Very Important Pony

by Shoryu

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Romance, Sex, Thunderlane, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2967

Thunderlane and Noteworthy meet for a little after party fun

Thunderlane and Noteworthy meet out of pure coincidence at a Wonderbolts show, and slowly, but surely grown closer to each other.

Short M/M story I did for a friend.

Published 2012-07-09 20:34:02 UTC
Last updated 2012-07-09 20:34:02 UTC

Chapter 1

“The show is about to begin, fillies and gentlecolts!” the tannoy said around the arena. Today, the Wonderbolts were performing just on the outskirts of Ponyville, with tickets being sold out and almost all of the seats were filled with ponies of all kinds of colour, race and gender. The Wonderbolts round the back were prepping for one of the biggest shows of the year and two ponies in the audience were excited for this particular event; an black pegasus writer by the name of Thunderlane and a blue earth pony by the name of Noteworthy. Thunderlane arrived late to the event and managed to get into the very last seat, right next to Noteworthy. As Thunderlane sat down, Noteworthy looked at the pegasus and decided to get some small talk in before the show began.
“Got here just in time, then?” he said, with a small smile on his face. Thunderlane was panting with a small bead of sweat on his forehead.
“Ye-yeah, wouldn't want to miss this for the world.” Thunderlane replied, “Especially considering that this is part of my job.”
Noteworthy looked more interested. “Your job?”
“Oh yeah, I'm here to interview some of the Wonderbolts at the after party, and thus got a VIP ticket to the show.”
Noteworthy suddenly acted a bit surprised, “Really? I managed to win a VIP ticket in a contest not that long ago. Lucky me, hey?”
Thunderlane giggled a bit. “Yep, congrats on that, the after parties always seem to be awesome and this one shouldn't be an exception.”
Suddenly, the conversation was cut off by the start of the performance. The Wonderbolts zoomed out and started performing a whole bunch of tricks, from loop-the-loops to neat little team tricks, like a flying star. The performance went on for about a quarter of an hour, ending on a big finale of the Wonderbolts zooming past the ponies, inches away, at super speed. When the performance finished, all the ponies got up and congratulated the Wonderbolts with a massive applause, Noteworthy and Thunderlane included. After the Wonderbolts went back to the changing rooms, all the ponies split, most leaving the arena, and a fair few heading towards the after party.

The after party from inside was loud and dark, but exactly what one would expect from a party. Noteworthy and Thunderlane both entered together, still sharing some small, casual talk together before showing both of their passes to the doors ponies.
Thunderlane then looked at Noteworthy, “Anyway, I've got to go to some interviews for my job, but I'll get back to you once I'm done. Shouldn't be too long, you can dance to pass the time, the music choice has always been appealing.” He gave a small wink before heading over to the Wonderbolts all over the party for an interview while Noteworthy went straight to the dance floor and started dancing with the ponies, though not that well.
After the interviews, Thunderlane went back to Noteworthy, who was still doing some dancing on the dance floor and gave him a small tap on the shoulder. “Hey, can I get you a drink, by any chance?”
“What?!” Noteworthy yelled, Thunderlane's voice being masked by the loud music playing in the background. Thunderlane then gestured to the bar and for Noteworthy to follow him to it, which is what he did. At the bar, Thunderlane repeated himself now that they could hear themselves a bit better.
“Oh, right, yeah, if you'd like. I wouldn't mind an Appletini right now.” Noteworthy said, still with a smile on his face.
Thunderlane then gestured for the bar pony and told him, “Two Appletinis, please.”
“Right-o, sir.” The bar pony said.
Thunderlane then looked at Noteworthy. “So, what was the competition that you won to win yourself a place here?”
“Oh, it was to produce some kind of music as a theme tune for the Wonderbolts. Still surprised they picked mine.” Noteworthy replied.
“Heh, bet it sounded as awesome as I think it may be.” Thunderlane smiled as the bar pony gave the ponies their drinks. They both took a sip of it, before Thunderlane changed the subject. “By the way, nice cute glasses.”
Noteworthy blushed lightly, “Oh, thank you, your ones aren't bad at all either.”
“Mine aren't as nice as yours. Though, I would say that for the whole of you and I.” Thunderlane said, followed by a small giggle.
The conversation continued way into the night, with laughs, smiles and the occasional blush from the both of them boosting the friendship. It then reached the end of the party. Noteworthy and Thunderlane both trotted (or more stumbled lightly) out of the party. Thunderlane, being aware that trying to fly to his house while even a bit tipsy is a fairly risky action, he turned to Noteworthy for a request. “Say, you don't mind if I crash at your place for the night?”
Noteworthy looked at Thunderlane in a small bit of concern, “But, we only met today. I mean, I know you're a nice stallion and all, just a bit skeptical about new ponies in my house.”
Thunderlane tried to convince Noteworthy, “Oh, come on, it could be fun! We could keep on talking the stuff you like, maybe watch a few movies and the like.”
“That would be kind of nice. Eh, I suppose it won't hurt.” Noteworthy said, walking towards his house. “But no funny stuff, okay?”
“Fine, no funny stuff.” Thunderlane hid his giggle.

Noteworthy opened the door to his house and turned on the light. There was a music collection that seemed to go on forever, a bunch of comfy looking sofas, a few guitars and flight of stairs up to the bedrooms and bathroom. Thunderlane looked around, fairly impressed by the house.
“Nice place you have here, I can tell you've put a lot of work into choosing the right one.” Thunderlane said, looking around the place.
Noteworthy giggled a bit, “Yeah, I am kind of proud of the place I live in. I have space for the stuff I have and then some.” he said, pointing at his massive music collection. “This is all the music I've collected over the years. You could say I'm a music addict.”
“Heh, yeah, but hey, rather music than something else.” Thunderlane said, stumbling a bit before drawing his attention to the guitars hanging around the room. “Hey, you play guitar?”
Noteworthy went over to one, picked it up and started stumming a bit. “Yeah, not like a professional, but I wouldn't say I'm too bad.”
“Would you mind showing me?” Thunderlane said, as he jumped onto one of the sofas.
Noteworthy giggled again, “Yeah, sure.”
Hours passed as the two of them continued talking, laughing and generally having fun. All kind of things like music playing and listening, video game playing and watching a few movies on television. Afterwards, Thunderlane and Noteworthy decided to crash on the sofas they were on. At this point, it was about 2am, so you can expect them both to have crashed sooner or later.

A few hours passed before Noteworthy decided to get up and get himself a small snack. He looked at Thunderlane as he passed him, who looked in a very deep sleep. Noteworthy decided to get a small chocolate bar before heading back onto the sofa he was on. Thunderlane then lifted his head up and whispered quietly to him, “And what were you up to, eh?”
“Oh, I was just a bit hungry is all.” Noteworthy replied, tucking into his chocolate bar.
Thunderlane looked at him semi-seductively, “Well, I'm hungry for something too. And not that.”
Noteworthy looked a bit confused at first, “Do you want me to get you something as well? I don't mind.”
Thunderlane went closer to Noteworthy and shook his head, “Nope, not that kind of hungry.” He said as he moved his hoof closer to Noteworthy' crotch.
Noteworthy then quickly moved Thunderlane's hoof out of the way. “No, I said no funny stuff, and you agreed to that!”
Thunderlane just continued looking at him, “Come on, I won't hurt at all. You trust me enough, don't you?”
“Yes, I do trust you. It's just not the time right now, especially considering we only just met.”
Thunderlane then got up off the sofa, “Listen, you can relax upstairs and I can do what I want oka...”
“Fine, okay? Do whatever you want.” Noteworthy cut Thunderlane off, put down his chocolate bar onto the table by the sofas, before taking an excited Thunderlane to his room. Upon entering, Noteworthy flopped onto his bed and sighed. “Go on then, get started.”
Thunderlane licked his lips and layed next to Noteworthy, giggling and then cuddling Noteworthy. Noteworthy looked confused and gave off a small “Uhhh...” before embrassing Thunderlane in a close, if confused cuddle. Thunderlane just smiled and looked at Noteworthy.
“Actually, this is kind of nice.” Noteworthy said as he stared into the pegasus's purple eyes.
Thunderlane giggled, “Yep, told you. I'm not the kind of pony that gets straight to it.” Thunderlane then moved his lips closer towards Noteworthy's own lips. Noteworthy looked a bit confused again, but then moved his own lips towards Thunderlane's. They both kissed gently at first before kissing deeper and more passionately before fully making out on the bed, both of them now slowly enjoying it. The kiss lasted for about 5 minutes before they stopped.
Noteworthy panted lightly, “Wow, I haven't had that good of a kiss in a long time!”
Thunderlane giggled lightly, “I'm told that I'm a good kisser. Maybe I'm good at something else.”
Noteworthy's eyes opened wide a bit, but instead of forcing Thunderlane away, he simply let Thunderlane do what he wanted to do. Thunderlane started to lick the chest of Noteworthy. A small purr came from Noteworthy as Thunderlane did this. Thunderlane giggled a bit before moving down slowly.

Thunderlane then reached the crotch of Noteworthy and looked at his flaccid member. Thunderlane held it with his hoof and lightly rubbed it, “Aww, all that fun and you haven't even gotten started. Looks like I'll have to get you up and running then.”
Noteworthy let off a small moan as he felt Thunderlane's hoof rub his cock, as it slowly grew. Thunderlane even gave it a few small licks while rubbing, to help it up.
After a while, Noteworthy cock was now fully erect.
Thunderlane looked at it with a smile, “There, much better.” before looking at Noteworthy, “You ready?”
Noteworthy just nodded, with a small bit of blush on his face. Thunderlane got in a comfortable position on Noteworthy's bed and started to lick the hard on lightly, hearing Noteworthy's moans with satisfaction. “Mmm, very tasty. Has this had much care?” Thunderlane said to Noteworthy, providing a bit of small talk.
“N-not recently.” Noteworthy replied, his blush slowly growing.
“Aww, that's too bad.” Thunderlane said, moving his lips closer to Noteworthy's cock. “Looks like I'll have to give it some care and attention, then.” Thunderlane then kissed the tip of the member, while Noteworthy moaned a bit more. Thunderlane then opened his mouth up and moved his head down the cock of the earth pony stallion, Noteworthy shuddering as this happened. Thunderlane then lifted his head up, sucking and licking gently before looking at Noteworthy again. “Did I say very tasty? I meant REALLY very tasty!”
He then went to go for the cock again, but Noteworthy held Thunderlane's head lightly with his hooves. “I'll help you.” Noteworthy said with a giggle, Thunderlane giggled back and moved back to sucking the cock in front of him, bobbing up and down with the help of Noteworthy, licking and sucking gently as he does so, Noteworthy continuing to moan, both of them closing their eyes as they get into it. Thunderlane then decided to get himself started, moving his own hoof towards his own crotch and started rubbing on his own member. Noteworthy then decided to move Thunderlane's head up and down faster, making Thunderlane gag a little, but didn't stop him from sucking and licking the cock. A small bit of pre cum came from Noteworthy cock, which Thunderlane quickly sucked and swallowed up. Noteworthy's soft, socked hooves rubbed the mane of Thunderlane gently as he concentrated on the cock he was sucking, getting Noteworthy closer and closer to orgasm. The sucking and licking continued for a few more minutes, as did Thunderlane's masturbating before Noteworthy lifted Thunderlane's head off of Noteworthy's cock and told Thunderlane to lick it, which he proceeded to do. After a few licks, Noteworthy shot out a generous load of sticky, warm cum, getting all over Thunderlane face with some on his mane and some on his body. Thunderlane licked up all he could and looked up at the panting Noteworthy. “You are really impressive.” Noteworthy said. Thunderlane replied with a smile before sitting up, his hoof still around his cock, which had yet to pre. Noteworthy looked at it and went up to Thunderlane.
“You're not the only one that going to get some cum tonight,” Noteworthy said before put his mouth straight onto Thunderlane's cock, using his hoof to help the sensation. Thunderlane closed his eyes and moaned gently, Noteworthy moving in time with his sucks. It didn't take long for Thunderlane to seep out a bit of his own pre, and moved his cock gently up and down his own cock, helping Noteworthy along with the oral session. Thunderlane moaned along with Noteworthy as they collectively rubbed and sucked the cock in the middle of them both. Then, after about 5 minutes of rubbing and sucking...
“GaaaaaaAAAAHHH!!” Thunderlane shot his own load of cum straight into Noteworthy's mouth, who sucked up and swallowed all he could before going up to Thunderlane's still cum covered face and gave him a small kiss on the lips. Thunderlane was still panting at this point. After a while, Noteworthy said to Thunderlane, “You know, I still have a small bit in me.”
Thunderlane was still panting a little, “Y-you know, so do I.”
Noteworthy grinned before pinning Thunderlane to his bed and kissing him on the lips deeply and passionately again. He then turned himself around so that his cock was right in front of Thunderlane's mouth. “You take it first,” Noteworthy said, crotching a bit. Thunderlane licked the still wet stallion cock before sucking the tip. Noteworthy then proceeded to crotch down more, before lifting his cock up, then kept going in that motion before starting to suck Thunderlane's cock, still dripping with cum. The both of them moaned in time with their sucks, eyes closed, blush deep. Thunderlane took Noteworthy cock as deep as he could, Noteworthy balls just barely touching Thunderlane's nose, while Noteworthy used his hoof to help with the suck, just like Thunderlane did while Noteworthy was attending to Thunderlane. Noteworthy was the first to pre, which went straight down Thunderlane's mouth. Thunderlane then seeped some pre-cum too, which Noteworthy sucked up happily. Noteworthy then decided to start working on a spell while he was sucking. After a while, the spell was ready and he was waiting for the right time to cast it. Thunderlane was still taking Noteworthy cock before Noteworthy got closer to orgasm. Noteworthy moaned loads, getting seconds away from cumming, before casting his spell. The spell went straight to his crotch and just as he orgasmed, the amount of cum that came out was multipled by four. It was enough for some to seep out of Thunderlane's mouth, as he tried to swallow the larger amount of cum. Noteworthy panted while working on another spell, this time to benefit Thunderlane. As Thunderlane inched closer and closer to cumming himself, Noteworthy cast the spell, which went straight to Thunderlane's crotch this time. Only this time, it wasn't to increase the amount of cum, this one was a bit different. Upon cumming, Thunderlane let out the loudest moan he could, as he came straight into Noteworthy's mouth again. Noteworthy sucked up all the sweet cum, before looking at Thunderlane who was panting heavily.
Noteworthy giggled, “Good thing I remembered those spells, hey?” Noteworthy then snuggled close to Thunderlane, who was panting and speechless. He simply nodded at what Noteworthy said. Noteworthy giggled again, kissing the pegasus on the cheek and snuggling up closely.

The next day, Thunderlane woke up, still in Noteworthy's bed, only with Noteworthy not to be found anywhere. Thunderlane got up, his mane, clothes and face covered in dried up cum before heading downstairs, groaning lightly with a hoof on his head. Upon arriving downstairs, he saw Noteworthy, who was cooking breakfast.
“Sleep well?” Noteworthy said to Thunderlane
“Yeah, just got a bit of a headache.”
“Shame, you were great last night, so I decided to make you some breakfast before you head off.”
“Heh, thanks.” Thunderlane said as Noteworthy gave Thunderlane his breakfast, a nice collection of lightly cooked grass and flowers, with a nice glass of orange juice.
After Thunderlane ate the breakfast and began to head off, Noteworthy stopped him. “Hey, two things before you go.”
Thunderlane stopped and looked at Noteworthy, “Which are?”
“Well, one, if you ever are in need of someone to have fun with, one way or another, you know where I am, right?”
Thunderlane nodded and gave a small smile. “Yep, shouldn't be too hard to find you.”
Noteworthy smiled back, “Good. And the second thing. Please go have a shower. I don't want you go outside still covered in stuff from last night.”
Thunderlane looked down to his body and saw the dried up cum, before giggling and heading straight for the shower. Noteworthy simply giggled and headed back to the kitchen.
“Silly, cute pegasus.”