Moonlight Bunny's Birthday Surprise

by LadyUmbra

Why does King Sombra think it's a courtship ritual?

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I woke up early today, excited since it was a very special day for my marefriend, Moonlight Bunny.

I flew from our home to meet up with Glimmer Melody at Sugar Cube Corner. I had to smile since she was there already, enjoying her usual coffee with loads of sugar and an apple fritter.

“Hello Blaze, did you manage to get past Moony without waking her up?” Glimmer asked with a serene grin on her muzzle.

“Yes I did, she was sleeping deeply when I left the cloud house.”

"Excellent, let's get started!" Toffee Ribbons sat herself down next to me and pulled out a list she had prepared for the surprise birthday party we were planning for Bunny. We had been planning this for weeks.

“Glimmy, I managed to get the special honey that will make the cake more palatable for us. I also found some gag items guaranteed to make Moony blush!" Toffee clapped her hooves in glee.

I freely admit I blushed a bit when I saw the condom-themed lollipops and dildo-shaped chocolates.

"Somepony is blushing!" Two voices teased in unison.

I face hoofed when I heard Glimmer and Toffee giggle at my discomfort.

“Are these really necessary for the party?” I practically squeaked and got a double “YES!” from both mares.

“Blaze, what are we to give her otherwise? You dressed in a bow?” Glimmer asked cheekily, making me blush even more.

"Hay, yeah.." Toffee's grin spread across her face, eyes gleaming.

“No, no! That is not a good idea!” I got skittish when they started advancing on me. What were they planning?

“Don’t let him get away!” Toffee said suddenly, charging at me with a rope.

I surprised the twosome by exiting Sugar Cube corner like my tail was on fire!


I hid behind the chicken coop at Fluttershy’s cottage. I knew plenty of hiding spots all over Ponyville, so a major game of hide and seek was quickly set in motion.

I was starting to feel pretty confident that I'd outfoxed them, when-

“Hi Blaze!” Toffee said in my ear, making me scream like a filly.

I fled, with her laughter chasing my heels, running desperately to another hiding spot.

This time I saw Glimmer Melody already waiting for me.

I did a swift 180 and legged it, taking flight and figuring that the clouds would be safe for me.

“Hi Blaze!” I heard the two say at the same time, they were right ahead!


I almost got away, but in the end the two mares managed to lasso and hogtie me.

“Can we talk about this, Glimmer?” I pleaded while being carried back to Sugarcube Corner, all trussed up like a chicken.

“Be a good sport, Blaze. We know you've always wanted to be Moonlight’s first. I'm surprised that you would gallop off before we can explain our plan.” Toffee Ribbons gave my flank a swat, making me yelp from the sting.

"Ow, hay!"

Moonlight Bunny had arrived at Sugarcube Corner during the chase and was sitting by the window sipping coffee when she saw me being carried in the door by Glimmer and Toffee.

I noticed her quirked brow as she spotted I was in a rather compromising situation.

“Blaze lost a bet.” Glimmer Melody fibbed smoothly to Moonlight Bunny with a grin.

"I see. Take your punishment well, Blaze," Bunny teased me with a smile.

I sighed internally, relaxing since the lie had been enough to fool Moonlight Bunny.

Bunny got up from the table and kissed my muzzle on her way out of the bakery. She had her saddle bags on, so she was going out for the day.

Knowing her routine, she was likely going to get some rare herbs in Everfree forest for her mother.

Bunny was known for being a very talented pharmacist by everypony in Ponyville. Mothers asked for cures for ailing children and Bunny would instantly know which remedy they needed soon as she heard the symptoms...

I gave a gasp, my thoughts derailing, as Glimmer Melody swiftly and sneakily tied a bow around my shaft. I shook the silly thing off with an embarrassed grunt.

“I have things to do and being gift wrapped is not one of them!” I grumbled, with my ears pinned to my sides and eyes narrowed.

“Come on Blaze, this was a great idea! Plus, it beats the nick-knacks we bought from the adult party store.” Glimmer Melody gave me the pouty puppydog eyes and won easily, since she knew I could not resist that look.

“Fine, I will let you tie me up later, before the party. HAPPY?” I said with a snarl.

I was rewarded with a resounding “YES!” from both my friends.

Hopefully they'd forget and-

I instantly regretted my decision when I seen the looks on their faces, twin grins stretching ear to ear and decided I was not sticking around to keep that promise. If they wanted me that badly they could come find me in Canterlot!


I concentrated hard and managed to teleport myself into my room at Canterlot Palace.

“I'm safe from them here, they aren't going to find me so easily!” I laughed hard, still panting a little from the days running away. I could finally relax...

“Hi Blaze, fancy finding you here!"

I yelped loudly, eyes snapping open as I heard a flash of magic inside the room. I opened my eyes to see Toffee looming above me atop the bed.

"You tried to go back on your promise, you naughty boy.” Toffee Ribbons said, using a liquorice lariat on me. I reared up as it started to tighten around me, managing to break free of the candy.

I galloped out of my room running past my father, King Sombra, who was not ready to see me running for dear life while being chased by two mares with liquorice lariats. I seen his perplexed face, mouth open to ask a question but by the time he could vocalise it, I was long gone.

I teleported to the balcony and quickly hid myself in the shadows. This was a useful trick I'd inherited from my father...

Sadly this meant that Dad had no problem locating me.

“Blaze, why are you running away from your friends? I am a little rusty on the playing customs of modern ponies but it would seem to me that is awfully discourteous-"

Dad always spoke so formally, given his original timeline was over a thousand years ago. I'd tried mimicking him, but it sounded stiff and at odds. I realised dad was still talking and tuned back in-

"-I feel I must ask, what is the necessity of the liquorice lassos, though?” The perplexed stallion looked at me now.

“They want to gift wrap me for Moonlight Bunny.” I said blushing brightly, not quite making eye contact with Dad.

"Ah, a courtship ritual? Why did you not say so. THAT, I can offer a little perspective on."
Dad placed a hoof on my shoulder. “If there is one thing that I have learned Blaze, it is that there is no stopping a determined mare."

"I think things have changed a little since your time, father.."

But dad wasn't paying attention, too lost in memory.

" I know you have very strong feelings for this special mare of yours. Your friends shenanigans may seem ludicrous, but I am positive you will enjoy what they have in mind."

Dad winked at me and I blushed. How could he be so blunt?

I heard hoofsteps and dad turned to look over his shoulder.

"Glimmer, Toffee, he should not give you anymore trouble today. I have given him a talk on his courtship decisions” Dad said, making me groan since I felt betrayed.

My father waved obliviously at me as I was tied up and carted away again.

The tricky twosome brought me back to sugarcube corner and gift wrapped me as they'd threatened. But that wasn't the end of it...

I was made into a sex doll with a simple spell that would wear off with use. It made me appear as if I was a full size toy for a mare to enjoy herself with. More ribbons followed and in no time, I was a pony shaped present. It felt very odd to be immobilised and all one colour.


A Few Hours Later...

I could hear the party in full swing as my friends carried me to Bunny's house. I could hear voices through the wrapping paper I was decked out in.

“Glimmer, Toffee, how wonderful to see you!” I heard Moonlight Bunny speaking to my captors.

They pushed their pony shaped present, aka ME, into the room.

“We found an awesome present for you, Bunny! Please open it later, since it’s REALLY intimate, if you know what I mean, and I know you do!”

Eventually I heard the party come to an end and Toffee Ribbons leaving the room.

“Want me to help you push the present to your room?” Glimmer asked Moonlight Bunny.

“Sure, I can clean the room down here a bit while you do so.”

I felt sliding and the familiar scent of Bunny’s room entered my nostrils. I was left in the middle of the room, heart pounding.I had no idea until much later that Glimmer Melody had performed a switcheroo with the bed, using her magic.

As far as I was aware, she and Toffee were gone..


Her cleaning all done with, Moonlight Bunny returned to her bedroom and removed the wrapping paper from me, squealing with delight.

“Wow, you are a VERY realistic stallion doll!” She said in excitement, running a hoof along my shaft.

“It even feels real. Oh, I will enjoy riding you tonight!” Bunny said with a giggle, pulling me onto her bed, one hoof already moving to between her legs as she flopped onto her back.

Bunny was shy and I knew it, but seeing her rubbing herself with a hoof almost set me off, it was a very hot thing to see.

She lay on her back and rubbed her hoof against her crotch teats with a low groan. I was getting hungry just watching her play with herself. Her hoof moved lower and pressed gently against her folds. She moaned as her hoof continued to stroke herself intimately.

I couldn’t believe my best friend was ignoring a perfectly good sex doll to play with herself, hadn't she said she wanted to ride me?!

Moonlight Bunny moaned as her folds squirted a bit from her constant stroking. Just as I was about to explode from impatience, she rolled me on my back so I got a great view of her teats. She faced me and gently lowered herself onto my arousal.

She whimpered a bit as the tip of my member stretched her out, but she wasn't deterred. She lifted her hips and pushed down a second time, making my member slide further into her. It was a good thing I was made of crystal at that moment, so I couldn’t rut her like I wanted to. I might not have lasted long she looked so good...

She was driving me mad with her innocent sounds. Eager gasps and moans with each movement, then she started moving a little faster, clearly enjoying the feel of my crystal phallus in her.

I so wanted to make love to her at that moment. She was a thing of beauty, a sight to behold. My Dad had been right, I WAS enjoying this. I had always adored Bunny and being my dream mare’s play thing was making me hornier by the moment.

Just then I felt a tingling all over my skin, the spell was wearing off! I could control my body now and my hooves immediately moved to hold Moonlight Bunny steady as she continued to ride me.

She was not even aware I was me again in her blissed out state and she leaned against me as she moved her hips faster.

“Bunny, you feel so tight, so wonderful.” My vocal chords were free at last and I blurted out the first thing on my mind, startling my friend.

“BLAZE, what the buck?” She screeched as she back-pedalled and rolled off me with embarrassment.

“Sorry I missed your party.” I said gently nuzzling her mane, unsure what else to say.

"She wasn't kidding when she said it was an intimate gift.."

I couldn't ignore her scent, it was a wonderful smell that made me nuzzle her intimately. Blushed, her eyes meeting mine.

She smiled and did not object when I placed her onto her back. She whinnied softly when I slid my shaft back into her folds...

She had not broken her barrier and I bit her shoulder teasingly as I pushed past her maidenhood, hearing a faint catch of breath.

I saw tears in her eyes and licked them away gently, then kissed her lips and waited for her to adjust to me before I resumed thrusting into her body. She moaned deeply as I continued to penetrate her with each thrust of my hips.

"Blaze.." she panted, "I'm so close!"

"Me too.." I whispered.

I felt her muscles tighten around me as I reached climax, my seed filling her. We called each other's name as we orgasmed at the same time.

"That was..." Bunny blushed as we rested "just like I'd dreamed."

We kissed, then suddenly the bed we were on collapsed and became Glimmer Melody.

"Glimmer?!" Bunny stared in surprise.

“That’s the good stuff.” She said with a hiccup since we made her love drunk.

Bunny and I helped her walk to the spare bed the three of us liked to lounge on, some nights.

Glimmer snuggled against Moonlight Bunny and I and we fell into a deep sleep with each other's heartbeats beating together...


Author's Note

I like to thank Pixel_Spark for editing my story.