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The Influence

by GMSeskii
Twilight Sparkle awakens in a mysterious room with a mysterious artifact - in a story where your comments influence the outcome.

Twilight Sparkle wakes up in a strange, mysterious room, with no idea how she got there. Alone, afraid, and confused, she is left to make sense of this position she finds herself in.

That's the basic premise, but that's only part of the story. You see, fair reader, your comments can change the course of events. Go ahead, leave one. See what happens next update.

Due to the interactive nature of this fic, I cannot promise regular updates, unlike in my other stories. Nor will I say anything else about it at all - for you are in a position of power. If I tell you anything, it'll ruin the experience. It's a comment-driven story, after all.

The story is now complete. It's still a readable story, but it's no longer active.

Serves as an optional prelude to Songs of the Spheres.

There is a forum related to this story: Influencing the Influence. It contains supplemental material, but is definitely wrought with spoilers.

-GM, master of influential decisions and the interactive story.

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Drama
Science Fiction
Adventure
Crossover
 
OOFPT

165318 words: Estimated about 14 hours to read
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46 Chapters:

  1. I 2017-04-07 21:29:29 UTC
    1306
  2. II 2017-04-10 23:53:26 UTC
    1492
  3. III 2017-04-15 18:25:38 UTC
    1580
  4. IV 2017-04-19 21:24:00 UTC
    2529
  5. V 2017-04-22 16:51:27 UTC
    3498
  6. VI 2017-04-29 14:07:33 UTC
    3531
  7. VII 2017-05-06 02:57:13 UTC
    4893
  8. VIII 2017-05-10 14:17:05 UTC
    4054
  9. IX 2017-05-14 01:14:35 UTC
    4765
  10. X 2017-05-20 19:35:07 UTC
    4671
  11. XI 2017-05-24 14:22:42 UTC
    3235
  12. XII 2017-06-02 21:32:08 UTC
    5164
  13. XIII 2017-06-07 21:40:00 UTC
    4022
  14. XIV 2017-06-16 14:18:09 UTC
    4782
  15. XV 2017-06-23 21:50:29 UTC
    7108
  16. XVI 2017-07-07 20:21:09 UTC
    6404
  17. XVII 2017-07-13 17:30:24 UTC
    5484
  18. XVIII 2017-07-17 14:58:12 UTC
    5301
  19. XIX 2017-07-20 13:57:28 UTC
    6822
  20. XX [END OF PART 1] 2017-07-24 16:37:21 UTC
    7692
  21. XXI 2017-08-10 14:21:14 UTC
  22. XXII 2017-08-14 01:09:50 UTC
    4404
  23. XXIII 2017-08-16 15:59:04 UTC
    6050
  24. XXIV 2017-08-19 15:26:34 UTC
    4943
  25. XXV 2017-08-22 19:21:12 UTC
    4600
  26. XXVI 2017-08-26 13:47:59 UTC
    4624
  27. XXVII 2017-08-29 23:36:53 UTC
    4760
  28. XXVIII 2017-09-01 14:52:09 UTC
    2363
  29. XXIX 2017-09-04 14:32:37 UTC
    1943
  30. XXX 2017-09-07 13:02:39 UTC
    2315
  31. XXXI 2017-09-10 15:00:35 UTC
    2656
  32. XXXII 2017-09-13 14:52:42 UTC
    2598
  33. XXXIII 2017-09-16 14:48:34 UTC
    2977
  34. XXXIV 2017-09-19 13:17:30 UTC
    3434
  35. XXXV 2017-09-22 14:00:35 UTC
    2175
  36. XXXVI 2017-09-25 14:52:41 UTC
    2063
  37. XXXVII 2017-09-27 14:49:16 UTC
    3643
  38. XXXVIII 2017-09-30 16:58:42 UTC
    1908
  39. XXXIX [END OF PART 2] 2017-09-30 20:34:09 UTC
    933
  40. XL 2017-10-02 12:47:07 UTC
    1507
  41. XLI 2017-10-04 13:19:34 UTC
    1696
  42. XLII 2017-10-05 13:56:17 UTC
    1743
  43. XLIII 2017-10-06 13:53:55 UTC
    3032
  44. XLIV 2017-10-07 15:01:29 UTC
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  45. XLV 2017-10-08 15:25:33 UTC
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  46. Credits 2017-10-08 21:13:38 UTC
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