The Apple of Her Eyes

by Israel Yabuki

Love In The Barnhouse

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Love In The Barnhouse

4 months have passed since the fire incident, and the construction of the house has finally been completed. With the funds that the Apple family made during cider season, it took little time to pay the construction workers for all of their hard work. Until then, you had to live with Applejack’s good friend Twilight Sparkle, who luckily had plenty of room in her castle.

You were quite fond of both Twilight and her official human husband, Beau. Around the same time when you moved in with them, they ended up getting married the very next month. And much to your surprise, they were expecting a child: a baby girl to be precise.

In a way, you were gonna be an uncle to your new niece. Every now and then, you also spent a guy’s night out with Beau, either eating out at a restaurant or having drinks, mostly it was him, since he was already 21. You, on the other hand, were almost turning 20. Therefore, according to the laws of Ponyville, which was the same as California’s law back at your old homeland, you had to be 21 to drink.

Though you barely knew each other at the time, Twilight made sure you were invited to the wedding. Knowing you saved one of her best friends’ sister was more than enough of a reason to include you on their big and special day.

Looking at Twilight’s relationship with Beau also made you curious about your future with Applejack. It began a month after Twilight and Beau got married that you found the courage to ask Applejack if she wanted to go out with you sometimes. After giving it a few days of thought, she agreed. The rest of the Apples approved of you going out with her. You were a bit scared at first, thinking what Big Mac might do to you after asking to go out with his little sister.

He took it surprisingly well, rather than get protective of her. In fact, your spine almost gave in from the big hug you received from the bulky stallion. Maybe this is what it’s like to have a big brother figure.

Resting underneath the shade of the tree as these memories played in your head, you failed to realize the playful figure who was approaching you. Next thing you knew, your face was pressing against something soft and squishy, followed by the sound of an all-too familiar voice.

“Ya likin’ yer lil restin’ spot there, Bucky?” AJ asked. Of course it was hard to answer while she continued to press your face in between her bosom. As for her calling you Bucky, that was the nickname she gave you some time around last month during your relationship with her.

“Uh, in a way, yes. But uh… is there any reason why you’re acting this way, AJ?” you asked, muffled through her bosom. She had been acting like for quite some time for about 4 days now. Every chance she got, she’d either rub your body in places like your abdomen or your crotch, or she’d brush past you, swaying her hips and brushing her tail against your side.

“Mind speakin’ up a bit there, honey-pie? Ah couldn’t hear ya over mah breasts,” she chuckled, stroking your cheeks. It seemed like Applejack was really trying to push your buttons, but of course not in a bad way. Even so, you had to find out exactly why she’s acting this way.

You took your face out of her breasts, gasping for air. “Uhh… could you excuse me for just a tiny bit, I gotta go get a drink of water,” you said.

“Hurry back now. Don’t keep a gal waitin’,” she said, seductively. You chuckled nervously as you got up and ran back to the house. You went inside and bursted into the kitchen, grabbing a cup and filled it up with water.

“Problem?” asked an elderly voice. You recognized it as Granny Smith’s voice and then turned around to face her. “What in tarnation is goin’ on there, sonny, ya get heat stroke?”

“I... I guess I’m just a bit confused Granny Smith.”

“About what?”

“Well, it’s about AJ. She’s been acting strange for the past 4 days. Every chance she gets, she’s literally teasing me by brushing parts of her body against mine and shooting me those bedroom eyes of hers. You have any idea what’s going on?”

Granny Smith chuckled slightly and patted me on the shoulder. “Sonny, ya have nothin’ to worry about, Applejack’s just goin’ through her heat cycle.

This made you gulp as despite only being in this world for a couple of months, you were well aware of the heat cycle process. Mood swings are especially common for a mare going through the cycle. And considering that AJ is on day 4 of her heat cycle, it’ll only get more dangerous for you if she goes on day 5.

Before, you never saw any reason to be afraid of Applejack, especially since you’ve grown fond of each other. Now it’s unexpectedly come down to having to mate with her, probably ending up getting her pregnant. But... the more you thought about it, you start to think it might not be such a bad idea. During Twilight’s and Beau’s wedding, Twilight was able to bare his child. Maybe the ponies here have a mixture of both animal and human DNA.

If that’s the case, then maybe later on after the day is done, you’ll meet up with Applejack for a little “apple bucking” so to speak. The thought brought a blush to your cheeks which Granny Smith didn’t miss.

“Ya know this doesn’t surprise me at all dear. After all, Applejack has been tellin’ me how she’s been wantin’ to express how much she appreciates everythin’ ya did for her an’ us,” she said, placing a hand on your shoulder.

You looked out the window and saw Applejack was still waiting for you by the tree and noticed how she rubbed parts of her body in a sexual way. With a sigh, you walked out of the house and back at the apple orchard.

Applejack took notice as you returned and gave you the same expression as before.

“Feelin’ refreshed sugarcube? Ah almost thought ya were gonna bail on me,” she chuckled before she noticed your serious expression. “Somethin’ wrong hon?”

“Not exactly Applejack but I just had a talk with Granny Smith and she told me why you’re acting so... frisky. I know you’re going through your heat cycle but I was too thick-headed to realize it up until now. I know how excruciating it gets for you the longer you’re in heat. So, I was thinking that maybe later on tonight we could... get together for some private time?”

It was AJ’s turn to blush not just that you have figured out her condition, but from what you were implying. She looked away, but you turned her to face you and gave her a warm smile and a passionate kiss.

Her whole body tensed up from that single kiss and returned your affections by deepening the kiss and stroking your hair. By the time you broke the kiss, the two of you were gasping for air.

Applejack looked into your eyes and stroked your cheek. “10 PM...” she panted still taking in some much needed oxygen. “Meet me... in the barn...”


Later on, the day went by like normal. AJ had to struggle with her farm work due to her estrus cycle, but she still managed to get the job done. When it was time for dinner, Granny Smith cooked some baked potatoes with some grilled cheese sandwiches. And for a drink, you had some apple cider, probably the best drink you ever had.

When dinner was over, you waited in the barn where you usually slept for AJ. It was 5 minutes ‘till 10 o’clock. The only light that shined inside the barn was a simple lantern and the light from the moon outside.

You laid on top of the hay bail, looking at the moon which was full tonight. Tonight was gonna feel extra special when AJ gets here. You let out a sigh, not sure if you were completely ready for what would happen tonight. This was going to be your first time and from what you heard, the first time is always painful. You just hoped that you don’t disappoint Applejack.

Speaking of which, you saw as the orange mare appears from behind the door and walk in, shutting it behind her as she walks up to you. A warm blush once again appeared on her freckled cheeks as she approached you. She was, in your eyes, the very definition of a beautiful young mare.

“Applejack I want you to answer me honestly, do you actually want to do this?” you asked as you caressed her cheek. It’s one thing for a mare to be intimate just to relieve her heat cycle, but it’s completely different if it’s because.. she loves someone.

“Bucky, Ah’ve never more sure of it than anythin’ else. Ah wouldn’t give mah virginity to anypony else except you. Yer honest, kind, hard-workin’, an’ ya treat me like a real mare. Ah would gladly give mah virginity to you an’ if Ah end up with a foal, Ah’ll gladly raise it with ya”

It was a bit of a shock to learn that Applejack just like you had never had sex before, but for her to say she wanted to have a foal with you... now that was a REAL surprise.

“Applejack...” you didn’t say anymore. Instead, you just placed your lips on hers, kissing her for the second time today. You felt her arms wrap around your neck as she kissed you back, tongue battling you for domination.

As you finally pushed away, you moved until your forehead touched your lover’s. Not breaking contact, you reached up to remove her Stetson, gently dropping it to the floor. You then reached for her ponytailed mane and grabbed the elastic that held it together. You removed the band as gently as you removed her hat, setting her mane free.

Pulling your head back so you could get a good look at her, you saw her completely different than you had a few seconds ago.

AJ felt naked in front of you, despite only having her hair undone. Taking a deep breath in attempt to get over her embarrassment, Applejack reached for her shirt and unbuttoned it, allowing her large breasts to breathe and bounce freely from their clothed prison. You went off on a hunch and guessed in your head they were F-cup.

Slowly, you reached up and grasped one of her breasts, making her shiver slightly. Smiling, knowing that she was enjoying your treatment, you locked lips with the farm mare again. Applejack wrapped her arms around you and reached down behind you.

Applejack temporarily breaks the kiss in order to take your shirt off, exposing your chest. Due to all that work on the farm, you’ve earned yourself quite a bit of muscle. Observing your torso for a second, a smirk suddenly grew on your lover’s face.

Without warning, AJ pushed you away and you let out a grunt as you land on the hay bail. Quickly recovering, you watched as AJ removed her jean shorts while keeping her sly expression. It was clear she was no longer embarrassed about showing her body to you.

Taking in her now naked figure, it wasn’t long before you felt your pants tighten up. “Ya likin’ the view, hun? Ah can tell from that there bulge,” she points to your crotch.

“Guilty, you’re just so beautiful right now,” you admitted.

“Y-You really think so?” she asked as she once again became flustered.

“In my eyes, you’re more beautiful than anything in the world,” you insisted with a warm smile. Approaching you, Applejack nuzzled you cheek-to-cheek before getting down to where your crotch was and unzipped your pants. Smirking again, she pulled your pants down and did the same with your boxer briefs.

Getting a good look at your hard member, the orange mare’s eyes widened. “Bucky, has yer cock always been this big, or have Granny’s home cookin’ been improvin’ yer growth?” she joked, stroking your throbbing member.

You shrugged, amused by the question. You wanted to answer, but as Applejack continued stroking your erection, you could only manage to moan.

As you discovered before, she had a surprisingly soft touch despite being a diligent farmer. It only got better when AJ started licking the tip of your cock while stroking the base of your rod. You moaned even louder from the warm sensation of her mouth around your member. She began taking it to the back of her throat.

“I... oh god! This feels so damn good! I thought you were a virgin!” you moaned in ecstasy. Still taking it in her mouth, AJ looks up at you amused before picking up the pace. Your legs twitched and your entire upper body tingled from the feeling of your cock being slurped and sucked on.

You look and notice Applejack’s tail swishing left and right, followed by the smell of what seems to be her heat pheromones. However you knew that she was not doing this because of her cycle, but rather to show how much you mean to her.

You clenched your fists, as you were reaching the limit from your marefriend’s skills. Your breathing was rapidly increasing, as was Applejack’s bobbing.

“I-If blowjobs feel this great... then thank C-Celestia that you’re my f-first!” you managed to say without blowing your load.

Applejack to your disappointment, lifted herself off your member to let out a few chuckles. Moving up to your eye level with a sultry expression, Applejack laid you down on the hay bail and positioned her dripping vulva over your face.

“Now, how’s about ya give mah nethers a good lickin’? After all, it’s only fair to pleasure yer mare, lover boy,” she cooed as she wiggled her tush. Eyeing her dripping slit, you reached to caress her apple cutie marks, feeling the nice layer of muscle and fur on her thighs.

“P-Please don’t t-tease me sugarcube...” Applejack moaned, unsatisfied with you simply massaging her. It was time to give your mare what she wants. Needless to say, that meant the licking she’s been dying to get.

Applejack bit her finger, trying to suppress her moans as you gave her marehood a teasing lick. You swirled it around her pussy lips in circles and occasionally flicked her clit. To no surprise, you tasted the flavor of freshly picked apples as you ate Applejack out.

“H-Holy... horse apples! Y-Ya got a skilled tongue there, s-sugarcube!” she moaned intensely. Feeling prideful because of her words, you moved back to her clit and lightly pinched the bud between your teeth. AJ surprisingly let out the cutest yelp your ears ever heard.

“O-Oh yeah, sugarcube! B-Bring it to me!” she shrieked.

I’ve only just begun, so I’ll give you everything I’ve got,’ you thought to yourself. And so, you continued to drive her utterly insane by diving your tongue inside her love cave. If you could see Applejack’s face, you’d know she’s enjoying this a whole lot more than she bargained for.

“And ya questioned me about being a virgin? A-Ah can feel yer tongue touch the deepest parts of m-mah pussy! Whoa nelly, that feels good!” she hollered, amusing you to no end.

You continued to slurp up her delicious apple-flavored juices while caressing her her plump round ass, even smacking it a few times. Applejack continued to moan and started grinding her hips on your face. This made it easier to slurp up more of her juices from every nook and cranny inside her love cave.

Sometimes, while in the middle of your oral sex, Applejack would squirt out small drops of her juices into your mouth. Despite that, she still kept going strong while still moaning like the mare in heat she was. You flicked her clit every time she let out small squirts of her juices straight into your mouth.

“Nnngh! Sweet horse apples, Ah’m ‘bout to cum! Slurp me up, ya doggone, sexy, hairless ape!” she shrieked. You did as you were told, giving it your all, using every tactic you could to get her to spray the big one inside of your mouth. With a mixture of humming, clit-flicking and slurping up as much of her love tunnel juices, this ultimately pushes over the edge. Next thing you know, a gush of her delicious apple love juices sprayed all over your entire face.

Of course, you drank as much as you could in big gulps to avoid choking. Applejack’s loud shrieking and moaning was music to your ears. After your mare ran on empty, she slumped forward, breathing heavily.

“You okay?” you asked. She picked herself up and turned to lay down next to you, circling her fingers on your chest.

“Am Ah okay? Sugarcube... you have... no idea... how amazin’ that felt,” she panted. “Ya went an’ made me cum hard, but now...” she leaned next to your ear “...Ah’m gonna make sure Ah milk you dry.”

You smirked. “I got just the thing to start off the main event,” you said. You got off the hay bail and took AJ by the hand. You guided her to a wooden post and pinned her. “You feeling like doing it doggy-style... sugarcube?” you asked, teasingly. Applejack chuckled, seeing as you were trying to mimic her.

“Ah got four words fer ya, hun: Bring it to me,” she commanded seductively. You grab her cutie marks and slowly guided your hardened shaft inside her dripping sex. “Mmm, now that’s what ah call a rock hard mushroo- AH!” she screamed as she felt her hymen break. Her cherry was now officially popped

You instinctively began to pet her mane, trying to comfort her as much as you could. Applejack shivered in bliss as your comforting touch made her fall for in you even more. As she was bearing with the slight pain, she began to enjoy your thrusting little by little. She moaned and panted softly. She could feel her breasts being jiggled with each thrust from your hips. Your cock pressed against the deepest parts of her caverns, gradually speeding up.

“Does it still hurt?” you asked moving to rub behind her ears.

“N-Not anymore, sugarcube. Give... Give mah apples a good buckin’. Do me as hard as ya can,” she assured, giving you her warm smile. You felt her wiggle her hips while your member was still inside.

You gave a slow nod and begin slamming your hips against hers. Now she had to cling onto the wooden post for balance as you rutted her savagely. Wet slaps and loud, throaty can be heard all throughout the barn.

“G-Grab my breasts sugarcube, we both know you wanna,” she encouraged. You immediately reached underneath and squeezed both of her large, delectable breasts, marveling how soft they were.

However, you let go of one of her breasts for a moment so you could cup the orange mare’s chin and make her look at you. With a smile you placed your lips against hers before returning your hand back down to her unoccupied breast. Your tongues danced together as much as your skin danced on her soft, furry body.

You felt the need to thrust even harder, so that’s exactly what you did. Applejack’s eyes rolled to the back of her head as you hammered into her even harder than before. It wasn’t long before you felt her inner walls tighten around your throbbing member.

“S-Sugarcube... t-that’s the s-stuff...!” she stuttered and let out an unexpected squeak when you pinched her nipples. You raised an eyebrow before grinning widely. You never thought you’d hear something like that come out of Applejack’s mouth.

“N’aww, what cute squeak, coming from such a sexy, slutty mare. Now I know how to take control over you,” you whispered to her.

That proved to be a mistake, as the mare gave you a glare as an irritated blush spread across her face. Though it was quickly changed to a devious smirk before she completely turned around, taking your shaft out and pushed you back onto the hay bail.

“Okay, maybe I deserved that,” you said, nervously.

“Darn tootin’, an’ Ah’m gonna make sure ya learn yer place after this. As of right now, Ah’m in control an’ ya ain’t bein’ let off the hook after Ah make ya cum… hard,” AJ said, walking up to you at a slow pace, give her hips an added sway.

Taking her place above your still rock hard shaft, she intentionally lowered herself at a very slow pace. Once your member was finally inside her all the way, Applejack wasted no time bouncing on top of you.

Letting out a gasp, from her rough treatment you still managed to give her an adoring look.

“I-I’m sorry. You know I was just teasing you right?” you asked feeling a bit guilty. Applejack lowered herself down to wrap her arms around your neck.

“Ah know, Ah was got a lil mad, but Ah’m over it now. Now that Ah think about it, callin’ me somethin’ like that really turns me on. Ya certainly know how to drive a gal wild, lover boy,” she complimented before kissing you.

“Ya can be an idiot sometimes, Bucky... but yer my idiot,” she chuckled before sitting back up. You wrapped your arms around her hugging her back before AJ slammed her hips against yours in unison. Applejack moaned into your ear before she began stroking your hair.

“Sweet Celestia, Bucky! Yer cock’s so big inside o’ me!” she whispered, looking directly at you. It warmed your heart to look up into those beautiful, emerald eyes. The temptation grew too much for you to handle as you once again lunged in and assaulted her mouth with your tongue.

Reaching down, you groped both of her cutie marks. AJ’s already-tight walls clenched onto your shaft even tighter, making you grunt. Just to keep her in the mood, slapped her plump flank and continued to thrust inside of her.

“Y-Yer lucky B-Bucky... I-If anypony else h-had s-slapped mah tush, Ah would’ve kicked ‘em in the crotch s-so hard... their breedin’ days would be over,” she said dangerously.

“Lucky me then,” you smiled and gave her a second smack.

As much as you wanted this moment to last, your body couldn’t hold on much longer. The intense feeling in your crotch made itself known to you. You bit your lip, attempting to prolong your precious moment with Applejack.

“W-What’s the matter, Bucky, y-ya gonna b-blow?” AJ asked stuttering.

“I... I’m t-trying n-n-not to,” you replied just as shakily. You could feel Applejack tighten around your cock, you knew she too was reaching her limit.

“D-Don’t hold back for these last f-few seconds Bucky! Gimme everything ya got!” she demanded. This was it. It was now or never. With all your strength, you leaned yourself more onto Applejack, laying her down underneath you and thrusted as fast as you possibly could.

“O-Oh A-Applejack...! I-I love you so much!” you shouted reaching to grab both her breasts. She reached up and caressed your cheek as happy tears filled her eyes.

“A-Ah love ya too, Bucky... W-With all ma-a-ah heart...” she muttered as the tears continued to fall.

You couldn’t hold in any longer and with one last powerful thrust, you released your pent up load into her deepest parts of her pussy. Lots and lots of huge globs flooded her womb repeatedly. AJ let out the loudest moans as she was being filled to the brim with your semen. She couldn’t contain herself and sprayed your crotch with her apple juices.

After 15 seconds of climaxing, you and AJ went limp, panting heavily. You tiredly kissed her sweaty cheek, making her chuckle.

“We’ve made quite a mess tonight, haven’t we honey?” she asked as you continued showering her with kisses.

“Yeah, we certainly did,” you replied, feeling tired. You placed a hand on her belly, well aware of the results of releasing inside of her. She’s already made it clear that she wants to have a foal with you. “Applejack, I’m glad I met you. I mean, yeah, we had a rocky start at first, but now thanks to you and your family, I’ve grown to love you all.”

“Ah feel the same way with you, sugarcube,” she said and then it was your cheek that was kissed. “Still, Ah’m still wonderin’ what the others’ll think about this...”

“Good point, especially Big Mac. I hope he isn’t too mad about this when he finds out,” and right after you said that...

“Relax, I ain’t mad,” said Big Mac. You jumped and looked at the doorway to the house where he was leaning with his arms crossed and had a warm smile on him. Applejack blushed and accidentally fell off the hay bail with you in order to not have her brother see her naked.

“Dagnabbit, Big Mac, how long have ya been standin’ there?!” she demanded, peeking from behind the hay.

“After ya moaned louder than a screamin’ banshee. Y’all were pretty loud. Y’all should feel lucky that Ah went an’ put in ear muffs on Apple Bloom.”

“What about Granny Smith?” you asked.

“She knew y’all was gonna buck, so she had some prepared beforehand,” he reassured.

“Okay, that’s a lil’ better. But why peek in on us durin’ our special moment? Ya better not be mad at Bucky!” Applejack warned.

“Relax sis, Ah just wanted to let y’all know how proud Ah am to know ya found someone who loves ya fer who you are. Ah can already tell that Bucky here’s gonna take real good care o’ ya. So, in short, Ah just want to say “welcome to the family,” he explained. Big Mac turned around and was about to leave, but then… “Oh, an’ ya might wanna wash up before ya head back to sleep, so Granny Smith won’t complain ‘bout the smell o’ sweat an’ sex.”

Having spoken out his last words, Big Mac left you two and closed the door.

Left alone for certain this time, you and Applejack looked at each other before you both burst out laughing.

“AJ, when did Big Mac develop a sense of humor?” you asked.

“Ah don’t know, Ah guess he was born with it,” she shrugged after she stopped laughing. “But, he is right, we don’t wanna have Granny Smith and Apple Bloom to wake up to the smell o’ love-makin’ in the mornin’.”

“I agree. Though, I’m probably gonna have to sleep on another hay bail after a quick shower,” you said, staring at the stain on the end of the hay.

“That won’t be necessary. Ah was thinkin’ maybe it’s time ya ditched that ol’ hay bail an’ come sleep with me. How does that sound?” as she reached for her shirt.

“I like that but..” With a sly smile and quick movements, you lifted Applejack off her hooves so you could hold her bridal style. “...I figured I could maybe carry you up there in style. You don’t mind that, do you... dearest?”

“Guess Ah found another reason to love ya even more,” she chuckled as she snuggled into your chest.

That was all you needed to hear as you proceeded to carry your exhausted lover to the house.