Crushed muffins

by Legendary sword pony

Rating: mature
Tags: Sad, Dinky Hooves, Romance, Derpy Hooves, Slice of Life, Sex, Human, Doctor Whooves, Cheerilee, Drama, Anon, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Second Person
Length: 1169

Love is great, but when it's abusive....

After being married to Docter hooves for so long, Derpy's been abused by him, he punches her, cuts her, and does even worse. She's tired of the abuse, so one night she just left and took Dinky with her. They stayed at a friend's house for a while, that friend is you.

Published 2017-12-18 20:40:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-12-18 20:40:06 UTC

Internal Torment

Author's Note

Hopefully everyone can enjoy this story if you don't then I understand, but don't bash on me please, without further ado, read on.

Internal Torment

You are Anonymous, a human who came to Equestria thanks to a spell that went wrong by Twilight. When you first came here the ponies were frightened by you instantly, so frightened to the point where Celestia and Luna were involved, you were going to get Executed until the purple unicorn vouched for you, pretty soon after you were able to stay in ponyville, getting your own house, and a pretty decent job as a mailman, it took a while for the ponies in the town to warm up to you, all but a few, Twilight and her friends are obvious, even the princesses, and then the one mare you can't seem to stop thinking of, her name is Ditzy also known as Derpy Hooves.

You and her have been friends ever since you started your job of delivering mail, you both talked about a lot of things, one being her favorite subject which is muffins, you thought it was cute how excited she gets over muffins, and it crushed your heart finding out that she's already married, Doctor Whooves was his name and to her he was the best thing that ever happened to her, until now.

Derpy has been noticing that he's starting to become rough towards her, Dinky witness the whole thing go down, and you have even noticed that Derpy have been a little distant from you and everypony else, you don't know why, but you feel as though it will get worse.

You woke up in your home ready to start the day, it was your day off today, you didn't want to waste it, hoping to spend some time with your friends you get out of your bed, take a shower get dressed and run out the door.

As you ran out the door you bumped into something and tumbled over.

"Ow." The voice said.

Once your vision came back, you opened your eyes and saw the cross-eyed Pegasus herself. "D-Derpy, sorry, I didn't see where I was go-" You were cut off when you saw her face, bruises and cuts were all around her. "Derpy are you ok?"

" Hi." Was all she said, the word was usually cheerful but now it sound distressed, Troubled, Something that didn't sound like Derpy at all.

"Who did this to you?" You say as you cracked your knuckles. "Is it somepony I know, because I swear if I see the Fuck who di-"

"It's nothing." She cuts you off, Having nothing else to say, You let her continue. "I flew into a pole this morning."

You knew that was a lie, you've seen Rainbow dash crash a few time, and all those crashes always ended up with a couple of scratches, so you just stared at her. "Derpy tell me what's going on, does this have something to do with doctor whooves." You said as you reached out to pet her, she slaps your hand away, Her eyes well up with tears.

"JUST TAKE YOUR MAIL!" She said throwing your mail at you and starts flying.

"Derpy, wait." You call out to her, but she was already gone, you stat to wonder what's going on, you plan on finding out soon.

At school the Fillies and Colts were all doing a project, hearts and hooves day was just a few days away, everypony was enjoying the project, all except one, Dinky was just sitting there looking at the heart-shaped paper, trying her best to fight back tears that were so desperately trying to escape.

Cheerilee notice this and approached the little Unicorn. "Dinky, is everything ok, you look depressed, is somepony bullying you?"

Dinky shook her head. "My mom." Was all she said.

"what's wrong with your mom?" Cheerilee asked, waiting for an answer, but the filly kept quiet. " Dinky, I can't help you out unless you tell me what's wrong." She smiles sweetly at Dinky.

"She's hurt." Dinky replied, getting ready to break down.

"It's ok Sweetie let it out." Cheerilee said as she hugged Dinky.

The dam burst, Dinky hugged her back and cried hard into her chest, all the fillies and Colts in the room started watching.

"How is she hurt?" Cheerilee whispered to Dinky.

She choked on her words but managed to say one word. "D-dad."

Cheerilee's eyes widened, she knew about Derpy and Doctor Whooves's wedding, she never knew that the doctor himself had an Aggressive side, this was new since she never experience this kind of behavior when she dated him. "What....exactly does he do to her?" Cheerilee asked, now getting nervous.

"He chokes her." She said with a shaky voice.

"Oh my." Cheerilee replied.

"He calls her names."

"What kind of names does he call her?"

Dinky hesitated for a bit but whispered to her. "S-slut."

"Oh Celestia..."

"And...also a b-" Cheerilee covered Dinky's mouth.

"That's ok I don't need to hear anymore, listen Dinky, do you know anyone who can help your mom?"

Dinky's mind went straight to you. "Anon." She said outloud in somewhat joy.

"Ok, well go see him after class ok? Cheerilee said, Dinky nods in reply.

Your sitting on a chair wondering how it came to this, the mane 6 did a last minute changed for a sleep over, an all mares sleep over, so your stuck with Big Mac & Spike, these two are ok but they're a little boring to hang out with, they just sit around all day playing some board game that you have no interest in.

"Aren't you going to play Anon?" The purple Dragon asked you, you snap back to reality and respond to him.

"Nah, I'm good."

"So your just going to sit there?"

"Yep."

"And do what?"

"Dream Spike, I'm going to dream." Spike and Big Mac looked at each other then at you, Spike soon shrugged his shoulders and went back to playing the game with Big Mac.

Derpy landed on a cloud trying her best to patch up the wound that started to leak, she tried fighting back tears but to no avail.

"Doctor, why did you change, why do you hate me?" Derpy said to herself. "What did I do to deserve this, what did I do wrong?"

"Woah, are you ok?" Derpy looked at who was addressing her, the rainbow mane was the first thing she seen.

Derpy quickly covered her face. "Hi Rainbow dash." Derpy said with a little sniff. "Yeah I'm fine."

Rainbow dash wasn't convinced. " Yeah, your not fine, you need to go to the hospital." Rainbow said to her.

"Really I'm fine." Derpy replied back.

"Derpy, look at yourself, do all those cuts and bruises really look ok to you?"

"Let's just drop this subject please."

"Ok, but at least come with me so we can have Fluttershy patch that up."

"Ok."