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Ponyville Noire: Tails of Two Private Eyes

by Leaf Whisper
Daring Do is a thief trying for a second chance. Phillip Finder is a private detective with no scruples. Ponyville is a city embroiled in corruption with war on the horizon. They may be the only hope for law and order left.

Ponyville is one of the largest cities in Equestria, a center for trade and finance, a melting pot of many races, tribes, and cultures. It is also a place where corruption is a way of life. Here, the cops that aren't on the take are forever chasing their own tails, citizens live in fear, and gangs battle for control of the streets.

Daring Do has just been released from prison after a year-long sentence for thievery, and no one is about to let her forget her place. Phillip Finder is a local private detective and the bane of the Ponyville Police Department. The new partners quickly find themselves at ground zero of a city-wide gang war; surrounded by dirty cops, mobsters, assassins, and bizarre crimes, they can only rely on each other and a few honest ponies for aid.

They're hardly heroes. Which means they may be exactly what Ponyville needs.


Updates every Wednesday. Proofread by Eagle—Paladin of Shadows

The first story of the Noireverse.

Sex and Gore tags for suggestive content and graphic descriptions.

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Featured on 1/29/18! Thank you all so much! <3


A bit of background...

Three years ago, I introduced Phillip Finder in my first fanfiction, "The Pony in the Gray Trilby." Over the next many months, I kept writing and eventually turned my first work into a twenty-story series. I learned much and enjoyed the stories' moderate success, but unfortunately, I became dissatisfied with them over time. I realize that it's perhaps a bit of a cliche that many artists end up hating their own work, but for both Tchaikovsky and myself, it is the truth.

I initially planned to write this story as a prequel to the series, focusing on Phillip Finder and Daring Do. But the more I thought about it, the more I realized that I wanted to improve upon my work, but felt as though I was being held back by the original series. While I am proud of my first stories for what I learned and gained through them, I decided that the best course of action for me, what would make me the happiest, would be to wipe the slate clean and start again from the basic foundations.

That's where this story comes in. A semi-reboot of the original series, the adventures contained herein, set in a vastly different alternate universe and replete with a mixture of reinterpreted and original characters, are the culmination of all the experience that I gained writing the original series. This is Phillip Finder and company as I meant them to be.

I hope that you enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoy writing it!

Teen
Complete
Adventure
Violence
Sex
Profanity
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Death
Alternate Universe
Narcotics
Romance
Mystery
 
FDTOO

264853 words: Estimated about 22 hours to read

63 Chapters:

  1. Case One, Prologue: The Curtain Rises 2017-05-01 18:35:10 UTC
    521
  2. Case One, Chapter One: Welcome to Ponyville 2017-05-01 18:52:49 UTC
    4444
  3. Case One, Chapter Two: On the Job Training 2017-05-25 17:25:51 UTC
    3989
  4. Case One, Chapter Three: The Exchange Principle 2017-06-02 16:18:19 UTC
    4240
  5. Case One, Chapter Four: Getting to Know You 2017-06-09 16:29:19 UTC
    3979
  6. Case One, Chapter Five: The Gallery 2017-06-16 14:56:25 UTC
    3746
  7. Case One, Chapter Six: Blood in the Dark 2017-06-23 13:31:57 UTC
    5005
  8. Case One, Chapter Seven: The Net Tightens 2017-06-30 12:03:21 UTC
    5215
  9. Case One, Chapter Eight: Artworks 2017-07-07 16:40:41 UTC
    4147
  10. Case Two, Prologue: Night Run 2017-07-14 13:11:31 UTC
    1480
  11. Case Two, Chapter One: Down By the Riverside 2017-07-21 13:23:06 UTC
    4055
  12. Case Two, Chapter Two: Chasing Leads 2017-07-28 12:24:23 UTC
    3865
  13. Case Two, Chapter Three: Gossip 2017-08-04 19:54:01 UTC
    3529
  14. Case Two, Chapter Four: Streets Run Red 2017-08-11 22:05:26 UTC
    5530
  15. Case Two, Chapter Five: Thunder Rumbles 2017-08-18 22:32:49 UTC
    5085
  16. Case Two, Chapter Six: The Trail 2017-08-25 22:43:27 UTC
    4885
  17. Case Two, Chapter Seven: Stormfront 2017-09-02 03:01:33 UTC
    4751
  18. Case Two, Chapter Eight: Sempre con fe' sincera 2017-09-08 20:03:12 UTC
    4769
  19. Case Three, Prologue: No Witnesses 2017-09-15 20:50:57 UTC
    2508
  20. Case Three, Chapter One: The Bank 2017-09-22 14:43:56 UTC
    4797
  21. Case Three, Chapter Two: The Suspects 2017-09-29 16:52:45 UTC
    3744
  22. Case Three, Chapter Three: Familiar Faces 2017-10-09 00:11:03 UTC
    4634
  23. Case Three, Chapter Four: Trust 2017-10-16 14:18:01 UTC
    4488
  24. Case Three, Chapter Five: Plans in Motion 2017-10-23 17:16:54 UTC
    4946
  25. Case Three, Chapter Six: The Heist 2017-10-30 20:39:28 UTC
    6102
  26. Case Three, Chapter Seven: Responsibility 2017-11-06 19:02:35 UTC
    5315
  27. Case Three, Chapter Eight: Rebuilding Bridges 2017-11-13 15:07:11 UTC
    4799
  28. Case Three, Chapter Nine: Negotiations 2017-11-20 14:00:00 UTC
    5866
  29. Case Three, Chapter Ten: Alliances and Trust Regained 2017-11-27 14:40:24 UTC
    4062
  30. Case Four, Prologue: Playing With Fire 2017-12-04 12:27:15 UTC
    1489
  31. Case Four, Chapter One: Cold Trail 2017-12-11 14:02:16 UTC
    3799
  32. Case Four, Chapter Two: Not Welcome to the Neighborhood 2017-12-18 14:02:04 UTC
    4233
  33. Case Four, Chapter Three: Amongst the Ashes 2017-12-25 15:07:29 UTC
    4228
  34. Case Four, Chapter Four: The Flames Grow Cooler 2018-01-01 22:12:49 UTC
    3958
  35. Case Four, Chapter Five: Secrets and Lessons 2018-01-08 14:17:33 UTC
    4823
  36. Case Four, Chapter Six: Blood and Fire 2018-01-15 19:26:41 UTC
    5043
  37. Case Four, Chapter Seven: Shadows Cast by Fireflight 2018-01-22 17:20:30 UTC
    4357
  38. Case Four, Chapter Eight: Can't Take the Heat 2018-01-29 14:58:31 UTC
    4662
  39. Case Four, Chapter Nine: The Spark Dances 2018-02-05 15:00:25 UTC
    5465
  40. Case Four, Chapter Ten: Cooling the Ashes 2018-02-12 15:57:34 UTC
    5017
  41. Case Four, Chapter Eleven: Afterglow 2018-02-19 15:03:43 UTC
    3670
  42. Case Five, Chapter One: Memories 2018-02-26 15:05:07 UTC
    3350
  43. Case Five, Chapter Two: The Dockside Disappearance 2018-03-05 07:06:33 UTC
    3590
  44. Case Five, Chapter Three: Hot News 2018-03-12 13:13:16 UTC
    4678
  45. Case Five, Chapter Four: The Witness 2018-03-19 14:24:34 UTC
    5630
  46. Case Five, Chapter Five: The Mole 2018-03-26 15:24:45 UTC
    4699
  47. Case Five, Chapter Six: The Rescue 2018-04-04 17:36:08 UTC
    4915
  48. Case Five, Chapter Seven: Mint's Secret 2018-04-11 16:25:36 UTC
    4998
  49. Case Five, Chapter Eight: Hunting 2018-04-18 15:51:23 UTC
    3920
  50. Case Five, Chapter Nine: Monopoly on Force 2018-04-25 18:20:53 UTC
    4818
  51. Case Five, Chapter Ten: Reaping the Rewards 2018-05-02 18:42:28 UTC
    3805
  52. Case Six, Prologue: Blood in the Snow 2018-05-09 19:14:45 UTC
    1557
  53. Case Six, Chapter One: The Sunny Client 2018-05-16 16:07:33 UTC
    3302
  54. Case Six, Chapter Two: The Griffon's Claws 2018-05-23 20:39:21 UTC
    3701
  55. Case Six, Chapter Three: The Shadow 2018-05-30 18:11:25 UTC
    3567
  56. Case Six, Chapter Four: The Meeting in the Mall 2018-06-06 18:01:53 UTC
    4062
  57. Case Six, Chapter Five: Relationships, New and Old 2018-06-13 17:37:57 UTC
    3374
  58. Case Six, Chapter Six: Reactions and Reflections 2018-06-20 21:09:42 UTC
    5179
  59. Case Six, Chapter Seven: Back to Start 2018-06-27 18:10:06 UTC
    4410
  60. Case Six, Chapter Eight: Into the Lion's Den 2018-07-04 18:17:17 UTC
    5141
  61. Case Six, Chapter Nine: The End of an Era 2018-07-11 14:59:49 UTC
    3982
  62. Case Six, Chapter Ten: Hearth's Warming 2018-07-18 16:01:41 UTC
    3612
  63. Case Six, Chapter Eleven: Le Roi Est Mort, Vive Le Roi 2018-07-18 16:01:03 UTC
    3323