story soon.

The Megalomaniac vs The Fallen Prince

Travis's Pyramid

It has been a couple of years since Travis took over Equestria and the rest of the world. He now wears a black cape that is in Asgore's style, golden armor of an unknown alloy, and a crown. Ever since he conquered Equestria Travis spent most of his free time finding a way to become more powerful than the void gods so he can become the ruler of the multiverse. He is just has a few more steps left to achieve his goal.

Travis's trusted servant Lucifer walked towards him and said, "You have a guest in the Judgement Hall, Lord Travis."

"Who is it?", asked Travis.

"Former prince Blueblood.", answered Lucifer.

Travis then smirked and said, "About time that little bitch came to surrender to me. I will go to his location at once. Keep watch while I'm gone."

Travis then teleported to Judgement Hall.

Judgement Hall

Blueblood was standing at the beginning of Judgement Hall until Travis appeared a short distance across from him.

Travis then said, "Have you come to finally join me Blueblood?"

"I'll never join you! You killed Aunt Celestia, Luna, and the rest of my family. You even killed Flurry Heart you sadistic megalomaniac!", said Blueblood.

"I'm sorry that you feel that way. In that case...*draws Yamato* You won't leave here alive.", said Travis

Blueblood Boss Theme

"I'm sorry Auntie. This is why I never make promises.", thought Blueblood before his left eye shined blue.

"Well whaddya know, looks like Blueblood isn't a one trick pony after all.", said Travis with a sadistic smirk.

"I'll make you regret everything you've done.", said Blueblood before summoning Gaster Blasters and shooting them at Travis.

Travis dodged them and thought, "No way he got those powers on his own. Which means me and my brother weren't the only humans here after all."

Travis then sliced the Gaster Blasters into pieces. Blueblood used telekinesis after Travis destroyed the Gaster Blasters to slam him against the walls. Travis broke free of the telekinesis and snapped his fingers before swinging his sword at Blueblood. Blueblood blocked the attack with a bone staff but he got shot in the back of his head by a mysterious figure who was revealed to be Travis. After Blueblood's body collapsed the Travis in front of Blueblood was revealed to be a doppleganger.

Travis then said, "Sorry Bluebitch but I'm to busy to babysit you."

Travis then teleported away.

Author's Note

Looks like Travis has completed his regicide. What will happen next?

The Deal

1 year ago

The Void

Travis teleported into The Void. He didn't plan this, in fact he was trying to go into the world of Mortal Kombat to learn more fighting skills. Travis wasn't wearing his armor, cape, and crown. Instead he was wearing his original outfit from before he went to Equestria.

"What the hell is going on here? I didn't plan this.", said Travis.

"No you didn't. I brought you here. I have a proposition for you.", said a mysterious robed figure.

Travis got interested and asked, "What is this proposition?"

"If someone were to find all three of your tokens in their world, you can have half my power.", said the mysterious figure.

"Who are you anyway and why are you offering this?", asked Travis.

"I am Xolotl, the void god of death, disease, and deformity. The reason why I gave you this deal is because you will need my power very soon.", said the now identified Xolotl.

"Why?", asked Travis.

"Because in the future there will be a rebellion against you. The leader's name is Chad and he will also slay me in the future. Slay him first and I will give you the other half of my power.", said Xolotl.

"You have yourself a deal Xolotl.", said Travis after contemplating for a few minutes and extending his arm.

Xolotl then extended his skeletal and deformed arm and shook Travis's hand. After that Xolotl said,"Very good. In the future before you face the rebellion and acknowledge it's presence, a soul of fear will have found all three of your tokens and will be sent straight to you."

"Why would you give me power because of that?", asked Travis.

"Because you need my power for what lies ahead of that event.", said Xolotl

"Sounds reasonable. I'll be going, I have some business to take care of.", said Travis before teleporting away.

Xolotl then just stood and waited.

Author's Note

Holy crap Travis has something cooked up. Can the rebellion stand a chance? Find out next chapter.

Revelations

Ponyville

"There's no way you saw Connor, he's been dead for almost a year.", said Maria.

The pony Maria was talking to had a shocked and kind of curious expression on her face. The pony then asked, "What are your names?"

"My name is Jackson Maxwell but you can call me Jax.", answered Jax.

"My name is Maria Dreemur but you can call me Maria.", answered Maria.

The pony had a shocked and fearful expression on her face. The pony then said, "Connor talked about both of you and that you were good friends but he said that Maria was dead for almost a year."

Both Jax and Maria had shocked and nervous faces when they heard what the pony said. Jax then said, "OK this is just getting creepy."

"I can't believe it, me dead instead of him. I wish that was the case back home", thought Maria. Maria then asked, "What's your name anyway?"

"My name is Sweetie Bell.", said the now identified pony.

"Aw, that's so cute.", said Maria.

"I'm not cute!", said Sweetie Bell in irratation.

"Wait a minute, now that we are in Equestria, shouldn't we go kill the monster who killed the old lady's husband?", said Jax.

"Oh yeah, I almost forgot. See you later Sweetie Bell, bye.", said Maria.

"Wait, I think I may know who you are talking about.", said Sweetie Bell.

"Really, who?", asked Maria.

"The only monster I know of is Travis and he calls himself Lord Travis now since he conquered Equestria.", said Sweetie Bell.

"That son of a bitch!", said Maria with an angered look.

Author's Note

Second chapter is out now. Hope all of you like it.