Rainbow Dash is conflicted with her feelings toward her best friend and fights her own thoughts about how to tell her and whether or not Applejack will take it badly or not.

Its an AppleDash fan-fic

Its my first time writing a MLP Fan fiction so bear with me. Any critique would be appreciated. I've never written ponies before.
I am one for good grammar and spelling so please, if you find any mistakes, tell me.

A lovely picture that has inspired a part in this story is; http://aeronjvl.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=/#/d4plf99
Feel free to bombard the artist's dA account as they are a great artist.
Stories that inspire me;
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6563/Pillow-thoughts
http://bronyneumo.deviantart.com/gallery/31814017
http://malikvamp.deviantart.com/gallery/35598394

{Not sure if I will ever actually finish this..I have never finished a story before}