Unexpected Appearance

Pardon my language in the title, but it's really starting to get annoying, this is my first fic. There will be errors, no ponies perfect, but please ease up on me. I'm sorry if I don't meet up to your standards but I'd like a break from all this madness. I'm tired and hungry, so that may have set me off, anyway I'll work no the new chapter when I can. Goodnight.