Customer Service

by jackplanet88

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Human, Sad, Coco Pommel, Porn, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Non-consensual, Sex
Length: 2341

Coco let's a familiar customer in her store after hours, but suddenly regrets it.

Coco was simply closing up shop for the night when she hears a knock on the door. Thinking it was one of her employees, she comes to find her favorite customer Mark at the door. That will be the biggest mistake of her life.
WARNING: This story involves rape

Oh boy will people hate this.:pinkiecrazy:

Edited by me and my good friend K9 Groomer

Also spoiler for the end if this story makes you uncomfortable. He gets away and doesn't get caught, so don't expect a happy ending here.

Published 2017-04-30 00:10:11 UTC
Last updated 2017-04-30 00:10:11 UTC

After hours visit

Author's Note

You've been warned

After hours visit

It was a cool, autumn night in the city of Manehatten, and all the stores were closing up for the night with everypony heading home, but one store still had its lights on. Coco Pommel, the manager of “Rarity For You”, was inside doing last minute inventory before she headed home. She would have finished a lot sooner if she didn't accidentally knock over a neat stack of fabric and had to put it back together properly, just like Rarity taught her. She was close to being finished and was anxious to get home for a hot meal, a warm bath, and a cozy bed, but her daydreaming was suddenly stopped when she heard a knocking at the door.

*knock* *knock* *knock

“Huh? Who could it be at this hour,” Coco thought, “maybe an employee forgot something.” She casually walked over to the door and opened it, thinking it was one of her employees. To her surprise there was a tall, bipedal creature holding onto a jacket.

“Oh, what are you doing here?” Coco asked, confused. The human at her door was one of many who came from the portals six months ago, and had stayed in Equestria for a better life. This human in particular, named Mark, was a regular at the boutique for the last three months and has bought many attires from there, including the jacket he was currently holding.

“Ms. Pommel, I’m sorry to come in this late, but I had to come back to return this jacket. I tried to give it to my girlfriend as a birthday present, but she didn’t like it. Wasn't her color or whatever bull. Ugh, she can be a bitch sometimes.”

“Oh, well I’m sorry to hear that. Would you like to exchange it for another jacket.. maybe in another color?” Coco asked as she led him over to some human sized mannequins wearing jackets and other apparel.

“It couldn’t hurt. I think she likes turqouise”

“Oh, I think we have that in stock! I was going to put them out in the morning but since it’s you, and you have always been a great customer, I can give you one right now!” Coco excitedly pranced to the back room. She opened a box, located the jacket, inspected it, wiped off dust, and before she could even turn around she felt a sharp pain in her neck. Everything went black and she hit the floor, unconscious.

She woke up groggy, head swimming, confused, trying to piece together what happened.
“What just happened? Did I fall asleep? My neck is sore” She tried to move but quickly realized she was bent over her desk, her front legs firmly secured down and her back legs tied to the legs of the desk, her hooves spread the length of the desk. She began to panic and desperately fought to get free. Whoever did this did it good. She was tied tight. In a shaky voice she said out loud, “What’s going on here? Who did this?” She started sweating profusely as she struggled with the ropes. She moved her head around, looking for any sign of life in the store. “HELP!” she screamed, “IS ANYPONY HERE?”

Things began to clear up and she realized that Mark was the only one in the store.
“Mark? Are you here? Is this some kind of joke? Let me out of here!” Coco tried to free herself to no avail. Suddenly she heard footsteps behind her and heard Mark's voice. Something wasn’t right...she felt uncomfortable, uneasy. Mark’s voice sounded...sinister.

He laughed as he approached. “Well, I would let you free... but that would interfere with my plans tonight.” Mark stated. “I wanted to make tonight memorable for the both of us which is why I wanted you awake.”

“Memorable? What do you mean?” Coco looked confused and scared.

“Why Coco, have you already forgotten our three month anniversary? I want to finally make a real mare out of you and consummate the relationship.” He eyed her cutie mark and softly stroked her flank. His touch made her skin crawl.

“C-C-C-Consummate the relationship? What are you talking about? HAVE YOU GONE MAD!?” She squirmed, wriggled, and pulled, but the ropes held fast. Mark offered no reply, and instead sauntered up to her, stood behind her and rested his growing erection against her rear. Coco gasped, feeling his bulge against her and her eyes filled with tears, knowing what he was going to do.

He leaned over her and whispered in her ear. “I can’t wait to give you all of my love,”
Slowly, he licked her ear. “but first I have to prepare you.” He licked her ear, slowly, seductively. The feeling of his warm wet tongue, the smell of his breath and the sound of his voice disgusted and terrified her.

He reached down and grabbed Coco’s flanks. Coco gasped as she felt his hands touch her. He sighs happily as he starts caressing her soft and toned rear, almost creaming his pants right there and ruining his perfect night. “Oh Coco, why didn’t you tell me how amazing your ass feels?” He laughed evilly while grabbing and rubbing her ass. Coco starts whimpering and felt more disgusted with each inch of her flank being touched by this despicable human being. Finally deciding he has had enough , Mark decides to end his groping. “Enough playing around. time to wet you up.” He inched his fingers closer to her pussy.

“DON’T TOUCH ME THERE!” Coco screamed. She tried to move her hind legs in an attempt to buck him off her but couldn’t move them in her binds. Mark laughed at her pathetic attempt of an attack and smacked her ass hard, making her scream in pain.

“You don’t understand, I'm the one making the rules tonight,” Mark said, “and since this night is so special I plan on making this enjoyable for both of us.” He then started touching Coco’s pussy which makes her gasps out loud. “Oh, has my sweet Coco never been touched before? Well I’ll be happy to be your first!” He rubbed her pussy, slowly trying to get her wet.

The truth is Coco had been touched before, but it had been five years ago. She was in love with a stallion, who was her first and only, whom she thought loved her back. It was revealed that he only wanted Coco to get to Suri Polomare, her employee at that time. Her heart was shattered, her trust destroyed, and she had since put her focus on her work and only work, vowing to never love again. She never imagined that her celibacy would be broken in a manner such as this..and with a human.

Her body stiffened up when she felt Mark’s tongue make contact with her pussy. She tried to look back but was unable to, instead, she felt him licking her clit and his fingers penetrating her.
“Please, no!” Coco pleaded, feeling her body betraying her as she began to get wet.
She felt a tingle and it coursed through her body, It felt good. She started to breathe hard.

“I don’t know, it seems like you’re enjoying it to me!” Mark sneered, and quickly returned back to licking her clit, which caused Coco to gasp louder. Coco tries hard to ignore the feeling of his slimy tongue touching her most intimate area, but with each lick she feels herself getting more moist. She curses her body for betraying her and enjoying what this beast is doing to her. Mark continued his tongue assault on Coco, licking her sensitive clit and digging his fingers deep inside her pussy. Finally, she couldn’t take it anymore- she moaned loudly as she released all over Mark’s face and on the floor. He grinned as he swallowed Coco’s sweet nectar. He stood up and exclaimed, “Oh my , look at the mess you made. Don’t worry.. I’m sure somebody will clean it up, but now I think it’’s time for the main event.”

“No……..please……..can you just go?” Coco pleads as she tries to recover from her orgasm, quite upset with herself for having one in the first place.

“And leave without me getting mine? That’s pretty selfish of you Coco. I mean, you women, and obviously mares, are all alike. You want yours and leave us men to starve. Shame on you, but I think this will change that attitude!” He unzipped his pants, and Coco immediately turned white because she knew what was coming.

“Please, don’t do this. I won’t tell anypony about this! I swear!” Coco begged and pleaded, hoping that he had some kind of mercy within him.

“But this was meant to be Coco, you can’t fight destiny. Ever since I came to your shop and I saw you, I knew you had to be mine. ‘Tonight I will prove that and we will be joined together in a passionate embrace.” He readied his already hard dick for Coco’s pussy. Coco closed her eyes preparing for the worst. Mark ,without hesitation or warning , grabbed a chunk of her mane and rammed his hard cock inside her pussy.

“AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!” Coco screamed so loud that somepony should have heard her, but all the ponies in the business district had gone home. Mark didn’t bother to check if Coco was okay-he immediately went straight to fucking her. Coco, trying to ignore the pain, remembered back to her first time, when it wasn’t anywhere near as painful as this. In fact, he actually made sure he wasn’t hurting her and was pretty gentle in their love making. Also, her ex was thick but Mark was thicker, which made this pain hard to ignore.

“Holy shit Coco! I never thought you would be so tight! think I love you even more now.” Mark exclaimed, as he kept thrusting into Coco.
Try as she might, Coco couldn’t hold her tears back anymore and cried as she felt Mark go deeper and harder into her. Mark felt like he was on cloud nine as he kept giving his all to her tight little pussy, whispering sweet nothings in her ear, and caressing her mane, which just made her cry even more.

He felt himself about to explode and he held Coco and whispered in her ear. “I’m gonna leave my love inside you Coco, and you’re gonna take every last drop.” Before Coco could object, Mark released his semen deep inside her. Her body ran cold as she felt his warm sperm going deep inside her. Thankfully, ponies and humans can’t cross pollinate or she would be in even worse trouble.

Mark held on to her even after he ejaculated into her, sensually nibbling on her ear. Coco was too tired and weak to even care what he was doing to her anymore. Suddenly, Coco felt Mark get off her and her binds were cut loose. She fell to the floor, exhausted, weak, unable to get up. She had cum leaking out of her sore pussy. Then, to add insult to injury, she saw a flash of light and realized he had just taken her picture.

“Wh-wh-what’s going on?” Coco asked confused.

“Just a little memento to remember this special night. ” Mark looked at the picture. “Perfect, just like you, my dear.”

Coco cowered in fear as Mark walked towards her. “Please, no more, “ she begged, “ I’m in enough pain as it is.” She closed her eyes , afraid of whatever dastardly thing Mark will do next, but nothing happened. Only a peck on her cheek.

“I had a great time my dear.” Mark whispered in her ear. Coco opened her eyes and watched him leaving out the door. She wanted to get up and stop him, but she couldn’t. All she could do was watch him leave. As soon as the door closed Coco cried. She cried for at least an hour until she couldn’t cry anymore, and with what little strength she had left, she got on her hooves and went into the employee restroom to clean herself off. After an impromptu bath in the sink, Coco finally had the strength and courage to leave the shop and go home, already dreading having to go back to work in the morning.

After that horrendous night, Coco went to the doctor about her sore vagina. It felt like sharp needles were stabbing her with every move she made. When Dr. Hooves asked her what happened, she lied, of course, and said she used a dildo that was just too big. She was too embarrassed to tell the truth, to him or any pony. Coco took a few days to get back to work , telling every pony she didn’t feel good. No pony had a reason to doubt her, as a flu bug was going around.

Three weeks after the incident Coco hadn’t seen or heard from Mark. He never appeared at the shop, and even his job said he hasn’t showed up in weeks. His apartment was also abandoned even though all of his stuff was still there.. according to his landlord. Coco just assumed he skipped town , afraid of being caught for his crime. She hoped she could one day live in peace, without looking over her shoulder and feeling afraid.

Another two weeks passed, and Coco was just starting to feel better. She arrived home from work, checked her mail, and found a letter with no return address on it. She opened it up, wondering who sent it, and as soon as she saw what was inside she fell to the floor, cowering in fear.

“No, no, no, no, no, no, no,” she repeated as she went into a fetal position. In the envelope was a picture of that dreadful night with her on the floor, cum leaking from her pussy, humiliated, scared, and shocked. All the letter read was:

“Until we meet again.”

Love, Mark