Sunset Has a (Fourth Wall?) Problem

by FoxMcCloud7921

In Which Sunset Goes to Flash's House and Clop (Kind Of) Happens

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After leaving Pinkie’s, Sunset stopped by the store and grabbed a wrap from the deli section now that she was finally starting to feel hungry. As she ate in her car, she went through her bag and pulled out the journal she had had since coming to this world. “To think I actually brought this over by mistake,” she thought. “How fortunate for all of us.”

She went through the pages, realizing she was running out of pages to write in. “Guess I’m going to need a new journal soon.” Once she was done eating, she grabbed a pen and started writing on a new page.

Dear Twilight,

I hope I’m not writing to you at a bad time. I know being a princess can be pretty busy, especially now that you’re officially an aunt. Anyway, something strange has come up recently. Okay, maybe it’s been three weeks but I thought I could handle it. Honestly.

I told you about how all of us got powers after Camp Everfree, right? How I can hear people’s thoughts and stuff? Well, unfortunately it’s gotten to the point where I can hear everyone and everything. Not to mention I’m starting to notice things that aren’t really there. In other words, I’m just going to call it Pinkie Pie Syndrome.

I don’t really understand it but I know this isn’t normal for me, because it wasn’t this bad at first. So, if you think you can help me out I’d really appreciate it.

Your friend,

Sunset

Sunset sighed slightly as she leaned back in her seat. Now all she could do was wait. Twilight was usually good at responding, at least when she wasn’t in the middle of saving Equestria. Even so, she wasn’t going to wait in a parking lot to hear back from her so where could she go?

A smile suddenly crawled on her face as an idea came to mind. She then pulled out her phone and dialed a number in her contacts. “Hey Flash? You busy right now…?”


As she pulled up into Flash’s driveway, she quickly remembered a reason why she had immediately been attracted to him: they both had similar taste in cars. His car shined brightly in the sunlight, showing that he took very good care of it. It was a good thing too because as Flash once admitted, his parents got him that car and they didn’t beat around the bush telling him he’d better take very good care of it.

Flash was already outside his house, most likely since he probably heard her coming down the street. He stared at her car as she got out. “How long have you had this girl?” he asked.

“Over a year now…didn’t I tell you?” Sunset replied with a sly grin.

Flash chuckled. “No, but I wish you did. I kinda want to take that out for a test drive now.”

Sunset laughed. “Maybe another time.” She then looked away from him for a moment. “So uh…how have you been?”

Flash rolled his eyes slightly. “Sunset, are we really going to be weird about this? We’ve hung out maybe three times since Everfree but you’re acting hesitant to move things forward.”

“I know, I know,” Sunset sighed. “I guess…before I was a lot more confident since I thought of you as a way to get more popular at school. Now…I’m trying to do this the right way.”

“And I appreciate that,” Flash said as he went up to her and put a hand on her shoulder. “But come on, even then I knew there was love in your eyes.”

“Yeah, maybe that first year and then I didn’t care anymore,” Sunset said somewhat bitterly. “I’m sorry, this isn’t really what you want to hear right now. I just…need someone to hang out with right now, you know?”

“Considering you had five other choices, I’m honored,” Flash joked. “Well, why don’t we go inside where it’s cooler? You haven’t been here in a while after all.”

“Still got the man cave?” Sunset asked as they went inside.

Flash blushed slightly. “Yeah…everything’s still there. You want something to drink?”

“Sure, I’ll take whatever,” Sunset said as she looked around the house. “Parents not home?”

“Nope, work as usual.”

“Ooh, that means we’re alone right?” Sunset teased.

“Well…yeah…but-”

“Okay, now who’s getting flustered?” Sunset asked.

Flash sighed. “You’re lucky you’re cute.” He then went to the kitchen and got two cans of soda for them both. “Let me guess…you want to see it?”

“Oh the things we used to do in there…” Sunset said as the two of them went upstairs.

“Well if you mean making out and…”

“Giving you your first handjob?” Sunset asked. Her response was Flash suddenly choking on his drink. She grinned. “That was fun too.”

“Yeah…well…that was when we were together obviously,” Flash coughed slightly as he opened the door to his room. As he had described, nothing had really changed. His bed was on the right back corner of the room along with a table that had a small flat screen TV and a small assortment of consoles and games lined up on a shelf.

Sunset smiled and shook her head slightly. “Some things never change…”

“Yeah…” Flash said as he looked around. “It’s funny…when I thought Twilight- the other Twilight- was a student, I was planning on inviting her here.”

“She would’ve been horribly confused,” Sunset pointed out.

Flash laughed. “Yeah…I guess so. Is she…doing well?”

“Yeah. You know she’s an aunt now right?”

“Really? Wow.” Flash paused for a moment. “I’m making this awkward now aren’t I?”

“No, it’s fine,” Sunset said. “Honestly, I can see why you liked her so much. It’s just…inconvenient for her. She has duties and all that.”

“That’s true…well as long as she’s happy,” Flash said. “But what about you? Is everything alright?”

Sunset wanted to say yes, but she knew better. She went over and sat on his bed. “Honestly? Things are kind of weird right now. As if it wasn’t weird enough being able to hear and see people’s thoughts, all of a sudden it’s been magnified times ten practically.”

“Wait…so you can hear what I’m thinking?” Flash seemed slightly alarmed.

“No, not now anyway,” Sunset shrugged. “It kind of comes and goes, usually at the worst times. I’ve been trying to figure out a way to deal with it but I haven’t had much luck and none of my friends have really been able to help.”

“Oh…sorry,” Flash asked.

“But there’s another reason why I’m here,” Sunset said. “I really have been thinking about what you asked me at camp and…I really do want to start over. I want you to see the real me, not the power hungry bitch that turned into a she-demon.”

“Can I be perfectly honest?” Flash asked. “You were kind of hot as a demon…”

Sunset threw one of his pillows at him. “Jerk,” she said, grinning slightly. “Well sorry, she’s not coming back anytime soon.”

“What about the girl with the wings?”

“Hmm…I’m not sure if that was a one-time thing as well.”

“Well, the last outfit was kind of cool.”

“Yeah…” Sunset had failed to notice that the temperature in the room was starting to warm up. Then she realized it was her. “Oh fuck…” The thoughts she had now were thoughts she had tried to keep in the back of her head, since she knew this was a serious moment, but at the same time she really, really, needed to get off. Hence why she now felt nervous. “Hey Flash…?”

“Yeah?” Flash asked, who still had decided to stay on the other side of the room.

Sunset then got up and walked over to him. “You know I like to cut to the chase, so let’s just cut the bullshit and get to what we really want to do right now.”

“W-Wait a minute-”

“No Flash,” Sunset interrupted him. “I don’t need to read minds on what you want to do…what you want to do to me right now…am I right?”

Flash was blushing again now but he nodded slightly. “Yeah…considering I already have you up here.”

Sunset grinned and put her arms around his neck. “Yeah…we kind of have to make up for lost time anyway.” She then kissed him hard, with Flash matching her eagerness as his hands wrapped around her waist.

It had been a long time since they last made out and Sunset knew where it was going to end this time. Once they finally broke apart, Flash muttered, “I got a couple of condoms in my drawer…”

Sunset snorted. “Don’t worry about it…besides you’d need more than a couple I think…”

Flash seemed a lot more eager now as he started to pull down her pants, causing Sunset to grin as she wrestled off his shirt. It wasn’t long before the two of them were standing next to each other naked. Sunset was blushing slightly but more than anything she was feeling a mix of nervousness and excitement. “We’re really doing this…”

“So uh…” Flash scratched the back of his head. “Where do we start?”

“I don’t really think we need to get into the whole foreplay thing do we?” Sunset asked as she decided to rub his now hardening cock.

“Yeah…fair enough…” Flash groaned.

Sunset then laid back onto his bed, spreading her legs out invitingly. As Flash got on top of her, Sunset said, “Just remember, I’m still a virgin…”

Flash smiled slightly. “I’ll be gentle.” There was nothing that could be helped given that Flash was big, not that Sunset was complaining. She had to get fucked right now.

After some slight teasing, Flash entered her slowly, causing both of them to moan loudly. “Oh dear Celestia!” Sunset almost yelled.

Flash paused for a moment. “Uh…what about Principal Celestia?”

“Just shut up and fuck me already!”


As with any first bout of sex, it didn’t last very long, although for Flash ten minutes was still impressive. Needless to say, both were very satisfied and couldn’t care less about how long it took.

“Wow…” Sunset said, her hair now a mess.

“Yeah…” Flash said, laying right next to her.

“Seriously, why didn’t we do that before?” Sunset asked.

“Well…”

“Okay, I was being a bitch but even so…”

Flash shrugged slightly with a grin. “Well we did it now so…”

“Yeah…” Sunset giggled. “I guess we’re official now.”

“Only if you want us to be.”

Sunset shifted over and kissed him quickly. “Yeah, I think I do.” Suddenly, she heard a buzzing sound coming from her bag, but it couldn’t have been her phone since she didn’t have to silent. She then groaned as she got up. “Hold on a second…” As she got up, Flash couldn’t resist the temptation to smack her in the ass, causing her to yelp and glare at him slightly before she went over to her bag and took out her vibrating journal. She quickly read through the message.

Dear Sunset,

Sorry I couldn’t respond quicker! I was on foalsitting duty, you know how that goes. I really wish you hadn’t waited that long to tell me, though I understand you were trying to take care of it yourself. With that being said, I’ll be coming over right away. Can you meet me at the school?

Your friend,

Twilight

Sunset sighed slightly. “I have to get going…”

“Already?” Flash looked disappointed.

“Yeah, Twilight needs to meet up with me,” Sunset replied as she got her clothes and started to dress. “Sorry we have to cut this short…”

“Well, I can’t really complain,” Flash said. “But you know…maybe when you have everything taken care of I can come by your place and…”

“We’ll see,” Sunset said as she put on her shirt. “Believe me, right now I’d be tempted to do a real quickie but Twilight is very strict about timing so I can’t keep her waiting.”

“Yeah, that sounds like her,” Flash said. He then paused. “Wait…is this this world’s Twilight or…”

“Other Twilight.”

“Um…you’re not gonna say anything about this are you?”

“I…won’t mention the sex part,” Sunset said. “But she has to know at some point.”

“Alright,” Flash said as he got dressed. “Better get tidied up before Mom and Dad get home anyway.” He went over and kissed her again. “But seriously…later on?”

Sunset smiled. “I’ll text you if I’m…interested.”


Author's Note

Can you tell I don't do a lot of clop? :facehoof:

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