Rainbow Factory (Remastered)
Okay let me just start off by saying THIS IS A DIFFERENT UNIVERSE (or whatever) this is not the same as the original... Or not completely.
Rainbow Dash is a victim and so is Scootaloo (still) in this story thats all I got to say.
Please don't go and say that it's the same because I assure you it's not.
Also i'm bad at names so thats why it's called "Rainbow Factory (Remastered)"... Ya i'm bad at naming crap.
Rainbow Factory (Remastered)
It was a nice and lovely day in Equestria, Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo were practicing on flying because Scootaloo had to take her final flight exam before she would pass flight school. She has been training with Rainbow for a few month now just so she could pass. She knows if she fails the test she will be shunned by most of the pony's and will never be able to return to cloudsdale, now this worryed her but she was determined to pass the test. But pony's have said that it was rigged but Scootaloo didn't listen to them.
"That was great Scootaloo." said Rainbow Dash
"Thanks I think i'm ready to do the test now." Said Scootaloo
"Are you sure pony's have said that it was rigged." said Rainbow Dash with Concern
"Those pony's don't know what there saying I don't think it's rigged." Said Scootaloo
"Alright then lets get to the track" Said Rainbow Dash
Scootaloo and Rainbow fly up to the track so that Scootaloo could start her test.
"Alright please go to the line and wait for the light to turn green to begin" said the instructor
When Scootaloo stepped on the line the light turned green and scootaloo was off like a flash bobbing and weaving around the obstacle's but as she was doing that a storm could came out of nowhere.
Rainbow Dash gasped as she saw her fan/student crash right into it
When that happend two pony's brought her to cloudsdale and rainbow dash followed
"ma'am we need you to step away don't worry were bringing her to the medical clinic in cloudsdale" Said one of the pony's
"I don't care i'm going in there with her" Said Rainbow Dash angerly
As rainbow dash was talking she didn't notice that the door's to the place opened and they flew inside.
Just then the doors slamed shut leaving Rainbow Dash to tremble in fear at what she was seeing. She saw pony's getting stabed with a big nife wile it drained them of there color.
"W-what is this place?" Asked Rainbow Dash in fear
"why it's the rainbow factory" Said the other pony as they both droped Scootaloo to the ground with a thud
END OF CHAPTER 1