Jack The Changeling: The Beginning RE-WRITE

Jack had made it to a town called Ponyvile. He had set up camp right outside town. He had been traveling for 8 days. The journey was hard and

long. He had barely anything. He had binoculars, a compass, a pair of x-ray vision goggles, some blueprints of weapons and stuff, and a special

laser pistol that he made for General Blackwing. It was styled like a revolver, and was amazing.

He had transformed himself as a colt. He had yellow skin, blue eyes, blue and white hair, and no cutie mark. When he entered town, he

thought he saw a chariot above him flying. He thought he saw a baby purple dragon in it. How weird. He bumped into a stallion.

He was tall and about as old as Jack. He had brown fur, a more darker shade of brown hair, and a cutie mark hourglass. He

was also wearing a tie. He was walking away from a blue box.

He acted as he knew who Jack really was. "Hey kid, If you ever see this box again no matter what form you come in, give it a knock." He said.

Jack then thought he saw the chariot and looked. He then heard a strange noise and turned back. The blue box was gone.

He wanted to see more. He found the train station, and there was a line. He hopped on the back car when a conductor saw him. The train

started moving, and it was faster than the conductor. Jack then stuck out his tongue at the conductor. He slept for the entire ride. He woke up

to an announcer saying we are almost at Canterlot. Jack stepped out back and saw the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. A city on the

side of a mountain. He didn't want to be seen, and he knew a lot of spells. He used a teleportation spell and found him in an empty throne

room. He quickly hid behind the throne as someone entered. It was a tall white figure with wings and a horn. Jack Knew who it was, for he

read many books about her. It was the princess. Princess Celestia.