Don't go gently into that good night

by Midian9013

Rage, Rage against the dying of the light

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Author's Note

Special thanks for editing goes to XtremeDarklord


Chapter 1 Awoken (Edited)

Happy birthday Janie I love you." I said as I went In for a kiss on my wife's lips, it was her 29th birthday.

"Happy anniversary Elliott, I love you to!" Janie said after we broke our kiss.
It reminded me of how we met all those years ago, how I asked her out at the bar when she was celebrating her birthday with her friends.

I loved her so much and everything about her, even her faults are adorable. Her green eyes, her long flowing black hair, her perfect hourglass figure and her soft seductive voice that could make me week in the knees. But the one thing that I love the most of all is the fact that she loved me just as much.

Sure I was a bit unbalanced from my time serving in the military and the war on terrorism, but it was ok as long as I had her and our two kids.
Our daughter is the oldest at 8 years old, and her younger brother at 6 years old.
I love my family so much they're my life, my everything.

"Mommy, Daddy get up! Me and Jackson made you breakfiasts for your big day" Leighah said excitedly bouncing on our bed with a huge smile.
She looked just like her mother with her green eyes and black hair.

"Ok sweetie we're up, Mommy and I will be down in a minute ok." I said while grabbing her up in a hug which made her giggle.

"Ok daddy don't take too long, your breakfast will get cold." Leighah said returning the hug.

One things for sure she was a daddy's girl, something I hope will never change. Leighah got out of our bed and ran out the bedroom giggling. I then turned to Janie admiring her beauty with a smile on my face that soon went to a grimis as a thought hit me like a truck.

'I hope this doesn't turn into a disaster like last year, oh that poor kitchen, it never stood a chance. All though I don't smell anything burning, actually the smell wafting In from the kitchen is actually mouth watering so there's hope after all'

Janie had an amused expression on her face from my mental debate about the situation.

"Don't worry they've been getting cooking lessons from my parents" Janie said to me as if she knew exactly what I was thinking.

And to be frank 9 Times out 10 she did, and that's why we fit so well together.

Ten minutes later we're in the dinning room enjoying a nice spread of pancakes and bacon. I look to my side and see my boy next to me scarfing his food down like there's no tomorrow, which makes me chuckle. "Slow down Jackson so you can actually taste what your eating there."

He looks up at me with a sheepish look and his cheeks puffed out like a chipmunk, he then proceeds to swallow down the gargantuan mouthful.

"Look who's talking there honey." Janie says with a very amused look on her face. "The apple doesn’t fall to far from the tree." She says giggling.

A loud bang on the cell door wakes me from one of the few plesent dreams I've had in a long time.
While my mind reboots back to reality from the groggyness of sleep. My cell door unlatches and slams open, revealing one of many terrors this castle dungeon holds. The royal guard, Quick Silver, a sadistic unicorn guard, one of many I've dealt with for the past 5 years I've been imprisoned in Canterlot castle dungeon by the sun bitch, named Celestia.

Here's the kicker all I've done to earn my stay in the dungeon is be human, even worse it's her fault I'm here, all because she fucked up a spell that's supposed to let her see into alternative universes. So for the first week here everything wasn't so bad, I was treated with respect and hospitality, sure when I first got here it was more then a mind fuck, especially since I was soaking wet and naked cause I was in the shower at the time Sunny sharts zapped me to her world.

After the first stages of shock came and went I was less then pleased, but Celestia assured me she could get me back home in a few days, she just had to rest up to replenish her magic, but if knew then what I know now; I would have stabbed that bitch in the throat with her own horn because as soon as she found out about humanity's dark side, I was locked up to preserve thier national security.

I wish Celestia would have just killed me, but instead I was to become thier science project. I was opened up multiple times just so they could see and play with my insides, experimented on with magic, tortured and abused mentally, physically and sexually non stop for the last 5 years.

I was broken mentally, physically and spiritually, and all I wanted was to see my wife and kids. But I knew I would never see them again and I just wanted it all to end. I even tried to kill myself by starving to death, but Celestia doesn’t want her "toy" taken away from her.

That is why when the door opened to reveal Quick Silver I scrambled to hide under my bed. It's pathetic what I've been reduced to, a once decorated veteran of war now a broken, malnourished man lost to fear and insanity.

"I got your breakfast Monkey." He tosses the funnel down on the floor with his magic. "but first it's play time." Quick said with a dark tone.

my wrists and ankles lit up with magic and I was ripped from under the bed violently and lifted up to be put on the bed face down.

I knew what was to come, it happens almost every morning when Quick Silver was denied sex from his wife the night before.

I was then strapped down, I knew from past experience to just be quite and let it happen or else he would rape me dry. It would hurt a lot more then if I just let him take his time and be gentle, so that's what I did. I stopped fighting and yelling and went limp.

"Such a good monkey" he said getting up on the bed and straddling my backside.
I could already feal his disgusting hard cock sliding in between my ass cheeks slick with spit, and then gently he inserted it into my abused asshole. He put his hooves on my shoulders and started to thrust. Slowly at first but then he thrusted harder as I started to loosen up, which didn't take much from the past abuse. It didn't take him long to cum but it never usually does.

I felt more shame today because I was forced to cum as well from the stimulation on my prostate.

“Oh almost forgot, it’s breakfast time.” He said with a devious smile.

He pulled me back up and put me in a sitting position, then he shoves a funnel down my throat.

“Don’t fight me on this one or you will ‘accidentally' choke on eggs.” He said mocking me. He started cracking eggs into the funnel. I had to breath right before he cracks another egg or I won’t be able to. Sometimes he will be an asshole and puts cracked egg shells into the funnel, making me gag as I feel the sharp piece of egg shell goes down my throat. After he pulled the funnel out my mouth. I gagged, and wheezed because of the eggshells that are stuck in my throat.

Quick Silver left and locked the door behind him. The fucking ponies knew better then to give me utensils, because I've tried to kill guards, and myself in the past with anything I could get a hold of, even Celestia has a nice little scar under her muzzle from a sharpened spoon. It's also the reason why they don't let me out of my cell to exercise anymore. I haven't seen the outside of my cell in 4 years and 7 months.
As soon as I was done my “breakfast” I curled up in bed, feeling dirty, ashamed, and tired.

This is my daily routine. Wake up, get raped, eat, and then cry myself to sleep because the only freedom I'm ever gonna see again is In my dreams.

Little did Elliot know that things were about to change because today was the day that the changelings were going to invade Canterlot, more specifically the royal wedding and Elliott's afternoon guards were already replaced by changelings.

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