Don't go gently into that good night

by Midian9013

Rating: mature
Tags: Queen Chrysalis, Princess Celestia, Sex, Tragedy, Main 6, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad, Other, Princess Luna
Length: 4535

This is a tale of a man named Elliott who was whisked away to Equestria and imprisoned by Celestia.

5 years unjustly imprisoned by a powerful Sun God all because she only seen the worst humanity has to offer and is afraid that if she sent me back to my world. I would unleash humanity's wrath on her “precious little ponies,”
But what she does not realize is that a man that has nothing left to lose is far worse than any foe she has ever faced before.
She took everything from me, my family, my friends, my freedom, and my sanity. She's going to regret it. I'm gonna make sure of it.

Published 2017-06-08 03:00:06 UTC
Last updated 2017-06-16 17:31:35 UTC

Rage, Rage against the dying of the light

Author's Note

Special thanks for editing goes to XtremeDarklord

Chapter 1 Awoken (Edited)

Happy birthday Janie I love you." I said as I went In for a kiss on my wife's lips, it was her 29th birthday.

"Happy anniversary Elliott, I love you to!" Janie said after we broke our kiss.
It reminded me of how we met all those years ago, how I asked her out at the bar when she was celebrating her birthday with her friends.

I loved her so much and everything about her, even her faults are adorable. Her green eyes, her long flowing black hair, her perfect hourglass figure and her soft seductive voice that could make me week in the knees. But the one thing that I love the most of all is the fact that she loved me just as much.

Sure I was a bit unbalanced from my time serving in the military and the war on terrorism, but it was ok as long as I had her and our two kids.
Our daughter is the oldest at 8 years old, and her younger brother at 6 years old.
I love my family so much they're my life, my everything.

"Mommy, Daddy get up! Me and Jackson made you breakfiasts for your big day" Leighah said excitedly bouncing on our bed with a huge smile.
She looked just like her mother with her green eyes and black hair.

"Ok sweetie we're up, Mommy and I will be down in a minute ok." I said while grabbing her up in a hug which made her giggle.

"Ok daddy don't take too long, your breakfast will get cold." Leighah said returning the hug.

One things for sure she was a daddy's girl, something I hope will never change. Leighah got out of our bed and ran out the bedroom giggling. I then turned to Janie admiring her beauty with a smile on my face that soon went to a grimis as a thought hit me like a truck.

'I hope this doesn't turn into a disaster like last year, oh that poor kitchen, it never stood a chance. All though I don't smell anything burning, actually the smell wafting In from the kitchen is actually mouth watering so there's hope after all'

Janie had an amused expression on her face from my mental debate about the situation.

"Don't worry they've been getting cooking lessons from my parents" Janie said to me as if she knew exactly what I was thinking.

And to be frank 9 Times out 10 she did, and that's why we fit so well together.

Ten minutes later we're in the dinning room enjoying a nice spread of pancakes and bacon. I look to my side and see my boy next to me scarfing his food down like there's no tomorrow, which makes me chuckle. "Slow down Jackson so you can actually taste what your eating there."

He looks up at me with a sheepish look and his cheeks puffed out like a chipmunk, he then proceeds to swallow down the gargantuan mouthful.

"Look who's talking there honey." Janie says with a very amused look on her face. "The apple doesn’t fall to far from the tree." She says giggling.

A loud bang on the cell door wakes me from one of the few plesent dreams I've had in a long time.
While my mind reboots back to reality from the groggyness of sleep. My cell door unlatches and slams open, revealing one of many terrors this castle dungeon holds. The royal guard, Quick Silver, a sadistic unicorn guard, one of many I've dealt with for the past 5 years I've been imprisoned in Canterlot castle dungeon by the sun bitch, named Celestia.

Here's the kicker all I've done to earn my stay in the dungeon is be human, even worse it's her fault I'm here, all because she fucked up a spell that's supposed to let her see into alternative universes. So for the first week here everything wasn't so bad, I was treated with respect and hospitality, sure when I first got here it was more then a mind fuck, especially since I was soaking wet and naked cause I was in the shower at the time Sunny sharts zapped me to her world.

After the first stages of shock came and went I was less then pleased, but Celestia assured me she could get me back home in a few days, she just had to rest up to replenish her magic, but if knew then what I know now; I would have stabbed that bitch in the throat with her own horn because as soon as she found out about humanity's dark side, I was locked up to preserve thier national security.

I wish Celestia would have just killed me, but instead I was to become thier science project. I was opened up multiple times just so they could see and play with my insides, experimented on with magic, tortured and abused mentally, physically and sexually non stop for the last 5 years.

I was broken mentally, physically and spiritually, and all I wanted was to see my wife and kids. But I knew I would never see them again and I just wanted it all to end. I even tried to kill myself by starving to death, but Celestia doesn’t want her "toy" taken away from her.

That is why when the door opened to reveal Quick Silver I scrambled to hide under my bed. It's pathetic what I've been reduced to, a once decorated veteran of war now a broken, malnourished man lost to fear and insanity.

"I got your breakfast Monkey." He tosses the funnel down on the floor with his magic. "but first it's play time." Quick said with a dark tone.

my wrists and ankles lit up with magic and I was ripped from under the bed violently and lifted up to be put on the bed face down.

I knew what was to come, it happens almost every morning when Quick Silver was denied sex from his wife the night before.

I was then strapped down, I knew from past experience to just be quite and let it happen or else he would rape me dry. It would hurt a lot more then if I just let him take his time and be gentle, so that's what I did. I stopped fighting and yelling and went limp.

"Such a good monkey" he said getting up on the bed and straddling my backside.
I could already feal his disgusting hard cock sliding in between my ass cheeks slick with spit, and then gently he inserted it into my abused asshole. He put his hooves on my shoulders and started to thrust. Slowly at first but then he thrusted harder as I started to loosen up, which didn't take much from the past abuse. It didn't take him long to cum but it never usually does.

I felt more shame today because I was forced to cum as well from the stimulation on my prostate.

“Oh almost forgot, it’s breakfast time.” He said with a devious smile.

He pulled me back up and put me in a sitting position, then he shoves a funnel down my throat.

“Don’t fight me on this one or you will ‘accidentally' choke on eggs.” He said mocking me. He started cracking eggs into the funnel. I had to breath right before he cracks another egg or I won’t be able to. Sometimes he will be an asshole and puts cracked egg shells into the funnel, making me gag as I feel the sharp piece of egg shell goes down my throat. After he pulled the funnel out my mouth. I gagged, and wheezed because of the eggshells that are stuck in my throat.

Quick Silver left and locked the door behind him. The fucking ponies knew better then to give me utensils, because I've tried to kill guards, and myself in the past with anything I could get a hold of, even Celestia has a nice little scar under her muzzle from a sharpened spoon. It's also the reason why they don't let me out of my cell to exercise anymore. I haven't seen the outside of my cell in 4 years and 7 months.
As soon as I was done my “breakfast” I curled up in bed, feeling dirty, ashamed, and tired.

This is my daily routine. Wake up, get raped, eat, and then cry myself to sleep because the only freedom I'm ever gonna see again is In my dreams.

Little did Elliot know that things were about to change because today was the day that the changelings were going to invade Canterlot, more specifically the royal wedding and Elliott's afternoon guards were already replaced by changelings.

Chapter 2 Monsters are not born, they are made (edited)

“Today is going to be perfect" Queen Chrysalis said to herself while looking herself over In the mirror.

Chrysalis was putting the finishing touches on her wedding dress in the privacy of her chamber in Canterlot's castle.

'Such a dreadful design, so tacky and bright, too much pink for my taste. It's bad enough that I have to parade around disguised as the pink alicorn slut.'
Chrysalis thought to herself.

Chrysalis then tapped into the hivemind to see if the operation to acquire their contingency plan was on its way. She was never one to put all her eggs in one basket so to speak, so that is why she sent a couple dozen of her best spies to infiltrate the castle a few months ago to dig up any possible intel on anything useful to use against the Princesses just in case the invasion was a failure.

One of her spies was able to terminate and copy one of Celestia's top scientists and was able to get a ton of information, but also found detailed files on a creature they called a human. It is currently being held in the dungeon.

Chrysalis considered herself quite merciless and cunningly deviant, but what she read in those files sickened her to her deeply, what the princess and her team of scientists did to that poor human, she would not wish that on her worst enemy.

What intrigued her most about what she read was the fact that Celestia was keeping it a tight lip secret and anypony who found out weather it be a servant or a guard who did not have proper security clearance, Celestia would erase their memories and have them sent away to the farthest reaches of Equestria, and if what she read in the files were accurate not even Princess Luna knew of the human's existence.

Even if Chrysalis was successful in taking Canterlot, she was not going to keep the creature incarcerated any longer. That is why she sent two of her best infiltrators in to free him and get him out of the city as covertly as possible.

Elliott was currently sitting in the corner of his cell, knees held tight to his chest and head down. When he heard what sounded like a yell outside off his cell door. Just then the door was unlatched and slowly opened to reveal two creatures he had never seen before. They were like ponies, but all black with holes in their legs and had both a jagged horn and wings like a bug.
One of the bug like ponies approached him while the other stayed at the door as a lookout.

The one that approached him spoke,
"Don’t be afraid we are not here to hurt you. We are here to take you out of this place" what I assumed to be a mare since her voice sounded feminine said to me with a hoof outstretched and beckoning me to come out of the corner.

I just stared at her like a dumbass not believing what I was seeing and said the first thing that came to mind "w-what are you?"

The black mare took another step closers to me, "right now it does not matter. We must hurry if you want to get out of here, the invasion is about to start and you can ask me anything later when we are out of the city."

Just then a deep rumble came from over our heads "buck it’s already started, something must of went wrong!" the bug pony guarding the door said, this one sounding male.

"Ok come on we half to move now" the bug mare yelled.
I got up onto my feet but when I did the two bug ponies had a look of what I could tell was fear, I guess they did not expect me to be so tall but their look of fear was then replaced with look of embarrassment for the mare,
It was the I noticed they were both staring at my junk.

"U-um could you possibly put it back in your sheath please?" The mare said with what looked like a tinge of green to her cheeks.

"No can do sorry humans don't have sheaths" I said, not giving a shit about their discomfort. I've been naked for 5 years so I've been desensitized to any nudity taboo I may have had in the past.

"O-ok then well let's hurry up we don't have much time" the mare said as I started walking out of my cell, the first time in so long I was out of my cell and I was not going back if I could help it.

We turned the corner out of the cell block and came to the guard post where I noticed two guards on the ground not moving, one being Quick Silver.
I got my liberators attention to ask a question "Are they dead?" I asked hoping that at least Quick Silver was still breathing.

"No just unconscious." the bug stallion said.

I then walked over to the downed stallion looking for anything sharp to use, that's when I noticed his sword was still in his sheath.

"Where's your fucking magic now bitch" I said as I grabbed his sword and unsheathed it.

"We don't have time for this, we have to go now!" The mare said she trotted past me.

It was then that I brought the sword down onto the unconscious stallion's horn and severing it with little effort and oozing out blood and a viscous yellowish substance. This effectively woke Quick up in a fit of blinding pain,
Using the butt of the sword on the side of Quick's temple I successfully knocked him unconscious again and picked him up and pulled him over my shoulder.

Both bug ponies where looking at me in a mixture of fear and disgust at my actions, but I didn't care. Quick was going to pay for what he did to me on an almost routinely basis.

"I'm not leaving here without my next meal" I said with a shit eating grin.
The two changelings looked at each other then looked to the human with the limp unicorn thrown over his shoulder not knowing what to make of the situation, but the human just walked past them and down the dark corridor.

"The Queen better know what the buck she is doing" was all the changeling whispered to her companion before they to, follow the human down the corridor.

Chapter 3 Freedom isn't free (Edited)

The human and the two changlings made it through the castle almost completely unobstructed with the exception of a few servants and a couple guards which were taken care of easily enough with changling magic.

It turns out the invasion kicking off early worked out to their benefit because it distracted most of the royal guards.

They just needed to reach the court yard where the rest of their entourage was waiting to open a portal back to the hive and then wait for further orders from the queen.

Elliott was currently walking behind the two changlings with a still unconscious and hornless unicorn thrown over his shoulder, dried blood caked his back from the Quick Silver's forehead. The ghastly sight even made one of the servants they came across vomited before the changelings knocked her out with a blast of green magic.

The three then rounded the next corner to find the entrance to the courtyard, they made haste and exited the castle to find four changeling elder mages in a circle pooling their magic together to form what appeared to be large sphere that looked like a floating ball of mercury which would ripple every so often.

When the four elder mages laid eyes on the naked and obviously malnourished human and the incapacitated guard on his shoulder, they almost lost their concentration on the portal but quickly found their resolve and continued.

"So what, we just walk through it and presto we're out of here?" Elliott asked the bug pony mare in front of him. Which in turn she just nodded, walked into the sphere and disappeared.

With a raised brow Elliott shrugged his shoulders and stepped into the sphere, which felt cold on his body but once he was inside he felt an intense pull, his heart raced as he accelerated through what looked like a tunnel of light, before he knew it he and the unconscious stallion were tossed from the other side and landed with a thud in the middle of a desert and only a few meters away from the hive entrance.

Back in the courtyard in the castle the stallion changling that aided in the human's escape was just about to trot through the portal when the sound of an explosion sounded from the throne room of the castle and a pink dome shot out from all directions, violently expelling the invading changlings as well as their queen out of Equestria.
The portal was destroyed and the remaining changlings in the courtyard were expelled along with the rest.

-Southern Badlands-

"Well that fucking sucked, and now I have sand in my ass crack" Elliott said trying to regain his footing, "Well it's still better then being in that cell and being that Sun Bitch's science project, now where's that fucking meat bag?"
Elliott said wile looking around for his newly acquired prisoner/food-bank, which at the moment was only a couple feet behind him and slowly regaining consciousness.

"AHHHH, OH CELESTIA MY HORN, YOU BUCKING CUT OFF MY HORN, YOU MONSTER!!!" Quick Silver screamed, afterwards vomited quite violently.

"M-maybe you should just put him out of his misery, instead of letting him suffer like that." The mare changeling said to the human, a little unsure of the situation.

"Fuck that noise, this dirty little rapist has got a world of pain ahead of him now that he's got no magic to fuck me over with" Elliott said as he stepped over to the now sobbing stallion, grabbed him by the scruff of the neck and held him up so he could look him in the eyes then began to scream in the stallion's face, "YA HEAR THAT YOU DIRTY LITTLE HORSEY, I'M FAR FROM FINISHED WITH YOU, YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT WE DO TO HORSES BACK IN MY WORLD, WE FUCKING MAKE GLUE OUT OF THEM, BUT THERE STILL GOOD EATTING IN MY OPINION."

Quick Silver was in an intense amount of pain and he was never more frightened in his life then right now and as some point he pissed all over himself out of shear terror.

"I-I-I'm s-sorry p-p-pleas d-don't hurt me" Quick Silver was reduced to a stuttering, sobbing mess of a stallion.
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The dark frown on Elliott's face quickly shifted to a manic grin, "SORRY? YOUR FUCKING SORRY? oh well then that changes everything...let me just check something first!"

In that split moment Quick Silver felt a sliver of hope as the human stepped back and turned around then started looking around for something with puzzled look on his face. The human even walked over to the changeling, grabbed her tail and lifted it to take a look as if still looking for something he lost, at the changling's apparent discomfort and embarrassment she just stood there as if not able to comprehend the situation.

"Yep just what I thought, I can't find any fucks to give, too bad." Elliott said sarcastically and briskly walked back to the pathetic form of the stallion, quickly grabbing the sword off the ground, seeing this Quick Silver tried to get his legs under him to get back up and run away but the pain from his severed horn was too disorienting and caused him extreme dizziness from blood loss causing him to stumble and fall back down.

"Where the fuck you think your going, I ain't done with you yet" Elliott said as he quickened his pace.

Once he reached the stallion he started stomping on his head and muzzle, causing the stallion to scream in pain as fresh wounds opened up on his face and knocking out a few teeth in the processes. The changling that was still present turned away, not able to watch the brutality of the human any longer.

Eventually Quick Silver slipped into unconsciousness again after the seventh or eighth stomp to his head. Elliott's breaths were haggard and the excitement from the past few hours finally catching up to his skinny, dirty and sweat covered form and with dehydration starting o set in he sat down in the sand and leaning back against Quick Silver.

Elliott let out an exhausted sigh and wiped the sweat from his brow, his attention now on the lone changling sitting a few feet away trying not to make eye contact with him.
"Well I guess I should say thanks for getting me out of that shit-hole, so thanks...I guess, my name's Elliott by the way" Elliott said trying to break the ice with the changling.

The changling looked back at Elliott trying not to let her fear show but replied in kind, "oh, um... your welcome...I guess and my name is Nyx and it was our queen who wanted you freed I was just following orders." Nyx said reluctantly making eye contact with the human, which in turn made her flinch once she noticed the sour expression on his face. Before she could explain any further he was back on his feet and making his way towards her sword in hand.

Nyx quickly formed a magic barrier around herself know there was nothing Elliott could do against magic.
"I'M NOT GOING TO BE ANOTHER TYRANTS SCIENCE PROJECT!" Elliott yelled as he swung his sword down on the green tinted bubble that surrounded Nyx.

It was then that something in the distance caught Elliott's attention, it looked like a cloud of black was approaching and fast, he focused his eyes to get a better look and as the black anomaly got closer he could make out hundreds of changlings just like Nyx, but he could make out one in particular, it was much larger then all the others, which he figured it was their queen.

"Fuck this, I'm out" Elliott said as he turned and started running the opposite direction. 'I'd rather die alone in the desert then be another rulers fucked up plaything. I don't know what she wants with me but I ain't sticking around to find out' Elliott thought to himself as he was running as fast as he could, his body protesting with each breath.

Elliot looked behind every so often at the approaching swarm while still running as fast as he could.

Chrysalis was beyond pissed, her plan to take over Equestria ruined by that purple little bitch "Twilight Sparkle." If it wasn't for her meddling, Queen Chrysalis would be the new ruler of Equestria. It was then she noticed the human she ordered freed sprinting away from Nyx and the entrance of the hive.

"Buck where does he think he's going, there's no way he will survive out here alone, especially since nightfall isn't far off." Chrysalis said as she prepared a teleportation spell to intercept the human.

Elliott was still running when a changling as tall as him materialised in front of him with an audible "POP" he then skidded to a halt and brought the sword in his hand in front of himself at the ready.

"I'll make you kill me before I let you lock me up to be your pet!" Elliott said readying himself for what was to come.

Chrysalis was not at all happy with how things went today and she had no patience with what was happening now so quicker then the human could react Chrysalis shot him with a knockout spell and watched him crumple to the ground, then trotted over, bent down till her muzzle was mere centimeters from his neck, opened her mouth and then sunk her fangs in to inject her venom that would cause paralysis for the next 32 hours, when he comes to he won't be able to move and hurt himself or any of her children and she needed to have a long talk with him without him getting violent so this was her best option.

What was left of her children after the failure in Canterlot were standing in formation awaiting orders, Chrysalis pointed to the four changlings closest to her and told them to bring the human down into the hive, more specifically to the underground river and have him washed up and have a moss bed made for him to be laid down in until his paralysis wares off.

"What of the unconscious stallion he brought with him?" Nyx asked.
Chrysalis looked over to the battered form of the former unicorn and shuddered when she noticed his horn was severed off.

"What? did the human say he was going to do with him?" Chrysalis inquired
"H-he said he was going t-to eat him.... My queen." even just saying it made Nyx sick to her stomach.

Chrysalis's character of superiority faltered just for a split second with a flinch which does not happen very often.
As quick as her discomfort came, it disappeared just as quick and the intimidating look of a ruthless queen was back.

"Very well bring him as well and secure him down in the lowest end of the underground river, in fact I want the human brought down there as well, that will be his new quarters and nopony is to go there without mine or his permission after he is settled, if we wish not to be on his violent side we must gain his trust and ensure he can trust us, there is much we can gain from each other, taking away his....Food isn't going to help us" Chrysalis said as she watched the human and the stallion guard were picked up and carried into the hive entrance followed by the rest of the changlings.

Once all her children were out of sight Chrysalis sat down in the sand, the stress of the day weighing down on her.

"I really hope I don't regret this..."
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Chapter 4 white lies and the boogie man (Edited)

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